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Close your eyes and imagine the scene unfolding before you like a movie. Describe it. Personally, I can't stand when someone feels like they have to beat me over the head with things as a reader. I don't need a blow by blow. Set the stage. Engage the readers' senses: sight, touch, taste, smell, hearing. Are the girls giggling? Does he hear that? Is the blanket scratchy or soft? Does someone's soft hair tickle against a bare thigh? I don't necessarily need the mechanics of ejaculation spelled out ... we've all seen it, experienced it in some way or other. I agree with BW - sometimes less explicit is far more erotic and sensual.

Thanks y'all. She's tough. We'll kick it this time too.

I am not at all offended by a pagan offering! Mom appreciates all forms. I appreciate it too. Kinda feel as though someone took a Mr. Clean Magic Eraser to my brain. Schedule the Squeeze!

October is fast approaching and it is the month/season when everyone is encouraged to do their mammograms. This year, I'm starting early and asking everyone either to squeeze 'em or help those in your life get scheduled for the big squeeze. This past Friday, my family received the devastating news that my mom, despite three previous rounds with breast cancer, and a particularly grueling double mastectomy - again has breast cancer -- this time in the breast bone behind the reconstructions. Ding, Ding - Round Four begins. If anyone ever needed a good reason to squeeze 'em, there it is. Even if you've had all of the boobies removed, you are not safe. So - Squeeze 'em! We all want you to live long and not have to face this monster. Thanks for reading, PW

Now, how did I miss this gem? There's no excuse, really. No amount of busy should keep me from reading your work, my Witch! This: "A dark-haired woman reclined against the pillows heaped on the bed, sipping from her coffee mug as she merely watched the sunrise silhouette her guest, painting his hard edges in fire. Biding her time, she waited for that moment, the perfect moment, when he would completely surrender to the elements, when even the tension in his arms would dissipate and she could begin." That's just perfect. The superb clarity of the imagery, and the profound and compelling sensuality of the waiting woman, and her pet. Once again, you give us a domme who is powerful and compassionate, and your deep understanding of the emotional commitment for both domme and pet, the contract between them, is unmatched. I absolutely love this, and I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment of this wonderful story Oh dear BW - this was just another word doodle based on that lovely tattoo I spied on vacation. Of course, I didn't mean to go all plot on myself, but the pet's story has grown and I'm finding it hard to stay in my own 1,000 word limit. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. I know full well that you, my dearest Wench, fall in the type of audience I dream of having. Any praise from you is high praise. Would you believe that tiny little part is my absolute favorite part too? We've had so many discussions on the topics but still it stupefies me when other folks just don't get the beauty of the submission, or where the actual power lies. I'm so lucky to have a friend in you - one who does.

DG will have to look at it when she's available. There's nothing you can do to move it back, because in reality it was edited. Only the great and glorious Goddess can alter its fate now. Thanks for the heads up!

I cannot thank you enough for giving Rambo his due. I don't know why it has always niggled at me that the poor guy never got any. This was awesome! You set the scene so very well, from the nam manao to the young girl being unable to resist the strong silent type. My favorite part, other than of course, actually getting laid, was here: "If he’d resisted then she would have had about as much luck as trying to take a tree for a walk, but John stood and allowed himself to be pulled along the road out of the village." I'm glad I could be even a tiny little bit muse-like to you. Again, I thank you and praise you for creating a masterful little piece for a difficult character to humanize. Melrick Rocks! Melrick rocks! Melrick rocks! PW

If I could - I would jump for joy - finally, Rambo gets SOME! Melrick - you rock every day but especially today. THANK you!

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