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And I LOLed at the seeming randomness of “But for Me It Was Tuesday.” But some of these are definitely worth considering. Thanks, IVR!

I’m not sure, but in the episode “Really Loud Music,” Lisa mentions that she’s “been known to dabble in the soft sciences.” Interesting parallel. It would. Thanks for the comments!

Just a quick update: The sixth and final chapter of Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl is now posted. I’m very pleased with the ending, and JayDee, who has kindly betaed the whole story for me, seems to like it, too.

Once again, I am asking for a little of your collective title-formulating genius, because there’s a story I’ve been working on for over a year that still has no title. It’s a diary-format story told from the POV of a man who starts dating a woman who has a young daughter. He finds out that the woman has a secret fetish: She gets very turned on during sex if she knows that her daughter can hear her from the next room. The man, who likes little girls every bit as much as grown women, takes advantage of this situation and gradually increases the daughter’s exposure to his sexual activities with the mom, until the daughter is actually in the room watching them. Then, of course, he starts having her participate… I’ve had several ideas for a title, but I’m not wild about any of them: “Bad Mom,” “One Bad Mother,” “Exploits,” and “Serena and Maya” (that’s the mom and daughter’s names). I’m hoping y’all might have some better suggestions.

From Fairy-Slayer on August 31, 2019 Lori’s list is all the Loud girls who have hit puberty. But yes, it does seem a bit odd that every single one of them has a birth control implant, doesn’t it? You had to scrape that cloud pretty hard to find the silver lining. I enjoyed writing that bit. Can’t have a Loud House story without some laughs! Now I can't help but wonder if the cruelly-physical day camp thing has some role in Lincoln's sudden popularity, though my instincts tell me that something is affecting his sisters as well, and since only some of them are involved in the torture camp that's likely not it. (If it turns out to be the grass then you can be damned sure I'll be re-seeding my lawn!) Don’t forget so use some Weed and Feed and Seed and Breed. Could be. Thanks! I liked writing that part, too. The changes will keep coming. No, they love it, but you should hear some of the comments Perry the Platypus has made. You’re very welcome. Thanks for another lovely review.

Re: “Mommy’s Home” From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019 Thanks! One of my fetishes is family members expressing their love for each other sexually, whatever their familial relationship may be. Be warned that “Auntie’s Home” has a somewhat different tenor, because there’s a whole dom/sub angle. BTW, I know you read “Some Girl” and “Fireworks”; there’s a third story in that trilogy, titled “Comfort and Joy,” if you’re interested. You might also like “May’s Family,” which has a retrospective angle, like parts of “Regina.”

It’s been a productive week. Chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy is now up, and chapter 6 of Mia is in beta. In accordance with my self-imposed “finish two, start one” story, once chapter of Mia is up, I’ll post the first chapter of a new story fairly soon thereafter. Details to come.

Re: “Little Rose” From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019 Thank you. Sometimes I really like writing slow-burn stories like this. I think the gradual rise in how far things go adds realism while whetting the reader’s appetite for more. Of course, not every reader has the patience for that. (Sometimes I don’t either, which is how I end up writing straight-into-the-action stories like “The Small Hours” and “May’s Family.”) Thank you. Obviously, it’s one of my favorites, too. Thanks! Adding Opal and Evie just seemed like the best route to a happy ending for Rose and Randy.

Re: “The Happiest Place” From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019 Thank you! And those animatronic children would look a lot better naked than in those cheesy faux-Dutch costumes.

No worries. I’m always happy to wait for some cheerleading. Seriously, though, don’t sell yourself short. Your comments on chapter 5 were valuable.

SWP1, it’s funny you should ask about chapter 5 of The More, the Merrier, because I just posted it. I’ve also just sent chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy off to beta. JayDee: What are you, psychic? In any case, you’ll find out for sure very soon; I should be sending you chapter 6 today or tomorrow. Back to SWP1: In fact, I haven’t seen either of those trailers yet. I’ve spent most of my off time lately writing smut. But I’m glad to see James Cameron back at the helm of a Terminator movie. Not that I think he’s infallible, but he’s got the best chance of producing a good Terminator movie after the string of bad ones that followed the original two (or three; the third one had its charms).

Much progress to report. I expect to have both chapter 4 of Enter the Sandboy and chapter 6 of Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl ready for beta this weekend. Also making steady headway on chapter 4 of Delta Delta Delta. In other news, I've just read the first two chapters of Regina by Lady Freelove. It's a fun saga of promiscuity and incest, told from the POV of the title character but with entertaining asides about her family's history and philosophy regarding sex.

From Fairy-Slayer on August 26, 2019 Yeah, but titling the chapter "They Came in the Night" seemed like too much of a spoiler. Not feigning, just fantasizing. Yep. Literally? Girl Jordan could have done it (this is the girl who goes rabid during dodgeball, after all), but I wanted to change up the dream-girls to keep Lincoln off balance. Thank you!

From Lucius-Walker on August 26, 2019 Thanks! This was a oneshot. But I've got another Loud House story ("Enter the Sandboy") in progress right now, if you want to check it out.

From Lucius-Walker on August 26, 2019 Thank you! Some readers expressed disappointment with the “happy” ending, and then it occurred to me that it would be really fun to write an alternate, dark ending. Maybe a little TOO fun. So I went for it. Steven had a lot of women to take care of in this story. And Priyanka had a fair amount of “off camera” work to do, being both the group’s only doctor and the owner of the home where they made their base. I didn’t think it would be any fun if the Splinter just turned people into mindless automatons that did its bidding. Instead, I wanted them to be sinister versions of themselves, driven by every impulse that the Splinter could dredge up from their psyches to make them do what it wanted. That ended up being a lot of (twisted) fun to write, particularly Connie’s buried anger toward her mother and desire to see her punished and controlled. Thanks! And thanks for the review!

From ConanEdogawa on August 25, 2019 Well, you’re entitled to your opinion.

I’m glad you found the humor in those bits. To me, humor is an essential part of any Loud House story because the show is chiefly a comedy. Being a good big brother seems to be important to Lincoln. Of course, in this case, it’s part of what gets him into trouble... I wanted to throw Lincoln a change-up pitch. He might have been able to resist if it had been Girl Jordan again, but Ronnie Anne showing up instead caught him off guard. Lincoln keeps finding himself thrust into situations in which his will to resist is sorely tested...and continues to fail. Couldn’t help but get in a little jibe about our favorite tiara-wearing tattletale. Thanks for the review!

From YamiNoKami on August 24, 2019 That’s her shtick. And yeah, things are only going to get more confusing and awkward for Lincoln. Hmm, someone’s paying attention to the chapter titles. See, the girl doesn’t actually take your V card – she just punches it. Then, if you get nine more punches, you get a free blowjob. Someone is. Stay tuned!

Well, chapter 3 of Enter the Sandboy has emerged from beta ahead of chapter 5 of The More, the Merrier, so I posted it this morning. And it already has a review!

So here’s the very complicated deal: Technically, if you would actually pronounce the possessive s as a separate syllable (as you would if you were talking about the Ross family’s house), you should use an ‘s even if the name ends in s. So you would write, “I am going to the Ross’s house.” However, in RL, very few people do it that way. They will instead write “I am going to the Ross’ house.”

From Lady Freelove on August 22, 2019 First, let me thank you for reading and commenting on so many of my stories. You are quite the voracious reader! Re: “Excuses” Thanks! This is one of the few stories that I drafted almost entirely in one sitting because I got so caught up in writing it. Re: “Some Girl” Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this one. Re: “Fireworks” *bows* Thanks very much. A friend who liked the Valentine's Day theme of "Some Girl" suggest that I do a sequel based on another holiday, and then ideas just started to come. Re: “Satisfaction” Thanks! This one was originally intended to be a short story -- that is, chapter 1 was to be the whole story -- but after I posted it, I realized that I didn't want to stop there, because there was so much more that could be done with the characters and their evolving relationship.

So, much progress to report. First, I’ve just posted “The Order of Things,” my furry brother-on-brother-on-brother underage incest story. Check it out if that’s your thing. Second and third, I expect to have the final chapter of The More, the Merrier ready for beta in the next couple of days, and chapter 3 of Enter the Sandboy should also be ready for beta by the end of the week. (Jomahawk is the beta for both stories, though, so the Sandboy chapter will have to wait in line.) I’ve also made solid progress on chapter 4 of Delta Delta Delta, but there’s still quite a bit left to do.

I can’t guarantee that I’ll do anything with them, but I’ll at least listen. Would you mind either PMing me or posting them in my Transparency thread?

Glad you like my stuff. I expect to have the chapter of Mia ready for beta in the next couple of weeks.