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I'm still thinking about Yorwrath's story, and honestly, it explains why Aneurin puts up with his brother's shit, in addition to Yorwrath being one of his supporters, or course. But what acres me just a little is that Yorwrath is both a fanatic, as evidenced by his being a Redcap in the first place, and one of the few elves that can truly understand what Valentina means to Aneurin. How willing is Yorwrath to let his brother find the love that he wasn't allowed to have? However it works out, I'm still going to ache a little for Yorwrath, and all that was lost by the way he was hardened. Aneurin is King, but he still needs the support of his people, and the Redcaps won't support him if Yorwrath turns against Aneurin, so in a way, Aneurin is no more "free" than Valentina. It's a perfect conundrum, and I'm so eager to see how it plays out.

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I'm not seeing any indication of staff action with respect to this story, so I can only infer that the author removed it. Sorry!

Many thanks to our lovely Forum Mod for moving this to the appropriate thread. We have 22 subdomains, covering everything from Books to Original Fiction to NonEnglish works. If you tell us what fandom you're writing for, we'd be happy to point you to the right place. But as an author myself, and one who has never written an anime-related story in my life, I'd have to say that we're not an anime archive, or even anime-oriented. It just comes first in the alphabet...

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Because I forget to update this: Chapters added: Chapter 42 Chapter 43 Chapter 44 Chapter 45

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Well, yes, if you can't resolve the character's crazy with some degree of plausibility, it's time to smack the little monster and send him for therapy. Or editing.

It's been my experience that a character like this usually has something I haven't found out yet that will explain his crazy. By a certain point, the characters are pretty much dictating the story to me anyway.

Lots of authors do updates via Twitter and Facebook as well, or post update information on other blog sites like Tumblr. Your best bet is to check the author profile, and see if they list any sites where they post updates. If the author posts updates in our Promote a Story thread, you can follow that author's topic, and get email notifications that way. Aside from all that, all you can do is do what CL recommends, and ask the author.

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