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The beginning of the chapter is certainly bleak for Ronja...our talk about an earlier chapter also made me realize that this scene with Ronja, even though that Maria intervene before things get out of hand, might be a scene that uncomfortable for people who have experienced anything similar. Great that you liked the outdoor scene, my earlier reference of the blackmailer coming back for more should have some context by now. The relationship between Ronja and Maria is of great use to ground the story so that the more kinky bits mean something real for the characters. As for the names it is meant as a bit of a joke. The name Andersson is used by like 2.7% percentage of Swedes compared to Smith that think is used by less than 1% of the Americans. When I saw the Matrix the first time I could not help laughing when I heard his name that sound so utterly mundane to a Swede. The question if he will get is comeuppance is still undecided...but I think there is a certain inscription on the mirror that Ronja should have paid more attention to.

My profile says I joined the forum as JayDee on January 31, 2008. (I mean, yeah, there’s posts from my old pen name before then. We ignore those.) It takes effort to get worse at writing over 11 years, believe me.