BronxWench

This is AWESOME!!! And a damned good paper as well, so cheers to getting off while getting over on that MA!

Bean Montag changed pen names and removed certain stories from AFF. The new pen name is Scintilla. Links for other stories: The Outsider by kotikzhenshchina Cuckoo Silver Nights by Luna_Blood Moonlight Denial series by Darkness Blue by Angie

I'm not finding that title here, so it may have been one of the stories removed from FFN for content exceeding their limits. I'm sorry I can't tell you more than that, but there's simply no record here at AFF.

M/M Fantasy/Adventure Romance Ghost's Dilemma by Morwen Navarre While the beauty of the story and writing was clear, once I was done I felt like I had read a classic, full of beauty, love and strong messages about life, personality and the value of humans. Magical, intense at times, fast paced and fascinating. ~***~ "You blush and you growl. I want to keep you like you are just then. All smooth, bare skin and pink cheeks. Your eyes shining up at me brighter than your witchmark." "Moon shine on me, Ghost. When you look at me like this, how can I even think of anything but making love to you?" Ghost is content to spend all his free time in bed with Gerry. But scandal and hate surrounding Ghost's appointment as the first male witch and a deadly epidemic force Ghost to make choices that might cost him Gerry's love. Use the coupon code "sweetheart2015" at Torquere Press to get Ghost's Dilemma for 15% off http://goo.gl/Ngn2xU Ghost's Sight is on sale for a limited time http://goo.gl/w1WDRL Amazon http://goo.gl/Qf7k4r Goodreads http://goo.gl/aaXfkB Angel Edits' Blog http://angeledits.blogspot.com/p/ghosts-dilemma.html Ghost's Sight Series Page https://www.facebook.com/pages/Ghosts-Sight/1579777262264084

Laevi, we'll always wait for your muse to inspire you, because you always make it wonderful when you write. You are one of my inspirations, truly!

If this was a read-the-book story, we do not allow those here on AFF.

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We're in the midst of a code revision project, and some of our usual features have had to be disabled temporarily. I do believe that the ability to select email notification for reviews is one of them, unfortunately. I'm not sure if it can be turned on by our tech admin, but when she surfaces from what's been a gruesome RL workload, I'll check.

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I think that's the part of the rabid fandom thing that bothers me the most. When you drive a person away from writing simply because they wrote a pairing that isn't "beloved" of the masses, there's something profoundly wrong with that fanbase. Some people need to step back, look long and hard in a mirror, and think about how they'd feel if they were on the receiving end of the vitriol they spew with such abandon. Maybe there's a "50 Shades of Cyberbullying" out there handing out misinformation on what constitutes appropriate online behavior in a fandom?

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The Harry Potter fandom isn't much saner, to be very honest. I'd wager most fandoms can be obsessive. When I do write for a fandom, it's for a game fandom. The Dragon Age fandom doesn't seem quite as hysterical about sacred pairings, and I haven't been shot for my Neverwinter Nights 2 sidestep from the "canon" romance. But, like Melrick, most of what I write is original fiction.

If he becomes an annoyance here, we'd be happy to assist.

I'm not seeing anything by that title in my records. Do you remember the author's name?

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Thank you! It's visible once more.

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I like constructive criticism, although I'll never turn down glowing praise. I might blush a little, but I do like it. What.s really, REALLY useful is knowing what worked for readers, and what didn't. My editor was all bothered by one review on Goodreads, where the reader felt I could have done more character development in my debut novella. And you know what? That reader had a valid point. I don't see that as a negative, because it tells me what I need to do better. The reader did go on to say that they were looking forward to the second book. Let's hope I did better, but if not, that's still valid from that reader's perspective, and I'm not crushed to be told that. I don't worry so much about long or short, or if it's one returning reviewer or many reviewers. When I write online, either is fine. When I publish, I get one shot at a review, so it's not an issue.

It does need to be at the bottom of each chapter. When I swept your story, I was immediately aware of the dialogue from the game, having played it myself. Chapter 3 in particular contained a lot of dialogue from the Dalish elf opening sequence. So we'd need to see that citation in each chapter.

Okay, because I was obviously NOT clear enough in my previous post: DO NOT POST LINKS TO A STORY THAT THE AUTHOR HAS REMOVED. DO NOT POST LINKS TO A SITE THAT DOES NOT HOST THE STORY WITH THE AUTHOR'S CONSENT AND PERMISSION. Michally took the story down, does NOT wish it posted, and we will not allow this forum to be used as a conduit for piracy. If you can't abide by our rules, don't post here.