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Too much exposition alienates readers. If you've already explained the nature of his energy, and what is needed to "cure" the women, then I'd advise you to just make a brief mention to remind readers. They will remember what was already explained.

Personally, I know next to nothing about those 3, other than that Meltlilith is losing feeling in her hands. First post suggests that Sakura is living with Shirou at the Emiya mansion, while he goes and sees Rin outside and at her house. It sounds like it was flat-out "Shirou goes to Rin and Sakura's school after leaving his, goes to archery to wait for Sakura, it's her turn to clean up so they wait around and she fucks him once she thinks everyone is gone." For training, given that Reinforcement and Projection are the only things he can do, something like giving him stuff to Reinforce and doing things to distract him, like rubbing his dick or masturbating herself. If he fails, then he gets punished. Punishments might scale: first time, he has to watch her masturbate and isn't allowed to do anything else but watch; second time, a little more sadistic footjob than normal; third time, she sits on his face until she cums. By the time he fails a fourth time, she's suspecting he's doing it on purpose (he's not; just super not talented) and ups the ante by peeing in his mouth. What she wears could start out at first as her school uniform or regular outfit, then move on to the lingerie after a few sessions when she realizes what a pain it is to have to wash those every time.

To the first question, yeah, he could. I've only read 2 f!shep/Legion stories; one had a robo dick and the other had this 'tentacle fingers' thing going. And now that you mention the threesome thing it got me thinking on the virtual world mission from ME3 and how Legion could find a way to interface with f!shep like that and have a Legion gangbang that way.

I've talked with BashfulScribe, the content of his story has been getting them removing the story before it's posted. That's all I'm going to say about him, I came to coment about this chapter in Jashley's series, not talk about other authors. Loved how you brought the entire conflict to a bit of a resolution, but, Jack definitely needs to talk to someone about what happened. I know exactly what Belle went through, well, didn't witness it, but, dealt with the situation after. Bringing Tara in, that could be interesting, Jack obviously loves her, and honestly probably measured most other women to her standard. Beautiful, smart, funny, maybe the one thing most over looked too is they were like best friends. Theres a reason they were, they each probably had what the other was looking for in a partner(ish). He loves and adores Kayla, I have a feeling they do live a long and happy life together, with a few bumps. Either Tara could be a bump for them, or maybe she could feel what she's always wanted, which is loved. The problem there is, if Amanda sees that happen, she'll start wondering why she's not good enough for Jack, she is his actual sister. Wise beyond his years, but, still a teenager. At that age, you're entitled to mess up. Kayla seems ok with Tara joining in with them, as long as she's happy, and don't get jealous, go for it Jack. His worry is more how Kayla feels than himself, and so far, she seems good with it, that may change when actually in the situation, but, who knows. The irony would be that Carson is her "mystery texter" and Kayla has to kind of explain a bit more of her past to Jack. Maybe that Carson is the one that she had professed that she loved all those years ago and now can't stand the sight of him. Regardless, loved the chapter, and welcome back, we did miss you. Carry on how you want to take it, and we'll be here waiting patiently for more chapters.

Never tought of that. Woould make a very neat hands on training aid. And since it is the teachers he doesn't have to request it through channels to use and destory. Just think of the Shock and Awl the class will have of destorying the evil computer that let Magus down in our and his time of need. Hope he was able to recover the stories from the Hard Drive before it broke down. Was Alice able to download the memory before it died. We will only have to wait and see what the great Magus says.

Or he can take it with him at his first day of class and used it as target practice for his students.

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