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1 week ‘till the Halloween party starts. Come join us. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/65894-2017-halloween-party/

Author: Desiderius Price Title: The Repair Guy Summary: Alyssia opts for extended service after the repair guy shows up to fix her A/C in his underwear. Feedback: Sure, feedback with constructive criticism! Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Exhib, MF, Other, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL (AFF): http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108774 URL (AO3): https://archiveofourown.org/works/55313575 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59549-jaimies-campfire-starrebels/ (ie, I needed to write something nice and fluffy after I finished my Halloween story...)

Welcome, my spooky friends. You are hereby invited to a Halloween party to celebrate this 2017 season of frights. This party will be a collection of one shot original fiction somehow involving a Halloween theme. (Doesn’t have to be spooky, but we do love those) Guidlines: One Shot (Max. 50k words) Halloween element (Ghosts, witches, werewolves, vampires, demons... things that go bump in the night) Original Fiction At the top each story MUST include the tags for your content. At the bottom include a link to your profile. Before you add your story please add a summary of your content here in your post declaring your interest. On the 25th of October, I will post in the archives a story titled "2017 Halloween Party" and make it available to add chapters. You may add more than one story as long as it fits the Halloween theme. Also, the story does not have to be sexual in nature. If you're interested please reply with your pen name on the archives, a short description of what you might write about and the title. If you don't have a title that's fine just put (unknown). (Example: see below). I will keep track here of those authors interested. Participating Authors Tahn – Title: Town Made of Straw Summary: Every year the town has a tradition to keep the crows away. Desiderius Price – Title: Bones (or similarly titled) Summary: Truth or Dare while trespassing naked on an ancient Indian burial ground; nothing can go wrong, right? BronxWench – TBA CL Mustafic – TBA pippychick – (possibly) TBA Kokoa_B – Title: Liquid Lust Summary: After being literally dragged into a closet by her best friend and husband at a Halloween party, a woman decides to take a sip of what they’re drinking… CloverReef – Title: Blue Eyes Summary: A strange body comes into a funeral home to be prepped for burial, but the lonely mortician designated to do the honours doesn’t think it’s quite dead. Tcr – Title: Stalker Summary: She watched from a distance. Halloween, she changes the game GeorgeGlass – Title: Black Cat Summary: Life from a black cat’s point of view

Can we call tomorrow the 25th so we can start posting Halloween stories? We can go back to the 20th later.

Glad you didn't mind the lack of, um, payoff. Let's face it, if there's one Loud who would be voted Most Likely to Become a Supervillain, it would be...well, Lisa, but Lola would come in...okay, third after Luan, but still... I'd say it was a mix: Some were freaked out by having done it, and some were freaked out by having liked it. I see Lucy as the most introverted and, therefore, the most self-aware of the Loud kids. I loved writing that bit. My stories are probably predictable in some ways, but I like to at least keep readers guessing about whether there's going to be incestuous snuggling or projectile barfing at the end. Thanks for the beta and the comments!

Okay... So I'm taking this from CR... So, if it's wrong... <points fingers> their fault! All theirs! Title: StalkerTags: Violence MiCD Summary: She watched from a distance. Halloween, she changes the game.Halloweeny theme: Death, violence, creepy stalkery murderer. Hopefully that all works...

I’m so glad you mentioned that line. I’m not always able to come up with a last line for a story that I really like, but I was very happy with that one. Thank you! And no worries, there’s more on the way.

Thanks!

Have you considered starting a review reply thread in the AFF forums? I do that for all my stories, mainly so people who review them won't feel like they're shouting into the void. I had no idea. Thanks! Did you review it anonymously? I don't remember getting any reviews from you before. That was really what I was aiming for: to immerse readers in the story and make them part of it. It was pretty experimental; I'd never even considered writing a story in the first person plural before. Thanks! Good to know. I was really trying to do the opposite -- to make the story partly a conversation between Lucy and the reader. But maybe that's just not doable (at least, not in the way I tried to do it). It was definitely fun (although the most fun parts to write were Lucy's comments and insights). It was also the hardest part, in some respects, because it's meant to imply that the order in which these five scenarios begin is also the order in which these different activities got started over successive Friday nights. (“Ontogeny recapitulates phylogeny,” as the biologists like to say once they've got a few drinks in them.) So Lynn started it all with her sleepwalking-that-fools-no-one routine, which prompted Leni and Luna to start doing their silent lap dance thing, which emboldened the twins to unleash their pent-up desires on Luan, which inspired Lisa to start having regular rendezvous with her extradimensional fuck buddy, which put the idea into Lori's head to “borrow” Lily while that's going on. Thank you! It helps that all of the action in that scene takes place in one location -- the hallway -- so there's no need to switch from one peephole to another like we do throughout the rest of the story. Thanks! I completely agree that Luan is hardest to write. In canon, she almost never stops joking, and it's hard to keep that up over multiple lines of dialogue. But for better or worse, my dad had a similarly dorky sense of humor, and having been exposed to it for decades, I can drum up bad puns when necessary. There are some twins whom developmental psychologists describe as “over-identified"; each twin's identity is so bound up in the other’s that they don't know who they are as individuals. This vignette is based on the premise that Lola and Lana are scared of that happening to them, so they make a conscious effort to be different from each other -- but they still have the same underlying tendencies and urges. Thanks again. I wrote that before Luna's bisexuality was revealed on the show. I just figured that it seemed plausible. And Leni has a sort of naive open-mindedness that I thought would make this a believable scenario for her, too. Absolutely. It's a completely balanced relationship (which is why Luna will be dancing for Leni the next Friday night). I wanted it to be unclear until the end what was really going on with each of them. Despite having been at this the longest, they are also the ones most in denial. In fact, they may not even know what their sisters are getting up to during their liaisons -- let alone that they inspired it all. Thanks. I didn't want to sideline Lily the way I did in “Whoops,” and I have a mother-child incest fetish, so I thought this was the thing to do. I also love writing dirty talk, sometimes more than writing the action. Yes, I do. And I think there is a wide range of crazy that is plausible for Lori. We've seen her be the responsible elder sister, and we've seen her come completely unglued. For this story, I wanted to go somewhere in between, but I do see your point. Of the two big secrets that Lucy mentions at the end, the first (which she explains) is that the Loud kids inherited their horniness from their parents. But the second secret, which Lucy only hints at, is that all the Loud kids have a great capacity for love. We see that capacity manifest itself in a variety of ways in the final scenes. I see your point. It’s on a completely different level of plausibility from the rest of the story. I should note that I didn't quite manage to flesh out the idea behind Lovecraft -- not just that Lisa can control him, but also that she feels safer expressing her affection for him than for the human beings in her life. I wanted her to be an Alfred Hitchcock-type host. Which is why her first words to us are “Good evening.” I wrote that before I even knew that the show is set in Michigan. I just thought there was something Midwestern about Royal Woods. Thanks! Thanks again! Yes, I've gathered that. Or any cute girl for that matter (but especially his sisters, obviously: incest is the best!). Again, you know me. That's all besides the point though. Great work, man. Sounds like fun to me. You too! And if you’d like to send me an email some time, I’m at gglass999@hotmail.com.