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I imagine what a woman experiences is much the same as what a girl might experience, with less giggling, so I'm game. First kisses are fun, because you're sort of exploring each other. It's all new and fascinating, to discover the way the other person kisses. Do they thrust with their tongue, or is it a gentle sort of exploration? That sort of thing... As you kiss, you can feel a lovely tingling working its way through you. Nipples become more sensitive, and begin to peak a little. There's a warm feeling pooling low in your belly, and you might begin to experience a little wetness as your arousal grows. I'll assume hands are busy exploring as well, and those touches are going to intensify what you're feeling. Gentle teasing or rubbing of the nipples, hands tracing the curves of hips and buttocks, or wrapping around a slender waist... I don't imagine the gender of your partner is going to affect the way you feel as you grow aroused, but given that I have no interest in or desire to sleep with another woman, I can't help you there. But it's your story, and your fantasy, so I say go with it.

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Please note that you are being held to the same standard as every other author on this site. You are not being asked to do anything different. If you believe that you deserve special treatment, I suggest you take the time to read your very childish rant above, and consider why anyone who behaves like that should be permitted to maintain an account on a site that is for adults.

For The Scapegoat: Thank you! I know you've been busy, so the fact that you read my little story is marvelous. It is a sort of steampunk world, and full of a great deal of strangeness, the kind of place only an author can love. No one's very nice, but they're growing on me. I hadn't quite twigged to the netizen aspects of the "Tehs" name, although it was an ironic homage to my own inability to type certain days. However, given the nature of the world itself, that aspect might work all on its own. Imagine a steampunk web...

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I think I have just found an exception to my rule...

I think Coyote makes some very good points, although I will admit that I do try not to make fun of men. I'm devoutly het, despite a penchant for writing slash, and on the whole I quite enjoy men. I'm also willing to laugh at myself just as quickly, and try not to treat one gender as superior. But on the whole, I think any intelligent reader wants a little character development, unless you're just in one of those PWP moods. Otherwise, it's like being a little kid again, and vowing that when you grow up, you'll have dessert for dinner every night. After a while, it starts to get boring, and frankly unappealing. And I stand by my assertion that fruit should not be used to describe a woman's anatomy.

For The Scapegoat: Thank you so much! It was actually fun to write, once I figured out where the cabriolet fit in. The rest was simple. I have a feeling I might go back to this world again. It's one that's been growing quietly in my head, and I think it might deserve a deeper look at some point. It's not a pleasant little place, but it has its charms. Thank you again! If I managed to entertain, I've done my job.

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I think the primal fears are the scariest, those things we can never shed no matter how old we get, or how rational we think we are. It's much more terrifying than all the gratuitous gore in the world.

Pen Name: BronxWench Story Link: The Scapegoat Review Replies: BronxWench's Review Replies - Original Fiction Type of Fic: FlashFic Rating: Adult+ Fandom: Original > Fantasy & Science Fiction > Slash - Male/Male Warnings: Anal, BP, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, M/M, MiCD, Minor2, Rape, Rim

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