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love the new ch! had to look up Christina. nice use of a very obscure girl

Thank you! I appreciate your taking the time to review this story (multiple times) despite your not being comfortable with all parts of it.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 15, 2021 Joma came up with the name "Wishful." Mmmm, Classic Lola is hot. Thanks! When Joma said that the rabbits would be twins who finish each other's sentences, it made me think of the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn's granddaughters) from Batman Beyond, and that gave me the idea to make them circus-type performers. Did I mention how in sync you and Joma are with your fetishes? Porn logic is best logic. Hmmm, yes, hopefully. Thank you, and thanks for the reviews!

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 14, 2021 Yup, very much like a genie lamp. You’ll find out how much so later on. Nope, you got it right. Is he all three? Eh, maybe not. You'll find out more about that as you go. You read "Multiversity"? I'm flattered. FYI, I recently started outlining a new Gravity Falls story, titled "Depravity Falls." Wow, you and Joma are really in sync with your fetishes. Yeah, Joma was pretty specific about the lingerie. Even if he hadn't been, authentic medieval underwear probably wouldn't have made for a fun read. Coin of the Realm is not a real game, but it is indeed inspired by Catan. I hope you'll like it just as much!

Thanks! I found the episode in which Lincoln flirts with Cristina’s picture quite memorable, and I thought it would be fun to have the new-and-improved Lincoln make a comeback with a girl with whom he was very much on the outs.

From JayDee on March 14, 2021 Always feels a little annoying to see a story with 5000+ views and no reviews/only one person reviewing. Folks’re clearly checking it out, could give some feedback. Ah well. Valentine’s Employee Only Services. Hey! You’re saying you can’t write sex scenes but bam! That’s a brief but fun coupling you got there. I especially liked that kiss followed by Argus getting Harry inside. Character development can be tricky. Argus wants to help in his own way. Sex scenes are hard but I’m getting better? “Shadows that shouldn’t be there that sort of thing.” …does Harry suspect Peter Pan is coming for them? :p I kid I kid! Don’t tempt me =p This one did feel a little choppier – another pass for typos would probably help it some, but otherwise another solid part. And not just Argus’ solid part. ooof will try to make sure the next one is better.