From all_possible_worlds on March 10, 2017
Wow! I'm flattered.
I appreciate the thought, nonetheless.
As I mention in the disclaimer, I began writing this story before season 2 aired. And once season 2 started, I realized very quickly that it wasn't going to be possible to make the plot of “Star’s Crossed Lovers” jibe with season 2 canon. So consider this story an alternate version of season 2.
Thank you! Accurate characterization is a top priority for me, so I'm always happy when readers comment on it.
Once the story is finished, I'm planning on posting to this thread some author notes, which will include a short list of ways in which the events of season 2 contradict what happens in this story. The narwhal blast thing is one of them.
Thanks! I've been a little bothered (more than I should be, I'm sure) by the fact that Ludo's scissors were never mentioned again. Surely, Star wouldn't just throw away a perfectly good pair of dimensional scissors. So I decided to fill that plot hole myself.
Oh, yeah, there's gonna be fallout.
There's a good way?
Thanks for the review!