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edit - Eep. That topic description should read 'games' subdomain. s'what I get for a self-copy/paste job. As with the comics thread I have started, I just don't write enough stories to need multiple reply threads so I have created a single thread to reply to all of my games subdomain story reviews, and I will make sure to identify which story and review I am replying too so there's no confusion. I wrote The Witch's Lust for the weekly AFF Prompt Witch and I have two reviews to reply too: pittwitch - Thank you for your review! I don't think anybody knows where the Witch goes when she runs off crying, but it's certainly a nice change for it to be after sex rather than the in-game violence Apollo - Thank you also! I'm glad my style here appealed to you, now my writing time is limited I am working against both word count and clock with the prompts so its good to hear it's coming across okay. I certainly am trying to go for a much lighter tone for my story prompt stories, to a lot of the requests I have done, so it may have been a mistake to focus on an extremely bloody game...

"Lick My Baby Back Behind" with Nicole Sullivan (MadTV) Dora the Explorer stars in Incepción http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZrYPJ4Yc31g

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Heh, when places have to make new laws because of something you did, you always get a place in history "He didn't want to leave, but in the end he had to split." Another review for Centaur Mother kisakimiko - Thanks for your review! I totally get the bestial stuff isn't for everyone so I'm happy you were able to look past that for bits you did like.

Another prompt complete, and I am very grateful to have more reviews to reply too! I don't like to read other entries until I've finished mine (or, y'know, failed to finish one and the contest has ended) because I'd worry my idea seemed too similar. Got a few to read today/next few days though, which is cool. Seems to be either a popular prompt, or the idea is taking off more? My original idea for the Cornucopia story was an Indiana Jones/Stereotypical Nazi spy story, which became ideas for a comedia 'Indy and a sheep' for the "Eww!" value (or ewe value...), then turned into a Lara/Horse story for reasons I don't quite understand. Possibly I need a new avatar of Garth Ennis' comic character from Crossed, Horsecock (NWS link)... Beast stories aren't for everyone, just as there are story codes I avoid (along with any summary that says "Just read I suck at summaries"). Anyway. The title is a call back to my old "Alien Mother" and "Zombie Mother" stories. After author-note esque commentary which I think is allowed in these review reply threads, I has some review replies for reviews on my story Centaur Mother: Jaing - Thanks for your comment! Happy to have awed. I don't think I will do any more for this one, but I might do a sequel set a decade or so in the future with the Centaur son... djackgirl - Thank you for your review, I am glad you enjoyed this story. Kinda hard to hold the interest with pure smut sometimes, so glad I managed it! Apollo - Thanks for your review - another successful prompt! Heh, it's a weird kinda fantasy I guess. The level I normally aim for is the sewer! Total filth Shadow Knight - Thanks also for your comments. Yeah, sore in the morning is actually a pretty positive outcome with the Cornucopia, I think in real life it would be painfully fatal (...google Mr Hands for one news-making example) but with Divine magic it just becomes blissfully unrealistic smut! pittwitch - Thanks for this review! I think the original centaur myth was guy on horse, probably inspired by a storyteller seeing a guy, well, fuck a horse. So with with the genetic possibilities being stretched for Lara to have a centaur that world could certainly see more, but I can't see them taking over so much as appearing in Beer adverts A Clydesdale quietly minding its own business is quite intimidating. They are absolutely huge but magnificent beasts. Fairy Slayer - Bwa ha ha! Nice pun. Yeah, she was so horny she screamed herself hoarse! Thanks for your review. I was actually aiming to imply that it was just the stored build-up that was all used at once. I figured that having been dissipated, the Cornucopia would go back to bringing more normal fertility to the land. To recharge it, it could be kept sealed away for a bit of build up! 'rough and wrong and dirty' ought to be the tag line for most of my writing