An Actor Abducted finally got finished and it’s one of those stories where I’m not hugely happy with it, but I stil feel it worth the effort as I genuinely think my re-written version is a big improvement on the original, and I like how Gabrielle’s character turned out. In my original version she was a cishet male who happily became a rapist. Gabrielle’s waaaay more nuanced and less of an asshole.
Thank you for the second review also! I really do appreciate the feedback. The WS I felt helped show Roman was getting even more extreme, and it seemed Gabrielle needed a nudge to get to the right mental place. Plus it was in the original version… then again, so was some brief scat content and I wiped that. As it were. Bringing back OCs and re-using them is something I’ve been dicking around with for years so I am sure if I can manage it, I will. At the very least she deserves a nice stiff cock up that British arse just like she’s been dreaming about. Thank you again
You’re one of the best writers I read on here for sure! I can only judge on what I read. Sure, I don’t read get around to all of your stuff obviously, but when I do find something that sounds my kind of thing and read it I always enjoy it – and when I read something that doesn’t sound like my kind of thing I enjoy that too!