Crossroadsmk2 Updates

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi WillowDarkling, I don't accept money in any form (commissions, donations, support etc). I don't want any legal problems for AFF, or myself. I just write for fun.

The only thing I do accept is story suggestions and feedback.

Edited May 29, 2022 by CrossroadsMk2

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Extreme, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Don't want to give away too much yet, but I will take suggestions and ideas for the second half of the story, once the first 6 chapters are posted (aside from the ending, which is already planned).

[Guest Mr dead]

I hope it's not a end of "loses everything" again, i prefer a story when lara become's a pet that gets trited well, if it's another public humiliation, or slut group ending it's a cliche like most people do, but as always i leave it to you cross.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Mr Dead, this will not be another "Loses Everything" ending - I think I've done that to death in the Natla's Revenge endings. Also, I always find myself secretly rooting for Lara and I feel bad if things end too badly for her 

[Guest GhostOfCovid]

I know natla’s revenge only has one chapter left but what was the summary of it cause I remember the last forum showed the ideas for the different endings but I forgot what the next one will be ?

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi GhostOfCovid, the last Natla's Revenge ending is the Sybil one. Lara's ancestral home and title get sold to Sybil, her rival, and Lara is blackmailed into becoming a pornstar on Onlyfans.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi SailorNemesis, thanks for the positive reviews. I think you're going to like where this story is going.

[Extreme]

I read chapter 3 great and hot like always i especially like part with car i think i never read before about girl having sex with car. I also wonder if Winston’s opinion about Lara will change because Shaun was trying to convince him that she is slut and i am curious what will happen next in general.  btw i agree that "loses everything" was used very often but i am not sure if Lara was sad about this and if this was bad for her in my opinion she was happy in her new reality  

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Extreme, I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far. Regarding Winston and Shaun, yes. This story is focusing a lot more on Lara's interpersonal relationships, rather than just having random sexual encounters. It's a slower buildup than I've done previously, but hopefully the payoff will be a more interesting and compelling story.

[Extreme]

I read chapter 4 like always amazing quality it looks like Zip and Alistair didnt have much respect for Lara after her teases and Winston also lost respect to her. I was also suprised that Winston have his own fetish and how this whole situation went a bit dark because Lara’s mother is dead but nobody said that dark stuff cant be hot

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Extreme, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Winston is always the most challenging person to explain taking advantage of Lara, since he's her oldest friend and helped raise her after her parents died. In previous stories I've used drugs (Natla's Revenge) and magic (Supernatural Adventures), but this time I wanted to try something more rooted in reality - and I figured everyone has a secret fetish for something, so why not straight laced old Winston? It's the main reason I created the character of Shaun, Sarah's personal chef and an old war buddy of Winston's. I needed someone to act as the devil on Winston's shoulder, whispering advice into his ear.

 

Just two more chapters to go and then I'll outline my plans for the second half of the story, and start taking suggestions for things you guys would like to see.

[Guest TR_FAN]

I finally found my free time and read all five chapters. The story is amusing, but my criticism if I can. I don't mean it wrong. I am very happy that we have such quality and fun stories from the world of Tomb Raider. So, I don't think in the future it would have to be described what Lara does from morning to time to sleep, and focus only on the important story-making events. I mean, chapters seem too long to me, and we often read things like "Lara went to the gym, then say hello to Winston," and so on. It is important that we perceive her new cruel life and her transformation, but it repeats itself a bit. Could it be reduced somehow?

I wish the story got out of Croft Manor somewhere, in public. It might be interesting if Lara went on an expedition with Sarah, where Lara would be Sarah's sex slave. She would have to fuck with the natives somewhere in an African temple to open Sarah's path to a powerful legendary artifact, and she would become the new Tomb Raider and also a respected countess. Lara would be her servant, who does all the archeological and Tomb Raider hard work, but Sarah takes the credit. Lara would lose her public position in high society and Sarah would become a famous star.

And information from my humble comic bookmaking. I'm working on two comics at once. One is Takedown 2: Chapter 6 (second part) and the other is from the reboot universe. The model is this time from Shadow of TR. I can't help but Lara has a great round ass in her basic suit (Tactical Adventurer), so it would be sad if her ass remained empty. Lara will be betrayed and captured by hungry natives in an African slum. As in Takedown 2. It's one quick story, not divided into chapters, I estimate about 50 pages. I hope that Crossroadsmk2 will be so kind that it will help me again with both comics with grammatical proofreading and editing in the future.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi TR_FAN, always happy to proofread your comics.

 

Regarding the descriptions of Lara's day, it's always a fine line between going into too much detail on the one hand and telling the reader something rather than showing them, and thus skimming over details they wanted to know. The early chapters were always going to be more detailed to set the scene, but now that's done, I feel like I can summarise some aspects moving forward, so it doesn't get repetitive, and focus on other things.

 

The next chapter will be the first where Lara leaves Croft Manor, and the story's focus will shift away from the staff using her and pivot to her interactions with her former social circle. No plans for any overseas adventures - I'll save that for future Supernatural Adventures chapters.

 

I feel like the chapter length is about right (roughly 10,000 words) but I'll listen to feedback from everyone else. If enough people want shorter, then I'll go in that direction for future stories.

[Guest TR_FAN]

I'm happy for long story, just five chapters basically describing minute by minute. It seemed a bit padding to me (I knew what would follow and it happened) and repetitive but there were a lot of fun things in between. On the other hand, everyone has their own handwriting, for example PornEater describes over and over body shapes, skin, clothes, and the reader can then feel tired. It's funny that its sequel is always different than the reader expects. But most of his stories always end with teasing or deep-throat, and that's a little boring.

One more thing. Clothes. Lara wears a maid's jersey are already five chapters, maybe it would be hot if Lara started wearing something else, maybe she was humiliated in her most expensive and hottest outfit with someone from her past (Larson, Pierre, Natla, Professor of Archeology Von Croy, Marco Bartoli, Sophia Leigh, Rutland, Takamoto, Nishimura, Professor Eddington...).

I wish you enjoy writing and we have more stories. Will you make a story where Lara had to go to that VIP club? You wrote the first chapter and then it disappeared.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi TR_FAN, without giving anything away, the next chapter will have some new clothing for you.  Once I've posted it, I'll outline my plans for the rest of the story and take suggestions. Regarding the club one, it was called BDSM Raider, and I plan to finish that story after this one is done.

[Extreme]

Hi i read new chapter i know i sound repetitive but it was great and hot like always btw i dont agree with TR_Fan that chapters are too long i really like how quality it is and how well everything its described. There is many stories(not only from TR but in general) that starts and almost immediately there is sex and  everything is reduced to character moaning and saying “yes yes fuck me harder” etc without any other description. Your stories are exception and because of that reader know how characters look like, how characters feels, what they are doing, whats is going on and it builds up tension well at least this is how it works for me  

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying my writing style, chapter length etc.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Canosan, thanks for the review and I'm happy you're enjoying my stories.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hello everyone, just a quick apology. I've run out of time to finish proofreading the next chapter (life got in the way), so I won't be posting it today. It should be up early next week.

 

After that, I'll post a general outline on where I want the story to go and ideas for individual chapters/scenes, and take feedback and suggestions from you guys. Then I'll disappear for a few months and write the second half of the story.

[Guest Lhunt]

Details make the story and they're never too lkng chapters...can be longer even. It's what takes us to where she's at in my opinion...love your style and how it all comes full circle.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi Lhunt, thanks for posting and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

[Guest TR_FAN]

Hi, a big part of my new comics is ready for your proofreading. I just don't know if I should send it when you're having life in way now. Please let me know if I can send it or if I should wait for another time.

[Guest LHunt]

Hi,

Just wondering if you’d like an idea that can be used however you choose. Perhaps, Lara’s enemies can set up a large stadium like place to ravish her. To start off, have 3 different teams of rugby players. 10 players each with 5 sub’s for a total of 15 players on each team. Each of the three team’s are selected to ravish one of her holes an they earn points on which of the three men are able to outlast the other. That’s as if 135 hard dick men fuck her. They’ll all get to use each of her holes. After each team finishes using one selected hole and the other 2 teams finish as well, they all rotate to a different hole...perhaps the three best of each team can have a medal showing like they do at the Olympics. All rugby players have minimum size dicks at least 9.5 inches and larger.

This is just to warm her up for more horse fucking afterward, and maybe she can be told she’ll only have to fuck two horses, one for her pussy and one for her ass. Once they warm and stretch her out more have her fucked the same way by 8 or more very large bulls.

[CrossroadsMk2]

Hi TR_FAN, send the first batch of your comic and I'll get to it when I can.

 

Hi LHunt, no plans for animal stuff in this story (since I've done it in all of the other ones). The rugby stadium idea is interesting. I want to do something involving sex games like that, although probably not that exact idea but something similar. Once I post the next chapter, I'll outline my plans for the remainder of the story and I'll be taking suggestions then, so feel free to put forward any ideas you have.

[Guest LHunt]

1 hour ago, CrossroadsMk2 said:

Hi TR_FAN, send the first batch of your comic and I'll get to it when I can.

 

Hi LHunt, no plans for animal stuff in this story (since I've done it in all of the other ones). The rugby stadium idea is interesting. I want to do something involving sex games like that, although probably not that exact idea but something similar. Once I post the next chapter, I'll outline my plans for the remainder of the story and I'll be taking suggestions then, so feel free to put forward any ideas you have.

Hi Crossroads MK2,

I know you suggested we wait until the first (6)chapters were written and released before sending our suggestions. However, I may not have access to my computer for a while so I'm sending mine beforehand.  Actually, any suggestions I send in feel free to expand on them any way you see fit (or not). I don't know where this story is headed but here are a few things to consider in the future.

When Sarah started having Lara call the staff Sir and Miss, she also instructed Lara to curtsey as well. Sarah explained to Lara she wanted her to curtsey for any guest that she invited over. In addition, per contract Sarah wasn't allowed to make the contract public but she could tell specific individuals who also signed a non-disclosure agreement. Sarah also takes the liberty to expand the garage area but not for additional auto's. She is turning the garage into some very kinky pleasure rooms. These rooms are also wired with hidden camera’s that feed directly into the big screening room that was used earlier. This way all sexual activity with Lara that was filmed can be viewed by whom ever Sarah chooses as her guest while invited to the Manor...in real time!

1. Sarah is a lesbian who knows other lesbians. She tells Lara that she's throwing a party for a few of her girl-friends. She can explain that it'll be like a week-end girls slumber party (no men allowed). Lara seems to be good with the all girl slumber party…up until Sarah's (special friends arrive). Sarah's special female friends are all hard core Dominatrix's. Tori should also be allowed to participate just to give the party some extra spice. Both Tori and Sarah start the party off by taking turns fisting Lara in her ass and pussy at the same time…(to my knowledge, none of your stories have a DP fisting from two different people at the same time) Perhaps, all this before the three special guest start having their fun…. So, perhaps having at least three (dom's) with both Sarah and Tori all which are very dominate women maybe something to consider.
2. In the contract, Lara was defined as an adult entertainer (Sarah's personal pornstar) for the year. These rooms are used during the all girl party and of course all activity was filmed. All four men get to play with Lara in these rooms during their daily playtime and become somewhat experts in hardly no time on how to dominate Lara. Within all of the rooms (old garage) Sarah had some very interesting toys installed. One is Lara having to hold onto a rope chain to hold herself up from being impaled onto a huge dildo that moves up and down in a powerful thrusting motion. Lara is shackled by her ankles and her legs are spread directly horizontal to her body…like a split. As her arms give out from holding her own body up, gravity will win in the end. This will cause her to force herself to take the huge dildo in her pussy cause she has a large butt plug stuffed in her ass or vise versa…or some one is fisting her ass.
3. Every week-end a special Lara Porn film is shown to all the staff while Lara has to provide whatever service the staff desires. (this could be some really fun times for the staff too). These films are all of Lara's previous sex films where she was forced to be the leading Star. Sarah's special guest are also privy to seeing these films and also get to play with Lara during the showings.

As I stated earlier, don't know where the story will go from the next chapter but I think Sarah was deeply hurt by Lara when they were at school together. I feel that Sarah is trying to teach Lara humility…the hard way. I'd like to see Lara wake up by the ending and see how the old Lara was a truly spoiled bitch. Sarah and Lara may not become a couple, but Lara needs her now that she's awakened a deep desire in her. I'm a sucker for good endings!