JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Harry Potter)

[JayDee]

The Slave of Bones now 25226 hits and 4 reviews!

Anon
With what she knows though, why would Amelia sacrifice her niece? Harry will be unable to fight properly since he will be conditioned even if subconsciously to be a slave. Thus he will be unable to fight Tom, leading to Susan being dead at best, sex slave at worst to people far worse than how she treated Harry.

Thanks for your query; to answer your question, she wouldn't. Nor, I suspect, would she rape Harry. This here is one of those request fics where the actual porn thing the person wants to see is so unlikely and out of character or continuity that the only way for a tired porn hack like me to write it is out of character. Thus, for anybody who wants to see the idea "Amelia rapes Harry and then he becomes an auror sex slave" they'll overlook the unlikely characterisation, the impossible behaviour, the clunky descriptive text and spoken lines like,

“For tonight, I will leave you like this. If you learn to behave with respect and service me sufficiently well, I will permit you further degrees of movement, slave. Do you understand? Remember that your life is in my hands and say, yes Goddess.”

hence the smattering of positive reviews, while everybody else has your reaction! The follow up question then is, "Well, why post it on the internet?" to which I reply, "because of the people who do want to touch themselves over it."

Next: An AU in which Amelia's cable stops working, and Harry is the guy sent to fix it.

Edited January 10, 2016 by JayDee

[JayDee]

After only eight years, another comment on For the Profit of The Slytherin giving it a highly respectable ratio of 4 reviews:44393 hits since January 2008!

The comment does, unfortunately, stretch the reviews page, so I have added some carriage returns here.

anon
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Thank you for your comment. The last time I saw so much of the letter k on the same page was in Trump supporter literature.

Was the key jammed down because of all the spunk crusted on it? If so, it's good that you're enjoying AFF!

[DemonGoddess]

link me to it pls and I'll get it fixed. (I'm working crazy hours so a link would be helpful, too tired!)

[JayDee]

Here's the link -

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600014620

Sorry for the delay, missed your reply! Possibly I should subscribe to my review threads or something.

[JayDee]

I woke up at 3am and thought about a story where Fred and George are both getting fucked by the same athletic dickgirl in their seventh year (before leaving). Would call it Angelina's Johnson.

I bet someone’s already done it, but it’s not coming up on google...

[Daye]

Even if it had, it wouldn’t be the same as you doing it.

 

Go for it!

[JayDee]

I’ll put it on my “Might get around to it some day if I’m lucky and the readers are unlucky.” list.

[JayDee]

Revenge Of The Ravenclaw aka the one where Draco gets castrated.

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From ANON - Pppp on January 17, 2020

 

Well. Another blank review. Not sure if meant to be an actual review, if so I thank you for the intent, or some sort of screwed up spam bot in which case, meh, at least we’re a while yet off Skynet destroying us all.

 

[JayDee]

Unleash The Beast ended up being my most “copy and pasted” story of all time. It just kept showing up elsewhere. It may well be out there again at the moment. Watching, waiting. Ready to strike. Who can say? Well, unexpected new review!

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From ANON - cherokee on July 26, 2020

Just read your story. Damn, you are that rare kind of writer that makes the reader wish the story never ends. I got off like a sonofabitch. Thank you and I hope to see more of your stories

Thank you for the review! I’ve noticed a lot of folks are super reluctant to review older stories which is likely why this’n from 2008 has 151824 hits and less than 20 reviews so it’s really cool of you to take the time and I’m really glad to hear that you enjoyed this so much! I wish I could still put our stories of this sort of length. Unfortunately most of my other stories are very different and if you liked this you’d probably not enjoy them, with the possible exception of “Corinthian Knot” in Games and “The Horse and His Cock” in books – and the latter might be too short to work for ya with this kind of content. Still, at least you’ve enjoyed this’n and I thank you again for the review.

[JayDee]

For the Honour of The Slytherin

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ANON

Ich liebe diese Geschichte, es war kaum ununterhaltsam vorallem mit meiner draco besessenheit.

Ich hätte gerne mehr davon.

 Danke sehr aufmerksam!

Es gibt zwei weitere Geschichten –
For the Profit of The Slytherin

Revenge Of The Ravenclaw

Entschuldigen Sie bitte meine schlechten Deutschkenntnisse.

[JayDee]

For the Honour of The Slytherin second review this month! I wonder if it’s been linked somewhere?

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ANON

Pathetic, encourages, glamourises rapes. Even for an adult site there should be some limits!! Without limits there's no world of any kind. 

Thank you for your review. I’d agree it’s pathetic, but I’m really not seeing either the glamour or the encouragement. I mean, it’s in a bare stone room and emphasises how much it sucks for Hermione. Anybody who’d read that and think “Yep, this would be good in the real world with real people” is going to be already messed up in the head.

As for adult sites having limits – On sites creating content (videos etc) using real people the limit should be whatever consenting human adults choose to do/act out with each other without any form of non-fictional coercion (and adult roleplay with whatever limits the participants set). In fiction, fuck it. There’s loads of stuff I’d not want to read at all, but I don’t see any problem with creativity from them as has it and write it. Ensure any trigger content is clearly signposted so that people who do not want to read it can avoid being subjected to it, but beyond that it’s for people to decide what they want to read or write in fiction. I suspect it is not something we’d agree on ever but thank you again for the review.

Edited May 1, 2021 by JayDee

[JayDee]

New review for Unleash the Beast

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ANON

The story is just a reskin of a Choose Your Own Change thread, specifically down the Transform or Dare section. Didnt even change the dog's name.

Thanks for your review! I wasn’t aware of this, so, I googled and found what you’re seemingly referring to:

https://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_116731/branch_116731.html

or this page – https://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_150402/full.html

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“ added by Rosalind 4 years ago “ – ie 2017

Now since my story was uploaded to AFF in 2007 (last edited in 2008) and time, unlike a heavy creamy load of dog spunk blown inside a witch, doesn’t flow backwards, I’m sure what you meant was “There’s a reskin of this story in a choose your own change thread The user there didnt even change the dog's name.” Thanks for letting me know.

...edit – if you happen to be a member there, feel free to let ‘em know one of the users isn’t being entirely original with their writing!

Edited May 31, 2021 by JayDee

[JayDee]

Flicking through Unleash the Beast comparing the above has had me thinking a second part would be cool, Hermione back to Hogwarts not long before her 17^th Birthday, ends up spending the night in Hagrid’s hut and seducing the cowardly Fang, who for the purposes of the pwp would have some magic in his bloodline is still frisky at senior dog stage… eh.

Got this idea of some dogs of magic infused that breed litters of puppies with witches, a secret group called the Union of the Knot, with only one or rarely two puppies out of each little also able to carry on a magical rather than non magical bloodline. There should have been a witch with Fang back in ‘89 or so, but the candidate turned out not to be able to get through his basica cowardice, perhaps scaring him due to personality conflict. Hermione’s the second effort, having been unknowingly observed with Saxon in part 1, they arrange for her to find herself alone with Fang for the night, and then the next morning one of them is making breakfast when she wakes up caked in dried sperm and strongly smelling of dog sex, and explains she’s now likely pregnant, that the pregnancy enhances her own fertility – maybe a suggestion that Fang’s grandmother was Molly, another member of the Union...

Yes, this is some fucked up shit, but the first story was popular and turning it around a bit so Hermione is the seducer rather than the other way round, and adding in the pregnancy angle (some kinda magic to hide it while she’s carrying I guess) would be something new. I dunno, I feel like I probably won’t get it written but it’s nice to plan stuff and feel ideas form…

[JayDee]

For the Honour of The Slytherin

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From ANON - New on October 21, 2021
 

Go to hell, you disgusting paedophile 

Well… this is an odd comment. I’m certainly going to Hell if such a place exists, and I am disgusting, but I’ve no interest in children and have never written minor1 stories, or any minor2 stories with characters under 16 –and as I’ve got older I’ve tended away from writing stories with even 16-17 year old characters, although this one was written back when I was a lot closer in age to the characters. I can only assume that this comment came from someone who masturbated so furiously over a story featuring actual children that, having blown a prostate-punishing load into their own eyes, they accidentally clicked the wrong story to comment on during the waves of post-orgasmic guilt. 

[InBrightestDay]

On 10/25/2021 at 3:59 PM, JayDee said:

For the Honour of The Slytherin

Well… this is an odd comment. I’m certainly going to Hell if such a place exists, and I am disgusting, but I’ve no interest in children and have never written minor1 stories, or any minor2 stories with characters under 16 –and as I’ve got older I’ve tended away from writing stories with even 16-17 year old characters, although this one was written back when I was a lot closer in age to the characters. I can only assume that this comment came from someone who masturbated so furiously over a story featuring actual children that, having blown a prostate-punishing load into their own eyes, they accidentally clicked the wrong story to comment on during the waves of post-orgasmic guilt. 

It might also be, to be very generous about this, that the reviewer began with the books or films when the characters were like 11 and has a difficult time allowing them all to grow up in his mind.  I know I actually struggled with that a bit when I was watching the films.

Granted, that was a rather immature response.  I had hopes we were kind of past that as a society when it came to internet reviews.

...I say things now that I never really said before.  Odd sentences are becoming commonplace.

[JayDee]

The oddest sentence I got was one Neptunian year in prison for that incident where I offended the ambassador and nearly caused a solar system wide war

[JayDee]

The Boy Who Ate Shit And…

 

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From ANON - CBT bottom on November 20, 2021
 

Got me hard, which surprises me since I'm not (usually) into scat.

Sorry for the slow reply! Thank you for the review. I’ve recently found out some of my stories inadvertantly cause petrification so it may have been a turning to stone rather than arousal! Ahem, I recently saw an episode of a show that had Helena Bonham Carter’s blood-spattered character suffering with constipation on a toilet through a musical-fantasy sequence and it inexplicably reminded me of writing this filth. Funny old world. 

[Guest Majin Kong]

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