Torture is very subjective. What might be fine for one reader could be too much for another reader. That is why we require proper tagging on stories with content that can be upsetting.
This forum, however, is not the place to post snippets of work. The forum is the right place to ask for a beta reader, or to create a review reply thread where you can chat with readers, or to look for advice from other authors like you’re doing here. All story content belongs in the archive, though, so please don’t post snippets here or the forum staff will remove those snippets.
Now, with all the staff stuff said, time to wear my writer/reader hat…
I don’t like to read about torture simply for the sake of torture. It has to be done for a reason, whether as a punishment or as an act of revenge, or because the torturer is clearly sociopathic and sadistic. Or maybe the MC is being trained by way of torture? Whatever the reason, it has to be consistent and somewhat believable. But that’s strictly my personal taste. I don’t mind torture, if it fits the story, and doesn’t trip up any of my personal squicks.