Another on Strange Tales from Stranger Places. This one from @JayDee (who I believe is a first on mine, so... Welcome to tcr's nuthouse?... lol).
From JayDee on March 07, 2019
Part 1 oneshot–
The perspective from the alien works amazingly well. It also made me smile some, imagining the big alien trying to get some sleep when a capsule hits it’s dwelling. Can’t roll over and go back to sleep with that sort of thing going on!
I was happy to see the tent code up the top, and this one delivers in a brief hot scene. The tentacles changing color with desire was a neat touch. The idea of so many more drawn by the pheromones... I guess it could either go Nightmare or Night out round Temple Bar.
I enjoyed this’n!
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The perspective from the alien works amazingly well. It also made me smile some, imagining the big alien trying to get some sleep when a capsule hits it’s dwelling. Can’t roll over and go back to sleep with that sort of thing going on!
I'm glad you thought so, JayDee. I kind of struggled with just how much to present about them in order to keep it hidden (hopefully no one reads the reviews, lol). Not to mention the opposite, being how much to reveal so it's not out of nowhere. It made picking words for every day actions that much more interesting. Lol. And LOL. Nope, just plain nope... no sleep there.
I was happy to see the tent code up the top, and this one delivers in a brief hot scene. The tentacles changing color with desire was a neat touch. The idea of so many more drawn by the pheromones... I guess it could either go Nightmare or Night out round Temple Bar.
I enjoyed this’n!
I admit, the colour change was a last minute addition to add some unique features to Zenia and her race. And I'm glad it was a hot scene... First time writing tent scene, so I was nervous. Lol. (I know what I intended, but I like hearing what people think of it).
I'm quite happy you did. Look forward to hearing more from you.