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Ghosts Aren't Real, says the Vampire to the Werewolf - ChrissyQuinn I could so relate to this--not because I'm a gay British vampire (okay, I am, but I'm totally in the closet about the British thing), but because I remember well times in my youth when I was the more sensible friend who lets the not-at-all-sensible friend talk him into doing something stupid. This story captures that feeling perfectly. And the ginger joke was hilarious. Feed the Land - BronxWench This story is so atmospheric that I felt less like I was reading it than like it was being told to me by someone (maybe by a campfire, or in front of a fireplace in some remote cottage). Love the sumptuously worded descriptions of the scene and the characters. And I found the ending grimly satisfying. Thank you! I've always found it challenging to achieve the happy medium between "Yeah, totally saw that coming" and "That came out of nowhere and makes no sense." (And I'll admit it's not the most original idea in the world.) In any case, I'm glad you found it spooky. The admiration and envy of BronxWench are treasures beyond value. Thank you! Edit: My wife just read "Snap" and, being a social worker who works with a lot of people who have been in jail or prison, she pointed out that there's no way that someone who was arrested only a month ago would already be in prison--he'd still be in jail awaiting trial. She found this timeline issue so confusing that it ruined the story for her. So I guess I'll have to figure out a way to fix that.

I just posted my chapter. Probably correctly. This is the first sex-free story I've ever posted on AFF (although it's definitely not for children). So Chrissy, thanks for inspiring me to take a stroll outside my comfort zone. And thanks, of course, for organizing this thing.

Thank you! And there's more subterranean fun to come.

The answers to your three questions, in order, are you'll see, you'll see, and you'll see. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for taking the time to comment. I've had to take a short break from this story to work on a few others, but I'll be back at it soon.

Bumping this thread in honor of Back to the Future Day. And in the name of shameless self-promotion. Same thing, really.

I tried to resist... Author: George Glass Summary: A man convicted of murdering his own wife and children is visited by a reporter who hopes to be the first to find out why he did it. Title: Snap

Because someone called you a stuffed shirt, and you're aiming to prove them wrong.

Because you're tired of your coworkers complaining about the junk on your desk.

Thank you! Don't worry about my continuing the story--this thing is going to make me keep writing it until either it's finished or I am.

Wow--thanks for all the input! I like the idea of the hospital mix-up, especially because it helps to explain where the niece has been for the last several months. And the ferry-crash idea leads nicely into that, because it creates a plausible "presumed dead" scenario for the niece. This was a huge help. Thanks again, all.

I'm a little slow in saying so, but congrats! *In voice of Cajun football fan from The Waterboy:* You can do eeet!

I'm working on a story with an important plot point that I can't figure out how to make happen in a plausible way. So I'm hoping you might lend me a bit of your knowledge and creativity where mine has failed. Here's the scenario: A man in his early twenties is close with his older sister and her young daughter (his niece), who is about five years old. Brother and sister have a falling out, and the sister and niece end up moving to another city. Soon afterward, both sister and niece are killed--or so the brother thinks. The niece is actually alive. So here's my question: Is there a way, in modern America, that the brother (and, presumably, the world at large) could believe his niece to be dead for several months when she is actually alive? Just to make this puzzle more difficult, there are a couple of conditions: 1. The sister can't have died in some kind of huge, hundreds-dead disaster that would be remembered for years to come. (This takes place in a real city where no such disaster has occurred recently.) 2. The sister and niece's seeming deaths can't be the result of some sort of long-term plot, standing family rivalry, etc. It has to seem random or capricious, like a car accident or a mugging. Thanks in advance!

Having no shame about tooting my own horn, I will tell you that I've written tons of original stories that have the Minor1 and Minor2 tags. You can find them (among my other original stories) here.

Re: "Guidelines" Thanks for getting a jump on that. Just put it on my account at Kinko's.

Re: "A Beach Like No Other" I generally avoid sequels unless I have what I feel is a really good idea for one. For this story, I haven't had such an idea yet.

Re: "Guidelines" Hey there, Mona! I didn't actually go anywhere; I've just been posting more fanfics than original stories lately. And I always look forward to your comments. Not only do they put a smile on my face, but I love that you are a completely fearless reader. A lot of people wouldn't touch a story like "Guidelines" (or "Cruel Nature," or "The Last Toy," which you've also reviewed) with a ten-foot pole, but nothing seems to scare you. In any case, thanks very much!

I didn't mean to say that I change my stories in midstream on the basis of reader feedback; I just consider said feedback when I think about future stories. But yeah, if popularity were all I cared about, I'd write M/M Harry Potter and Naruto stories. When I first started posting here, I was quite worried about how readers would react to my rougher stuff, so I stuck with posting only stories that seemed relatively inoffensive. Then I read a post here in a forums about a story someone was looking for (and about which others seemed to be enthusiastic) that was so rapey and violent that I thought, "Wow, I guess people here are okay with that kind of thing." The most popular original story I've ever posted here ("Caitlyn's Punishment") was also one of the nastiest.

Because it's time those stiffs in Human Resources got a look at the raw materials.

Um, thanks for poking? So that thing about pregnant women having weird cravings is true? I don't think of it as a popularity CONTEST, but I am definitely affected by whether a story is a hit or a flop. I had my first straight-up flop recently (in that reviewers were explicit about not liking it, and the reasons why), which has definitely made me question some of my assumptions about what readers want to see. Because if I didn't care about what readers thought, I wouldn't post my stories online in the first place (or else I'd post them on a site that has no mechanism to allow readers to respond). Very well said.

Two words: casual Friday.

Maybe I'm alone on this, but I don't consider hit counts all that meaningful. All a hit means is that someone clicked on the link and opened the page--it doesn't mean that they read past the first sentence. In fact, if a story has a lot of hits but few ratings or reviews, I tend to guess that it's not that good a story, because a lot of people looked at it and either didn't finish it or weren't sufficiently moved by it to click anything but the Back button.

I feel complimented by your feeling complimented. The truth is--and I'm a bit ashamed to say this--I don't actually read very much. Being an editor in RL, I spend all day reading, so when I get home, I usually just want to watch TV or something (or write, which I guess is different enough from editing that I still enjoy it). And when I do get in the mood to read something, I'm really picky about good grammar, paragraphing, etc; if those are bad, I usually don't get past the first paragraph. In other words, the technical quality of your writing is high, and that was a major factor in my reading your story to the end and reviewing it. The beginning of one, anyway, starring Marco as Patient Zero and Star as The Vector. Which would be great names for a pair of supervillains...but I digress. No, I thought your approach made total sense. Also, I find that no matter how well reasoned my arguments are, I have a very hard time convincing people that they suck. I'm right there with you. I have recently received some education regarding how readers 'round these parts react to a non-erotic ending, if the reviews of my Inside Out story "That Gleam in Her Eye" are anything to go by. In any case, I hope to check out some of your Gravity Falls stuff one of these days.

WARNING: Major spoilers for chapters 10-12 below. Select text to read. Must...not...spoil...next...chapter... There's been a lot of angst between those two since the story began, and I thought it was time they "let it go" in a big way. Of course, now they've got new things to worry about. You're welcome. Because I tend not to write things in order, a lot of chapter 12 was written while I was working on earlier chapters. This is part of why the pace of my posting has been so uneven: Each time I posta chapter, the next chapter may be close to or far from being finished.

Wow. Rarely does one of my stories inspire a real-life story. And hooray for chlorine.

Wow. That's...really something. As the old saying goes, "A massive involuntary physiologic response is the sincerest form of flattery." Seriously, for a porn writer, this is pretty much the ultimate review. So thank you! And I hope the water park had showers.