KoKoa_B

I was poking around (heh... *clears throat*) my profile and had an idea. Is there any way that I can take my one shots that are already posted and place them as one story? Or would I have to basically start from scratch: delete them and repost them as one story? I would hate to lose my reviews but at the same time, as much as I appreciated them they're not that important (meaning, I wouldn't mind if I had to do the latter to accomplish what I would like to do).

*sighs* Again, I thought I already commented... my brain needs help... I guess it shows that I really, really, really enjoy seduction if anything else! I'm glad you enjoyed that one as well!

Aw, thanks! (although I could've sworn that I responded... guess not... )

Thanks, Jay! Yeah, it really is a prologue! It was actually done for a writing prompt on Deviant Art; the prompt was to put personalities behind the seasons. I've thought about continuing but whenever I get an idea for a story that's different from fan fiction, my muse refuses to cooperate! Of course, Summer wouldn't like Kris because there aren't too many who don't like Christmas! She's especially not particular with that saying Christmas in July! XD

*cries* It's the end! http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600060997&chapter=13 Thank you to all who have read and commented! Stay tuned for part 3, Infinite Lyght coming... soonish...

Take that! I hope she gets to be with her kids. ^^ Tahn, on Forbidden Desire O_o Is that all you're gonna comment on...? I worked very hard on the scene beforehand! Seriously: I'm actually glad it got you riled up like that! It's hard to explain about that scene. I wanted the slight drama of a custody battle in the story but I also didn't want to put too much emphasis on it, if that makes sense. I've thought about whether she will get to see her kids again but I don't want to put a lot of emphasis on it like I did in that chapter. It felt like a filler chapter to me, which... it basically was! But since I had already mentioned about the drama with custody, I had no other choice but to mention it once more. You know, just in case people had questions about what happened with the children!

So, I was just about to grumble and apologize for the long wait. But a lot has been going on with me since July on top of writer's block. Even still, I hate to keep readers waiting for so long on chapters. Anyway: here it is, another chapter! http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061146&chapter=12 Is that chapter twelve...? I believe it is... In case you're interested as well: the link to the discussion thread. I think I might separate it but it seemed only right to combine all of my DC stories into that one thread! http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/53634-review-replies-and-discussion-for-kokoa-bs-dc-verse-stories/

*thinks* I honestly can't decide. I loved all of my gifts this year! Once again, I got quite a few Tennessee Titans themed items! I guess... because I really enjoy a comfy pillow, the Titans body pillow would be it! Wait! I got two early Christmas gifts a couple of months ago: a brand new car and this Mac! But still... the pillow... Hearing my niece have a heart attack was indeed the best! She got a Frozen ice palace that took me an hour to set up. When she came over to our house, she barreled through our bedroom door, asking did we know that Santa brought her a castle! I felt bad because it topped one of the gifts her parents gave her: a Tom Brady jersey (yes... the love of sports has been instilled in her! Wrong team but eh; she likes sports so I guess I'll have to be satisfied with that...)

Funny that you thought that Kris was hot! LOL after I wrote this, a part of me wanted to turn it into an actual story. That way, readers would get a better description of him in a later chapter. But, yes; the plan is to make him attractive and not so... "jolly"! I am still trying to describe my scenes better than I have in the past so that meant a lot to me; thank you! Thanks! I figured that I got all of that violence out of my system from last time!

The Frost Effect: It's a good thing this story was first; you made it so much easier for the other stories to be better than this thing. Did that child in your profile pic write this...? Tell her that it was good for her first try and that she'll get better at this thing when she gets older. This sorry excuse of a story left me feeling nothing. You could've put a hell of a lot more detail in this than you did; it felt rushed and just... just no. Don't quit your day job, honey... Yule's Gift: {Psst... author of that first crap story: take lessons from this author...} Bronxie, I meant to tell you from your last one shot for the Halloween one but that was a-fucking-mazing! You really know how to capture a scene to the point where I literally felt Derwen's heartache and determination to attempt to change ritual. Words cannot truly express how much I loved that story. It pulled at almost all of your emotions. Mistletoe Hanging O_O I mean, I saw the warnings. I really did. But I wasn't expecting that! I was a bit lost but things came to light after a while. I imagine that even though this is a flashback, I would've had a better understanding of the characters if I would've read your book. It was like a teaser with the characters you introduced: I was all ready to get to know them better but then mayhem happened! I will admit that reading the last part of it gave me an uneasy feeling but like Bronx said, you described it in great details.

O_O and like DP, I would like to submit another entry! Not tied into Auld Lang Syne at all... and this is just a small introduction to a possible (but not likely) chaptered story Title: The Frost Effect Summary: Kris Kringle warns Jackie Frost that her father may be up to something. Sorry; that's the only way I know how to summarize it because it's so short...

Pen name: KoKoa_B Title: Auld Lang Syne (as you've witnessed with the Halloween one, this is subject to change...) Summary: It's New Year's Eve and Jamila is throwing a party in her home! As the countdown begins, Cory contemplates on his next move. *Not a sequel to Right Like Rain*

Alright! I've finally caught up with the reading and I'll have to agree with BW: I'm a bit let down that you ended the last chapter like that! The one thing that I have a question about is what Islwyn mentioned to Val: someone inside doesn't like the fact that they've slept with one another. But yet and still, Aneurin remembers Islwyn and still beds him. And the way he called her a Dy'ne; it seems that although something inside of him doesn't agree with having sex with male elves, he would rather do that than to love Val as he once did. All because she's human. If that makes sense... The unicorn and the druid are definitely hiding something but as much as it pains me to admit, I will put my money on the fact that Islwyn has more to hide than Caoilfionn. The unicorn speaks about prophesies, pretty much talking around everything. But Islwyn is a bit off. He halfway admitted that he was jealous all because he saw her first and felt that she should be his. But in the same breath, he tells her that she doesn't know her place. Which I guess, according to these elves, any and all dy'ne, no matter how loyal or pretty, are only worth being sex slaves to them. At least Yorwrath is honest with his intentions, albeit blunt. You can now tell that he does have feelings for Val. And I have a gut feeling that Yorwarth is going to try to hide them until either his death or if somehow he can claim her as his. As the others pointed out: he doesn't want to get hurt again by loving a human like he did before. I believe that he may have felt that she was just some dy'ne before but now... he only calls her that now to mask his true feelings. I don't know how I feel about the sex scene. Of course, it was beyond hot! And we can tell that the tension between the two had been building for quite some time. It still felt that it came out of nowhere. Almost like a "you're hurt, I'm hurt; let's have sex to make things tolerable"! LOL! But now that Aneurin has lost his memory, I can see Val and Yorwarth as a couple more than Val and Aneurin.

You know, I never got into the old Star Trek. My dad used to watch it religiously after he got off work and I would be in the other room doing homework or a puzzle when I was supposed to be doing homework... so I knew small bits and pieces of the series. But, I really liked Zachary Quinto's version. Even though, I adored him as Skylar and had shit fits when I found out he was casted as Spock (and another when I found out he was gay but whatevs, he's still cute...). A non-Star Trek fan dragging tyrant to go watch the movie all because of one actor... lol Anyway: yay, me and BW get the elves to ourselves! Well... Chrissy and Val can have Aneurin; it's only fair...

Now that we've gotten that out of the way: Why are you guys so mean towards the elves?? Well, except for Bronxie who loves them... except for one... Those last two...? Lovely...

So... can we talk about this latest chapter...? For you to adore Aneurin, your emphasis on his "death" was... well, it was lacking! LOL Then again, it's being told from Val's point of view so she could only describe but so much. Yorwrath's on the other hand was a bit more detailed and therefore more effective and meaningful. I know that she couldn't do anything about her husband's but I can see her want building for Yorwrath, no matter that she basically said she didn't like for people to die on her watch. I'm with BW: their budding relationship is definitely intriguing. He's annoying, cocky, demanding, racist... I could go on! But you're peeling away those layers and revealing that there are good reasons for him to be that way. And it's easier for us to see why Val respects him. My opinion: she'll probably never love him the way she loves Aneurin. And he's probably fine with that. So, I think that even if the Queen beds all three, it will be purely physical with the others. Maaybe a bit more with Islwyn but you're so contempt with making him untrustworthy... Great chapter, as always!

So... no one likes Islwyn but me...? *takes the druid and sallow elf with her* Fine... we'll be... somewhere with that heavy incense and intoxicating wine if you need us... So, I won't lie; the last chapter felt somewhat of a filler but I actually enjoyed reading about Val and Yorwrath sparring. He proved a great point; he's the one with the most experience with a sword. And sorry, BW but I also enjoyed that stabbing! Not like it really hurt him, though... The "unicorn" was indeed a surprise unicorn, like you told us in SB! Hmm... did we take a little something from The Last Unicorn...? I loved that movie! Anyway; this is great stuff and you guys are hilarious!

how was it my fault?? Congrats though!

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