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That story was removed by the author, and as far as we know, she left no explanation. Given that it was an original story, it may have been due to her being published.

To get this thread back on topic, somewhat, many readers who won't leave a review will come and chat here on the forum. The Promote a Story! thread and the review reply threads are excellent places to let your readers get to know you. The OP is looking to promote a story, and that would be why I made the initial comment that I did. Reviews aren't really the issue here.

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There are reviewers who will leave some great, detailed reviews. It depends on the individual reader, and how they feel, really.

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We have an amazing thread called Promote a Story! where you can post information about your stories, and post update notices. A lot of our author use it regularly, and if readers are forum members, they can follow that thread, which can then serve as an update notice.

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It's big only if he has an understanding of what it is he's been missing, so to speak. It's bigger to you, as the author, than it is to the character, if you think about it. I know you want him to have one of those perfect first times, but I'm going to be fairly direct. I'm from a large urban area, and came of age before HIV, herpes, Hep C, and all those lovely things that make sex a crapshoot nowadays. The worst thing we had to deal with was a bit of clap, and antibiotics along with a bunch of embarrassing phone calls dealt with that nicely. So, we were largely uninhibited when it came to sex. I have not ever encountered anyone who had two women suck him off as a first time. It sounds like they at least have some clue of what to do, which makes it even less probable. I'm pretty certain that most first times, for a guy, are over far faster than he'd have liked, and are fairly messy, inelegant, downright giggle-worthy affairs. So two women with a clue aren't going to be "playing" with him. They will know with certainty that he's going to blow his load fast, and refractory periods being what they are, even his youthful enthusiasm won't make a second time happen instantly. And "something large left his body" sounds like he either gave birth or had the bowel movement from the hells. Or possibly he has balls the size of an African elephant. Most men's testicles aren't going to hold enough fluids to give that sensation. We're talking generally a teaspoon or two of fluid, maybe less. Go look at what a teaspoon or two of a liquid looks like. It's not something large at all, in terms of accuracy.

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Word_Slave took all her works down, and has asked that any saved copies not be shared around. We support her request, and ask that you do as well.

Honestly, the mechanics of release are the same. I think the key lies in whether or not the person giving the blow job has any experience at all. If not, then while he might not have anything to compare it to, other than his own hand, it might be a bit clumsy. Does she perhaps have trouble going past the head, and will she use her hand a bit? Might the actual ejaculation surprise them both? It doesn't need to be like a cannon going off to startle a girl giving her first blow job, not to mention the taste of semen for the first time. As far as he's concerned, not having anything to compare, he won't notice that a mouth can be looser than a vagina, even with a bit of pressure from the tongue, and there's teeth in there to watch out for. These are the things to work out in your on head before you even start writing. And keep in mind that what goes on in your readers' heads is almost ALWAYS smuttier than anything you can write, so give them the framework and let them fill in the squishy bits.

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So, to try and use the format provided, you're asking for: Subdomain: Television Fandom: Black Sails Do you have a story for it? Yes, I'm working on one. That about right?

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