Desiderius Price

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No. In? or Out?

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I did so recently with my Harry Potter fanfics, likely startled anybody on my author-alert list; a story I started fifteen years ago, last update had been six years. Given the time, and how much I had forgotten, I decided to rewrite it. Anyways, congrats on reviving a story..

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Have to admit I do like FFN’s traffic graphs, how many loitered, which chapters they’re reading. Thought it’s also sobering how many show up, and promptly leave. However, having my “clean” version there is nice because then it lets people have a choice, reading sexual content or not, when my story can be expressed pretty nicely even without it. In my case, I resurrected an old piece of software, (needed to be rewritten), so that I can have the “adult” and “clean” versions in the same file; I simply annotate which parts are clean and/or adult-only. For instance “Ron aimed{| his dick} and began to {wet the bed|piss}.” is “Ron aimed and began to wet the bed.” in the clean version, or “Ron aimed his dick and began to piss.” in the adult version (as he’s soaking Seamus Finnigan’s bed). So, as I rewrite, I’m working on both versions simultaneously. Now, I have entire scenes, chapters, that are in the adult version, that aren’t in the clean, so there *is* a size difference; so far, the adult version has been getting more than twice the words of the clean.

With my originals, I just keep it as “adult” and not worry about it. My two main Harry Potter fanfics always have had the notion of having a “dirty”/adult version, regardless of the sorting I did in the early years. Until very recently I was only posting those to FFN, the “adult” side kinda waned, and sort of infected the cleaner side. As I rewrite the story, I’m making a clear distinction, and while it does have some smut, exploring the sexual side of the main characters adds a new dimension to the inter-relationships. It’s not like “clean” is free of sexual content, it’s just much more muted and reserved to significant points only – other “sex” would simply be implied, with a tendency to fade-fast-to-black to leave the rest to the reader’s imagination. Some things will be in the “adult” version only, such as Harry’s love for being naked with his girlfriend...anywhere, morphing him into an exhibitionist. He gets away with it because I’ve got his subconscious generating the (Inspired from Douglas Adams) … the “Somebody Else’s Problem” spell; so coppers, teachers, everybody else will see him naked, even comment on it, but nobody really does anything about it. So, later in the story, when he flips on this (out of fear), it drive home the extent of the fear that’s been instilled into him. Other “adult” scenes show the jealousy that Ginny feels because Harry’s found a different girlfriend than her (in my story).

FFN’s TOS is kinda what prompted me to have a “clean” and “adult” versions of my potter story (well, they were termed “R”, “NC17” and “XXX” in the beginning...) As I rewrite, it’s kinda good, IMO, to have this distinction, because the main plot doesn’t require the adult material to be effective. However, the adult material does enrich the story, overall, as I can explore some of the dynamics that quickly become too much for FFN.

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Family Christmas gathering, incest style… I meant, family bonding “memories”. All those hairy armpits….

Oh, I think you poisoned the advertising well for yourself with that search… enjoy.

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