Re: “Wishful”
From Jomahawk2694 on March 01, 2020
I believe in happy endings.
I wanted a complication in Jace's interactions with her that Duann and Lady Aliss wouldn't have been able to predict, and that seemed like just the thing (although Aliss foreshadows it a little).
That part is in response to something you wanted to include. You'll find out what in the next chapter.
Somehow, the real-world sex scenes are especially compelling for me -- particularly in contrast with the fantasy ones.
Then the next chapter will be worth the wait, too.
Hmm, I have a pretty solid plan for the next two chapters (which I had intended to be the last ones), but I'll see.
Glad so much of it is working for you.