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I definitely had very similar reviews on my two ff net stories years ago, the scam’s gonna be getting old enough to drink soon.
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They just spam that crap all over. I feel bad for vulnerable users who might think it is genuine and get scammed :(
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So, I ran into kind of a wall again with writing, but I think it was just pushing myself too much and if I give it a bit it’ll come back again, and I won’t just be staring at a blank page. It kind of knocked my confidence a lot, but I’m hopefully to get more done and finish the Buffy story especially, I’ve got so many notes and @julpups was so supportive with it all and I feel I’ve let them down with this break off. Ah well. On a brigher note, review!
The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus
QuoteThis was a good read. The combination of eroticism and otherworldly gore (not to mention the English setting) made me think of Clive Barker.
Part 1 seems to end fairly neatly. Yet the fact that there are no obvious plot threads or cliffhanger to resolve made me just as eager to read part 2 as if there had been, because it seemed like there were a lot of ways the story could go from there.
I liked Sarsa’s transformation from demon to angel. And I especially liked the role reversal; usually, it's an angel helping a human find redemption, not the other way around.Thank you for the review! I want to say I really appreciated getting it, it brightened up my weekend.
I have to say that while not intentionally inspired by Clive Barker, I’ve read a lot of his stuff over the years and I would imagine anything where I try to write a more supernatural gore type setting will show influence from him on me. He’s a hell of a writer!
I’m glad you liked those elements, it was ages since I’d written/finished something and I really didn’t know how well it kind of fit together, whether I didn’t get it to make sense as it progressed.
Thank you again, It was very kind of you.
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Looking through the a-z menus I am not seeing any stories showing a count of less than 1 [ie none showing (0) ]- maybe under the new software there needs to be at least one story in a sub catagory to show on the menus, but they’re there for adding a story in the drop downs?
Edit: Which actually feels like a good thing in some ways, as on the old site I’d sometimes see a game and click on it, only to find any story had been deleted!
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There’s a few folks been having trouble it sounds like, but there’s guidelines/workarounds supplied from the staff!
I’ve found that clicking on the pop up on the main archive page – https://www.adult-fanfiction.org/ first then lets all the other direct links work ok, such as to profiles from the forum and so on. Just tried doing that, clicking it on the main page and then clicking your link above and that cleared the pop up for me on your link.
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I never even heard of writing.com says here it’s been operating since 2000!
Huh, I guess back then I was more fanfiction net (it was before the fictionpress split off and the adult content purges!) as well as livejournal, greyarchive and so on… Must have missed me by completely.
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On 8/21/2022 at 5:22 AM, Guest the corner of my mind said:
Imagije giant spiders with the bodies shaped like penuses and balls as the drooping torso. They are the result of a genetic error. They were created to breed with humans and the breeding is always the woman with a 3 foot penus ploughing thru her vagina and ass and releasing his seed that squirts out her mouth and nose and drools out all her cavities. The scientist realizes his error making the giant penus arachnids driven to rape and reproduce!!!! This story is out there somewhere.
...well, thank you, if a link over shows up, let me know. Unless it’s a Link in a green tunic, making weird grunt noises and having a fairy shout at him to listen.
On 2/11/2026 at 5:54 PM, Guest Cofactor Reactor said:This book has spider play in the trigger warnings for good reason. I DNFed. It was too creepy crawly for me to get through.
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/221386500-lionwood-manor
Hey, thanks for the rec! This thread is so old I can’t even remember posting it, heh! I went and loaded the sample text on Amazon (boo! hiss!) to see the trigger warning list and whooo boy…
“Authority/government officials” – The guys who show up but only rip Bodices that didn’t have the correct duty paid?
“Candaulism” – They say some authors only list this one because the idea of people looking it up, gazing on example pictures, excites them.
“Loving Spouse” – Eww! It really is depraved!
“Spider Play” and, yep, a few pages into the sample on amazon, after the Evil Dead style plant life, there they are… but they’re all normal sized!
Do they get giant later on? Or do the government officials stamp down on that sort of thing?
Hey, thanks for the rec though! Appreciated.
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22 hours ago, InBrightestDay said:
Sorry about taking a solid five days to reply to this! It’s been a little rough at work, and I’m preparing for a friend’s wedding, which will be happening in April, just a week after my birthday. I’ve never been invited to a wedding like this before, especially as part of the wedding party itself, so I’m pretty excited. 😊
I hope you have a great time! It’s been a while since anybody I knew got married. I swear I’ve had more wicker man invites lately.
Quote😄 I’m probably going to be alternating between stories over the next little while, writing a bit of Legends (the bounty hunter story), The Lake House, or this third thing, depending on what I’m not getting writer’s block on at any given time. The hint I will give is that what I was working on is the first chapter of a story I’ve wanted to start for literally years now.
🤔 Actually since you mentioned it, I might as well throw The Spider House into that rotation as well, since at least doing the first scene would be really cool, and that’s also one I’ve wanted to write for years now.
speaking of, this recently bumped thread from 2015 reminded me that I’d looked for sexy spider times a long time ago…
Yua got me covered!
QuoteThe hint I will give is that what I was working on is the first chapter of a story I’ve wanted to start for literally years now.
The story of Eddie, and his adventures in the great wide op- wait, no,that was Tom Petty. I’m sure it’ll be worth the prep!
QuoteGod, it’s a great bit, and the image is pretty much just like that.
I’m glad you didn’t feel forced into writing this. I wanted to make sure that you weren’t writing stuff you didn’t love because you were trying to please me, but specifically about Sarsa healing Dylan’s hands, I definitely understand what it’s like to write yourself into a corner and then have to improvise a solution!
I kinda like Shannon hearing about it and being all “Wait, we can just do that? Hey, Creator, I need a miracle… right now!”
Kizzy: “...are you going to draw four cards or not?”
QuoteI hadn’t thought of the “walking biohazard” angle, but it does make sense. I did like the idea presented in the text itself, that Sarsa knew that if she didn’t pick something, Kizzy was going to get very nerdy with whatever she chose for the binding mark, either the Starfleet logo or some inscription in Klingon or who knows what else.
Shannon’s suggestions were all, unfortunately, unprintable. Although even she has a soft spot for some Star Trek quotes from watching with Kizzy. Not just the one that saved her being sent back to Hell, but she’s a big fan of Commander Shelby saying “Data was available. I took him. We came.”
QuoteThey do. I blame the animated series The Mighty Nein and Marion Lavorre for my personal reaction, though admittedly she’s a tiefling (so...I don’t know, like 1/16 demon or something), but definitely the example that came to mind first. Sarsa has her own variation on the look here, of course, with the hooves and the black hair, but as you say it is a perennial favorite of people!
Ah, you young folks with your modern tieflings. Back in my day we had Annah-of-the-Shadows being mean to us, and liked it.
QuoteYou did a good job explaining it in the story itself, for sure. I had wondered about the shapeshifting, actually, specifically whether it was just a succubus thing or Sarsa could do it too. It does make sense, though, since just hiding wings and other features to blend with humans would necessitate some level of appearance modification ability.
That’s pretty much it, I’ve tended to assume they’ve all had some form of either glamour or physical shapeshift. I figure some of the more outlandish demons were going for more extreme rejections of their original forms, like the snake guy from the Lupa story. Eparlegna was shown switching to a human looking form at the end of Whore of Heaven, too. But the big thing would be those fucking huge wings
QuoteAgain, welcome back, and I’ll try not to keep you waiting too long before I have something to share, whatever that may turn out to be!
I continue to look forwward to it!
Just had a short writing break myself due to a mixture of suddenly busy life and being gifted a game, but getting back on track now.
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That user id 1296941646 was requested to be deleted in 2023 earlier in the thread, and deleted –
Edit – possilbly a coincidence, but there was a new profile in the name Rivera created today!
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And it makes it easier for users to quickly recognise and avoid whatever horrific crime against fiction I’ve committed! Everyone’s a winner :)
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Good explanation!
Just to add my tip: If users don’t want to link offsite they can load their 250x250 (or smaller) userpic direct as a forum userpic first, and then use the forum userpic link for the archive profile. It’s worked for me for years! It does mean the forum and archive userpic are the same, but I don’t mind using the same on both.
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The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus
Review by @InBrightestDay February 6, 2026 at 12:00 AM
QuoteWell, I finished a large chunk of the thing I was working on, but rather than try and rush the second part, I need to let it develop as it will. All of which means it's time I finished this story!
Do we get any clues about what yours is about? More of that bounty hunter story? The Lake House? Spider Woman adventures? (a recent user was looking for really good insect porn...) I getcha though, I’m trying to leave time between a last draft and posting to really re-read and see things I missed first time round. I have been working on the challengestory set in the Buffy universe (on to chapter 6!), with a few more chapters to finish there, but the next thing I actually post will likely be Victims which is around 1/3 text from an old rpf story I’ve mine I’ve made changed details to be fictional, and maybe 2/3 new stuff – guy gets his dick bitten off by a “wolf” (yes her) and eaten alive. It’s a bit dark in places. Having done a few drafts I too need to leave it for a while before going back.
Thank you for taking the time to review! I hugely appreciate it.
QuoteSo you mention in the end comments that you're not fishing for compliments, and I will point out the one thing I worried about, and the one thing I took a little issue with, but overall this second chapter was a lot of fun! It made me laugh a couple times, and it was also hot!
I appreciate the negatives as well as the positives!
QuoteAs before, the blend of humor and serious stuff catches me off guard. Sarsa is in the middle of lamenting how Dylan was almost eaten alive and she just blows right through the fact that she got stalled because she was taking selfies with people who thought her demon costume was cool.
Heh, I had it in my head like an action movie, bursting through the portal, kick ass music starts, heading towards the Omnivorebus, stop anybody being hurt… and then “Wow! that’s a great costume! Can I get a pic?” Sarsa might be sane again, or as close as she gets, and repentant, but she’s still Sarsa!
...and next morning it’s all on social media.
QuoteThe bit where she heals his hands was where I got a little concerned. A long time ago (it's shocking to think it's been more than seven years since I started posting WitS here on the site), you were writing one of the K-Team stories, I honestly don't remember which one, but I kind of nudged you toward acknowledging WitS in some way. It was an emotionally driven action, and looking back on it it was selfish of me to do so. There wasn't any one specific thing in this story that made me think of that, but something about the vibe of several spots made me worry that you were writing this a certain way because I'd pushed you into it years back. I may be worrying about nothing, but I just wanted you to know: I want to make sure the act of writing is something that brings you joy, and that the final product makes you happy, without you worrying about if it makes ME happy.
The sad fact is I’d really messed his hands up in part 1, because I had the idea of him getting his hands messed up leading to a) accidentally spooging up Sarsa’s back, and b) being unable to resolve it himself. Then, for part 2 and further sexytimes, I needed a way for him to have use of his hands, and also for Sarsa to be so happy she’s like screw it, I’m giving in to the backwash spell horniness too!
It kind of ties into Kizzy’s over-arching plan though, that all the demons may be capable of redemption, since meeting Shannon, being saved by Shannon, and realising she may have made one or two slightly unfortunate decisions over the billions of years. Maybe the only real difference between demons and angels is belief in what they are, to the extent that demon-targeted weapons only target demons helped by their own willpower?
But it was mostly writing myself into a corner and back out again so he could fondle some demon dugs.
Quote“What kind of British gentleman ejaculates across a lady’s back, and in her mouth, without so much as a reciprocal fondle? I’ve a good mind to write a letter of complaint to Buckingham Palace.
...And of course, you may just be an untameable force of nature. Yet ANOTHER moment that made me laugh, by the way. And of course, we can't forget about:
“Oh, and did you remove her clothing, too? Roger her in the shrubbery, as you British say?”
“Heh, Ni- Uh, no, no British say that. I don’t think. Maybe in Kent.
Ni! Also, I love that humor can sometimes be read entirely from the context. Like, I laughed there, and I didn't even fully understand the Kent joke, just that it's got to be a British regional thing, but since I think every country has jokes like that, it still works!
Heh, thanks, had some fun with Sarsa brief role-playing the posh noblewoman type there. As for Kent… well, apart from pockets of poverty and deprivation I understand a lot of the southeast of England is very wealthy by comparison to a lot of the rest of the world (and much poorer than some hyper elite places!), but London has the most of both – but as a proud Londoner Dylan picked a target outside the city for gentle mockery.
I’m sure Buckingham Palace’s recently received letters complaining about an individual’s sexual sins are sadly somewhat less funny…
Glad the jokey bits landed though!
QuoteThe sex scene that follows is honestly pretty hot. There are a few more moments of comedy throughout, like how Dylan expected Sarsa to be really weird between her legs, or how they irritate his roommates with how loud they're being, but there's some really good sexy stuff in there too. I particularly like that even though you had her appearance shift slightly before the sex scene started (with her eyes changing), you kept some of the more nonhuman elements of Sarsa's character design, like her red skin, all through it. It adds an element of exotic beauty to her that adds to the scene in my opinion. Also, while this is less about her body and more about the binding, the biohazard tattoo is a cool look.
For some folks, Biohazard tattoos have a speciifc meaning related to disease – for others, it’s just a cool symbol – I kind of liked it as an “this demon is a literal biohazard” type symbol, and the idea that Sarsa picked it herself as both self-awareness and to avoid letting Kizzy slap something too nerdy on her.
Folks like a horny devil classic cartoon demon!
...plus having the eyes change meant I could have the “literally damned eyes” line that just appealed to me.
QuoteThe one element of the story that I thought felt a little off, and it wasn't a huge problem or anything, was how quickly Dylan falls in love with Sarsa. It felt a little bit fast to me. Now, it can make sense in-universe, since there's this emotional transference that sometimes happens when you escape from a dangerous situation, or are rescued from one, and that can cause some powerful emotional stuff to happen, so we could be seeing that. Also I fully acknowledge that it's a two-chapter story, so things do have to happen within the narrative window.
It’s kind of like the Speed vs Speed 2 thing – in Speed they end up really close ‘cos of the closeness of death and so on, and Speed 2 it’s all over, new guy to meet. Sarsa saved his life AND fixed his fucked fingers so he’s especially emotionally disposed towards her! Plus, there was that horniness backwash. A bit of seperation after she goes back to America (and possibly starts double dating alongside Shannon) and getting properly into post nut clarity and he’d probably realise he was over-reacting to just having really really good sex. Or maybe he just falls in love easily. He’s young!
QuoteAnd the next morning Sarsa has achieved Shannon status! She is human-passing, which on the one hand will make moving through the mundane world a lot easier, but will tragically cost her in future selfies. In all seriousness, I love the detail that the change in appearance is a sort of self-actualization, so we see Sarsa differently because, as Kizzy points out, she's begun to forgive herself, and thus see HERSELF differently.
Also don't think I didn't notice that she went up a cup size and at least fifteen centimeters in the morning. Again, never feel like you have to write this just for me...BUT I'M ALSO NOT GONNA PRETEND I HATE THE WELL-ENDOWED TALL- Ahem.
Ok, yeah, I definitely threw some of the transformation details in for your reaction
I figured nobody else would read it!
But I also feel I explained it in character of how we’ve only ever seen her previously with her true form submerged and hidden, whereas when she starts forgiving herself she ends up back as more of a badass warrior angel form… with special skills for writing. Amazonians can be nerds too, even if her nerdiness is different to Kizzy’s. One likes Deep Space 9, the other’s a Babylon 5 gal.
Plus once they remove the binding she can change form and get the cartoon devil selfies again :D
QuoteKizzy reached into an inside pocket of her suit, and took out a business card. She held it up briefly. Dylan made out “Ms Kizzy Dieudonné, K-Team Licensed Private Investigations Agency,”
I LITERALLY laughed out loud here. Ok, I did that as a joke many years ago, as your author's note...uh...notes, but in-universe, this now makes me wonder whose idea it was. I can see even odds on the girls, really. Kizzy probably not, but Shannon's mischievous so she would enjoy the joke, and Lupa probably has a broad enough spread of pop culture references, and the sarcastic sense of humor, to go for something like this. Kate's the wildcard, but it could have been her idea too.
Lupa is the most likely if it was any of the main four, but by the time Kizzy’s got her license and set up the agency it is years after the Slumber Party and even the ending of You!, so it may have been a suggestion of numerous other associates Kizzy’s built up over the years.
From another unfinished story, I don’t even have a title for yet, in which Kizzy and Kate are called in to help with some weird shit by the police:
QuoteHe led the pair into the carriage. Dickinson trailed along, clearly hoping for some good “Crazy PI” gossip to share back at the precinct.
“Hey, so why are you the K-Team? None of you able to shoot for shit?”
“I was asked to allow a vote, and then I was outvoted,” Dieudonné replied, unfazed as ever.
...It’s probably someone unexpected, like Janet.
QuoteAnd we end with...probably more noise complaints from Dylan's neighbors. They can deal with it.
At least on Saturday morning they can go out and do other things!
QuoteI know you said this isn't the best, but I still really enjoyed it. I'm sorry it's only gotten reviews from Bronx and me so far, but I'm also glad you got the satisfaction of finishing it. I've been absent from AFF for quite a while myself, but nonetheless, it's always wonderful to see something from you, so welcome back!
Thank you again, I genuinely don’t think it was all that great, but it was finished and I hadn’t done that for a while with a story so it did feel pretty good. And it got me back working on the Buffy Challenge, which also has been feeling good.
Was pretty cool to re-connect here, too! I know I’d had the odd email with you where I was sometimes I bit slow to check in and respond, but I kind of went through a period where I was a bit slow to do anything. Hopefully better now!
I am looking forward to your next story whatever it turns to be!
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Chapter 5 draft finished!
There’s a character called Kevin, named waaaaay back in 2016 when this thing was actually plotted out (see post with cast list earlier in this thread), so no relation to any Kevins from other stories on here.
For example, here’s the legally distinct Kevin in this Buffy story –
Quote“What did you say your name was?”
“Her name is whore!” shouted a Los Angeles’ accented voice from the back.
Kevin winced, and reddened, but she just smiled, so he pulled Willow’s face into a kiss, to the sound of one or two sarcastic “Awwws!” and a few more enthusiastic cries,
See? There’s nothing even vaguely- what? Oh, that. That’s just a reference to one of my old LA set stories. Buffy is from LA!
...am I getting sued?
Also, for any passing readers wondering why Willow would be ok with a suggestion, by this stage in the story she’s, uh, embraced some of the more porntastic tropes. This thing is employing a lot good ol’ porn tropes. In one chapter Buffy penetrates two vampires at the same time. Admittedly in their hearts, with wood, but the spirit’s there. In chapter 7 there’s a pizza delivery.
No fucking clue how I thought I’d do it all in 10k words. 10k words into this thing and she was barely past holding hands, never mind cheerfully engaging in the kind of activities that would make Urban Dictionary contributors go home, take a very stiff drink, and think about their life choices.
Little break to take a shot at finishing off one of my old “Turning an RPF fic I wrote into something entirely fictional” efforts, with much the same cheerful lack of quality, artistic morals, or writing talent, as the folks who copy and paste over their fanfic names to become massively famous.
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17 hours ago, Thundercloud said:
From Carol’s perspective, she goes abroad, leaves it to her husband to keep track of the kids, and doesn’t hear anything worrying. They might basically be grown-ups, but she expects things to stay basically the same since everything sounds fine. At home, she realised that her daughter had gotten a flat without any income to pay the rent and that her son was behaving like a total stranger.
From a writing perspective, Ronja has always thought of her stepmother as having a keen eye, so when she finally makes an appearance, she must realize something is amiss after all the foreshadowing.
I am sure the ghost would not mind fooling around, but since she is John’s natural mother, there would not be anything stepmilfy about it. Considering all that is contained in the story, also having incest without a step-relation is maybe not such a big deal, but you have to draw the line somewhereQuite right. I’d forgotten she was his natural mother, that’s my bad, although really it’s common sense with him being the step-brother and her being the step-mother, so perhaps less than forgotten it’s more, had lost the connection.
QuoteGood question. It is not obvious from the text, but there is a sandy beach named Smeduddsbadet not far from this location (a couple of hundred meters). People often sunbathe or eat on the cliffs, but the beach is the more popular place to take a swim. I meant this fellow to be on the way there, but never got around writing it down.
Googled that beach too! Does looks like a pleasant place. First review I saw noted local bars, so I guess you can also get drunk and go lie on the sand
QuoteReverse from the previous chapter, with the first scene as the best.
Keeping us on our toes with the variety!
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21 hours ago, Thundercloud said:
170k words is the current estimate for the whole story.
17 chapter or so then?
QuoteConsidering how quickly the ghost adapts to technology, it would make sense that he is from the 1970-1990 time period. The hospital closed in 1995, but the famous lobotomizations happened much earlier. A possibility for why he was locked up was that he lost control over the dildo magic and couldn’t really control himself...but that would imply he was from a much earlier time period. I don’t think people from 1970 would lock somebody up for nymphomanic behavior.
They were making photo and moving picture porn in the 19th century, he could have just been an early adopter
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I think I have old fashioned review reply links at the bottom of all mine anyway, so I’ll leave mine down the depths of the site where they belong! I can start updating it for any new stories though
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9 hours ago, Thundercloud said:
The intention when I wrote it was that bullies always act out when they are in a group and say things they would never dare to say alone with their victim.
The idea that some fool might run into trouble by trying to exploit Maria never crossed my mind. Imagine what kind of hurt that person would suffer if Maria had the chance to let some steam out…no I should not listen. If I started going down that path, I would soon have another 10 chapters to write. 🙂
I was having a bit of a discussion recently about feature creep with these things, how you gotta draw a line and say no, not exploring that, it’s already X words let’s just get it finished!
You could always save it for a “Domme Maria Side Story” oneshot 😛
QuoteI recognize the feeling. When I visited New York, it was a marvel at the walking streets I had seen in so many movies.
There’s something about NYC isn’t there? I went myself, years ago. Looking out from the Empire State Building viewing deck, or out over the water at the statue of liberty, or the Brooklyn Bridge, or Time’s Square, or a guy with his pants around his ankles shooting up in Washington Square Park… it’s all so much like the movies it is unreal.
QuoteI agree, there is quite a history there. Count Carl Piper began construction in 1695, but he was taken prisoner by the Russians during one of the wars before it was finished. His wife finished the work by recruiting Nicodemus Tessin the Younger, one of the most famous architects in Swedish history, who did much work for the king. The city of Stockholm has been responsible for taking care of the garden since 1945.
They’re doing a bang up job of preserving it from the pictures I saw! It’s great for a city to have some good public spaces like that.
QuoteI think it is safe to assume John has some collections of pictures and clips that gave the ghost so many ideas.
The ghost’s originally from an earlier time, right? Been a while since I read the first parts. Must have been a hell of a nice surprise to find porn didn’t have to be cheap books or woodcuts!
QuoteAs for the punishment, the magic is messing with and making them do stuff no normal person should be doing. Good, we can enjoy it as a story, not as a movie clip of an actress suffering the same. 🙂
Oh, yeah, absolutely! There’s a buncha stuff you can do in stories or even with special effects or whatever in shows that doesn’t fly in real life. Was just a random thought tbh, I probably shouldn’t even have mentioned it.
QuoteNice if the last scene is the best.
Saving the best for last – a fine tradition!
Will get onto the next chapter as soon as I have enough free time.
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9 hours ago, DemonGoddess said:
My fault. When creating that menu, I added an extra space. It’s fixed now.
Easy to do, and hopefully was an easy fix! Unlike that time I added an extra space to some code and, long story short, there’s a piece of land nobody can walk on for millions of years until the background radiation drops.
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Possibly just a firefox issue again, but I was just trying different subdomains from the menu and for some reason the “Marvel Verse” link under “books / comics / manga” doesn’t bring anything up. I noticed hovering over the others has a box at the bottom side of the screen with the domain link, but I don’t see one for marvel.
Within my profile when I look at stories I see one story shows under “Xmen” but on the archive menu at the top under comics the menu drop down which doesn’t work for me says “marvel verse” instead.
Everything else seems to be working! Figured I’d flag it in case either anyone else had it, or it wasn’t known about.
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...eh, haven’t had a whole lot of ‘em. One of mine was so unhappy it inspired another writer to write both a oneshot really exploring the misery and a multiparter to give the plucky heroine a more upbeat fate.
How’s about you. Favor the happily ever after?
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I don’t think I read that one, but a quick google suggests it was a Girls Behind Bars type story? There’s always a lot of room for new stories in that environment. I’d probably mess it up and instead end up with it all far too cheerful and non sexual. The Buffy version of 1970s British Sitcom Porridge.
Naffy the Vampire Slayer.
I’ll see myself out
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10 hours ago, Desiderius Price said:
Dunno, I’ve have some good writing sprints while in a foul mood.
One time I got into a really fowl mood and wrote that Naruto turned into a chicken story.
17 hours ago, Deadman said:That won’t work well for your writing. Or maybe you could write about happy things?
I tried. They stopped me, shook their heads, said “Write what you know.”
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14 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
I was really aiming to reference horror movie tropes rather than specific movies.
...well, damn, that does make much more sense. In my defence poetry critical thinking is waaaaaaay down my ability scale. Also normal critical thinking. Some might even say just thinking.
QuoteFun fact: This is why there’s such a thing as freelance archaeologists.
Makes sense. You just don’t tend to think hiring one would be a good idea until you’re turning the Earth for potatoes and whoops there’s a plague ridden femur.
QuoteThe original Scream is my all-time favorite horror movie—partly for that reason.
I liked it, but I also have a soft spot for the original Scary Movie too
QuoteThank you! And thanks so much for the review.
No worries!
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I haven’t even been able to finish a oneshot that was almost frickin’ finished.
The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus
Thank you for the review! I still like to think there’s slightly less horror than on some actual London nightbuses. They say the people who get off the N15 at Romford are well past Barking…
Luckily, because it’s a smut fuck the answer is applied metaphyics! I mean uh, blowin’ a load.
Thank you again! Just finding a bus to get on feels like more of a struggle sometime tbh. Not the best public transport system in the world.
Heh, the main difference is that before Sarsa was crazy, with her mind fractured, where as this is sane and repentent Sarsa. Still writing terrible fanfic though, I suspect.
Kizzy has likely become resigned to many events that surround her involving mortals getting sticky and out of breath. What happened to the days when you just smote things she wants to know…
I absolutely get where you’re coming from. It could definitely have been a whole thing of tranforming, screwing more, exploring the new form… but I guess I was kind of written out by that point
If I’d have pushed it more I might not have finished. At least Dylan and Sarsa got to!
Thank you again, it was a pleasant suprise to get another review here!