Desiderius Price
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I haven’t strayed…. your other worlds might be disturbed by this adulterous affair.
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Here plot bunny…. here, over here, so long as you fellows stay away from me. I definitely know the challenge, to keep the plot simple, and how it likes to grow. That’s how the Dale’s Game came into existence, I was trying to write it as the holiday oneshot, but realized there were too many elements, too many moving parts for a reasonable oneshot. It had started to come off like yours, where I’d have prolonged exposition to the point that it felt like a download, cramming it all in. Thus, I spun the longer story off, and focused my oneshot on the simple premise.
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Yes, the madness of Black Friday seemed…. well, it was an itch I had to settle. All those stampedes, the fights, the insanity for a cheap TV, discounted socks, or less. And in this case, the seemingly small human gesture of holding the door open for a stranger, used against her. btw, I tend not to have Jello around the house, health reasons.
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And I got the first review in!
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Winter is nearly here, tis the time for Santa to be banging the reindeer.
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“You can’t spell comet without come!”
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Childhood = ruined
The joke there is that I had a childhood! Ha! Nah…
You want christmas pornstar names, google Christmas elves. http://www.elfcrazy.com/traditional-names-of-the-first-christmas-elves/
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Title: Jello Tags: Bigotry, Exhib, Fingering, MCD, MiCD, MF, NoSex, Violence Summary: A smoke break goes wrong, Megan heads home.
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Contenders announced for 2018 bad sex awards
Desiderius Price replied to JayDee's topic in News/Current Events
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That a motivator when I first contributed a Halloween story back in 2015. Small samples, reviews, and perhaps even picking up a reader or two.
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Contenders announced for 2018 bad sex awards
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Some seemed better than others…. Like I can complain, I’d probably get top spot if my smut were submitted. -
Taking a dump on the holidays? Readers want to know…
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I posted a chapter, which means, I’ve met my NaNoWriMo goal, with a little extra, several hundred over 200k.
Next month….hmmm, I need a goal. 300k would be a bit much, but 250k seems too small, maybe 275k? Thinking about it.
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Maybe that’s a good start to the story…. typo gets somebody the wrong thing?
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Well, I did manage a dark holiday story in 2015. Mistletoe Hanging: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108028&chapter=4
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Dark and gruesome holiday anybody?
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After a short burst of writing, I’ve finished the chapter that’ll let me reach my nano goal. My story will make 200k words on Friday! (Still need to wait, proofread, so that’ll be Friday, the last day of the month. While this will be cutting it close, on time is on time.)
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Only several K left to reach my nano goal for the month. Was a bit worried this chapter would come up short, but then I realized I had given the main character a burn ointment (for sunburn) that’s sold as an aphrodisiac in that it makes for super sensitive skin. Plenty of potential for several K of smut
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… What is the name of this ointment? I’m asking for *cough* a friend...
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I kept the name simple, “Kirkburton’s Sensitizing Ointment” with the directions of "Apply to desired areas, wait five minutes, rinse off, and enjoy twenty four hours of bliss. Warning, do not use if pregnant or allergic. May contain nuts."
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btw, steer clear of the medical grade, stinging nettles have been added to discourage “casual use”… (and to protect the Healer’s supplies).
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