BronxWench

In Naruto, this is one that you might enjoy: Silver and Gold

Try this: Dont abduct me I'm Welsh!

I have run across stories in which each paragraph was one enormous sentence, strung together by commas where one would expect to see a period. At the very end of the paragraph was a period. I'm simply not willing to work that hard to make sense of a story.

Pen Name: BronxWench Story link: A King's Promise Review Replies: Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult+ Fandom: Games > Dragon Age: Origins Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, M/M, NoSex

Augh, commas, periods, and question marks! How can simple punctuation be such a mystery?

Thank you for the report, and we will look into it. We do take plagiarism very seriously here at AFF.

It's part and parcel of the generally sloppy attitude towards all things that are not tweeted. Honestly, my inner Grammar Bitch has hissies daily.

Can you give us the names of the stories and the subdomains they were published in? Thanks!

Try: Jessie Jumps James Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Meowth! Equal Treatment

Jadziane is the name of the author. She has removed all her stories from the site, and has no other contact information on her profile. Please remember that if anyone does have a copy of this story saved anywhere that you not pass it around. We ask that you respect the author's decision to remove the story.

Now I feel much better about Recaptcha's frequent forays into kanji with me. Couldn't do espruar, could it?

Actually, the disclaimer on this story is fine. It disclaims the fandoms by name, and clearly states that no profit is made...

Pen Name: BronxWench Story link: Ritual Review Replies: Review Replies Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult+ Fandom: Games > Dragon Age: Origins Warnings: Anal, AFFO, ChallengeFic, Fingering, HJ, M/M

I'm really sorry that you're experiencing this sort of thing. Our admin staff are the ones who can really look into this properly, but I'd urge you not to take the ratings to heart too much. For me, at least, ratings don't affect whether or not I choose to read a story for enjoyment. I've clicked on some with many high ratings, and been completely disappointed. Others that may have no ratings have been gems. But yes, it does sting to see those low ratings, and I do understand. When it happens to me, I tend to view it as part of being a site moderator. That's what I tell myself, and I go right on writing.

And we now have a FAQ!

There is no requirement for a story to have adult content for it to be published on AFF. And yes, that is exactly why we have the "NoSex" tag. If a reader simply must have sex, then they should not read stories with a NoSex tag. Pretty simple!

Lambda, isn't it? (Which sets off whole new chains of flashbacks...)

Gene Wolfe is utterly incredible and that book is simply breathtakingly good. And yes, he carries his narrative flawlessly in terms of his character's amnesia. Another writer who handles both POV changes and flashbacks wonderfully is Mary Doria Russell. The Sparrow and Children of God are among my favorite books ever.

Review Responses for AFF Monthly Challenge Prompt for September 2011: Harrison Winter From Melrick: I'm the one who should be thanking you for setting up the monthly prompts! The various prompts were fun, and I really enjoyed working them all into the one submission. The haunted house story, well, let's just say I had a wildly misspent youth when it came to my reading choices. From JayDee: Thank you! I managed to avoid both elves and slash for once, and wound up with a succubus and a dead guy. Funny how that works out...

Your stories are visible once again, and thank you.

Both of the stories you list were hidden because they each contained an Author's Note as a chapter, with no additional story content. That is a violation of our Terms of Service and the associated Posting Guidelines. You received an email on 9/27/11 for each story at the email account associated with your AFF account detailing this information. Once you have removed the Author's Note chapter from each story, let us know and we can review the corrections and make the stories visible again.

Unless of course you have brass balls...

I guess if we bombard them with reports they act, if only to shut us up. Works for me, as long as they do the right thing.

The story was removed from the site by the author.