BronxWench

BumbleBee, the very best wishes for a good report!

Okay, let's try one more time, with illustrations. I've used one of my stories for the purposes of making images. Please use your own subdomain info. Go to your Control Panel and select EDIT in the subdomain. You get taken to a new screen, where you can choose you story and what you want to do: Pick the title of your story, and then select EDIT DETAILS: You are taken to the next page: Click the dropdown arrow on the first field. See the highlighted choice? --Choose Category-- CHOOSE THAT: Once you choose that, the second choice disappears: Now, go back to the first category and re-select your fandom category - for you, Rurouni Kenshin. Then you can select a NEW second level category: To add tags, go to the field marked SUMMARY. Use the arrow keys to move along that line, until you get to the end. Then type in the additional tags that you need. You can't do a dropdown after the initial posting, so you have to type them yourself. I hope this is a little clearer now.

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Okay, this is the story, yes? When you go to edit the details, in the first field, select " --Choose Category--- " This will blank it out so that the second field disappears until you re-select your category, in your case, Rurouni Kenshin. Then you can select the new sub-category. I will point out that you will need to add a M/M tag based on the content in that first chapter. It may not be yaoi, but there is male on male sexual content, in specific, the blow job the child is forced to perform. So, while you are editing the details, use your arrow keys to move down the Summary field and add in M/M as a tag. Thanks!

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This thread has a great many recommendations, some of which may fit your request.

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If you are in heat, lactation wouldn't necessarily be a by-product of that, since she's have to conceive, which would end the heat, before she could lactate. Strictly speaking.

Okay, we begin producing colostrum in late pregnancy. While we might not be "full" then, giving birth is what triggers the process of lactation. There are two stages to lactation. The first couple of days, you produce something called colostrum, which is thin, yellowish, dense with antibodies and helps immunize the baby to some extent. If a woman has any leakage prior to giving birth, it's colostrum. After a few days, the milk a woman produces thickens, becomes higher in fat content, and looks paler as she begins to express breastmilk. So, there's no way to answer your question. It's not a precise thing and varies from woman to woman, making it impossible to say how "full" she'd be after three hours. Given that a human infant can nurse every couple of hours, I'd say odds are she'd be engorged by three hours, and in pain.

Even lactating, we're rarely salute-able. Perky, erect, tight, hardened, pebbled... those all work for nipples as adjectives. As far as lactation, breasts swell, yes, but when you're full of milk, they're hard, and it's not sensitive, it's painful to be engorged. You need to let down, ie, express milk. You'll see the veins more clearly, or at least i did, and I leaked all the time. Nipples aren't sensitive in the sexual sense, but they are also swollen, can appear larger and that is when you might see the very peak look elongated, after the baby has fed. They do get sore if the baby doesn't latch right, and they can crack and bleed.

For the first, I'll assume you meant "globes" and not globs. The second is not bad, and the third is repetitive. I'd drop "large" since "voluptuous mountains" is enough to ensure that I'll think she's very well endowed. But yes, the third sounds bigger than the second. As to nipples... I have fairly large nipples myself, but even fully hardened and erect, I'd hardly describe them as "towers" or "like flagpoles." I might say something like "her voluptuous mountains rested proudly on her chest, her swollen nipples prominent." Do you see the difference? You don't want to make the readers feel like they should salute.

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Okay, that's a decent list, actually, and you'll notice that there is NO fruit mentioned at all. This is GOOD. We are not a salad bar, after all. You have two of your women being C cup, and that measurement, 36 and 42, refers to the band, or the part of the bra that wraps around the body. I'm going to assume those are inch measurements, since we're talking adult women here. 42 inches for a band is a woman with a wide back and a broad build. If that's what you're going for, that's great, but... Marilyn Monroe wore a 36D. Salma Hayek is a 36C. Kim Kardashian is a 32DD. Katy Perry is a 32D. So, you see, it's the cup size that's the fullness of the breast, not the band. For visuals, read this. As I said in the shoutbox, and I'll repeat it here for any other curious authors, I myself prefer not to be told a specific size for breasts, or for penises. I have a terrific imagination. That's why I'm a writer, because I have all these imaginary worlds and people in my head. So, give my imagination something to do when I'm reading. If you describe breasts as "lush," I'm going to have an image in my head that is pleasing and sexy. If you tell me the breasts are 36DD, I'm going to start thinking about how I should probably check and see if Victoria's Secret is having any good sales, or maybe I can look online... and you've lost me. I'm shopping, not reading your story. Engage your readers by engaging their imaginations, not by writing a catalog.

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Do you get a dropdown menu appearing there, with a little down arrow next to the field?

Right now, we're midstream in a code rewrite, so what we recommend is that you add the story you want to follow to the Currently Reading or Recommended Reading sections of your archive profile. You can also check the author's profile and see if they do a mailing list notification, which some of our authors do. I'm not a coder, so I can't say for sure what form it will take, but I do believe we'll have a way for readers to get updates when the rewrite is completed. As far as telling if a story is complete, that will depend on the author. Most will post an epilogue, or add an author's note at the end of the final chapter to let readers know it's finished. We do have a "Complete" tag, but it's not mandatory that authors use that tag. Some do, and others don't want to go back in and edit the story details to add that tag.

The author was removed from the site for repeated TOS violations, as detailed here.

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