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Wow, thank you so, so much for this! I have to admit I was a little afraid of posting it, even though it’s been mostly written for a while now. Your review reassures me, I needn’t have worried, and I thank you for that I know how this will end, I have a good idea of the reasons for all of the characters being where they are, and what will happen to them. How I will get there is an exploration. But as I wrote this, I realised a few things: One, that Maglor can’t be as he was in Fallen. Something changed in Maglor at the end of Fallen, and it’s this more than the torture he has endured which has changed the appearance of his true self. Even though, at the time of writing, I honestly believe he came to regret his twisted torture of Legolas, he at least considered it – and that is enough. Two, that while I don’t want to repeat myself, I do love echoes, and Sauron/Maglor is very much an echo of Melkor/Sauron in some respects. And, lastly, that being said, I’ve often mentioned that writing Sauron is like writing a serial killer, and I stick to that. Melkor is not the same at all. Sauron has plans and ambitions. Melkor has consuming desires, and deep down he is quite, quite insane. There’s something very maniacal about him. I’m so glad to hear your thoughts, because it seems I got across what I wanted to get across, and that makes me happy. The thing that worried me about this chapter was Sauron’s thoughts early on, about the box. As soon as he got on about it, I knew I was going to have to at least refer to it. Because he really would do that to a prisoner. He’d definitely do it to Maglor. There’s no way I could ignore it, and still have his character right. But, there’s usually something Sauron brings up that makes me want to kill him. Melkor looks to be going along the same path, if the vision he gave to Maglor at the end of the chapter is anything to go by. I’m looking forward to writing the adult Mithedhel next. This story is going to need his cheerful disposition to break it into manageable chunks. Anyway, I’ve rambled on a bit – sorry! Thank you again!

Chapter One Usually I’d say have fun. Not for this. I hope you make it to the end.

Great to hear from you, JayDee, and I’m glad that you’re doing a lot better workwise. I do hope you’ll get more time to write, though, and to visit the forum occasionally. You never fail to get a giggle out of me. It really hasn’t been the same without you.

Hi, ILoveDexter, and thank you! Next chapter coming soon...

Yay! Thank you!!! I’m amazed at how quickly I got to post in this thread! I am absolutely in love with this dynamic, and what happens to Riki. I sense there are things to indulge in here. Iason isn’t deluded; he is superior to Riki in all the ways he believes, and that’s terrible and beautiful at the same time. He’s also an android, though his brain is genetically modified, it’s still mostly human. His drives are going to be quite different, and I’m looking forward to that a lot. But, ultimately, he’s grabbed a tiger by the tail. It’s Riki’s violent passion he wants to own, and he can never do that. It’s intriguing.

Thank you so much, Bronx! Thranduil can push Elrond’s buttons without even trying, lol. Perhaps, in comparison, everyone else in Middle Earth seems easy to deal with, which is why Elrond comes across as so endlessly patient all the time. I think that for elves, it would be quite easy to forget vast periods of your life on a day-to-day basis, for years and years at a time. In fact, it would probably be necessary, else you’d do nothing else with your time except for remember. Glad you liked it! I think the teacher/student thing has done all the mileage it can now… *sniffles* But I’ll always love that aspect of Elronduil

Review replies, if any are due, will appear here. Also story discussion.

Author: pippychick Title: Ai o Juten Summary: A filler for those three years. Just my take. Expect details. Feedback: Yes, please! Fandom: Ai no Kusabi Pairing: Iason/Riki, Iason/Riki/Raoul, Riki/Daryl Warnings: 3Plus Abuse Anal Angst BDSM Bi Bigotry BMod Bond BP CBT Contro Dom Ds Exhib Fet Fingering Fist HJ Hum Humil MM Ms Oral Other Rape Rim Slave Solo Spank Tort Toys Violence Voy WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600055634 Review responses: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/64135-pippychicks-review-responses-for-ai-o-juten/

Chapter Five – if you read, enjoy!

Another extra chapter. A requested follow up to Wine and Wishes, wherein Elrond finds out it was Thranduil in his bed that night. Drink and Discovery Have fun!

Thank you, CL! I’m glad you like it so far… I am over the moon at being able to post in this thread! Yay! Erm… there is a lot more to come, most of it exceedingly naughty.

Chapter Four

Wow… thank you so much! It’s strange, but I’ve written much of my Sauron/Maglor from Maglor’s point of view, and I know my version of him so well. As well as Sauron does, so when I write a part from Sauron’s point of view, it feels all the more tragic and inevitable. Sauron (at least in my mind) would do this. He would enjoy it. He would be fascinated, and he would find Maglor’s despair beautiful. My job (for as much as I complain about what he gives me to work with) is to try and make it palatable, to make the reader feel an echo of that, and be unable to look away, because Maglor is so beautiful when he suffers. Your review indicates I had some success in that, so thank you! Also, for completely different reasons, I really needed this today. Although now I’m feeling that I should have warned you not to read before bed… *little evil laugh*

Forgot to say, Chapter Three is up now. Updates will be posted weekly, all being well.

Thank you so much, Clover! Wow… such compliments! *blushes* I don’t know what to say, except that I’m glad you enjoyed it, despite the lack of slashy goodness. The Harry Potter one I wrote is in a similar vein to this, but a little more atmospheric. It’s not set in the world of HP, butthe world outside it, and it too deals with AI. That too is sad. I suppose it’s something about AI that bothers me. It’s the other side of the coin from cognitive psychology. Know one, know the other. But what are we without our lifetime of experiences, without our formative years? Lonely, I think. If you take those things away, we don’t even have ourselves for company. Thank you again!

Fantastic news! Congratulations, CL I really, really, love that story.

More from Glorfindel and Gildor… Chapter Two

Awww… *blushes* Writing with you is a dream come true. I hope we will have occasion to post here. Glorfindel and Gildor are fabulous, even if I do say so myself. Actually, I think Glorfindel specifies “fabulousness” in any fanfiction contract before he agrees to be an author’s muse.

Authors: BronxWench and pippychick Title: The Lost and the Hidden City Summary: Glorfindel was the elf Gildor had always wanted, but Glorfindel never looked his way. Then Gondolin fell, and Glorfindel was lost, while Gildor sought refuge among his fellow Exiles. He found a measure of peace at last in Imladris, at least until Glorfindel returned. When Glorfindel became his lover, Gildor thought he had it all. But the Valar had not brought Glorfindel back without memories, many painful and terrifying. Gildor could not watch his lover suffer, and so he set off to find the answers Glorfindel needed, no matter the cost to himself. Feedback: Yes, please! Fandom: Lord of the Rings/Middle Earth Pairing: Glorfindel/Gildor Warnings: Anal Angst Bond Exhib Fingering HJ M/M Oral WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no Review responses: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/63967-the-lost-and-the-hidden-city-review-responses/

Ok… let’s see if we ever have occasion to post in this thread…

Thank you so much, Joyeuse! I’m glad you’re on board with this, and thank you for your kind comments on ‘Fallen’ *blushes* There’s definitely something between Sauron and Maglor, and whatever that is, it’s about to be severely tested. I do plan to turn the tables a little bit here, and it will be slow going. Fallen took me months to write, and I don’t envisage this being any quicker. The heavy stuff is more demanding and needs a lot of time to settle. You’ve made me very happy today