angeldust Posted July 2, 2014 Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 (edited) Now that he knows that he can be traced Max starts to create Gorts to protect the compound and those that live/visit there. This starts the girls to do a more thorough search of his father's, David, past. Only to discover that he is the son of an alien that visited Earth in 1951. They also find out that The Gov. had David killed when he refused to share his alien DNA for a super soldier formula. This new information along with the help of Rev. Moon's Church of Turkish Delight almost brings about the destruction of our universe which is only saved by an Irish ginger girl in a flying pink police box. Max answers the guys when they ask why he never gets mad by saying: "You wouldn't like me when I get angry." Edited July 2, 2014 by angeldust Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 Thought the police box was blue! Don't wanna do that cause the redhead will fall for the geeky English guy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 2, 2014 Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 Blue for boys, pink for girls. We know Max turns green from his deposit in the garbage pail. Good chapter, now enjoy the long weekend with your girls and take up the key board next week. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted July 2, 2014 Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 I can't imagine Max is the first that would like to end the slave rings. It could be a setup, or it could be a way for Max to take care of helping out, indirectly, by giving others like him the resources they need, that way he can stay home and take care of his group, while still making things righter in the world. You think Emma will get a little jealous that Nadi got pregnant before she did? Nadi proved to all of them that she may be with them, but belongs to Max, reminds them all of her and their own place, none of them would be around if not for him. Historically, Max's plans for time with the girls gets screwed up by someone else's stupidity. Lotsa plot twists open, you are a twisted individual, and we love that, keeps us all on our toes. Enjoy the time you have with your family, and come back with all 8 fingers and both thumbs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest COJimmyV Posted July 2, 2014 Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 Dang, GREAT chapter but all it did was leave me wanting more. I'm always up for a little action so I'm really anxious to see what the priest holds in store. Is he a good guy who wants things cleaned up or a bad guy who is secretly acting like a good guy in order to get revenge on Max and Company for taking away his twisted fun and profits? Also, I thought Max was disguised when he rescued the kids and blew up the church. How the heck does the priest know it was Max, where to find him and what he looked like? Something to do with his father perhaps? Lots of questions! I think I need to go out and buy some more popcorn next week! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted July 3, 2014 Report Share Posted July 3, 2014 OK another hanger - just not a cliff. Thanks for posting. We could be pushy and ask another two chapters right away BUT another in a day or so would be nice. As always you have found another twist to take. You need to give YOUR harem some of the love that you write about. WE are hooked and waiting to be reeled in a little furrther. I have to agree with flexy and Bigman no fireworks for Indenpendence day - not with your pencence for getting hurt. You don't have to be the solo support for the medical system.B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hundybuns Posted July 3, 2014 Report Share Posted July 3, 2014 As usual another great chapter. Though I would like to see some together time for Max and his family as there is 2 weddings to plan and Max also needs to spend time with his baby daughter. Anywho have a good vacation and hopefully another chapter in a couple of weeks. Just on a side note you could have Max contact Nick from Northstar to help the priest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jelad Posted July 4, 2014 Report Share Posted July 4, 2014 ok, for those of you who aren't nerds, the police box can be anything and any color it wants to be. just read the new GITG and loved it. although the others didn't apologize just Emma perhaps the priest derailed that. I like the fact that the twins stud up for max but I still don't know if I trust Nadi not to get jelouse. can't wait to see how the priest affects the story, take a nice long vacation and post tomorrow {LOL} or whenever you feel ready. a good way not to loose fingers with fireworks is not to hold them {capt. obvious}. happy independence day to all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2014 So I shouldn't stick an m-80 in my mouth and light the fuse? How about someone else's mouth? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted July 4, 2014 Report Share Posted July 4, 2014 s Members 231 posts Archive Profile: link Gender:Male Location:Where ever I stop moving Interests:Ritalin! I LOVE RITA...Hey is that a bunny? Posted 14 June 2014 - 04:27 AM Ahhh, no, cause it was me, made a slight miscalculation and nearly blew myself up...oops What writing porn did to me, a cautionary tale! Never hurts to stir the pot a little ;-P Perfer et obdura; dolor hic tibi proderit olimm There is no problem that cannot be solved by the judicious use of High Explosives! Short memory??? NO FIREWORKS.!!! Keep fingers and head in GITG - PLEASE!! We want more. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted July 4, 2014 Report Share Posted July 4, 2014 So I shouldn't stick an m-80 in my mouth and light the fuse? How about someone else's mouth? Only if you can figure out how to light it from a SAFE distance. Some fuses are very short.. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2014 OOPS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted July 4, 2014 Report Share Posted July 4, 2014 OOPS WOW! You really come up with some wild graphis. Almost as wild as your stories. Waiting impatiently for next GITG or possibly Northstar. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 It's The Yankee National Holiday Weekend, yes you got that fellow non yanks they do it right with a whole weekend even when their holiday is on a Thursday/Tuesday they get that extra day to celebrate. Now that's how you show patriotism, eh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest COJimmyV Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Dang, I feel like a junkie going through withdrawal, checking multiple time per day for a new GITG just in case you got bored and wanted to put another chapter up. This living vicariously stuff sucks sometimes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Almost done, and it's a fun chapter, at least I think so Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest COJimmyV Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Almost done, and it's a fun chapter, at least I think so Thanks! Shame on me for getting so addicted but shame on you for being so damned good at what you do! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Thanks! Shame on me for getting so addicted but shame on you for being so damned good at what you do! I'LL SECOD THAT!!! Maybe even third it if that's OK. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Bankers Trust Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 I was one of the few to get Ep 63 of BITG off the old site before it was taken down, so you can tell how addicted I am to your fantastic writing. I am the wrong side of 70, but most of your chapters in BITG, GITG and Nstar which are so descriptive bring more than a tear to my eyes. I thought Hard93 wrote some good stories, even if he didn't finish them, but yours are as I say absolutely superb. Talking of Hard93 do you or anyone else on here know what happened to him? Another good writer was Kenneth Hammond the "new" stories under his full name are excellent, those under KaHmnd did get a lot repetitive with regard to the sex and they have now gone, to where I don't know. Keep up the good work, I did offer to proof read the stories for Hard93 but never heard from him. If you like I would be very willing to do the same for you. Thank you again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Yeah, if you want that would be great, I started proofing with the first four chapters of BITG but trying to do that really took away from my writing, and it's the writing that I like...I know I sound like a petulant 4 y/o but who wants to grow up anyway! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Bankers Trust Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 I have all 63 episodes of BITG saved as word documents. I will proof read and amend and copy to PDF or if you wish leave in Word 2010. When I have done I will contact you on here to find out how to get it to you. Do you use voice activated text e.g.Dragon? That sometimes causes havoc!! When I have finished BITG I will start on GITG. I better leave the spelling in US English rather than UK English. As a separate issue I thought your short competition entry was very powerful, considering the words you had to use. I wouldn't like to have to read that every day. I have been interested in the comments both on here and the old site, and feel you have coped with all the criticism very well. The priest coming to see Max opens up a whole new can of worms as to how his church/orphanage or whatever, managed to track him down, but it does give another opening to the story which I am sure you will exploit to the full, in your usual exemplary fashion. I will be in touch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Kenneth left that other site, again, when they changed the rules ... again. A couple of the mods resigned over all the drama. He does have another site that he posts on but I've forgotten which, Google him under both names it should pop up. Almost is only good in horse shoes & hand grenades, so stop teasing us and get on with it or the pitch forks and torches come out. ed itor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 He has some posted at wolf pub Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Thanks BT I don't use dragon , I prefer to type, I don't seem to write very well speaking to the computer. It's like my hands pull the story from my subconscious, a lot of times I have no idea where I'm going until I see it on paper. I guess it's actually the little voices in my head that are doing the writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted July 6, 2014 Report Share Posted July 6, 2014 Whatever the little voices are they are doing a super job. I can't imagine how difficult it is to continue at such a high level, and anyone who thinks they can obviously aren't writers. I have the utmost admiration for the way you write it. I realise you may get writers block occasionally but it all seems to come right in the end. Dare I suggest that as Amy and Alice are an item, so eventually Becca and Nadi do likewise? That might already be in the next chapter. That leaves Max free to marry Emma but still have Amy, Alice, Becca and Nadi around him. Max is a bit of a wimp around the girls, only because he loves them etc., but I think Nadi's strong personality is needed to protect him in some way without upsetting the others. That's my opinion for what it is worth, but whatever you decide to do I can't wait for the next instalments. Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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