Guest COJimmyV Posted June 28, 2014 Report Posted June 28, 2014 ARGH! I should have known better but was hoping the apologies would start in Chapter 8. This might as well be a cliffhanger. Once again, anxiously awaiting the next installment. Oh, and I LOVE Max ralphing before the girls come up. Nice touch! Quote
magusfang Posted June 28, 2014 Author Report Posted June 28, 2014 So should get out of the hospital soon Although I feel a little different... Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted June 29, 2014 Report Posted June 29, 2014 THANKS for letting us know the girls got there OK. Was worried when they took the van and were so tired. Been there - done that - no fun!. You keep landing in the hospital is not helping YOUR girls shopping money. Been gone for 3 days and only one chapter up. Was hopeing for more. Next chapter should be interesting! What with the appoligies. B Quote
Flexy68 Posted June 30, 2014 Report Posted June 30, 2014 I guess we're going to have to wait for Magusfang to even out with his pain meds! Last I had heard was that at one point he had typed the same sentence two or three times and ended up scrapping most of what he had written as he couldn't understand it either! We're just going to have to try to be patient for a bit longer. Seriously though Magusfang, get better Man!!! We're really jonesing for the next chapters you know!!! Quote
magusfang Posted June 30, 2014 Author Report Posted June 30, 2014 Ok, just stuck with GITG, so added a second chapter to Going home...now I have three serials going, I really need to dial the narcs back I think! Quote
Guest Guest Posted June 30, 2014 Report Posted June 30, 2014 Please finish off one of the stories as it becomes too much to follow . Quote
Guest COJimmyV Posted June 30, 2014 Report Posted June 30, 2014 HOLY SHITE! While I thought Going Home had promise, Chapter 2 exceeded my expectations. AWESOME job! As for GITG, as much as I'm jonesing for the next chapter, I also know it HAS to be intense so you might as well take your time and do it justice. I can see it being a pivotal chapter in where the story ultimately goes. Not to put pressure on you or anything. Quote
Flexy68 Posted June 30, 2014 Report Posted June 30, 2014 (edited) OMG man!!!! Now you're working THREE epic stories????? I agree completely with COJimmyV that chapter 2 of Going home was even more incredible!!!!! Now we have more to watch for! You are a great writer but, so very cruel to your readers!!!! Edited July 1, 2014 by Flexy68 Quote
Flexy68 Posted June 30, 2014 Report Posted June 30, 2014 I do have a question on your "Coming Home" series though! Why did you repost the first chapter again instead of just adding to the first one? Quote
magusfang Posted June 30, 2014 Author Report Posted June 30, 2014 The first one was listed as complete, so I couldn't. Besides, I edited it some, not much, mostly just changed the Max's to Alex's Quote
Flexy68 Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 Ah yes, that would explain it! Thank you! Quote
Guest angeldust (Ed Itor) Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 Once again the girls were great. It will be fun to see which of them is the first to screw up the meeting by not following all the advice that they have been given. I say it will be Alice, finally forgeting that she is an android that only exists at Max's pleasure. (I'm sure that he has a fail safe built in just in case she ever went rogue. ) If not her than Amy. I finally joined :hiya:and posted "The Reluctant Hero Saga", we shall see. Quote
magusfang Posted July 1, 2014 Author Report Posted July 1, 2014 Actually they'll all be good or the twins will bite their kneecaps off! Quote
Guest COJimmyV Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 Actually they'll all be good or the twins will bite their kneecaps off! Those two teamed up with Nadi would scare the hell out of me! Quote
Flexy68 Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 Those two teamed up with Nadi would scare the hell out of me! Me too!!! Quote
Guest angeldust Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 Yeah but it'd be a good scary as Nadi sounds attractive and the twins are cuties, when they want to be. Quote
magusfang Posted July 1, 2014 Author Report Posted July 1, 2014 K, stopped taking pain meds and you'll be glad to know i"m almost done with the next chapter. Typing slower, but at least I can think straight...last attept was like a picasso painting only in words...should post it and see if the stoners can read it, I may have just found a new target audience So anyway, three things before they take me away for rehab (The Sadists) 1. Don't expect another chapter from Going Home anytime soon, might try and get one out every month or so, but I want to concentrate on GITG, and to a lesser extent Northstrar. 2. Will be offline for a few days I think, might take the brood up to the cabin and play for awhile...will try and post latest chapter though. 3. and the third thing is I lied, there's only two things hehe, I crack me up Quote
Guest COJimmyV Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 Enjoy the R, R & R (had to throw the Rehab in there cuz I'm an ass) and family time over the holiday weekend. Of course, we'll expect extra next week! Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 . Don't expect another chapter from Going Home anytime soon, might try and get one out every month or so, but I want to concentrate on GITG, and to a lesser extent Northstrar. 2. Will be offline for a few days I think, might take the brood up to the cabin and play for awhile...will try and post latest chapter though. PLEASE!! GITG is important to some of us. Northstar follows close behond. Haven't read the other one yet. Having enough problem keeping players straight with these two. Age does funy things sometimes. Told you before KEEP YOUR HEAD DOWN! B Quote
angeldust Posted July 1, 2014 Report Posted July 1, 2014 How dare you take some time for R&R like you need it or something. I agree that the stoned version could be fun, maybe even a contest to see who comes closest to what was actually meant. Quote
magusfang Posted July 1, 2014 Author Report Posted July 1, 2014 OMG I just realized I have three serials going at once...somebody stop me before I kill again...um write another one actually...:/ Quote
BigMan7307 Posted July 2, 2014 Report Posted July 2, 2014 I'm glad you're back healthy, and if i recall, you wrote a chapter or two of BITG stoned, and those turned out pretty good. Kinda like the sleep writing, it just kinda flows, maybe not orderly like, but, it flows, lol. Luckily for me, I had a road trip planned when GITG and Northstar ones finally hit, it gave me something to read while dodging drunk family members. I love where you were and are going with Going Home, that has good promise too. Did you know that even if you read for 12 hours a day, for over a week and a half, you still can't read all of BITG and GITG? I had a lot of spare time with no net. NO FIREWORKS this weekend, lol, fingers can be kinda important in your new line of work (entertaining us). Again, eagerly, but patiently awaiting where our Captain leads us. Flexy68 1 Quote
magusfang Posted July 2, 2014 Author Report Posted July 2, 2014 Ok, Chapter 9 of Girls In The Grass is up...and the bad guys have made an appearance...or have they? Quote
Flexy68 Posted July 2, 2014 Report Posted July 2, 2014 Woo hooo! Another chapter to read!!! And just like all the others, a great read!!!! Like I posted in my review, you either must have an awesome imagination or have had one hell of a life to be able to write your stories with such authenticity!! Enjoy your weekend but like BigMan7307 said, please no fireworks???? Unless of course you intend on investing in Dragon or some such so you can just talk to your computer to continue to write your stories! I'm pretty sure the female contingent in your home would agree that you have better things to do with your fingers and hands than get them blown off by doing stupid things!!!! Geeeze I crack myself up sometimes!!!! Quote
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