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  1. *Kicks OC in her ass* GO FIGHT SO WE CAN POST THIS CHAPTER!!!!! *groans*

  2. Bah; 0-1... but I knew we were gonna lose... oh well; ready for Week 2!

  3. Less than 2 hours before I get to finally see my Titans in action, again! Preseaon, I know but still... ^.^

  4. Pen name: KoKoa_B Story: What Happened Last Night... Link: http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061002 Type of Fic: FlashFic Rating: Adult+ Fandom: Comics, DC Verse Cartoons, Justice League Pairings: None Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, NoSex, OC, Oneshot, Other (alcohol use... well; the after effects of it ^.^)
  5. Iori Yagami from King of Fighters. In MY opinion, he is one of the baddest mofos to grace the KoF series as well as the Capcom VS SNK series! I tend to like the cool, calm, collected, bad ass characters: the ones that act like they have no soul? Yeah... anyway; I'm thinking about changing it soon; the particular pic was going to be used as a mat I wanted created for whenever I play Yu-Gi-Oh.
  6. My sig was actually a test to see how it would look; I will change it... whenever; maybe not... ANYWAY! I am an avid football fan and I don't like the Chargers (particularly Philip Rivers); I have met quite a few San Diego Charger haters and someone came up with that pic. I HAD to save it and taunt Chargers fans with it! Overall, it's pretty self explanatory but as far as the origin of it, there you go...
  7. Wow... no one's answered this in MONTHS! *shrugs* Okay... well, my username is actually a name I used when I was a stripper a LOOONG time ago. I was new and never thought about it until the day I started working. The other girls thought long and hard and came up with "Cocoa Brown". It was too plain so I switched the Cs to Ks, and KoKoa B was born! I've been using that and my real name as pen names ever since! So there... don't judge me; you asked the meaning behind it and you got it!
  8. I would like to add my opinion on this subject! First: I didn't vote in the poll because I can't select all three options: all of the options pretty much sum up how I feel! LOL I love writing stories and because I am a selfish whore, I like to write to satisfy myself. After becoming familiar with fanfic and actually looking at what fandoms are popular, I came to the conclusion that although there are some great stories out there, the ongoing trend has been to write about pairings that the audience wants to hear about. I don't agree with this unless it is a collaborated work and even then, the preference should be between those two authors. Looking at my stories not getting any reviews makes me wonder a lot of things: am I THAT bad of a writer that no one wants to even grace me with the one review that suggests that I find another calling; maybe they are not interested in that fandom (but, then, why the hell did they click on the story in the first place: I KNOW that I made it clear what fandom this belongs to), maybe they don't like the pairing(s), is my OC too Mary Sue-ish, do they not like OCs (once again, I don't tag stuff for my health...), maybe the actual story is boring to them, maybe they're waiting for it to be complete before they review; these are the things that I worry/think about. I may be one of the very few that's actually looking for concrit; I do like that my stories are at least getting hits but I have no clue whether these people are simply afraid to give out concrit or simply read the first sentence and said "F*ck this; I'm going to go rearrange my sock drawer..." (trust me... I have read a story that made me feel that rearranging a drawer would've been a more useful time waster than reading that story)! Now, this is not really a complaint about lack of reviews; I've stated numerous times in SB that I got more hits on a story in the few days I posted it here than I did in the whole entirety its been on that other site! I can't help but to want to know what the readers thought. When I finally got my first review on a story, I had to run and tell everyone in my household; I was THAT excited (although, their natural response was to simply pat me on the head and give me a brownie...)! After reading what the vets had to say about not giving out reviews and their horror stories, it is very understandable why a lot of people don't leave reviews! I wouldn't want my head chopped off because I gave an honest review! I... can't remember where I was going with this so I'll end it there! LOL
  9. Pen Name: KoKoa_B Dribs, Drabs and Doggy Tales Prompt: Bikini Story link: http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600060991 Type of fic: FlashFic Title: Vacation Rating: Adult+ (for language) Fandom: DC Verse, Justice League Pairing: Tabitha Lyght/J’onn J’onzz Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, NoSex, OC, Oneshot, SI
  10. Last nite in Indy... too hot to go anywhere so maybe we'll come back when it gets cooler!

  11. Hoping that this trip does not make me kill my husband...

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    2. KoKoa_B

      KoKoa_B

      Columbus, OH with a drop off in Fort Wayne, IN first. 11 hour trip; we don't do well on trips longer than 6 hours... already had to strangle him to get him to pick out the clothes he's taking! >.<

    3. SweetKagamineKiss

      SweetKagamineKiss

      I like trips... the farthest my family has ever gone for a vacation-like trip was to Wrestlemania 26.

    4. KoKoa_B

      KoKoa_B

      BAH! You went to Wrestlemania??? *cries*

  12. Technically, this story is my actual first attempt at some smut... but not too hardcore! *2/9/15* I am in the process of editing this story; posting new edited chapters from here on out! Author: KoKoa B Title: Oban Star Racers: 1st Generation Summary: A look into the very first Earth Team to compete in the Great Oban Races. While the Earth Team is learning how to adapt to their sudden and foreign surroundings, their artillery specialist has caught the eye of the Baron of Esperia. He finds out that he is not alone as far as his feelings for the only Earth woman on Oban. Feedback: Always accepted and appreciated! Fandom: Oban Star Racers Pairing(s): Lindsay/Ariev Warnings: Fingering, HJ, MCD, MiCD (...a LOT of it... all at one time *spoiler*), OC, Oral, Preg, Solo, Violence (actually mild), Voy, WIP, Xeno URL: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600053068 I appreciate all who take a look at any of my stories. Not too worried about reviews because I know that my stories are WIPs but reviews are appreciated.
  13. My first attempt at some real smut! Please don't laugh... okay; it's alright to laugh because I blushed the entire time writing this! LOL Author: KoKoa B Title: J'onn's Pleasures Summary: A sexually deprived Martian Manhunter brings a human back from another dimension to satisfy his urges. Feedback: As always, I accept any and all types of feedbacks... except for trolls and flames... Fandom: DC Comics, Justice League Pairing: Jamila/J'onn J'onzz Warnings: Abuse (this can be questioned but it's abuse to me; lol), Anal, AFFO, BDSM, D/s, Fet, Fingering, MC, Oral, Preg, PWP, RapeFic (also questionable but the reason why I ask for feedback), SI, Solo, Violence, WIP, Xeno URL: http://comics.adultf...hp?no=600060960 Thank you for laughing at my expense Seriously; I've been trying to broaden my writing horizons and hopefully this story will help me do so. I appreciate those who actually take a look at this and thank you in advance! **I have removed this story... sorry...**
  14. Happy Birthday To Me!!!

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      Happy Birthday! Hope the day is splendid! :D

    2. SweetKagamineKiss
    3. DemonGoddess
  15. The fonts are in my original document but in the edit window, the specific fonts are not available. so, I did select the font afterwards and used the font tool in editor.
  16. I don't know if this is an on-going problem but when I use different fonts when editing chapters, they do not appear when you look at the story. I can bold, indent, underline and italize but the font changes do not take affect.
  17. Did any of you catch the fight last night? SMDH... Manny got ROBBED and so did the majority of us who paid for the PPV!

    1. SweetKagamineKiss

      SweetKagamineKiss

      I saw half of it but I dozed off in the recliner.

  18. This just reminds me of how I was inspired a few days ago to post whatever story I want to, regardless of the ratings and/or reviews it will get: write your sex scenes however you want to write them! As authors , we all have different styles (at least, we hope we do) of writing. Many of us have been writing for a long time and so we know what we like to put in our stories. Being raised in the area I was in, I've always been used to slang, period so it does reflect in my stories (thus the reason I tend to write in the 1st person a lot, something that I've just started to steer away from). To me, it depends on not only the type of story I'm reading but also the ethnic background of the writer. I've seen and read a lot of African American (I prefer to say black but that's just me...) erotica that uses "dick", "pussy" and have no problem with it; it actually flows right along with the story (as well as what and how I'M used to speaking). I'm also used to seeing "cock", "balls", "cunt", "juices", etc. Which terminology I'm used to seeing is depending on the time era that the story is from as well, like Bronx said. Okay; rambling (again... *sigh*)! Anyway: if you feel more comfortable writing your sex scenes using techincal terms, then go for it! But, like Dany pointed out: the majority of erotica is made to be naughty and slang words gives it that naughty/shock value. As far as an answer to your question: would I read a story that had sex scenes with the right, technical terminology? Unless I'm trying to educate myself, no. I like to read stories that I can really get into, that I can mentally see what the author is describing. "He rammed all nine inches of his cock in her pussy"~ I can physically see that. "His penis entered her vagina"~ I could see that but it's more like I'm reading from a sex ed magazine or something!
  19. Hi guys! Okay (takes deep breath); here it goes! Author: KoKoa B Title: Speed of Lyght Summary: An Army Reservist gets transformed into a mutant all thanks to a military experiment gone wrong. In her quest for vengeance, she befriends Spider-Man, the Justice League and Iron Man. Feedback: Yes, please! LOL Seriously; all feedback is welcome! Review replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/53634-review-replies-and-discussion-for-kokoa-bs-dc-verse-stories/ Fandom: Mainly Justice League Unlimited but it is considered a crossover with Marvel. Pairings: Tabitha Lyght (OC)/J'onn J'onzz, Tabitha Lyght/Bruce Wayne Warnings: COMPLETE, MC, MiCD, NoSex (but there is a hint of it; not detailed though: the reason why I opted for the warning; the usual "the next day" or "fade to black"-type of stuff; lol), OC, SI URL: http://comics.adultf...hp?no=600060947 I would like to sincerely say thank you in advance to those who take the time and read my story! I will have to put in another warning: the first four chapters are mainly about Tabitha and getting to know her a bit. The crossovers start appearing afterwards! With that said, I hope that you can bare (or bear; I get it mixed up...) with it! ALSO: I hope you like novels... You have been warned... YES! It is COMPLETE! LOL Please enjoy... I know that it's been a year but I have also revised the entire story so I hope you'll enjoy it more!
  20. Hi! I'm KoKoa B! Like many of the authors here, I have been writing stories for as long as I could remember; at least from the age of 10! I had started unknowingly writing fanfic for the past 10 years (it was mainly celeb fanfic) and after my sis-in-law got a glimpse of a few stories, she was the one who suggested that I start posting a few online. Unfortunately, I've only been able to post one story and now that I've found this site, I think it would be more suited on here than on ff.net! Seeing that I am new on here, I have questions galore! But, I will save them for other topics in the forum... hopefully! Wait; introduction of myself~ right! I tend to ramble... uh; I'm in my 30s so the underage thing has been nipped in the bud there. And, um... that's really it! LOL I'm looking forward to learning more about this site as well as fanfic in a whole and getting to meet people who are as enthusiastic about their writing as I am about mines!
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