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Chapter 6 of “Band Together” has just gone off to beta. So yay.

The penultimate chapter of “Rewire” is posted! Chapter 6: Command

That did it! Thank you.

Thanks, Manta. The forum Activity page looked normal when I went to it just now, but once I logged in, it went back to looking messed up like before.

The Forum looks like this on both my laptop and my phone. Is it just me?

Re: “A Little Family Trip” From Likem_young on June 08, 2025 Thanks!

I’ve just sent the second-to-last chapter of “Rewire” off to beta. My next goal is to do the same with chapter 6 of “Band Together.”

Thank you so much! My original idea for that story was to have the mom and son slip off somewhere private for their sexy fun, but then I decided it would be more fun to do the exact opposite and have them do it in front of everyone, which in turn led to the other sexual encounters happening around them.

If the author has a forum account as well as an archive account, you could PM them. Otherwise, unless they've put an email address or something in their profile, a review might be your only recourse. If it were me, I'd be glad for someone to point out a problem like that, even in a review. Remember, the author can always delete the review if they take offense -- or after they have fixed the problem you pointed out.

Double header! First, we have the concluding chapter of “The Business of Pleasure”: Chapter 8: A New Arrangement Second, we’ve got the next chapter of “Band Together”: Chapter 5: The Band, Part 1

I had a burst of inspiration over the weekend and made a lot of progress on the final chapter of “The Business of Pleasure.” I will probably send that to beta tomorrow.

Jeez, where do I even start? As wrong pairings go, I loves me some incest. I’ve written stories about Hiro and his Aunt Cass from Big Hero 6, Dipper and Mabel from Gravity Falls, and Lincoln Loud and virtually all of his sisters from The Loud House.

Chapter 5 of “Band Together” is now off in beta-land. Probably the next thing I’ll finish is chapter 6 of “Rewire.” It’s a hard chapter to write, though, for a lot of reasons—including the fact that it’s the linchpin of the whole story. Not that I’m feeling any pressure to make it perfect or anything.

I'm writing a fic in which a large group of teenage furries at “Mating Camp” are given a series of sexy games to play in a big hotel pool. Trouble is, I'm having trouble thinking of good games for them to play. Strip games are out because the furries don't normally wear clothes. (Their private parts only show when they are sexually aroused.) Any suggestions?

The penultimate chapter of “The Business of Pleasure” is posted! Chapter 7: The Tale of the Tape

IMO, a nonlinear story can work IF you make it clear when the events of each chapter are happening. You could use a literal timestamp (eg, starting each chapter with the date) or a figurative one (“Iggy was exhausted from training, but the championship was only two weeks away”). Or a narrator could explain it (“Now that I’ve told you ____, let me tell you how it all began”).

Right now, my main focus is on writing the next chapter of “The Business of Pleasure.” It's probably going to be the longest chapter in the story because so much happens in it. There's a fair amount left to write, but I think the writing will go relatively fast because I have a fairly clear vision of what will happen in the chapter.

Thanks to the vagaries of my writing schedule, beta-reading speed, and the AFF archive not letting me log in this morning—but working again now—I have a double header for you! Rewire, chapter 5: En Route Band Together, chapter 4: The Stager

I generally write stories in bits and pieces, writing whatever part of the story is clearest in my mind at that moment. Between these chunks of text, I leave markers to indicate the places were something needs to be added to connect what comes before the marker to what comes after. As a result, I am occasionally taken by surprise when I look through the text and discover that there are no markers left--indicating that it is now a complete draft. This happened a couple of days ago with my one-shot Miraculous fic “Our Little Secret.” And now, it's posted! Our Little Secret Bunnyx drops in on her younger self for some special fun, because present-day Alix has a secret that only her future self knows. Located : +M through R > Miraculous LadyBug Content Tags : Anal Bi COMPLETE FF Herm Minor2 Oneshot Oral

Chapter 6 of “The Business of Pleasure” is posted! Chapter 6: Household Affairs In other news, chapter 4 of “Band Together” has gone off to beta, and I hope to send off chapter 5 of “Rewire” by next weekend.

Hey, all. I've been doing a lot of traveling lately and therefore have had little time for writing. But now I'm done with travel for a while and am back at the keyboard. The next things I expect to send to beta are the next chapters of “Band Together” and “The Business of Pleasure.” I'm hoping to send both within a week or so.

I’m afraid I’ve been too busy with travel and prepping for more travel to get anything off to beta this week. I’m making good progress on chapter 5 of “The Business of Pleasure,” though. Might get it finished on my next plane ride.

The new chapter of “Rewire” is posted! Chapter 4: Falling Angel

Chapter 4 of “Rewire” is off to beta. I’d love to get the next chapters of “Band Together” and “The Business of Pleasure” off by the end of the month, but we’ll see.