Guest Donkingkong Posted September 26, 2022 Report Posted September 26, 2022 Hola mi amigos! How's life? Any updates? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 26, 2022 Author Report Posted September 26, 2022 Hi Donkingkong, life's fine - busy with work, but I'll have some free time in the next week, so I'll make an effort to finish the next chapter. My aim will be to post it in the next 2 weeks. Then I'll give an update regarding the next few chapters. Now that I've decided Lara will be getting her tattoos done in Siberia, there are some scenes, like her less than triumphant return to Paititi, that will have to happen before then, but I'll go into that more once this chapter is complete. Quote
Guest GhostOfCovid Posted September 26, 2022 Report Posted September 26, 2022 Next 2 weeks sounds good really looking forward to the next chapter even since a game show style chapter was confirmed Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 27, 2022 Report Posted September 27, 2022 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Here's some ideas for some things that can be planned for Lara…either by Sarah, Sam or Sarah's guest in the newly renovated Manor. (or during her fun time with the inmates and guards) Have Lara strapped across a huge wooden log that's about 2.5 foot in diameter and 5 foot long. Nothing that's back breaking but allows her to be secured either on her back or her stomach. On one end it has a motorized crank assembly that rotates the log both clockwise and counter-clockwise - when it rotates clockwise it forces her to swallow some huge cock. Whenever it rotates counter-clockwise Lara can be forced to take either huge cocks or huge dildo's or both. Maybe Sarah does catch Lara doing her anal exercises. She has Lara hooked up to some sort of resistance plug to test her anal strength to new levels. What seems like a small device can be inserted in her ass. Make it so it can be filled with liquid and it expands like a balloon, but instead of outward it fills length ways…it has different shapes and sizes that when filled they have various heaver weight and she has to use her anal muscles to keep it inside her while getting fucked. This is not an enema because all the fluid stays sealed inside the device. How about a banging bench but someone else has to use the handles to give her more inches of another large dildo.. by operating the handles it forces a dildo deeper and deeper into her ass while she's forced to cum on a vibrating dildo….but the vibrating dildo is only as powerful as the person operating the handles. Maybe you can check into these toys and use ideas from them too. https://www.etsy.com/market/huge_dildo_with_knot?ref=pagination&page=3 Here are some of the best rated from Bad Dragon https://www.mysextoyguide.com/best-bad-dragon-dildo/ Zeus Electrosex Deep Intruder From <https://www.extremerestraints.com/the-zeus-deep-intruder.html> Tower of Pain The Tower of Pain is a unique, effective nipple clamp device. It has two clover clamps attached to a bar. The clamps are attached to the submissive's nipples. Through the middle of the bar is a pole with a knob at the top of the pole. The Dominant turns the knob which causes the bar to rise higher from the submissive's chest, thereby, stretching the sub's nipples. It can be easily assembled and disassembled, making it perfect for traveling or taking to clubs or parties. The breast plate is made of a high quality machined plastic for light weight and durability, while bar and clamps are made from stainless steel. From <https://www.extremerestraints.com/tower-of-pain.html> Spread open the walls of your anal cavity! Your ass has never felt anything like this massive invasion! Stretch your insides wide with the Claw, a device for hollowing out your anus. Revel in the massive insertion while your partner takes a peek into your expanded asshole! Push the four wedges together for a smooth, manageable penetration. Once past your sphincter, the firm, yet flexible Claw will open up, pressing against your anal walls, prying you open and exposing the deep recesses of your anus. Your partner will love peering through the base into your huge, dilated asshole. They can even stuff a dildo through or fill you up with an enema. The unique sensation and endless possibilities will have you moaning and gasping in ecstasy! Claw Expanding Anal Dilator Specifications: Measurements: 4.5 inches in total length, 3.5 inches insertable. When closed, diameter measures 2.25 inches at widest point. When opened, diameter measures 4.25 inches. Center hole measure 1.5 inches in diameter. Material: TPE. From <https://www.extremerestraints.com/claw-expanding-anal-dilator.html> Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 27, 2022 Author Report Posted September 27, 2022 Hi GhostOfCovid, I'll try not to disappoint. Hi LHunt, lots of ideas for when Lara's back at the Manor. For now I'll be focusing on the next 4 chapters when Lara's away. Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted September 27, 2022 Report Posted September 27, 2022 Great update brother! Keep up the great work! Can't thank you enough Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 27, 2022 Report Posted September 27, 2022 Hey CrossroadsMk2, As you mentioned earlier, that Lara is sensing a theme of having to take a large horse cock all the way in her ass before she’s allowed to cum, then maybe Sarah, Tori, Sam or maybe even Mary or Sybil has a specially designed double dildo made for her. Have it at least 20 inches long with greater increasing diameter as usual. The underneath cock at least 12 inches long and increases in girth also. The underneath dildo is only activated at a low hum and stays at a low hum until she’s at the 11 inch mark….once she’s there the ass dildo is in 19 inches and it starts a very high intense vibrating on the last two inches as well….or mix it up to thrust, rotate and vibrate at different points along the shafts. Horse or other large dildo – 0--1--2--3--4--5--6--7--8--9--10--11--12--13--14--15--16--17--18--19--20 0--1---2---3---4---5---6---7---8---9---10--11—12 Pussy dildo - Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 27, 2022 Report Posted September 27, 2022 For some reason it didn’t line up the same size... Horse or other large dildo – 0--1--2--3--4--5--6--7--8--9--10--11--12--13--14--15--16--17--18--19--20 0---1---2---3---4---5---6---7---8---9---10--11—12 Pussy dildo - Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 28, 2022 Author Report Posted September 28, 2022 Hi LHunt, some horse dildo stuff is planned for when Lara's back at the Manor, but like I said, I'm focussed on the away chapters for now. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted October 1, 2022 Report Posted October 1, 2022 Hey CrossroadsMk2, I’d like to send you some great ideas I’ve been thinking on…..I don’t want to do a spoiler on here for your readers in case you decide to use some of it...here is my email. Please send me a return so I can forward the ideas to you, please read them and let me know if you like any of them. I think you’ll be surprised when reading them hopefully....or as I’ve said before maybe some ideas were spawned. lgmhunt@gmail.com Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 2, 2022 Author Report Posted October 2, 2022 Hello all, I'm about half way done writing the gameshow chapter, but I'll need to set-up the next chapter too, so I'm looking for opinions. Please vote below: I've decided that Lara will visit a primitive tribe and as part of a local religious custom, become the temple whore. Sam will be at the location filming a documentary, but won't recognise Lara because of her disguise. However, Sam will feel unconsciously drawn to the enigmatic new temple whore, following her around and filming her activities, before finally giving into temptation herself and relieving some subconscious sexual urges. Option 1: Paititi, South America Lara is given a full-body henna tattoo, covering every inch of skin, so that Sam would never in a million years guess that it's actually Lara under there. Option 2: Africa Tribal Village Lara will be given an advanced Henna-based fake tan that turns every inch of her skin completely black, and hair will be tied into long dreadlocks, so she looks like a fine-boned native. For either option, I'll add religiously appropriate body and face paint, along with golden hoops through her ears and septum to disguise her features even further. I'm just undecided on which location to use. Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Quick question. What about Siberian arc and prison beatdown? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 2, 2022 Author Report Posted October 2, 2022 The Siberian prison beatdown will happen after this (I haven't forgotten - the Siberian story will get 2 full chapters). I had to change the order because Lara will end up getting tattoos at the end of it - making her too recognisable for the public sex in the tribal chapter. Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Ok sure. I'd like to vote for option 2. What's the point of tormenting Lara if she doesn't even recognise her? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 2, 2022 Author Report Posted October 2, 2022 (edited) Hi Donkingkong, Sam won't know it's Lara and will think it's a non-English-speaking native, so she'll talk freely to her while they have sex. She'll tell that native that she reminds her of Lara, and then let Lara know what she really thinks of her. It's more psychological torture for Lara - being used by a close friend, who she learns doesn't like her very much anymore, because of her bitchy personality, and the constant fear of discovery. Lara meanwhile will be too embarrassed to let Sam know it's really her. I haven't decided whether to leave it at that, or to have a future schapter where Sarah shows Sam a video of Lara being "made up" to play the role of temple whore. That could lead to Sam feeling deceived by Lara, which would then be grounds for her to use Lara to film her sex documentary with internal views from Dildo cameras. Edited October 2, 2022 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Ok sure ...sounds interesting. Hope you upload soon Quote
Guest LHunt Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Hey, I vote for Option 1: Paititi, South America Reason, full art is gonna hide her body but can’t do anything about her eyes and bottoms of her feet….I think if she’s all black her eyes would be a dead give away. I think some of her natural skin should be left untouched to make Sam really want her more...just because she would remind her of Lara more. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Hey, I vote for Option 1: Paititi, South America Reason, full art is gonna hide her body but can’t do anything about her eyes and bottoms of her feet….I think if she’s all black her eyes would be a dead give away. I think some of her natural skin should be left untouched to make Sam really want her more...just because she would remind her of Lara more. Also, the additional part where Sam is feeling deceived by her is great! Sam can really do some deep exploring on her all with Sarah’s permission...hopefully, both her holes get a deep exploration! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Hey, Wait – I change my vote to Option 2: Africa Tribal Village Only if she gets fucked by some XL African men…. more than one hopefully, being she’s the tribal whore. Also, the additional part where Sam is feeling deceived by her is great! Sam can really do some deep exploring on her all with Sarah’s permission...hopefully, both her holes get a deep and wide exploration! Quote
Guest Farcry Posted October 2, 2022 Report Posted October 2, 2022 Hey, I vote for Option 2 There are some Fansadox-Templeton comics that could be great inspiration for that story line. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 3, 2022 Author Report Posted October 3, 2022 So that's 3 votes for African tribesmen. I might even recycle my character of King Ajola from Idol of Hathor (Supernatural Adventures). It could be a fun way to Lara to attone for stealing their sacred Idol, although I'll stay away from the supernatural stuff - in this version, it'll just be an ordinary treasure that she stole. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted October 6, 2022 Report Posted October 6, 2022 Hi CrossroadsMk2, At the village – I’d have to think at least the King is aware the new tribal whore is Lara, so for stealing he decides right off the bat to humiliate her – he tells the village women to wash her body (deep cleansing) and make sure she has both holes cleaned. In addition, the village women have to do it at least twice or more every 24 hours. This could be what turns Sam on so much about this beautiful whore. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 7, 2022 Author Report Posted October 7, 2022 Hi LHunt, I've got two different ideas in mind for the African chapter, which I'll ask opinions on after I post Chapter 9. The latest chapter is finished and I'm just proofreading at the moment. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted October 7, 2022 Report Posted October 7, 2022 Hi CrossroadsMk2, …….what a great anniversary gift for me…..lol. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 8, 2022 Author Report Posted October 8, 2022 (edited) Hi everyone, Chapter 9 is finished and has been posted. Question for you guys: I’ve been thinking about Donkingkong’s comment – what’s the point of tormenting Lara if she isn’t recognised? I think it would probably be better to have it be Lara, just maybe with some face paint or a tribal mask to hide her appearance from Sam initially, prior to her being discovered. I’d just like your opinion on which of these scenarios you’d prefer to read. In both scenarios, I’ll be using the original characters I invented for the Idol of Hathor in Supernatural Adventures (King Ajola and his sons etc.). In this version, the Idol that Lara stole wasn’t magical, and the village will be larger, rather than just the king, his sons and their wives. The two options: 1) Lara is publicly punished for her theft by becoming the village whore for several weeks. She’ll be used by the royal family first, then the rest of the men in the village, then the village women and finally by the boys, so that they can gain their manhood. In this version, Lara is not an enthusiastic participant. 2) In order the keep the village women in line, Lara has to pretend that she’s been cursed by the Idol of Hathor, and has returned to the village to lift the curse. In this version, Lara has to pretend to be an enthusiastic participant, in order the maintain the superstitions of the tribesmen and women. Only the King and his family are in on the deception. I will have Sam discover it’s Lara part way through. In this version of the story, Sam and Lara had a falling out because Lara became a stuck-up bitch and was too busy with her own life to help Sam launch her documentary film making career. Sam is also disgusted to learn that Lara has become a common thief, taking advantage of primitive African tribesmen and stealing their sacred relics. In return for not publishing her video of Lara being gangbanged by the African tribe, Lara has to agree to participate in Sam’s ground breaking sex documentary, which shows internal views of a woman having sex, using cameras mounted inside transparent dildos. Lara takes part anonymously, with her face blurred when the documentary is finally released. Unknown to Sam, it is one of Sarah’s companies that it bankrolling her project and providing the specialised equipment and extremely well-hung porn actors. Please vote for which option you like best. Thanks. Edited October 8, 2022 by CrossroadsMk2 Finally worked out how to post in the new format. Quote
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