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Authors: Sparrow and InBrightestDay Title: Bunkerkampf (Mortuus Orbis Part Two) Summary: Following the events of Part One, the remaining survivors attempt to rebuild their numbers, only to face new threats in the dead city. More pressing, however, is a threat already among them, that their fragile unity may not survive. Feedback: Reviews and constructive criticism much desired. Fandom: Misc Video Games/RPGs > Crossovers Warnings: Abuse Angst Bigotry BMod BP Contro HC Hum MCD MF MiCD Minor2 Oral Racist Rape Solo Tort UST Violence Solo or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091480 Review Reply thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/69143-mortuus-orbis-discussion-thread/

From Fairy-Slayer on April 29, 2021 An excellent question, whose answer may be beyond my capacity for rhyme. Thank you! I didn't think this chapter would work without Ana having some serious internal conflict to deal with before the sex (as with Cristina in chapter 8). I thought about having her pay him afterward for that very reason, but since Lincoln didn't actually tell anyone where he was going, it didn't seem necessary from a plot standpoint. Plus, I didn't want to put Lincoln in the position of feeling like a boy-whore. Thank you! Lincoln's crush on Ms. DiMartino was the main reason why I wanted to include her in this story (along with her general hotness, of course). In the other chapters, Lincoln is driven mainly by horniness; I wanted one chapter in which he had another motivation, too, one which would make the sex scene different from the others. "Psst! Nobody tell Clyde about Rule 34!" She's definitely not as cautious as she should be. Agnes strikes me as one of those adults who never decided that the time for youthful wildness was over. Ooooohhhh, that was...clever, I will grudgingly admit. Thanks for the review!

Chapter three is up. Much shorter than the previous one, I’m afraid.

Chapter two is up. Better grab a sandwich or something, because this is a long one.