CrossroadsMk2 Posted February 27, 2023 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2023 Hi LHunt, busy proofreading a comic by TR_FAN at the moment, but as soon as that's done, it'll be full speed ahead finishing the next chapter. I'm anticipating that the finished story will be around 18 to 20 chapters long (making it my longest story so far), but it feels good to be past the halfway mark. The stage has been set and events will start moving more quickly, once Lara's back at Croft Manor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted February 28, 2023 Report Share Posted February 28, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, No rush….we were thinking 30-35 chapters. I just wanted to pay a small tribute to all who provide stories and those who support them, both men and women. Also, bring attention to the upcoming 1st day of Women’s History Month. Where would any of us be without women, both real and fictional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted February 28, 2023 Report Share Posted February 28, 2023 (edited) May long live the story! Edited February 28, 2023 by WillowDarkling picture removed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WillowDarkling Posted February 28, 2023 Report Share Posted February 28, 2023 Rules concerning picture uploads: https://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/66222-can-i-upload-pornographic-pictures-to-the-forum/ The above posts have therefore been edited accordingly. Willow Darkling, forum moderator. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted February 28, 2023 Report Share Posted February 28, 2023 1 hour ago, WillowDarkling said: Rules concerning picture uploads: https://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/66222-can-i-upload-pornographic-pictures-to-the-forum/ The above posts have therefore been edited accordingly. Willow Darkling, forum moderator. I get that porn pic’s shouldn’t be inserted and that makes perfect sense to me….the pictures I loaded was from Pinterest showing a fully clothed fictional character and the GRL PWR sign. I’ll stay away from inserting any pic’s to keep it simple. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted February 28, 2023 Report Share Posted February 28, 2023 Hey Willow Darkling, I inserted a photo of a glass of Pena Colada you may want to remove – I wasn’t aware at that time, it needed to go to an art room. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted March 9, 2023 Report Share Posted March 9, 2023 The thread is quiet since some time, everything is ok, but there is nothing to report or there are problems? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 9, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2023 Hi Extreme, the site is back up and running normally (hence the first new chapter in many months). In terms of the next chapter, work's been really busy and the whole family came down with gastro, so I haven't written anything for two weeks, but I'm hoping to get back on the grind once I have the time and energy. MorbidFantasy 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted March 9, 2023 Report Share Posted March 9, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Take it easy man….family and health over rides it all – When you feel up to it – I sent you some info to ponder….just visualize, you may like it. Lead the Way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted March 9, 2023 Report Share Posted March 9, 2023 Sure no problem take your time i was just curious because after new chapters were posted thread was active and then suddenly it become quiet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Donkingkong Posted March 13, 2023 Report Share Posted March 13, 2023 Hi there...I finally finished the chapters. It was awesome straight up. Imo the beat down was kinda short... I'd love to have seen her get dragged, squeezed intimately ,submitted and pass out. Loved to have seen her hung in choke hold or get body pressed .. but that's just me..and there's always room for improvement. none the less it was very enjoyable. thanks for your efforts. kudos Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 14, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2023 Hi Donkingkong, I realise my fight scenes are PG-13. My heart's not in it to give Lara a full-on brutal beatdown, and I don't want to cause her any permanent damage, because the story can't progress if she's stuck in hospital for the next 10 weeks recovering from injuries. THat said, there'll be some more fights in the next chapter, but it'll be more about psychological demoralisation and humiliation, rather than outright physical damage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Donkingkong Posted March 14, 2023 Report Share Posted March 14, 2023 Pg13 was the best way of putting it. But I'm glad there'll be more fights… Any timeline for next chapter? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 16, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2023 I should have some time to work on it next week, so hopefully finished in about a week or two. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 21, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2023 Hello all, I'm looking for some advice as I wrap up the current chapter. Before I commit, I'd like to know if I'm going to far down the degenerate rabbit hole. Basically, Lara's been being broken by a round the clock gangbanged by the prisoners. Towards the end, Jonah will finally join in and choke-fuck her. Lara will piss herself and beg for her life. I had the idea that the prisoners piss on her (or in her), and then the guards fetch a cleaning bucket and make her mop it up using her own hair. That'll finally break her. Basically, I'm asking if this is going too far, as I've never posted any watersport stuff before? Looking for a consensus. Hot, disgusting or meh? Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted March 21, 2023 Report Share Posted March 21, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, My opinion – Go for it! Sarah has been kept in the loop the whole time by Mr. K per her instructions. I’d think he’d have told Sarah that she’s not broken at different phases of the plan. The prisoners know that breaking her is a small price for freedom. I’d think they all stayed well hydrated with plenty of water. Besides, human urine is 95% water any way….If she just happens to taste a bit, it’s not going to harm her….Sarah can give her some antibiotics to treat any possible infections. Sarah knows Lara’s whole profile – she’s a survivor and a very tough cookie to crack! The only thing I’d frown at is doing anything with shit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 21, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2023 Cool, 1 vote for yes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Donkingkong Posted March 23, 2023 Report Share Posted March 23, 2023 Hello there. The first part is great but Personally I'm not into the bucket and the hair idea. It seems impractical. You got any other ideas? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 23, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2023 Hi Donkingkong, I'll leave the moping bit and just go with the first part. I'm writing that Lara once told a story to Jonah around the camp fire of a time she snuck into a men's restroom and slipped on a puddle of urine on the floor, and how it freaked her out. So having all the prisoners piss on her should plausibly explain her finally breaking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted March 23, 2023 Report Share Posted March 23, 2023 Cheeky….I wonder why our little Minx is wandering around a men’s restroom? Such a horny little slut, or was it for research? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 23, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2023 Hi LHunt, I was thinking either following a target or evading pursuers - that sort of thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted March 23, 2023 Report Share Posted March 23, 2023 I’d hate to know she slipped and fell following a target, I’d think she’d be more careful there – I can see while evading and trying to hide…..maybe, that’s why she hates cleaning the restrooms back at the manor…. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Donkingkong Posted March 24, 2023 Report Share Posted March 24, 2023 I'm all for it brother. March ahead Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 24, 2023 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2023 Thanks. Chapter 12 is finished. I'll post in the next couple of days, once I finish proofreading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted March 24, 2023 Report Share Posted March 24, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Looking forward to the next chapter and how she breaks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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