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I'd go with the first option. Better for the chaptered version to be its own story in the archive.

It seems that I somehow forgot to post my author notes for “Smooshed” when I finished the story last year. Better late than never, I suppose. Author notes The subtitle "The Nine Wives of Marco Diaz" is an homage to The Nine Lives of Fritz the Cat (1974), one of the first X-rated animated movies. This story required more outlining than any other story I’ve written. I had a “character table” to keep track of each character’s sigil, weapon, sexual power, magical power, and source of angst. Then there was a “story table” that listed, for each of the 18 chapters, what would happen in the main story arc, the Tom/Rosa arc, the amount of time that passes in the chapter, Marco’s penis size, Jackie’s breast size, and any important changes that the other girls would undergo. All group sex scenes required their own outlines, and I made a list of bridal outfits for chapter 16 to make sure that none of them was too much like another. In chapter 11, when the girls are cheering on Marco and Brittany, Janna's cheer ends with "this is just getting corny" because 'corny' is one of the surprisingly few words that rhymes with 'horny.' Referring to Earni/Mewth as "Susan" was inspired by the end of the otherwise mediocre animated film Titan A.E., in which the MC names the planet he just discovered (or created, I don't remember) "Bob." The name Susan comes from the MC of another mediocre animated movie, Monsters Vs. Aliens; I always remember it because one of the other monsters tries to argue that the MC doesn't need a "monster name" because "Susan" might be scary enough. ("Suuuuuuusannnn...") According to the Star Vs. wiki (https://starvstheforcesofevil.fandom.com/wiki/Star_vs._the_Forces_of_Evil_Wiki), Daron Nefcy once said that Starfan13's real name is Amanda Jacobs. Whether or not this is true, I decided to use that name in this story – not least because the name Amanda means "she who is loved." Amanda's shapeshifting power follows T-1000 rules (Yes, I know I'm dating myself here): She can only transform into creatures of roughly equal volume and mass.

I’m not really following that, but I say do what you want to do. I’m not going to be picky if someone is willing to contribute.

It took a while, but the second chapter of “Rewire” is finally posted! Chapter 2: The Joy Dome

Ah, I hear you. Weird fact: Over the years, “Darla’s Dad” has had more than 4 times as many views as “Darla.” My guess is that the “Dad” in the title draws the incest fans.

Hello, and thank you for the kind words! Maybe you know this already, but “Darla” has a sequel, “Darla’s Dad.” Also, another author, risa187, wrote a third story called "Darla’s New Beginning," in which Darla gets a happier ending than she does in “Darla’s Dad.” Coming up with premises for these stories is a big part of the fun. Glad you like them.

You could always put a note at the end telling folks who want to read on where to go (or, if that isn’t ready yet, a “Coming Soon, watch this space” note plus the URL of your archive profile).

More “The Business of Pleasure” awaits! Many thanks to @FairySlayer for the quick turnaround. Chapter 4: The Showoff

Interesting idea. I like that you just provide the basic premise; a lot of people who post story ideas have already worked out so many of the details that there’s no latitude for the writer to be creative, which takes the fun out of it. If I didn’t already have more story ideas than I can write up, I might be interested in this.

I think I messed up; I now dimly recall that you’re not supposed to put the story in the archive until there’s at least 1 actual story to put in it. So @Deadman, if your piece will work at all as a standalone story, I say go for it.

So, perhaps to the surprise of no one, I’ve already deviated from the plan. My intent was to finish chapter 2 of “Rewire” next, but although I’ve spent some quality time on “Rewire,” chapter 2 is turning out longer than I anticipated, plus I’ve spent some of that time on later chapters. Thus, what I just sent off to beta is not a piece of “Rewire” but chapter 4 of “The Business of Pleasure.” Also, I am hosting this year’s AFF Winter Holiday party! Hoping for a blizzard of stories this year.

Feeling jolly? No? Well let’s fix that, shall we? Welcome to AFF’s 2024 Winter Holiday party! Contributions to this festive anthology must be: A complete oneshot (less than 45k words) Original fiction Holiday themed (any December-ish holiday: Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Festivus, you name it) Tagged with all applicable warnings at the top of the story So grab a hot beverage and anything with a keyboard, and let’s story-party! https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110499

The new chapter of “Band Together” is up! Chapter 2: The Choreographer

In case anyone’s interested: Since my last post in this thread, I’ve written a few more mom-son fics. Master Plan After single mom Nicole discovers her son's secret fondness for porn of boys dominating older women, she forms a plan to trick him into becoming the dom she's always wanted. Located : Erotica > Het - Male/Female Content Tags : Anal BDSM COMPLETE DP Ds Exhib Inc MF Minor1 Oral Preg Solo Spank Toys First Time: Luhan A furry alien MILF tells the story of when her son reached sexual maturity at eighteen…months. Located : Erotica > Het - Male/Female Content Tags : Anal Anthro COMPLETE Contro Fingering Inc MF Minor1 Oneshot Oral Preg Guidelines A new type of human male is emerging--one driven by instinct to achieve dominance over the females in their lives. These guidelines are for women whose young sons may be of this type, to prepare them for the radical changes ahead. Located : Erotica > Het - Male/Female Content Tags : Anal BDSM Beast COMPLETE Contro D/s Dom F/F Humil Inc M/F M/M Minor1 Minor2 Oneshot Oral Preg Rape S&M TF Voy

Thanks for the hint about using double apostrophes as quotation marks. It works, and it doesn't look bad at all. I also noticed that em dashes (the longest kind of dash) don't work.

So I just edited several of my summaries and a couple of titles. Periods, commas, question marks, and exclamation points now work. Quotation marks, colons, and parentheses do not.

Thanks for trying, but periods, commas, question marks, exclamation points, and quotation marks still aren’t working.

I'm pleased to say that chapter 2 of “Band Together” has gone off to beta. My plans for the near future are simple: finish and post the next chapters of “Band Together," "Rewire,” and "The Business of Pleasure,” then repeat until those stories are finished. I will update the stories in that order unless either a burst of inspiration or a lack of it puts one story ahead of or behind its current place in the cycle. I'm working on other stuff in the background, of course, but I don't expect to post any of it until at least one of these three stories is done. Two possible exceptions are a couple of one-shot stories: "Our Little Secret,” a Miraculous fic I've been working on for some time, and a Christmas story titled “A Fairy Merry Christmas," which deals with the hard-drinking slacker daughter of the Tooth Fairy.

I just experimented with a couple of my story summaries, and here’s what I found: --Periods, commas, question marks, and quotation marks don’t work at all. --Hyphens work normally. --Apostrophes now work normally, too. (They used to be replaced by the number 39 for some reason.) Oddly, this problem only affects some of my stories. There’s no pattern to it that I can see; the problem isn’t confined to a particular story category (it affects some of my stories in Originals and some in Cartoons) or to a particular range of dates (the oldest story of mine that has this problem was posted in 2019).

I tried adding new content tags and changing the story rating and was able to do both. However, I could not add punctuation to the disclaimer any more than I could to the summary.

I just tried editing the summaries of two of my stories, and the edits didn’t stick for either one.

InvidiaRed’s comments on “Nuclear Family” are a bit spoilery, so rather than reproducing them here, I’ll just say thanks!

A new chapter of “The Business of Pleasure” appears! Chapter 3: The Slippery Slope

It took a while, but my Halloween story “Nuclear Family" is finally posted! https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110477&chapter=3 Summary: A family of three stops for the night at a cozy B&B in the New Hampshire mountains. But no one there is what they seem. Tags: MCD, NoSex, Violence I've been traveling a LOT this month, so I haven't been as productive as usual. As a result, I've left readers of "The Business of Pleasure “ waiting for chapter 3 for over a month. My priority now is to get that ready for beta. Then I'll focus on the next chapters of “Band Together" and “Rewire."

Nuclear Family is posted! https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110477&chapter=3 Summary: A family of three stops for the night at a cozy B&B in the New Hampshire mountains. But no one there is what they seem. Tags: MCD, NoSex, Violence e