GeorgeGlass

There’s going to be more chapters of “Auntie’s Home,” and anything could happen...

Haven’t been making too much progress on “Untitled Hot Yoga Sequel” (as it’s currently named in my story file), because I’ve been pushing forward with my Steven Universe fic “Splinter” and my The Loud House story “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.” Inspiration sort of comes and goes for me, which is why I keep several stories going at once, but I’m pretty sure I’ll be back to scribbling away at the outline for UHYS soon enough. Have a good one.

Thanks! More is on the way.

Thanks! I hope you’ll like the ending.

Re: “Auntie’s Home” Thanks for giving “Auntie’s Home” it’s first review. Ellie didn’t actually get pregnant in “Mommy’s Home”; she was just fantasizing about Eric knocking her up. Doesn’t mean it couldn’t happen in THIS story, though...

You can tell how old that song is because “dollar bills” does not equal “cheap.” BTW, I am not at all above giving readers cheap thrills. In fact, half that time, that’s ALL I’m trying to do.

Exactly how short do you want this story to be? Hope you’ll like it. BTW, every time someone calls me Mr. Glass, I think of the last line from Unbreakable, which is probably my favorite last line in any movie.

Thank you! That's part of it, yes. The other part is that I feel like I know these characters really well (I'm sure I've seen every episode of The Loud House at least twice), which gives me a lot of confidence in writing them. Having a good beta helps, too. Thanks! That joke was a late addition; my highly perceptive beta reader, Fairy Slayer, asked how the kids had convinced their parents to let them go to the pageant by themselves, so I had to come up with arguments for the kids to make regarding why Leni should be trusted to supervise them. (Spoiler alert: She shouldn't. ) Thank you! As I've probably mentioned before, getting the characters right is a high priority for me. That’s why I only write in fandoms that I feel I have a complete understanding of. Thanks! It helps that I'm an editor IRL, and that Fairy Slayer is kind enough to beta this story for me. There are reasons for each choice, but they are purely practical. Lola needs each of them there to perform particular duties. Plus, not including every Loud sister means that I don't have to come up with another cheesy pun for Luan to make every third paragraph. Glad to hear it! And I hope not to disappoint you. I agree. When writing cartoon fanfics, I try to obey the rules of that cartoon’s universe (with one major exception, of course ), which in the case of The Loud House means not naming real products. That said, I cheated with the Big Wheel bit, because I couldn't come up with a fake brand name that would conjure the right image in the reader's mind. Those were fun to come up with. Sadie Godiva is my favorite. Because we see that scene from Lincoln's perspective, I paid more attention to the details that Lincoln himself would focus on. And Lincoln is a lot more interested in a hot teenage girl than in a bunch of creepily precocious preteens. Thanks! More is on the way! And thanks for the comments.

Remain calm and breathe evenly. I’m working on the next chapter, but it could take a little while; partly because there are a lot of details to attend to, and partly because I have several other stories going at the same time.

I agree--backstory has to come at the point when it’s relevant, and not in a data dump sometime beforehand. I remember someone sending me the first chapter of a story to beta, and my chief comment about it was, “I don’t want to know all of this yet.” She was explaining way too much, which tends to lead to all telling and no showing.

He’s got more shocking surprises coming. Good thing he’s a resilient young man.

No, not in this fic. Although I’m a big fan of incest and have written other Loud House stories that involve it (“Whoops” and “The Loud House After Dark”), I’m not including any incest action in this one. Lincoln and Lola will be getting it on with someone, though; stay tuned to find out who.

It's always difficult for me to say how long a story or chapter is going to take to finish. Being rather flighty, I always have a lot of stories in progress at once, and whenever I have time to write, I work on whichever one I feel most inspired to work on at that moment. (Other projects I've been making progress on lately include my original father-daughter incest fic “Make It All Better” and a new Loud House fanfic titled “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant.”) Although this means that I am always making progress on something, I can’t really commit to a time frame on any particular story. Also, I don't know how much time my beta will need to review the chapter when the draft is ready. All of that said, I hope to have the next chapter posted in the next couple of weeks. But I can’t guarantee anything.

Re: “The Interview” Thanks!

To answer your questions: I’m planning the same 4-chapter structure as before, although I’ll go to 5 chapters if that’s what it takes to tell the story properly. I’ve picked a couple of background characters that I think will be just right. The girl will be Sally, best known as the little girl from whom Vanessa swiped the Mary McGuffin doll (yes, there’s going to be a bit of confrontation over that), but she’s appeared in other episodes, too. The boy will be Pedro, who has been a background character since the very first episode ("Phineas and Ferb built a rollercoaster! Do you think we get a discount if we bring the flyer?"). Melanie will be spending some quality time with him. Balthazar actually has developed a crush on someone else: Gretchen. Adyson takes particular joy in getting Balthazar and Midas to DP Gretchen, and Balthazar has grown fond of her. He’s not sure what to do about it because Gretchen is Adyson’s girlfriend at this point, but Vanessa gives him some advice about how to make the situation work. In addition to the ideas I’ve mentioned above, here are a few other things I want to include: Monty fucks Jenny in front of Vanessa and Sally (with Vanessa fondling Sally as they watch), because Vanessa wants Sally to see what Monty is going to do with Sally later. Adyson and Gretchen, being young and flexible and having practiced some actual yoga in the preceding weeks, have an anal 69. Roger and Melanie discover that they share a liking for teenage girls and double-team Jenny. That’s all for now. Back to writing I go.

I could, but that wouldn’t be faithful to the character, which is what I’m all about. Luckily, there are plenty of other female characters to play with.

I’ve never seen Soul Eater, so I’m not familiar with the fic. But yeah, “Splinter” is definitely a harem-type story. Thanks! Hope you’ll like it.

I’m not sure yet when I’m going to start writing. With the number of characters involved, figuring out who gets it on with who at what time point is proving very tricky, particularly given that there are several specific things that I want to include at certain time points in the story (eg, I want Coltrane/Ginger to happen in the middle of the story and Coltrane/Dr Hirano to happen after that). Also, I always have a lot of stories in progress at once, and whenever I have time to write, I work on whichever one I feel most inspired to work on at that moment. Although this means that I am always making progress on something, I can’t really commit to a time frame on any particular story.

Not your usual kind of story, eh? Glad you’re liking it anyway. I’m not sure which character you’re talking about. If you mean Mystery Girl (whom fans have nicknamed “Punk Diamond”), then no, I don’t have plans to involve her. Lip piercings are a big turnoff for me.

Re: “Fun in the Oven” Thanks! I do have one other in utero sex story, titled “Father’s Love,” if you want to check it out.

Yes, I will definitely be following up on that exchange between Dr. Hirano and Coltrane. I’ve never written a story that required as much outlining in advance as “Hot Yoga.” But this one will require even more, both because of the additional characters and because there will be even more partner-switching than in the first one (for Jenny, in particular).

So, I honestly wasn't certain whether I really wanted to write a sequel to “Hot Yoga,” because I am somewhat leery of sequels in general. Even when it comes to pornographic cartoon fanfics, I only like to write a sequel if I can think of some interesting way for the situation created in the first story to evolve. (For example, I wrote “Danville, We Have a Problem” to look at the evolution of the relationships that began in “Truth or Dare 2.0” -- particularly to explore what it would be like for Isabella to actually date Phineas instead of merely pining for him in silence.) Then, yesterday, I decided that I am indeed going to write a sequel to “Hot Yoga,” because ideas started coming to me fast and furious. Here are a few highlights: --The “yoga club” has been meeting weekly since it began with Jenny's yoga class. The story takes place during their fifth such meeting. --In this story, three new members will be inducted into the yoga club: 1. Roger Doofenshmirtz. I wanted to add an adult male to the mix because there aren't enough full-size cocks to go around, and I want at least one of the female characters to get well and truly DPed in this story. I picked Roger because (1) he is good looking as male P&F characters go, (2) he has a connection to the group through Melanie, and (3) I'd like to see some incestuous fucking between him and Vanessa. 2. A preteen boy. Although Melanie has some interest in teenage girls, her real passion is preadolescent boys. Balthazar Horowitz is the only such boy in the group, so Melanie is anxious to bring another one into the fold. 3. A preteen girl. Just as Melanie discovered her passion for young boys in “Hot Yoga,” Monty and Vanessa discovered a shared interested in young girls. They have gotten it on with both Gretchen and Adyson during previous sessions, but their access to Ginger has been limited because Dr. Hirano wants Coltrane to be Ginger’s first older boy. So Monty and Vanessa are interested in having another preadolescent girl join the group. I haven't yet decided who the young boy and girl will be, but I want them to be canon characters and not OCs, so I'll be looking through the P&F wiki for B-list characters that might be a good fit. --Adyson and Gretchen now have an established dom-sub relationship (with some mentoring from Vanessa). Adyson uses Gretchen for her own pleasure and also enjoys watching Gretchen being used by other members of the group. Adyson has recently begun making Gretchen wear a dog collar and sometimes a leash during sessions. Gretchen gladly goes along with all of this because it means she can have lots of perverted sex with no guilt (because nothing she does is her idea; Adyson ‘makes’ her do it). --Coltrane is now the Hiranos’ “family boyfriend.” He will have sex with all three Hirano women in this story. --Jenny now describes herself as “omnisexual.” She enjoys sex with males and females, whether child, teen, or adult, and she especially likes group sex. She also loves having sex with Midas and would like to try it with other species besides dogs. Maybe the story opens with her masturbating to one of her parents’ old National Geographics. I have more ideas than these, but these are the highlights. I think this story should be as much fun as the original.

I love that he doesn’t consider what’s in his own head to be canon, even though it’s his work. And, of course, I love that he’s so positive about fanfic.

Given that Jenny mentions at the end of the story that she and the others are planning to get together for more group sex, I was thinking that it would be an orgy at someone’s house (probably the Hiranos’, since that whole family is part of the “club” now). Thus, the sexual activities would be more planned and deliberate than those in the first story.

Glad you liked it. More action to come! We shall see...