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My cable company made all the premium channels free over Thanksgiving weekend, so I recorded some movies. One of these was Frozen, because I wanted to know what half the kids on the planet Earth were so excited about. So a few nights ago, I watched it. And frankly, I thought it was brilliant. Not only did it have great music and wonderful visuals, but it's written really well: The writers know that this is probably not your first Disney movie, and that you therefore have certain expectations about what is going to happen. And they use those expectations to completely screw with you, in some really good ways. So now, fresh off NaNoWriMo with well over a dozen neglected in-progress stories waiting for me to work on them, I find that there is a stupid, stupid, stupid Frozen fanfic writing itself in my head. And the only thing I fear more than the shame of writing it is the disappointment of not writing it. For Christ's sake, I'm a childless man in my mid-forties. Shouldn't I be immune to this sort of nonsense? I mean, it's freakin' DISNEY. Please kill me. Then the bunnies. Then me again, just to be sure.

I totally agree with BOTH statements. B

Ok. Found the link to your forum. Great story. Love cliffhangers. Need to see next chapter to see if she makes it or not. You are learning from the master cliffhanger (Magus) in leaving your readers wanting more. Just do not leave us hanging to long or we will move on to other writers on this site. To many stories are left undone or listed as completed and the story had no ending to it when it was stopped. Please continue the story so we know what happens to her sister.

Some cartoons just have that effect. Like when I saw Watership Down and had bunny plot bunnies.

You do realize that plot bunnies are impossible to actually kill, don't you? They just respawn, and you never know what they'll pick up on their way back. Trust me on this.

so had a brain fart and this fell out: about Leia, i wonder if david built her...and maybe rick found her in a pod...could she actually be a robot? hmmmm

That is a good lead in into book number 3. Maybe it will also be explained how he joined the Marines but became a Navy Seal. The only way to do that is to get out of the Marines and exlist in the Navy. Seals are Navy personnel only. Also maybe Rick and Nick met up in the past and this way Rick can recontact Nick to help Max and him with the Slavers/abusers. Only a hint. But I like the way that you throw items oout there for us to discuss and then either you use them or coimpletely blow us away by coming out of left field with a angle we never would have thought of. That is way you are the great writer and we just wait to see what other bait you dangle in front of us with the next chapters. Keep up the great work. See you. Alsao have fun with the newbies in your classes. Do not huirt them to much.

No, I saved the Leia explanation for back story, Rick is going to have a prominate place in book three, kinda like the twins do now, probably even more...nothing too twisty, but I feel Rick needs more of a past