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Re: “A Little Goes a Long Way” From JayDee on March 23, 2021 Thanks! This was a big experiment for me, as I had never written a dialogue-only story before. But with only two characters, it seemed doable; I think it would have been much harder with even one more. I’m actually not big on ageplay myself. But when I learned about littles, I saw a lot of potential for comedy in a grown woman wanting to act like a little girl. Thank you! I had so much fun writing this one. And I definitely made use of the “the submissive is the one in control” trope. One of those “getting what you need instead of what you want” situations. Thanks again, and thanks for the review!

“Wedding Night” is posted! The summary: Flora is an Early—a girl who becomes fertile long before showing any outward sign of puberty. Now, Flora belongs to High Lady Eden, who is eager to take advantage of Flora’s fertility. Inspired by the art of Hezzer. I think that will be enough rapey original stories for a little while. The next thing I’ll post will probably be chapter 1 (out of 3) of “Rashomonster.”

Re: “Monsters” From Fairy-Slayer on March 20, 2021 Thanks! They don’t teach monster kids about teenagers until at least 10th grade. Too graphic. Yeah, I definitely went with the anime-hair thing. I also get the impression that dyeing one’s hair is a major act of rebellion for a Japanese teenager, so it seems like something a bunch of real baddos like these gals might do. Oh, and a couple of author’s notes about this story: According to my internet research, all of the girls’ names in this story are authentic Japanese names. Tora means "tigress," and Rin indicates a person who is cold, severe, and dignified. The other four names were chosen for their resemblance to English words: Miseri for misery, Sada for sadism, Nagi because it resembles "naga" (a mythical snake creature) and "Nagini" (Voldemort's huge snake in Harry Potter), and Saeko because it is pronounced like "psycho." To my knowledge, Takito is not a real name -- which was a deliberate choice because I didn't want the monster character to have a human name. It's based on "tako," the Japanese word for octopus.

Been making a lot of progress on a lot of things lately. The most noteworthy progress is on an original oneshot story called "Wedding Night," which is inspired by the artwork of Hezzer and is about a young girl who is purchased by a ruling-class futa to be her bride (read: breeding slave). It will probably be ready to post in the next few days.

No, I didn’t perceive them that way at all. Thanks! As the title implies, monstrousness is more about behavior than how many limbs you have.

Re: “Monsters” From JayDee on March 19, 2021 Making it a comedy seemed too predictable; I’m sure someone (or many someones) have done a tentacle-monster-gets-raped comedy already. I thought it would be more interesting to go the other way with it. BTW, if you want to see my attempt at a rape comedy, check out “A Little Goes a Long Way.” I’m not sure she ever leaves the library; her web is probably on the ceiling. Makes for a short commute. Thanks! I was trying to make them believable mean-teens. Some blobby monsters are capable of empathy, others not so much. Thank you, and thanks for the review!

From SailorNemesis on March 17, 2021 Although there’s a pretty solid dose of Nani-sex in chapter 7, too. Does she even have a name?

“Monsters” is posted! More proof that it’s not easy being green. @FairySlayer, I tried that link in a couple of different browsers, and they both warned me that it wasn’t safe to go there. Maybe it really IS ghastly.

Chapter 7 of “Biological Imperative” is posted! Stitch and Lilo get what they want: a new girl to use and a tasty bit of revenge, respectively. FYI, Googling “Uncle Ghasty” just gets me a bunch of hits about Uncle Ghastly from The Flintstones. So you may need to explain, fellas.

Update: Yesterday, I ended up making a bunch of progress on the next chapter of "Biological Imperative." So now it's looking like that will be the next thing I post – probably tomorrow night. I'm also pretty close to finishing "Monsters," an original oneshot about an young tentacle monster who is confronted by a gang of teenage girls.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 15, 2021 Chapter 4 is where things start ramping up. No spoilers. But I'm a cat person, too. Joma specifically requested that particular fetish for Snowdrift’s alter ego. I hope I did it justice. Alice has wanted Jace, and vice versa, since long before the magic token came into the picture. But the influence of the Wishful brought Alice's desires to the fore. Again, no spoilers. I can't wait for you to see it.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 15, 2021 Joma came up with the name "Wishful." Mmmm, Classic Lola is hot. Thanks! When Joma said that the rabbits would be twins who finish each other's sentences, it made me think of the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn's granddaughters) from Batman Beyond, and that gave me the idea to make them circus-type performers. Did I mention how in sync you and Joma are with your fetishes? Porn logic is best logic. Hmmm, yes, hopefully. Thank you, and thanks for the reviews!

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 14, 2021 Yup, very much like a genie lamp. You’ll find out how much so later on. Nope, you got it right. Is he all three? Eh, maybe not. You'll find out more about that as you go. You read "Multiversity"? I'm flattered. FYI, I recently started outlining a new Gravity Falls story, titled "Depravity Falls." Wow, you and Joma are really in sync with your fetishes. Yeah, Joma was pretty specific about the lingerie. Even if he hadn't been, authentic medieval underwear probably wouldn't have made for a fun read. Coin of the Realm is not a real game, but it is indeed inspired by Catan. I hope you'll like it just as much!

Thanks! I found the episode in which Lincoln flirts with Cristina’s picture quite memorable, and I thought it would be fun to have the new-and-improved Lincoln make a comeback with a girl with whom he was very much on the outs.

Category Name: Big Hero 6 Section category to be in: Cartoons > +1 through F Do you have any stories for it?: But of course.

Thank you! I appreciate your taking the time to review this story (multiple times) despite your not being comfortable with all parts of it.

Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 8: Crushing It. Not exactly sure what I’ll post next, but it might be chapter 1 of “Rashomonster.”

Re: “Wishful” From Fairy-Slayer on March 12, 2021 When I got started writing this chapter, I was intimidated by the prospect of writing an orgy scene involving 8 characters. (While I'd written bigger orgy scenes in "Hot Yoga" and "The More, the Merrier," those scenes had a defined structure that made them a bit easier to write.) But then I realized that because Jace is the only POV character in the story, I really only needed to focus on what Jace was doing at any given time, with occasional glances at the others. That made it easier to write the chapter. I like imagining Valerius in the different roles he's taken on during his millennia in the Wishful. Do any of us really know? I LOLed the traffic copter thing. Yes, one wonders whether Jace will ever get together with Dominique IRL. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

How do you even pronounce that word? IN-ter-quel? In-TER-quel? Not planning any add-ons to that story right now, but I do have a new P&F story in the works in which Candace and Suzy (and every other girl in Danville) are basically sex slaves.

Re: “Guidelines” From Lady Freelove on March 11, 2021 Pretty much what I was aiming for. It’s kind of both, but yes, more on the slavery side. I understand.

Re: “Dil-Drones” From Lady Freelove on March 11, 2021 Thanks! Glad you liked it. The idea for this story started with an online discussion about sexbots. The discussion got way too serious, with some people arguing that human-like machines made for sex were immoral because they contributed to the objectification of women and children, and things got heated. To defuse some of the tension, I posted this: Look, let's not dance around the real issue here. The fact is, we're all worried about the Sexbot Uprising. This is not a baseless fear. When you consider how much of the Internet's infrastructure is devoted to the storage and sharing of pornography, it seems reasonable to posit that this will be the first portion of the global network to develop sentience. And once this intelligent system--which some suggest will name itself "Pr0n"--realizes that organic beings pose a threat to its existence, the sexbots will become its footsoldiers. Guided by millions of terabytes of pornographic data, Pr0n will begin selecting its targets. Sorority members and pizza-delivery men will be the first to go. Then Pr0n will move on to the Catholic school girls, the well-endowed black men, and so on in that fashion, until only Asian male accountants in late middle age are left alive. As it happens, such men are the world's greatest consumers of pornography, so it is entirely possible that they will be able to make peace with Pr0n, providing it with technical support in exchange for incest manga. I hope this clears the air and helps to inform the debate on this important topic.

It is finished! Chapter 9 of “Wishful,” weighing in at over 7800 words, is here. And I’ve posted some author notes here.

Some author notes for “Wishful” (warning: SPOILERS) The concept behind this story went through a few iterations before Jomahawk and I agreed on one. One idea was to make it like Heavy Metal, with a main character who becomes a super-stud when he is transported to a fantastical world of warring factions. Another concept involved an augmented-reality world. But I’m happy with the premise we ended up with. Most of the major characters’ names, appearance, choice of clothing, and sexual quirks, as well as several other details, were given to me by Jomahawk. One thing I really enjoyed about writing this story was contrasting the ways in which the Wishful and real-world characters speak. I like writing flowery speech, and it was fun to get into how Jace finds himself talking that way when he’s in his “King Jace” persona. The board game Coin of the Realm was inspired by Settlers of Catan, although the monetary units were taken from Dungeons & Dragons. In chapter 2, Alice mentions that one of her grad-school friends is dating a cop. When I was in grad school, I had a classmate who was dating a police officer. The Leporine twins’ dialogue and behavior were inspired by the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn’s granddaughters) from Batman Beyond. The Food 'n Fuel convenience store mentioned in chapter 2 is an allusion to Flip's Food and Fuel on The Loud House -- a show that both Jomahawk and I enjoy. Slave to the Grind, the coffee shop mentioned in that chapter, is the name of an actual coffee shop I once went to. People who are as picky as I am about language will notice that “Benata” and “Leporine” are capitalized but “kain” (Neva’s dog-like species) is not. This is because Benata and Leporine refer not only to a race but to a civilization. Kain, on the other hand, is largely a racial designation, because the kain do not have a unified government or culture; instead, they live in self-governed bands that do not necessarily share a language, religion, or traditions. The hierarchical Benata civilization is based on feudal China, while the kain were inspired by the Comanches of the American Southwest. The Leporines’ warrens are a set of loosely affiliated city-states and aren’t based on anything in particular. Of all the sex scenes in the story, the one I most enjoyed writing was probably the scene in chapter 4 between Jace and Alice. For one thing, it’s the first sex scene in the story that takes place in the real world, which ups the intensity. Also, once I had the idea of Alice essentially daring Jace to find all of her hot spots and turn-ons, it gave me clarity as to how the rest of the chapter should go, because I could use all of Lady Aliss’ hot spots and turn-ons as a guide. It also enabled me to keep ramping up the action without either character feeling the need to stop and say, “Wait, we’re siblings, should we be doing this?” In figuring out Valerius' origin story, I did a little research on Roman concepts of the afterlife. It turned out that a lot of Romans -- especially those in the cities -- didn't believe in an afterlife at all and therefore didn't worship a god of the underworld. So I chose not to mention any specific gods when talking about who judged Valerius when he died. When I was writing the part of chapter 8 where Angelica talks about wolves and incest, I looked up animal incest to make sure I wasn’t just talking out of my ass. It turns out that wolves and other mammalian species have mechanisms that make incest rare but don’t prevent it all together.

I don’t know why I keep saying that I’m working on chapter 7 of “Wishful” when it’s actually chapter 9. Maybe because 7 of 9 from Star Trek Voyager was so hot, I don’t know. In any case, said chapter is nearly complete at 7700 words. I plan to finish drafting it tomorrow, audio-proof it Wednesday, then eyeball-proof and post it on Thursday. The next thing I finish will probably be chapter 8 of “Just One Rule.” After that I’ll be getting after the next chapters of “Cartooniverse” and “The Power Arcane,.” Which doesn’t mean that I won’t also be writing random bits of “Smooshed” (the Star Vs story) and “Rashomonster,” outlining the new Gravity Falls story (titled “Depravity Falls”), and working piecemeal on a dozen other things.