GeorgeGlass

I was pretty stuck on chapter 8 of “Wishful” for a while, but last night I suddenly got inspired and wrote a bunch on it, and some more tonight. Now I’m taking a break from that to work on my Halloween Party story, “Unleash.” I’m planning to finish those two things and probably one more chapter of “Just One Rule” by the end of the month. Then, in November, I’ll be doing NaNoWriMo, so my rate of posting here will drop sharply until December 1st.

From Fairy-Slayer on October 12, 2020 Well, Lucy was just the lucky beneficiary; it could just as easily have been Lana herself, or one of the others. But maybe the girls should get together in secret to devise other ways of getting Lincoln horny during the day and thereby raising the quickie rate. Thanks! HFPS? Tell me more. Indeed, I don't think Lincoln ever would have guessed Lucy would be into that. Well, both of them are about eleven years old, so as you say, the risk is probably small. But, as you also say, it's not zero. Hmm, or could he? *music sting* And then was suddenly silenced. I fear that something terrible has happened. No, the use of "her" was deliberate. There's an episode in which Lucy complains that her pulse is too robust; she'd rather have a more undead-like physiology. That's probably my favorite line from this chapter. Thanks for another day-making review!

Yeah, it’s not possible. (Yet?)

Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 5: Good for the Soul.

Does this mean your story is ready for posting, or are you just giving us a little preview? A little preview of mine: Unleash Seeking the courage to escape their abusive father, three teens try a new street drug that can empower you to act on your deepest desires. But what if your deepest desire isn't what you think it is?

I’m thinking that there is going to have to be a third and final story after “Just One Rule.” There are going to be more loose ends and unexplored possibilities than I can address by the end of this one. Likewise, I’m planning to make last year’s Christmas story “The Ninth Reindeer” the first of a trilogy, with this year’s story “Checking It Twice” as the middle installment. It occurs to me that I’m basically following the model of the original Star Wars trilogy here. Episode IV was a self-contained story that didn’t obviously require a sequel (presumably in case it didn’t do super well at the box office), whereas Episode V left lots of threads to be resolved in Episode VI.

A couple bits of news: I’m hosting this year’s AFF Halloween Party. Hoping to get some good spooky stories this year! I’ve put all my stories from Halloween Parties past into a collection titled George Glass’ Halloween Treat Bag.

Done!

It’s back – a series of creepy creations from the twisted minds of AFF’s fine authors! Same rules as last year: Oneshots (Under 50k words) Original fiction Halloween or Horror theme Of course, include all the appropriate warnings at the beginning of your story. I’ll create the story in the archive as soon as someone has a story ready. Thereafter, everyone else can add their stories at will. Edit: The Halloween Party has begun! You can find it here: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109700

Thanks! I had at least an okay’n.

Thanks! Although I’m not sure how you knew about my whip fetish. I’ve played that very close to the vest. Oh, no worries, I don’t expect you to review stories you’re kind enough to beta. Ooooh... *cackles* Just one more reason to practice social distancing.

Glad to hear from you, SWP1, and thanks for the comments! I suppose Opal does look quite a bit like Agent K, although Opal is a tad more voluptuous. To sort of answer your sort-of question, yes, Lincoln will be experiencing a broad range of females before this story’s over.

Ah, I see. It wouldn't have been practical to make those realizations happen later on, so yeah, I guess I fudged a bit in terms of how self-aware these eleven-year-olds would be. Although kids on The Loud House do tend to be precocious.

It seems my story "The Cartooniverse Mother-Daughter Crossover Sextacular," which I was very excited about, is a bit of a flop. Chapter 1 has been posted for eleven days now, and not one comment. On a separate note, anyone heard from Star Wars Player 1 lately? He hasn’t posted here in a dog’s age. On another separate note, I’m getting nowhere with my Halloween story, “Night of the Were-Bimbo.” However, I have another, much darker story idea that I was going to save for next year but that I am now seriously considering writing for this year (thereby giving myself another 12 months to work out an actual plot for “Were-Bimbo”). Final note: Happy birthday to me, God help me.

I usually respond to reviews in the order received, but I let this one get past me. Nonetheless, your review is very important to us, so please stay on the line and- sorry. From Aegis999 on September 30, 2020 Well, we don’t know for SURE that she’s knocked up. (Although that would be a tad anticlimactic, wouldn’t it?) Could be... No spoilers, but there’s an upcoming chapter titled “Extra Credit.” That could mean anything, though. I’ll be blunt – I’m not planning that for this story. But this thing could end up becoming a trilogy… Thanks for the review!

From Fairy-Slayer on October 01, 2020 Heh. Whereas "Enter the Sandboy" was told entirely from Lincoln's perspective, I wanted "Just One Rule" to get into what the other characters are thinking, too. I feel like that really adds something, including opportunities to set up scenes. Sorry, what thought do you mean? In canon, Stella made a lot of effort to become friends with Lincoln and the others in his clique. I think she'd want to hold onto that regardless of how her relationship with Lincoln has changed. A valid question. Thanks, and thank you for another day-brightening review!

Yeah, I think there’s going to be enough white-haired kids running around Royal Woods one day as it is.

Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 4: Girl Friend

From Isabella8923 on September 28, 2020 Thanks!

From DiegoDuque on September 25, 2020 Thanks!

Should anyone review "The Cartooniverse Mother-Daughter Crossover Sextacular," I’ll post responses here.

Chapter 1 of “The Cartooniverse Mother-Daughter Crossover Sextacular” has been posted for a little over 2 days, and it has already garnered more than a thousand hits (Yay!). But no reviews yet.