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Here is where I will post comments about the reviews of Crossing Lines. First off, vic elor is writing his own continuation of his "Johnny and the limit" fanfic, called "Johnny over the limit". I had received his permission to write A continuation (not THE continuation) before he picked up and continued the story himself. My thanks to everyone who has reviewed Crossed Lines. I just uploaded Chapter 34, these last two chapters containing Mary's and Johnny's dreams of their future. Actually these are two of the possible endings I had wrote for the story, but saw no need to keep them hidden or forgotten. I think both of them would have worked as an ending, but the ending I decided to use, I feel, is much better. Belfry

THE SH*T HAS HIT THE FAN! The secrets of the Test family have been revealed!

Almost done, and it's a fun chapter, at least I think so

Yes saiya of course I can I just need ur oc's info can you please message it to me?

Can you do a Kai x random oc lemon? owo

Just added Chapter 36.

I think stream of consciousness as a style refers to the style of writing where you literally record your thoughts without attempting to instill order or conform to normal rules of grammar. Sort of like when you;re thinking to yourself and something totally unrelated pops in before you return to your original train of thought. Kerouac might be an example of that sort of narrative flow, or even James Joyce. It's actually not a bad technique to add some drama with a good internal monologue in that form, and it can make a character really come to life.