GeorgeGlass

If the author has a forum account as well as an archive account, you could PM them. Otherwise, unless they've put an email address or something in their profile, a review might be your only recourse. If it were me, I'd be glad for someone to point out a problem like that, even in a review. Remember, the author can always delete the review if they take offense -- or after they have fixed the problem you pointed out.

Double header! First, we have the concluding chapter of “The Business of Pleasure”: Chapter 8: A New Arrangement Second, we’ve got the next chapter of “Band Together”: Chapter 5: The Band, Part 1

I had a burst of inspiration over the weekend and made a lot of progress on the final chapter of “The Business of Pleasure.” I will probably send that to beta tomorrow.

Jeez, where do I even start? As wrong pairings go, I loves me some incest. I’ve written stories about Hiro and his Aunt Cass from Big Hero 6, Dipper and Mabel from Gravity Falls, and Lincoln Loud and virtually all of his sisters from The Loud House.

Chapter 5 of “Band Together” is now off in beta-land. Probably the next thing I’ll finish is chapter 6 of “Rewire.” It’s a hard chapter to write, though, for a lot of reasons—including the fact that it’s the linchpin of the whole story. Not that I’m feeling any pressure to make it perfect or anything.

I'm writing a fic in which a large group of teenage furries at “Mating Camp” are given a series of sexy games to play in a big hotel pool. Trouble is, I'm having trouble thinking of good games for them to play. Strip games are out because the furries don't normally wear clothes. (Their private parts only show when they are sexually aroused.) Any suggestions?

The penultimate chapter of “The Business of Pleasure” is posted! Chapter 7: The Tale of the Tape

IMO, a nonlinear story can work IF you make it clear when the events of each chapter are happening. You could use a literal timestamp (eg, starting each chapter with the date) or a figurative one (“Iggy was exhausted from training, but the championship was only two weeks away”). Or a narrator could explain it (“Now that I’ve told you ____, let me tell you how it all began”).

Right now, my main focus is on writing the next chapter of “The Business of Pleasure.” It's probably going to be the longest chapter in the story because so much happens in it. There's a fair amount left to write, but I think the writing will go relatively fast because I have a fairly clear vision of what will happen in the chapter.

Thanks to the vagaries of my writing schedule, beta-reading speed, and the AFF archive not letting me log in this morning—but working again now—I have a double header for you! Rewire, chapter 5: En Route Band Together, chapter 4: The Stager

I generally write stories in bits and pieces, writing whatever part of the story is clearest in my mind at that moment. Between these chunks of text, I leave markers to indicate the places were something needs to be added to connect what comes before the marker to what comes after. As a result, I am occasionally taken by surprise when I look through the text and discover that there are no markers left--indicating that it is now a complete draft. This happened a couple of days ago with my one-shot Miraculous fic “Our Little Secret.” And now, it's posted! Our Little Secret Bunnyx drops in on her younger self for some special fun, because present-day Alix has a secret that only her future self knows. Located : +M through R > Miraculous LadyBug Content Tags : Anal Bi COMPLETE FF Herm Minor2 Oneshot Oral

Chapter 6 of “The Business of Pleasure” is posted! Chapter 6: Household Affairs In other news, chapter 4 of “Band Together” has gone off to beta, and I hope to send off chapter 5 of “Rewire” by next weekend.

Hey, all. I've been doing a lot of traveling lately and therefore have had little time for writing. But now I'm done with travel for a while and am back at the keyboard. The next things I expect to send to beta are the next chapters of “Band Together” and “The Business of Pleasure.” I'm hoping to send both within a week or so.

I’m afraid I’ve been too busy with travel and prepping for more travel to get anything off to beta this week. I’m making good progress on chapter 5 of “The Business of Pleasure,” though. Might get it finished on my next plane ride.

The new chapter of “Rewire” is posted! Chapter 4: Falling Angel

Chapter 4 of “Rewire” is off to beta. I’d love to get the next chapters of “Band Together” and “The Business of Pleasure” off by the end of the month, but we’ll see.

Hey there. I’m going to be traveling quite a bit over the next several weeks, so my productivity will slow down a bit. Nonetheless, I expect to get chapter 4 of “Rewire” off to beta next week. I’m inching toward finishing chapter 4 of “Band Together,” too.

Thank you! But which story was it?

More “Band Together” is posted! Chapter 3: The Costumer

Re: “Heaven Help You” From SentinelX on January 31, 2025 Thank you! Writing this was a lot of fun, especially because I had never before written dialogue for characters who use so much profanity. I actually just saw a YouTube short about people shipping Loona x Collin. This story wasn’t mentioned, though. Re: “Laid Bare” From SentinelX on January 31, 2025 Thanks! Writing characters authentically (while making them do smutty things) is always my goal. Might have to check out that Lute/St. Peter story.

The new chapter of “The Business of Pleasure” is posted! Chapter 5: Sister Act I’m still waiting for chapter 3 of “Band Together” to return from beta, so now I plan to focus (to the extent that I ever focus) on chapter 4 of “Rewire.”

From ekmedic on January 26, 2025 Thank you! The story is told entirely from Jozi's perspective, so we know a lot more about what she's thinking that we know about the others. Rest assured, there will be a lot more said about Zero in the coming chapters. Thanks for the comments!

I’ve written a lot of threesome scenes, and they vary a lot in terms of how they go. But they tend to take one of these forms: --All three participants pleasuring one another more or less equally --Two participants focusing on pleasuring the third. Sometimes this is the case for the whole scene (especially if it’s two guys on one girl); other times, they take turns being the center of attention. --A genuine “tag team” in which two participants have sex while the third watches, and then they switch out (usually so one of them can rest up for the next round) So the “rules” vary according to what sort of relationship and expectations everyone has.

I’m happy to say that chapter 3 of “Band Together” has gone to beta. Now I’m focusing on chapter 5 of “The Business of Pleasure.” I’m contemplating splitting that chapter into two, if it ends up being very long.

Just so I understand the question: By “tag team,” are you talking about a three-person sex session in which only two of the three are having sex at any given moment?