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Because I forget to update this: Chapters added: Chapter 42 Chapter 43 Chapter 44 Chapter 45

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Well, yes, if you can't resolve the character's crazy with some degree of plausibility, it's time to smack the little monster and send him for therapy. Or editing.

It's been my experience that a character like this usually has something I haven't found out yet that will explain his crazy. By a certain point, the characters are pretty much dictating the story to me anyway.

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Sometimes the best thing to do is break all the rules. Not only is it fun, but it can work so well!

It occurs to me people won't get my reviews, so... Right Like Rain Holy... what an ending! I was not expecting that at all, but that was entirely appropriate for a Halloween story. But ouch, the kids... Awesome story, KoKoa! ::applauds:: and Tricky Treats Oh, dear sweet hairy trolls on pogo sticks, that was AMAZING! I was laughing throughout the entire story, and I'm in love with the banter. The fourth wall is rubble, the characters are out of control, and that was just brilliant parody. Honestly, I am SO glad you're writing, DA! This is awesome stuff right here! Love you!

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I loved being one of the card players! Honestly, I'd have had one of those pretty things over my lap in a New York minute. Maybe two. It was a great chapter, and I still think I'm going to love hating Yorwrath. He's such a glorious shit, but I have a feeling Valentina will prove the stronger of the two. And Aneurin is just... damn, that elf is a tempting baggage. I'm not going to piss Valentina off, though.