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Well, I sent chapter 3 of “Red All Over” to Fairy Slayer for beta yesterday, and it’s already back! Chapter 3: Priya

From InBrightestDay on November 04, 2023 The Ultimate Yeah, it’s meant to be medieval fantasy. And I had a little fun with the world building. Speaking of which, after that it's a pretty hot sex scene. I'm not generally into anthro stuff, but the Ursans are human-like enough, and generally the story doesn't focus too much on their nonhuman traits (aside from mentions of their muzzles during kissing), so it didn't bother me. It took me a while to figure out what the creatures beyond the portal would actually be, such that I was well into writing the story by the time I made up my mind. So those details were added in later. He is a bit neglectful, in the sense that he has been prioritizing his responsibilities so much that Merri isn’t getting a very big share of his attention or energy. I had in my mind, but didn’t really put on the page, that in this world spouses are held to a slightly higher standard in terms of marital attention because marriages are time-limited. Thanks! Looking forward to your end-of-year story.

Well, doing NaNoWriMo is slowing my smut writing down a bit, but it definitely hasn't stopped. So my next smut-goal is to finish drafting chapter 3 of "Red All Over" and get it off to beta.

Wow, @InBrightestDay, you really captured the essence of the story.

I’m going to do it sort of half-assed and try to finish—or at least make serious progress on—the novel I started with NaNo 6 years ago. I’ve finally finished the one I started after that (in 2020), so it’s time to get back to this one.

A new chapter of “Developed” awaits your lustful gaze! Chapter 3: The Girls Next Door

Re: “Master Plan” From KitsuneStar on October 24, 2023 Thank you! As I’ve done in a few other stories, I’m trying to capitalize on what I’ve so often heard about dom/sub relationships: that by and large, it’s really the sub who is in control. Nicole chooses to be subject to humiliation and force because it turns her on. In any case, thanks for the comment, and I hope you’ll enjoy the final chapters.

I think what @BronxWench was getting at was that the important thing is whether the creature THINKS like a human or an animal. That is, if it has an animal level of intelligence, that’s what makes the sex act bestiality, because the creature isn’t smart enough to give informed consent for sex. (BW, correct me if I’m wrong.)

New story alert! The Big Brothers Club To join the Big Brothers Club, a boy only has to do two things: be at least thirteen years old, and bring a little brother or sister along. Located : Erotica > General Content Tags : 3Plus Abuse Anal Angst Anthro Bi Bond COMPLETE Contro Dom DP Inc MF Minor1 Minor2 MM Oneshot Oral Preg Rape SH Toys

From InvidiaRed on October 21, 2023 Glad you enjoyed!

So it looks like I screwed up with “Master Plan.” I think I posted chapter 6 without having posted chapter 5, or else I just failed to post chapter 6. I’m not even sure. So here are valid links to chapters 5, 6, and now 7: Chapter 5: All-Access Pass Chapter 6: Gearing Up Chapter 7: Household Chores

Nope, that’s not one of mine. Doesn’t ring any bells, either.

My Halloween story is posted! The Ultimate Summary: The Eve is a special night. And for Merri and Kyma, it will be unforgettable. Tags: 3Plus, Anal, Anthro, DP, MF, Oral

My story is posted! The Ultimate Summary: The Eve is a special night. And for Merri and Kyma, it will be unforgettable. Tags: 3Plus, Anal, Anthro, DP, MF, Oral

So, I now have three things that are on the cusp of being ready: my Halloween story “The Ultimate,” “The Big Brothers Club,” and the latest chapter of “Master Plan.” I hope to get “The Ultimate” done and posted tomorrow, and the others soon thereafter.

Chapter 3 of “Developed” is off to beta. Now I am focusing primarily on finishing my Halloween story, “The Ultimate.” It’s a medieval (or maybe pre-medieval) fantasy about two women who go into the woods on “The Eve” for some fun they couldn’t have any other night of the year. FYI, I'm planning to do NaNoWriMo this year, which means that I'll be slowing down on my smut writing during November. But I will at least work on my in-progress stories—“Master Plan,” “Red All Over,” and “Developed”—during that time. Before November, I’m hoping to finish “The Big Brothers Club.” This will be a long, round-robin, rather rapey one-shot furry story about a group of teenage boys who bring their younger siblings to their “clubhouse” on Friday nights to be used by the other teens. Even thought it’s a single story, I’ve been writing it in 4 separate documents because it was hard to keep the 4 plot threads straight in my head when I had them in 1 document. I’m using this same approach with my Glitch Techs story “Retro,” which will also be a long, round-robin one-shot.

Thanks for “sidequel”; I’d never heard that before. I’m sure Randy will be plowing Opal doggystyle at some point near the end of the story.

I think I would not rehash Opal and Evie’s visit to Randy and Rose’s house, but I might conclude the story with a scene set after that (but before the events of “A Little Family Trip”). Black Canary is a good comparison for Opal’s body type. Now I’m going to have to have her wear black fishnet stockings at some point. Now here’s a question: If a sequel is a story set after the original and a prequel is set before the original, what do you call a story that takes place at the same time as the original?

Re: “The Power Arcane: An Erotic Anthology” (final story) From LadyFreelove2 on October 08, 2023 Thanks! Both the battle and the orgy required extensive outlining because there were so many characters involved, so I really appreciate the comment.

So, the next things I’m trying to finish are chapter 3 of “Developed” and my Halloween one-shot story, to be titled “The Ultimate.” Also, notes for a couple of people: Lesles, I watched the first episode of “Gaki Ni Modotte Yarinaoshi,” and dang, it was hot. Also, the subtitles were in Spanish, which I’ve been studying, so it was educational. Star Wars Player 1, I mulled over your idea about doing a story about how Opal and Evie’s sex life got started, and the more I thought about it, the more I liked the idea. So I’ve started outlining that story. It will be in first-person from Opal’s perspective, so it will have the same format as “Little Rose.”

I’ve got a story in the works; hope to finish it in the next 10 days or so.

Hey, everyone. I was off on a wilderness trip for a few days, so I’ve been largely off the grid. But now I’m back and feeling gridly. Thanks for the recs, Lesles! I’ll look those up. In other news, Fairy Slayer has done a fine job of betaing the latest chapter of “Red All Over,” and now it’s posted! Chapter 2: Miriam

Another chapter of “Master Plan” now haunts the Interwebs! Chapter 6: Gearing Up

I use profanity frequently in sex scenes, for two reasons: --My sex scenes are more often about lust than love. --I’m a great devotee of dirty talk in sex scenes. On the second point, though, my friend and beta Jomahawk recently gave me some sage advice: If one or both of the characters are capable of speaking full, uninterrupted sentences during sex, it suggests that they aren’t having that good a time. So now I try to be mindful of that.

More “Developed” is now ready for your eyeballs! This time with incestuous fun. Chapter 2: Little Sister Thank you! More chapters are in the works, so stay tuned. What counts as hentai? I haven’t seen much of the straight-up pornographic stuff, but I’ve certainly enjoyed a few of the fanservice-heavy anime like Sekirei and Highschool of the Dead. Are there any hentai anime that you particularly recommend? I’m afraid Lolicit no longer exists. It just went away without warning sometime in late May.