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From Fairy-Slayer on June 07, 2021 Wow, try saying THAT five times fast. With “Whoops,” I decided early on that it wasn’t going to be that kind of story. This story, on the other hand… That idea came to me kind of late, but then once I had it, I realized that I should have thought of it from the beginning. That’s quite possible. Not that I’m consciously aware of. From here, things in the Loud house can only get crazier. Especially if they have visitors...

I feel like there is a whole untapped subgenre of what happens when a zombie apocalypse gets worse. *Werewolf howls* or demons escaping hell or vampires going crazy as they try to find the last living humans before they go totally feral. or even suddenly it goes disaster movie.

Oh yeah, way, waaaay before my time. Oh yeah, now you mention it, I did read some of that a while ago, it was good. Meant to go back and finish it at some point, actually. Liked how you tried to come up with some in-universe explanations for how the characters can do some of the weird stuff they do, like Sonya’s kiss of death. Why’ve you done so much about her, out of curiosity? Lolno. Seriously. Your stuff wouldn’t be half as difficult to read as it is in places if it wasn’t as good as it is. You’ve inspired at least two writers of our acquaintance into doing spin-offs/sequels of your work, one of whom is in your own signature, for crying out loud. I’d give my left hand for that kind of a positive response.

Nothing major that needed to be axed so far. One minor example would be that the previous version had more of Talinda and Retalia having to spend time together before they arrived at the court...but eventually it did just resolve to the scenes I kept in the new version so it was kind of pointless. Another example would be an Inn discussion that I realized fitted better with a scene from the next chapter than just randomly following the story teller talking about kind of related things. One thing I actually changed was lord Harper going into a fight with Talinda, in the original he was more interested into getting Talinda in bed and did not really talk about how her identity was a danger to him. Have you seen My Elf Girlfriend on College humor? A wonderful take on the horny elves trope that is good for quite a laugh. Yep, the witch king will pack a punch when he eventually gets around to fight. Maybe I can tweak the dialogue to make it clearer. IMO it adds quite a bit to making the scene even more funny.