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My pleasure!

Nefarious is always good!

We have many authors, myself included, who've posted oneshots set in the same fandom or 'verse. If the stories are not related to each other, even if they occur in the same 'verse or fandom, then it's fine to post them as separate oneshot stories. In fact, it's probably wiser, because if you post them as chapters of a single work, you're liable to get readers complaining about how the "chapters" don't relate to each other.

My pleasure!

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Honestly, I'd put it in the pairing of the original relationship, since the infidelity is one-sided and will form an important plot point, I'm sure, if Person B finds out about Person C. A threesome would be three people having sex together, so that's definitely not the case here.

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From my own experience, I was never feeling anything like panic. It was often a bit giddy, in the best possible way. I like the idea of beginnings, and new starts, so I'm sort of predisposed to be eager. I wouldn't call it a rush, either, if it was beginning with some nice kissing and touching. It would be a slow build-up, a gradually increasing level of need and desire. Maybe there's a flicker of nervousness, but it's more on the line of, "Oh, I hope he likes me," and then it's gone as fast as it comes because I'd want to focus on the kisses, and touches.

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I imagine what a woman experiences is much the same as what a girl might experience, with less giggling, so I'm game. First kisses are fun, because you're sort of exploring each other. It's all new and fascinating, to discover the way the other person kisses. Do they thrust with their tongue, or is it a gentle sort of exploration? That sort of thing... As you kiss, you can feel a lovely tingling working its way through you. Nipples become more sensitive, and begin to peak a little. There's a warm feeling pooling low in your belly, and you might begin to experience a little wetness as your arousal grows. I'll assume hands are busy exploring as well, and those touches are going to intensify what you're feeling. Gentle teasing or rubbing of the nipples, hands tracing the curves of hips and buttocks, or wrapping around a slender waist... I don't imagine the gender of your partner is going to affect the way you feel as you grow aroused, but given that I have no interest in or desire to sleep with another woman, I can't help you there. But it's your story, and your fantasy, so I say go with it.

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Hi, Once you've posted a story, you can't add tags via the dropdown box. You need to add them manually to the Summary field, or you can add a line at the top of the first chapter, labelled "Additional Warnings" or something along that line, and then add the missing tags. We have a FAQ on how to edit the Summary field here. You will need to use the arrow keys to move to the end of the Summary field to see the tags that are there already. This field only allows for 240 characters, so if you've already got that much in there, you won't be able to add more tags to the field. That means add them at the top of the chapter, as described above.

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Please note that you are being held to the same standard as every other author on this site. You are not being asked to do anything different. If you believe that you deserve special treatment, I suggest you take the time to read your very childish rant above, and consider why anyone who behaves like that should be permitted to maintain an account on a site that is for adults.

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