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That which we make for ourselves by magentasouth

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Link for the above: Unwanted Mate by Naga-Lord

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Harry's Master by LokiGodric

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I would disagree that his personal style makes Stephen King a poor writer. By adhering to an overly rigid structure for literature, you run the risk of sacrificing creativity for form. While form has a place in things like sonnets and waka, one of my absolute favorite writers, Samuel R Delany, tossed the style book out the window when he wrote some of his most amazing works. "Dhalgren" can still leave me breathless, and "Stars in My Pocket Like Grains of Sand" is sheer gorgeousness. On the other hand, the relentless predictability of Barbara Cartlandt is what gave romance writing such a bad name.

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I think the issue readers, including myself, can have with that is if they need to run to Google Translame to get through a bit of dialogue. You can pretty much assume a term of endearment is something sweet and loving, and move past without needing to go see exactly what "watashi no kokoro" means. But if you're writing primarily in English, for readers of English, then you really should try and stick with one language except where it's a concept that can't readily be translated. If you're writing for Japanese speakers, you should be writing ござる, which is the polite form of "to be." I'm pretty sure "de" is either an example of inaccurate Japanese from anime use, or one of those hangovers from katakana, like daylight = deraitu.

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If the author has taken the story down, and does not wish to publish it, then that is the author's choice, and must be respected.

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I'm so glad to hear the news about the biopsies. I can only imagine how hard it is to go through scare after scare, though.

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