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High praise coming from you. <3 And I could really use Blackbird's help right now. Been dying to write something dark and thoroughly depraved again

It’s wonderful And while I’m here, I just wanted to say that I still miss Blackbird. I wonder if he’s out there somewhere in the ether, waiting for his chronicler to see him win his way through… somehow. Not nagging at all. Just like this little piece here, you are a sensational writer. I am quite sure I haven’t told you that often enough.

A review for Kiss of the Snake @pippychick I seriously adore you, Pippy. I’m so happy you enjoyed it, and calling it a dark fairytale made me blush. I like little challenges like this that allow me to indulge in a societal message or two. Thank you so much for the review!

Really liked the summary part, Mal. And obviously the fist scene was great. seeing Ari- Cat scamper around the harem made me think about some classic film and TV scenes where there are uncut longshots. Think goodfellas, Birdman, it's always sunny’s episode Charlie Work (definitely worth a view if you've got half an hour). I think it'd be an interesting chapter format where all you do is follow Ari as she moves around the harem. Sort of a longer version of what you did in this chapter. It'd be a good way to check in on different characters (and developing plots you were going to cover anyway) by having Ari spy on them. Instead of us just seeing a conversation, we'd get to view it through Ari’s cat eyes and see her unique perspective. I remember you did this with an Alex chapter where we got to see into his mind, going through his daily trials. But I think Ari’s perspective and current mindset is the most distorted and fucked up, which would make it the most interesting of the whole group. And I imagine you'd tie a sex scene into all of it and it'd be amazing to get inside her cat mind for that. Anyway, that’s just a thought that I hope you can toss around as a writing mechanic for maybe Billion Dollar Harem or some other story. Amazing work, as always. Please keep up the great writing, Mal.

Yes it did! It was just odd to do it that way.

I’ll obviously go with the option of the idea i suggested so option 1 . To address some of the concerns I’ve seen with the idea I’ll say this. The way Mal writes BDH, he’s not going to have the girls just start fucking in the living room, he’d give each duo their own time in his room and give them time to feel comfortable. Second, I think that the contest would help with relationship drama especially if a certain duo have a hot session that makes them hot for each other, which could develop a new relationship and drama to go with it, or it could add up to become a love triangle which i think mal could work with as well. I only came up with the idea in order to create new dynamics and get the more forgotten girls more involved. Like guest juan said also, it’s a chance to let the girls lose some of their inhibitions and let loose. Alex does care for these girls in his own way so making sure they’re having fun and trying new things. So I suggest if Mal goes with my option, he push it back until he’s got a good feel of the personalities of everyone in the harem (mainly the two new girls).

Day UK leaves the EU: 29th March. Day UK government bans internet porn: 1st April. Nothing can go wrong here… nothing at all! Seems you will be able to visit porn websites if you go into an actual shop and physically purchase some kind of weird licence for a fiver, which you’ll need to use within 24 hours. This will be sold to you by the very last person alive that you want thinking of you and sex. Though even getting to the counter may well mean having to fight your way through a violent melee involving people fighting over toilet roll AND people who left it too late to buy bread and are now battling it out for the last Soreen.