Guest LHunt Posted September 5, 2022 Report Posted September 5, 2022 Hey Crossroads Mk2, I get the impression Sarah will be taking Lara to these away locations while the renovation of the Manor is happening. She wants to ensure nothing serious happens to her Lara. Why not have Lara tell each client or group what degrading things she had to do during her previous visited locations...just a short recap to warm up the crowd so to speak and Lara too! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 5, 2022 Report Posted September 5, 2022 Perhaps this will help Lara realize she is being taken down a few notches by the constant degrading – reason for her telling a recap, those in current presence don’t know what she has just done recently, they only know what they currently want to do with her body in the present time – maybe, after hearing her tell them a story of the degrading things they’ll really have no mercy on her body….but think of how humiliated and degraded she’ll be….just what Sarah wants. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 5, 2022 Author Report Posted September 5, 2022 (edited) Hi LHunt, so in the Gameshow each round will eliminate one contestant. So there'll be 6 for the first game, 5 for the second, 4 for the third etc. until the last 2 girls standing compete in game 5. For the game ideas, I don't want anything as overt as live sex acts (like masturbating with fruit, getting poked by dildos). I want the Gameshow to feel like something that could actually be on TV, rather than a porn parody gameshow. The nudity will be accidental (bikinis slipping off or getting yanked by another contestant) rather than scripted. That way it gives the highly competitive Lara a choice. Imagine in a water obstacle course (an idea I'll probably use) where Lara belly flops into the water and her bikini top is knocked off, exposing her breasts. Does she waste time to go back for it and risk losing too much time, or does she complete the rest of the obstacle course topless? Like I said, more of a softcore gameshow than an overtly hardcore one. Also with only female contestants. Regarding the tramp stamp tattoo, I feel like any words (NO HOLES BARRED) are too obvious. I want it to be a picture or symbol design with a hidden meaning (like how swingers use pineapple tattoos to identify each other at parties). I think I'll just have to invent something, because my research has come up empty. Edited September 5, 2022 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 6, 2022 Report Posted September 6, 2022 Sorry didn’t catch it being a progressive elimination game show – maybe these will spawn an idea for you. How about them getting their bottoms twisted and pulled into their ass cracks when sliding on something like the grass slide exposing their slippery crotches and ass by accident of course. Their tits flop out doing a 50 meter cart wheel race….or doing the spin around the bat, forehead on the bat while going around it to make them dizzy and while running back they run into each other and accidentally pull down or off something. A playground teeter spring or the adult version – seesaws where usually someone jumps off and caused you to bust your ass on the ground. I can see where some slips can happen on those things. The flying tunnel where they have to grab items dangling at the top...wind and bikinis has to create a few unplanned aired out body parts….or being put inside a weightless type of capsule and they have to use what ever they can to go up, including pulling on each other. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 6, 2022 Author Report Posted September 6, 2022 Hi LHunt, as usual thanks for the ideas. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 6, 2022 Report Posted September 6, 2022 Hopper Balls with Handles and they bounce around and joust each other with Military style training pugil-sticks - if you use this it could be the 1st or 2nd round so you may want to have the other girls gang-up on Lara cause they recognize her as a threat to win. Quote
Extreme Posted September 7, 2022 Report Posted September 7, 2022 I read chapter 8 great like always i especially liked how Lara’s look was described at the end, that she took money from floor that were thrown to her feets and money she earned and that even with shame she wasn't resistant much to all of it and said multiple times that she is slut while she probably wouldnt have to because Sarah was nowhere close. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 8, 2022 Report Posted September 8, 2022 Not sure if you’ve already got your games….check this out from Wipe Out! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcvKT1Ca-0w Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 8, 2022 Author Report Posted September 8, 2022 Hi Extreme, I'm relying on Lara not knowing exactly what Sarah told Takamoto and her fear of being punished if she is caught disobeying Sarah's instructions. In the next few chapters, I'm going to build on that and slowly alter the way Lara thinks about herself and Sarah. Eventually, Lara will internally think of Sarah as "Lady Sarah", while her own previous life as the Countess of Abingdon will feel like a distant dream. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 8, 2022 Author Report Posted September 8, 2022 Hi LHunt, just watched the wipeout video. I was thinking an obstacle course for game number 2, but with all of the girls running at the same time, like a race. Seems the perfect place to have the other girls gang up on Lara, after her dominant performance in game number 1. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 8, 2022 Report Posted September 8, 2022 Awesome – I’m certain you’ll make some exciting games all around and I was thinking the same...either 2nd or 3rd once the other women know for sure she’s not just lucky but really a strong contender. Maybe Sarah catches her doing her asshole strength exercises and opens a conversation about it during their travels - but Sarah has to punish her after exposing her secret either while on the trip or back at the Manor. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 9, 2022 Report Posted September 9, 2022 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Just curious if Sarah is going to start feeling like what she despises in Lara? After all, she realizes that it's not so easy to break Lara because of her strong pride. In a way, Sarah already somewhat deceives Lara in a subtle way into picking her own sexual punishments or embarrassments. Interesting to see how you'll weave her entire scheme of changing her but it'll be interesting also to see how Sarah changes as well. Maybe before they leave Japan you can add Sam, Jonas and Abby. Sarah lends her out to her female and male best friends....could be opp for tattoos and Sam's inside camera action you mentioned earlier….or play time back at Manor during dinners! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 9, 2022 Author Report Posted September 9, 2022 Hi LHunt, no Sarah won't despise Lara. At it's core, this is a love story (albeit a pretty fucked up one), with Sarah trying to show Lara how she's become a narcissist and then trying to change her back into who she was before. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 10, 2022 Report Posted September 10, 2022 Hey CrossroadsMk2, You might get some ideas from this Karma Sutra link for the tattoo that signals what Lara gets! If nothing else maybe something Sarah’s guest can use to direct Lara. https://nortonsafe.search.ask.com/search?q=Karma+Sutra+Positions&page=1&ctype=pictures&geo=en-us&doi=2020-10-24&o=APN12175&p2=^EQ^ch30us^&ueid=f169b5ef-402b-457f-b596-657e1a603f4b&qo=navTop Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 10, 2022 Report Posted September 10, 2022 Check out the alphabet of sexual positions from the French artist, Malika Favre. He manages to be cheeky without crossing the taste line according to the write up. I think the Karma Sutra “Head over Heels” is a great one for a possible tat….not sure if you’re looking for something less obvious though. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 10, 2022 Report Posted September 10, 2022 Check this for a tat! https://www.etsy.com/listing/1217922273/line-art-doggy-style-svg-kama-sutra-sex?ga_order=most_relevant&ga_search_type=all&ga_view_type=gallery&ga_search_query=kama+sutra+position&ref=sr_gallery-1-34&sts=1 Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 10, 2022 Author Report Posted September 10, 2022 Hi LHunt, probably not that obvious. I'd like to make it something that could be innocent unless you know the hidden meaning (like Queen of Spades tattoo). Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 11, 2022 Report Posted September 11, 2022 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Go to this link for some ideas….just type in what your looking for in the search bar - happy hunting! Check out the BDSM symbol. The double dildo looks like a horse shoe also. I think the spider with the BDSM symbol is also cool. https://www.gograph.com/clipart/adults-only-concept-vector-gg84931971.html Feet sex three people From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/feet-sex-three-people-gg105146111.html> Vector symbol bdsm. From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/bdsm-sign-gg65646330.html> EPS Illustration - Bird in cage isolated. symbol of bondage. vector illustration. Vector Clipart gg118351479 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/bird-in-cage-isolated-symbol-of-bondage-vector-gg118351479.html> Vector Illustration - Line art illustration of puppet master hand. control, power, slave, domination, concept. Stock Clip Art gg82808847 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/puppet-master-hand-gg82808847.html> Vector Stock - Sex icons heart label. bdsm accessories heart sign. dildo or vibrator for bdsm adult and rubber accessories in shape heart. bdsm love and discipline. vector illustration. Stock Clip Art gg143450115 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/sex-icons-heart-label-bdsm-accessories-sign-gg143450115.html> EPS Illustration - Bondage sex toy line icon vector. bondage sex toy sign. isolated contour symbol black illustration. Vector Clipart gg142416409 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/bondage-sex-toy-line-icon-vector-illustration-gg142416409.html> EPS Illustration - Spiders with bdsm sign. Vector Clipart gg65672986 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/spiders-with-bdsm-sign-gg65672986.html> Vector Illustration - Strapon glyph icon, sex toy and adult, lesbian sign, vector graphics, a solid pattern on a white background, eps 10. Stock Clip Art gg122397317 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/strapon-glyph-icon-sex-toy-and-adult-lesbian-sign-gg122397317.html> Double dildo glyph icon, sex toy and adult, double penis toy sign, vector graphics, a solid pattern on a white background, eps 10. EPS clipart gg1224Ve12827 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/double-dildo-glyph-icon-sex-toy-and-adult-double-gg122412827.html> EPS Illustration - Gold spiral goddess of fertility and triple moon wiccan. the spiral cycle of life, death and rebirth. golden woman wicca mother earth symbol of sexual procreation, vector tattoo neon sign icon. Vector Clipart gg121639919 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/gold-spiral-goddess-of-fertility-and-triple-moon-gg121639919.html> Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 11, 2022 Report Posted September 11, 2022 Here’s a few others…the first one is the best I think! Vector Art - Blue male and red female signs connected with arrows, gender symbols. group sex conceptual icon, relationship concept. Clipart Drawing gg81359626 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/blue-male-and-red-female-signs-gg81359626.html> Vector Stock - Group sex. single flat icon on white background. vector illustration. Clipart Illustration gg79125905 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/group-sex-sign-gg79125905.html> EPS Vector - Group sperm swimming to the egg. logo. clinic to restore the reproductive functions of the body. Stock Clipart Illustration gg78214262 From <https://www.gograph.com/clipart/group-sperm-swimming-to-the-egg-gg78214262.html> Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 11, 2022 Author Report Posted September 11, 2022 (edited) Hi LHunt, thanks for the ideas. I think I'll invent something. I'm going to lean heavily on symbology for the tattoos. For example, the Wildeer Lara has a garter belt tattoo - which was traditionally a symbol worn by European prostitutes to identify themselves. I plan to give all of Lara's tattoos a similar treatment, maybe with symbols from other cultures as well. The tattoos will look interesting and cool to normies, but to anyone in the know, Lara will basically be a walking billboard advertising that she's a whore. I want this revealed to Lara later on, either by attending an exhibition or lecture and seeing versions of her tattoos on display, with written explanations. However, I'll be concentrating on wrapping up the Tokyo gameshow chapter next, before I worry to much about that. Edited September 11, 2022 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
Guest LHunt Posted September 11, 2022 Report Posted September 11, 2022 Cool Beans…. it’ll be awesome whatever you choose I’m certain! I never knew BDSM had a symbol though...love the idea she’ll be a walking billboard that advertises she’s a whore! Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted September 18, 2022 Report Posted September 18, 2022 Hi there cross. Hope you're doing great.any updates? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 18, 2022 Author Report Posted September 18, 2022 (edited) Hi Donkingkong, I've just started Chapter 9 (the Japanese gameshow). I usually try to write little bits here and there, if I have a free hour in the evenings, but I probably won't have time to finish it for about 2 weeks or so. Edited September 18, 2022 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted September 18, 2022 Author Report Posted September 18, 2022 Seriously, what is the deal with all of these weird scam accounts posting fishing links in this forum? There's maybe a dozen a people in here to see it. How is it even worth their while? Quote
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