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From Fairy-Slayer on June 22, 2020 When I first started writing this story, I planned to have just 4 chapters, with “home plate” being the finale event. But that didn’t feel like a sufficiently satisfying ending, because Lori needed comeuppance, and everyone needed to learn something. Then the “fifth base” idea hit me, and after I bounced it off Jomahawk and he liked it, I decided to make that the finale event. To make this work, I needed to paint Ronnie Anne that way, and to show Lincoln at the top of his game. I enjoyed writing those bits. Just in general, writing Lori freaking out is fun. I like a happy ending. You’re welcome, and thanks for the review, as always!

A couple of brief announcements: --The first of three chapters of my Craig of the Creek story “Creek Dreams” is currently in beta. --Chapter 6 of “Wishful” is drafted. I expect to edit and post it tomorrow evening.

Body horror is surprisingly tricky.