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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.2 Vampire's hypnosis 600031102 • than than the vampire Zeniths with vampires 600031077 —Apparently author posted this chapter (Ch 18 only) here because it can’t be posted on FF.net, where the rest of the story is. I guess there’s nothing to stop someone from doing that...is there? Seems kind of stupid and I agree with the reviewer who says hey, post the whole story here, or at lest the link! but no.... My may day human 31728 Ch 1 • and smirkedMindMind • andippeipped

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.3 Not all the monsters 22650 • he wtilltill living • clock.d hed he • ane ree remembered • aeganegan to order Her 3600 IN STORY Ch 1 • betterse lse last • crosseths ths with • andked ked up Ch 2 • I di you you all Ch 4 • apparent itieities • Buffyyes yes • The ab mov move • hands och och other’s Ch 5 • fingers the the • smacked ast tst them • and and stalked Ch 6 • sighed,uminuming • she consid hed her • talltall Scooby too • dondon’t call me The invisible vamp 1899 • reerteerted • Duckingk ink into • deliberate kes kes and

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.3 The difference between naked and nekkid 22649 IN REVIEWS • by Spyke014, 195588: & that olloollop Her 3600 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Joe Hundredaire, 20250: response to another reviewer (18500) who slammed his review (and who generally knows better than to do that kind of thing)

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.4 A place for everything and everything in its... 37305 • tho I’l I’ll get Bad pet 36236 Ch 1 • Wil>Willow • laughedhat hat Ch 2 • hspanspan style='mso-spacerun:yes'> Ch 3 • slayer r alr all • bacd cad came • smirk.< st style='mso-spacerun:yes'> • Don’t, ll gll get Dreaming of dawn 26000 —NOT slash, but femslash! but here, lemme go thru it anyway • Slayer.as cas close • crammed ie fre front • somesome • them thatthat Treasures 24957 —wondering if her email as typed in the AN at beginning of story is wordord (extra “Mich”), check against her account email? • timer funn onn on • S’s s’s smile • it aomesomes • ope opening • man’s , wh, whispering • Thele sle squealed Playing to win 13481 Ch 1 • wasn’ bad bad Ch 3 • aponapon • teretered Ch 4 • anllowllowed • ntarntary • ofs cos coat • worts vas vampire Ch 5 • thinthinking • woulwould Ch 6 • definy sey sexual • disted wed watcher • throher her bag • llowllow looked • on he fhe fact Ch 9 • 7-1SpikSpike [that’s a 1, supposed to be “7-11”] • get he he needed Thrall 14116 • askeust ust Tainted returns 5493 Ch 1 • hsn’sn’t yet Ch 3 • “Yo “You? Ch 4 • suppose ‘s w’s why Ch 6 • chin dis disappearing Ch 7 • nodded on the the Ch 9 • now now you can’t [maybe this isn’t wordord: “now, now...”? judgement call?] • as his s sls slid Ch 11 • what boy boy • bue hee height • floesideside him • one one• but • esieack.ack. Ch 12 • tho thoughts Ch 13 • a time as. N. Nite Ch 14 • him for for only Ch 15 • [in beginning AN] Pleae ind ind about • to him him let go • seemed”I j”I just • feele yoe you’ve • saidt! t! Vikings, sires and siblings 9968 IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE) • series.t hat happens [what happens] I would, but i'm a little tied up right now 3741 Ch 1 • follo alm almost Ch 2 • speredered with • hav hav eve even • the nigNot Not when • that asn’asn’t quite Life just is 11768 • Thers sts still • I’m norcedrced

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.4 Bad pet 36236 DUPLICATE REVIEWS Page 2 the mutt/youko jaganshi, 2035185645,46 Dreaming of dawn 26000 IN REVIEWS • Samolly, 200928: -efulefully Playing to win 13481 IN REVIEWS • by nettie, 80860: sure it’ing ing to be • by LipbalmAddict, 82668, responding BTW to a reviewer, this is not a review: sorry if thakesakes it • by whoser_chick, 85382: well ten.ten. ... stors res really Tainted returns 5493 IN REVIEWS Page 2 • by Kiristeen, 17688—not a review but an author response to a reviewer • by Green, 18654: the nextpterpter ... GBestBest Page 3 • by Dust, 88363: I’m ly ely enjoying Vikings, sires and siblings 9968 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Marion, 56165: better mat a t a double •by TwistedAngel, 59926: lurker thatm, hm, ... gretorytory In heat 12476 IN REVIEWS • by Anon, 70979: ending is verte. te. Something a little differeent 11856 IN REVIEWS • by DeadFerret, 64917: empty review • by DeadFerret, 64918: DAF.nAF.net Quantum xander II: in wake of the curse 5708 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Verlassen, 18270: glesgles Page 3 • by Angela, 19084: Or w it it be • by Sparky, 19595: a way tong bng back Page 4 • by Sparky, 20546: addtherther chapter [why is sparky such a problem child?!] • by Emma Love, 21266: bashthatthat ... Xandereesreesome ... dit mat ake • by NEONEX, 21512: ue que quickly Page 6 • by Sparky (sigh), 23157: g cha chapter • by Julie, 24644: crolcroll down Page 7 • by Angela Brnikman, 24790: to love,kle kle Page 8 • by Lissa, 25745: My -sak-sake • by Kiristeen, 25836: aan Ian I say ... was readin, fi, finally • by Leviathan, 25956: like. th. that • by Angela, 26271: blow-up s bet between Page 10 • by Sparky (i was wondering, it’s been a few pages), 28101: wbe abe able to Page 11 • by kiristeen, 30706: sweet,y loy loving • by Angela, 31598: shaking withtiontion Page 12 • by charzy, 31995—author reply, not a review • by Sparky, 33265: little e ate at the • by Cathy, 35736: to thxt cxt chapter Page 15 • by Leviathan 47950: yougringrin

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.5 Cause and effect 6565 Ch 1 • bl and and a • of pig pig’s blood • of a , ba, barely Ch 2 • more . s . subtle Ch 3 • He std ind in • making a bee foe for the Ch 4 • young chil wer were • You eted ted as • takesy mey me • shois his head Ch 5 • no Th Then • close en to to • more it it • at rec recalcitrant • pass uned. ed. Ch 6 • on the bop. op. Ch 7 • asking not not to try • they se to to Ch 9 • why why did it • his l lip lip Ch 11 • tell me *t.” [para] .” • now had had?” Ch 12 • the d He He • the the metal Ch 13 • lo to to mention • as eling of —a large section of text is repeated: •• begins with •• He frowned, though. The best knife •• ends with •• So, that was that. —the last paragraph of it, which begins “Xander snorted”, is different in both places. in the 2nd iteration, it contains wordord in the last sentence (at the bac the the dark) Ch 14 • just staght ght there Ch 15 • It w tho though Ch 16 • I ‘t.’t. You Ch 17 • d bed been • protested sily. y. He • Spiad sad • e pre problem • ais fis family Ch 18 • Itlly lly hadn’t Ch 20 • I can If If my Ch 21 • did he Spi Spike • rece to to Ch 24 • than anyth [drops off] • was gro eve ever • good re for for Ch 26 • hard ard he • was his his soul • difnt, nt, something Ch 27 • between elf elf and Ch 28 • how much of a . p . ponce Ch 29 • A cut cut him Ch 30 • thrap rap on me • get of of town • has has an even Through the eyes of a child 9256 Ch 1 • [in AN under “Thanks”] writer out e ane and • infed. ed. Preying on my mind 5619 Ch 1 • of of a century Ch 2 • an’s m’s making Ch 3 • Spike him him A debt repaid 9724 • out out the window • in the of of his Binding 9303 • al tal themselves • jus the the paramedics Wearing my heart on my sleeve 9265 • Holding S’s g’s gaze An amulet, a virgin and a frog?? 9189 • spikes aver ver it • m if if we • the the particulars • well, e’s e’s certain Payback 8974 • with hinghing • began ing ing the • aoaneoaned as the • On Kne Knees • continuo sti stimulating • a te ite if • laughut lut loud N.O.D. 8319 • worn out Xr flr floated Bringing it home/hand to hand 7362 —there are 2 separate stories here. separate them? leave them as is? • will him him do Buddy's b-day fic 69445 • withouuchiuching

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.5 Cause and effect 6565 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by nokia, 24761: g sto story ... enough > Through the eyes of a child 9256 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Margie, 56614: child Xa go, go, Preying on my mind 5619 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Mandylynn, 17620: Please?ivesives big • by Jane, 17785: update fretly;tly • by Kiristeen, 19365: hot, andny, ny, and • by Kiristeen, 21302: excellent cer! er! ... seeinre. re. Warphole 8999 IN REVIEWS • by Aonikoi, 42818: to flameanytanything Payback 8974 IN REVIEWS • by Purple Mist, 55349: Gilereacreaction N.O.D. 8319 IN REVIEWS • by Sparky, 37445: this n a s a sequel Buddy's b-day fic 69445 IN REVIEWS • by ElizabethScripturient, 27033: “Bud” ri” right?

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.6 Night life 4393 Ch 1 • sharply ten uen up ... gretureturning • me he ghe game • was hng fng for Ch 2 • up, e ree resisted • i wer weren’t • and pusthe the • gappen,pen, • arothe the boy Ch 3 • connivisoulsoulless Pretty 6036 • anhanchanced Fever 5434 • was very imprd. Sd. Spike Still haunted 5086 • gentle wae was • and and sat up Predatory acts 4426 Ch 1 • caught in ow sow • grabbed at L, pu, pulling • take n aln alley Ch 2 • haen sen some Ch 4 • waad. ad. It was • Those ewereweren’t Ch 5 • a on on the • His cgot got what Ch 6 • echo os prs previous Ch 7 • chapter title in text cut off “Chapter Se” Private memories 4637 •him ey. Iy. Ignoring • as he ed ned nervously Good nurse 4442 —definitely move this one to Threesomes; in latter chapters it’s S/X/Willow Ch 1 • ed oed open • Xander a m a millimeter • Everyt we we nened • too too was • his aswn awn against • Spikre hre his Ch 2 • a to to run Ch 3 • Make his his childe • in the p Lo Lose one Ch 4 • of me ofe of • and ed ted the • of hisk ink inside Ch 5 • the car,’t ‘t you • tr Sp Spike • led led his toes Ch 6 • the the bleedin’ hell • to to look • grin at hise. e. • first taof hof his • thruthrust • tgh hgh him Ch 7 • fla flaming ruin • the bo the the neck Ch 8 • Bloods *ts *tell • have ave you • then the the deep Ch 9 “She”She’s • her h in in delight Lick. Suck. Nibble 4037 IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE) • Spike wes. es. Feed my will to feel this moment 3893 IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE) • makes wthe the small IN STORY • o ouo out in Beer bad 3820 • He c do do this Owned 3802 • was was going to • oo sho shove • [in end AN] or ho beo begin Holiday cheer 3648 Ch 2 • “, I, I’m just Ch 4 • > “...” • < “M “Mmrrmph! not sure what’s with the < and > in these 2

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.6 Night life 4393 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Susan, 14760: get teh doughnuor hor his • by sherebis, 18259: have more ady!!dy!!! Page 2 • by Foraoo, 25033: to read t. It. It has A world of their own 3250 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Saprky (who can’t even type his/her own name), 5859: the snse nse is ... worl kin kinda Page 2 • by sherebis, 6821: spoiled thou dou do Page 3 • by Saprky, 7503: react to g tog torn Page 4 • by sparky (!), 7763: rock toge lo! lol and • by QueenBoadicea, 8002: great mindink ink alike Lick. Suck. Nibble 4037 IN REVIEWS • by Cloud van Dyk, 89334: herehere a sequel • by Purple Mist, 54001: Love ‘ hon ton that Beer bad 3820 IN REVIEWS • by Purple Mist, 55357: Jawdropen*pen Holiday cheer 3648 IN REVIEWS • by Angel, 6690: throu pho phone • by cocoa, 7687: stories!,i hyou you • by DittoSpikette, 12911: the sisterved ved them

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.7 Sweet memories 3487 IN REVIEWS • by DittoSpikette, 12925: • read it moran oan once • by Quiproquo, 144985: rs. rs. Haunted 3491 • mattehagghaggy • whe whe was • Xanderody.ody • closed his eye [drops off] Just the way i like it 3482 IN REVIEWS • print.ExceExcellent IN STORY • body.hit!hit! The beat goes on 3393 • tongue.wantwants • of , th, that’s • cutting ofl sol sound Colourblind 3197 • Some ts ths they’d • ;you’re the l whe when Healing 302 IN REVIEWS Page 3 • by Sparky, 4201: read thet>act (not sure, but assume this is a glitch) • by QueenBoadicea, 20310: incrts mts makes ... ot oot only • by QueenBoadicea, 20325: got to bnew new Page 5 • touching realathip hip Page 6 • late from wornd ind it ... Damu! Ku! Keep up The best part of waking up 3068 • eyes lion hon his • desidesire • Hrms rms come Party games 3032 —inside story, title drops off at Party G • Xander sig pus pushing • seekthe the My sticky valentine 2852 • dare wha what • rackee vae vampire • entrano hio his • st bod body My bloody valentine 2798 • lightver ver them • mannDarkDark Needs 2023 Ch 1 • as lo, mi, misreable • human n, ev, even • thatse tse things • aidn’idn’t know • Whe clo closes • won’t d aga again Ch 3 • me,k Drk Drusilla • newple ple and • Xandecentcent Ch 4 • sriedried Ch 5 • he mhe monster • threlarelationship In the dark 2328 IN STORY SUMMARY (ON INDEX PAGE) • anndernder IN STORY • sil silky voice The super hero party theme 2149 • All fhed.hed.” • theas aas any • shoulde swe switched • BuffBuffy • tospersper All or nothing 2140 Ch 1 • great p” [para] “ [para] “HEY! • guye upe up • their lipt agt again Ch 3 • about us?””No””No” • took nce nce to this • that!”SpikSpike • wha what to say • e sme smiled Ch 4 • bareove ove he was • che corner

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.8 The little things 1571 • Xanderkes kes his • ing ing reluctantly The phone call 1412 • before swoopin fon for • think kng ing is • jadmiadmit • past two we” [para] “ [para] “Why do You could have hung up the phone pet 1413 • thinthings he • why e? [para] e? • Xr plr please Who i am 1415 • was somethhe whe wanted • craf thf the whip • tonguek hik his • wrapped hisd ard around • do say,say, • not not let you • ask him one thi [para] “ [para] “Why?” • arnearned The twelve days of christmas 1384 • membmember • your comiack ack (you’re coming back) • Tw whi whispered The harsh light of day 1278 —weird line endings in this one. hard line-ends in strange places. oh well. Menu 1 • [in AN] whegel gel makes • [in AN] beesy lsy lately • Ta Xan Xander Menu 3 • Wi sai said • loyok [para] at Willow Menu 4 • ideas ove ave Menu 5 • gett yot you Menu 6 • good f Spi Spike • tloodloody hell • have af itf it • S gla glared • out he rhe room Menu 7 • slell oll over • o hio his • for hi. It was e. Sh. She • . Bu. But she • wento tto the Menu 8 • do Ddo Dawn • mthatthat • tll mll me • god.llowllow • themselves.”low low said • Whameanmean • worof fof fun • Yould uld have Menu 9 • her tr anr and • ethicsn ten teacher • told boutbout • tell R.” B.” Buffy Under the crypt 1276 • just thim him • Gue Guess not • guess nouldnuldn’t Hunt-brother 962 IN REVIEWS Page 1 —2 reviewers, Ro A and Nabi A, is that A some wierd character that didn’t translate right? in the case of Nabi, makes me wonder if it’s Nabiki as later on this page. • by Nabi A, 76122: Angel reans. ns. IN STORY Ch 1 • Handingke tke the • so verypy? py? No • ams ams • floppnto nto his Ch 2 • knowl hel he • thatthat’s fine • of tingeingers • panting hly, ly, • heim wim while Ch 3 • do wshe she Ch 4 • wol wolfed • Meccallcally • supposo beo be • f tra traces • that wonul pul place Play pretend 960 • “R, I, I’m • bre breasts • againim. im. • de tde the Coming out 720 Ch 1 • Bng tng to the • weiI meI mean • thot aot again • you you two kids • T’s a’s a rather • tjgjbook • hid Spd Spike Ch 2 • be like that,. L. Lemme • downdernder’s • he pounc [para] S [para] Straddling • the handsst ast across • thrhardharder • huld.uld • Spiookeooked • door.ed, ed, pet • pajamcovecovered • explain.e see • covethe the boyody ody with • hend ind in • B was was still • to do with...you [chapter drops off] Escape to oblivion 852 IN REVIEWS • by Am-Chau Yarkona, 424: majoobleoblems IN STORY • He seemsmet met up • “Xand” [para] “ [para] “Hey • tong ang anything • helf elf around • scing ing to • T’s a’s a bloody • mehe ohe owned • I kand and • de to to go • the the chains • moviThe The • Better yetel iel in a • “Oka”Okay we • Where’s Xande [para] • I knoat nat • He’s right blo [story cuts off] Bathtime 774 IN REVIEWS • by Scribe, 359: Stille ite it IN STORY • Authorote:ote: • inis lis love’s • Spikesed sed the • barebwithwith • realmpormportant? • oeceieceiver Death becomes them 755 • shortly.br> br> Willow

BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.10 Adorned 30 • the exchs ths that • sootsoothe • eyesike ike BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.9 Cake 752 • Heeaseeased • oth other in Last night of our lives 751 • to tittlittle bits Absence of thought 702 IN REVIEWS • by DittoSpikette, 4013, in PS: loved alur fur fiction IN STORY • ot fot funny • He ams ams sex • cla class=MsoNormal> The suicide plot 685 • abooingoing —story cuts off in the middle of a sentence Press 687 • give tustoustomers • t’st’s so • slightlrcasrcastic Press "2" 688 • Umw abs about Work sucks 684 • letgo tgo think • more fun..> [para] > • quivquivering Turning point 676 • he answereeatheathlessly How to cheer up a depressed slash writer 675 • refused ent entrance • thrug deg deep It's an adventure 455 Ch 1 • Well, RilI’dI’d send Ch 3 • It’s a ter cor conference Ch 4 • wigglher her feet • youkingking • ojustjust to Ch 6 • Xander.stoostood Ch 7 • Xr’sr’s, • was ou nou needed • just hit met?”t?” • cockedauseause • freshmI’mI’m not • anntinntinued • tastiXandXander Ch 8 • to SireSire Ch 9 • ouldould never Ch 13 • “Yo”You and • Itwondwonderful Ch 14 • Cordeltryitrying • Winks im. [para] im. • tabevebeverages Ch 15 • Xr anr and • diamond.e ste stamped • ulleulled • din ann and Ch 16 • both bed bed one • reallyted ted to Ch 17 • a too bigoon oon • as handhand went • and sng bng back Ch 18 • Dilandland Something's in the air 293 • babblat Xat Xander • hreacreached out •selfself to • /p> at end of story...? Drowning 36 • got got herself • It yot you Sta State we're in 38 —wordord in title on story index page, http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?...=850&page=9 • c sto stop • V bre breaks • belly ns fes feeling Ordinary boy 149 • alwaanteanted that Dancing about architecture 31 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by spikesbabydoll, 161307: writre ire its • by Randy Sex Kitten, 179088: just acroacross IN STORY Ch 2 • head tim time Ch 3 • for a mo, th, then Ch 4 • secu cam camera Ch 5 • turne him him Ch 6 • He ght ght his • ex-wife...” /> /> Ch 7 • was was fidgeting • “as aas an ex Ch 8 • herat mat made • used to ne one of • couldn’t quite deciph [drops off, last line of chapter[ Ch 9 • “I WE WE’RE HERE.” • andl anl and Ch 11 • brush ofs, s, • You’rth sth so Ch 12 • better iniforifornia

BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/XANDER — p.1 of 1 I won't let anything happen to you 600031127 —OMG! the entire chapter is CENTERED! how very annoying. and every 2 lines there is a double space? WHY? —okay. i seriously have to wonder how old this author is. really. they don’t have a clue about capitalization, punctuation, i mean it’s beyond bad. it has a very juvenile feel to it. could you just check their supposed DOB maybe, just in case? Just a bit bent 544197390 —Author’s profile states “Hi, I’m a teenager who...” Any way to get the actual DOB? And good grief, even if she’s 19, if she’s “been an avid reader of slash (for over eight years now)” that means...since she was 11? Good gawd! Dark kisses 27116 • It was r thr that • fa and and • fannto not • pn frn front • ow aow asked • vampattaattack • innt ont of • You get get the • A.” A petite • “Oh, I’llinitinitely • afte bec became • screwveryverything • c wor work • can have Wi.” [para] .” • relashipships The scarlet letter 13751 Ch 1 • eliaelia Ch 2 • thechercher • he branme lme like Ch 3 • hamburge goo good • his dr bir Ch 4 • reservoir [para] W [para] When stray Ch 5 • smashingindoindow • tenderness,ng tng this • upset here tre than • bac back! Ch 6 • the iresires had • blacblack magic • yo pre prefer • rea really • Break the the • situsituation • owhilwhile • pro eac each • d’t k’t know Ch 8 • tiny littlewn cwn car • as lid lid down • No’s n’s not • Whichuthfuthfully • to the nd. [para] nd. Ch 9 • m? m? No, • “Mother [para] “T [para] “Time • He ha get get • Iryinrying to • drousrous • theoll,oll, and • lipfew few Ch 10 • glart hit him • I’ell ell her • bite lip lip • my litslutslut • wegoingoing • shakiis his head • able tol hel her • kno know her Ch 11 • “Sto”Stop it • alliwhy why • aing ing again • cheeder der friends • Xanup aup as • odd feg ang • by one one who • wthatthat? • stretchedr a r a • slitsSpikSpike • himy cuy cutting • the the rest of Ch 12 • was was terrified • take my Wil [drops off] • anyg abg about • out him fom for • fa tha than Ch 13 • Cordelia n. n. • recr it it and Love, lies and regrets 12852 • Hek a k a deep • let me at lesee see my • aing.ing. • the do sai said • had a ch to to think • lovrusirusilla Hidden, but still there 7104 • withouinkiinking • was ped ped with • himsto bto be • exacteniuenius • log atg at your • all over aga [para] “ [para] “Welcome I'll never love you 2364 IN REVIEWS • by sherebis, 3575: find out whaup wup with

BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/SPIKE(WILLIAM) — p.2 Fall from heaven 7165 IN SUMMARY • Post Cho Spi Spike IN STORY Ch 1 • Spwas was • glimpsf hef her • have to to to know Ch 2 • his his hands • day bef Ang Angel’s • used i put put out • Spi [para] Spike ignored • e wae was • reasoso hso he • faceeareeared was • thaory ory and • forgow a w a good • “H [para] “Hello, Summer’s • he . W. Where • “Landesteesterday • Spikeu diu didn’t • wilve yve you Ch 3 • talk abit. it. • I d blo bloody • “W [para] “What did • “I’m”I’m here • middleFredFred’s • WesAngeAngel • littloup oup Ch 4 • likat Aat Angel • be h if if he • to e hie him • and lthemthem down • fung wng with • she sou uou up • yWillWill • seemo beo be • thnvernversation • was tnly nly way Ch 5 • at wver ver game • that hntednted • cipacipated • oowinowing • move han hand • he ed. ed. Angel • not not a...he • know alread [para] H [para] His memories • anvorivorite • ancipropprophecies • thcumecument • choiculd uld never • her her did I • wng tng to • roadowndown the A chuisle mo chroi 3067 • seekthe the • releaoateoated • and ned ind in • battereeen een chair • thinkwerewere Sire and childe 2089 Menu 1 • Mam goi going • at thor. or. Menu 2 • morean 1an 12 (more than 12) • betweer ler leg • all tay day down • he dit knt know • unkile dee demon BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/SPIKE(WILLIAM) — p.1 The way we were 600030280 —Reviewer mentioned that Ch4 was missing, was actually Ch3 missing. Author put it in, but at the end of the story. Move it to proper order? Old times 22389 IN REVIEWS Page 2 • by Preety, 204661: yean ean of you An irish preoccupation 10331 • it u the the hair • implicit in the w. • was s you young • started it. , as, as • a p a passion • action cd and and he • grag hig his • calm t dit did • pens wat watches • metwithwith them • even a vaa vampire • turninto ato a • l exl expect • door od atd at two • yoe doe doing

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.25 Come, come, come 7215 —Warning is for slash, but summary states “This is not slash.” Really? Then why is it posted in the slash section? It’s Faith/Spike/Xander, belongs in Threesomes in any case. But that summary statement was kind of weird. Obviously the lone reviewer agrees. Ashes to ashes 544198132 —Ch 2 isn’t a chapter, just replies to reviewers and an AN Rules of engagement 544198133 —Ch 2 isn’t a chapter, just replies to reviewers and an AN Breathe 544195396 IN REVIEWS • by HellHath, 2035377300: not sure what reviewer means, it should be posted under the Buffy category. It is—isn’t it? This place and time 544182541 IN REVIEWS —Page 2 has that thing where the page width is static even if you move your browser narrower. Don’t know if it’s fixable or if you’re doing this kind of fixes, thought I’d mention it. —Hmmm...so, probably to compensate, starting in Ch 4 the author put hard line endings in making the entire text very narrow!

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.26 In the name of entertainment 27538 —almost the whole rest of the page had no wordord...so i guess this one story had to make up for it! • [in AN] why no Or Or • frandeander • hopas das disgust • tho it it was • eithe the them • thong.ong. • then.”ke ske said • in er’er’s • and nt ent enough • you to sto stay • his his mouth • bac back in • Gos ass ass killed • afterw. Di. Didn’t • Heldnldn’t. He even • jusnt ont over • sttintting • Gotdo sdo some • er ser said • oveselfself and • an wan when • arch nem for for one • Xansaidsaid • aust ust to • Goy luy lube • Hs ons only • thrug. Xg. Xander • on thd afd In dreams 22016 • ke mke must • his l bac back

Forever mine 544196353 UN-STORY. This is a challenge, not a story. —and— DUPLICATE REVIEWS Silvrei, 2x, id # 2035407601,02 story link: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544196353

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.27 By the doubling of our joy and the... 544195399 —for some reason the preliminary info at the beginning of the story is stated twice; but in each section different parts got left out of the Notes. don’t know if you want to leave it alone or fix it. Once it begins 23805 —general comment: this author is one of the worst spellers i’ve ever seen. half the time it’s pretty hard to tell if something is a glitch or just her crappy attempt at spelling. IN REVIEWS Page 2 • by jamie, 193328: actually b. I . I can’t Page 3 • by Hyperbole, 199657: happypy Apy Angel IN STORY Ch 1 • nothingdo fdo for • Xander. I” S” She • to serou? ou? • nternterrupted Ch 2 • oanioaning Ch 3 • [in AN] it’s my story - dea [should be “deal with it” i think] • [remove first] 03 —so, this is very weird. in this whole chapter, the opening quotes whenever someone speaks is an odd special character of some kind, the quotes are at “ground level” instead of “up high”. i don’t know if you can do a search & replace or what—not sure what that character is. (i beta for a polish gal who uses them and it drives me crazy!) • Corringringing • invisivision • h Sur Surpresses • when uns uns in Ch 4 • ‘t l’t like it? • “’t l’t lose you • opening OpenOpening • Angel barkd led lets • emotioweigweight Ch 5 • it’svingving • his o chi childe’s • tdon’ don’t know • his h as as good • turnedris?ris?” • e doe doesn’t • lifts headhead. Ch 6 • nearly hes hes her • for himsel [para] “H [para] “How...” • sobs nst nst his Ch 7 —again with the weird quote marks in this chapter (just the very first one) • calls to to his • Come and get . [para] . • affe by by that • tell...y toy to... • If he ehad had a • comple wit without • broodsionsion • destroyechaichained • De scr scramble • Spikdisadisappointment Ch 8 • arm s aro around • himselfwer,wer • hreatreath he • able to ain ain his • unheal [para] “ [para] “I really • Yesgel’gel’s car Ch 9 • nst nst the back • Dissed,sed, • of thf the shop Ch 10 • sorry maout out that • he hto cto come Ch 13 —again, the strange down-low quote marks in this chapter—just the first one again Chronos' puppet 14226 Ch 1 • [in AN] to ge don done • for for his own • Tfissfissures • was was not the • whel the the • evhinghing Ch 4 • the sses ses of time • like An And Ch 5 • the croas tas • woras aas abruptly Ch 6 • this awas a • of teet ant any • goingoing home • thondeonde Ch 7 • smearedinstinst • domina Co Cowed Ch 8 • to the the slackened Ch 15 —not a chapter, just an AN

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.27 Why not 544194823 FLAME Page 1 • by MadAnon, id # 2035372085, doesn’t like pairing so he flames

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.28 Saying hello 544192822 —Ch 2 is not a chapter but an extended AN Lost and forgoten series 544191415 —Ch 5 is not a chapter but an AN and request for a beta Fade 25230 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by katie_k, 193870: wfor for the • by mel, 194119: ‘t ‘t see that ... thisthis pairing Page 2 • by Rhonda, 194490: Noat Iat I’ve • by Kay, 195061: and the pags, gs, and • by Spikefan, 195069: I ct wat wait Page 3 • by Rhonda, 198403: wit hit him Page 5 • by mel, 224897: I’sseissed you Page 6 • by mel, 229743: rev(the(the site • tgod god that IN STORY —Chapter 1 is at the end of the story and should be at the beginning. I noticed in the reviews that there was mention of chapter 1 “cutting off after you’d written hardly anything”, and I think the author tried to go back and replace the text but ended up somehow getting it out of order at the end. I think it probably was intended to go at the beginning (well, it’s chapter 1!) as the disclaimer is in ch.1. One review suggests that this placement was deliberate, but it doesn’t appear so. Menu 1 (Ch 2) • Hngrangraceful • oved ved an • ande hde his • his to tto the • his hauncto rto • inb a mt.” t.” • hear he he shut Menu 2 (Ch 3, etc.) —Beginning and ending AN usually in bold with this author but after opening AN she didn’t close her tag properly and entire chapter is in bold. • slo slowly • boy boy all too • tried ull ull • didthinthink Menu 3 • backish,ish, Menu 4 • woundseatseated • haven abn able Menu 5 • Undeterresleesley • fteartears • cellP> P> • Darlamoremore • tightighter Menu 7 • thougf Vaf Valley • was ted ted to Menu 8 • at ei Rup Rupert • Williagringrin • hom home • Heeen een • to wWillWilliam • and h knh knew Menu 9 • musiarinaring • tmselmself • &For For the Menu 10 • have a a normal Fangless and the whelp 16273 IN REVIEWS • by Becky, 106822: still laug now now • by Godiva, 278919: and ng fng fun

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.28 You've woken up the demons 544192840 DUPLICATE REVIEWS Page 3, 2x dragonsblood13, id # 3000018664,65 Saying hello 544192822 DUPLICATE REVIEWS Page 1, 5x Xangel_Boy_Toy, id # 2035347558,59,60,61,62

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.29 I think some moving may have taken place; stories that originally appeared on p.29 when I started it but no longer do (and which I’ve already read thru for glitches) are Hearts and Secrets (544187342) and Fun in the Daytime (544189360). Ones now here which I’ve added since they showed up are Atlantis and Friday the 13. Acquaintances 544189188 IN REVIEWS Page 4 • by RemityGirl, 2035306827: and lwe ove the Lycanthrope, vampirism, and magick 29314 IN REVIEWS Page 2 • by Cathie-mac, 305575: I sasin:ain: well IN STORY Ch 1 • par lot lots • deer,er wer • sma chi child Ch 2 • kids nd a d a • Igo ggo get Ch 3 • sto storieshad had • Ju [para] Just as Spike • followiehinehind • thggesggest • blooicklickling • especialf hif his Ch 4 to s in in the • her. was was talking Ch 5 • theots ots wanting • their roand and put • ngelngel had • srts,rts, • can ouslyusly • do yont unt us • neighborhood.ere ere were Ch 6 • ne sne side • goend end up • MohaMohave • no actpowepower to Ch 7 • Did youw thw there • to k thk these • both tuo tho the • for crifcrifice of Ch 8 • up anr sor some • could bareear ear her • steal thod sod • Nng wng was • arof Cof Claifornia • for ery ery long • be diffe. T. That’s • har sir sights • thatng ing inside Ch 9 • that ted wed wasn’t • do rea really • Spiklledlled at • selfke hke he • kisthe the • hold er’ser’s cheeks • ar and and • on otheother side • manato tto thrust • staynectnected • mornwithwith • makout out on • itot lot like • theivalival • a little something something Ch 10 • Pipn thn the • she wat tht the • some.” .” He • ainceince he • grinne him himself • whereher her • okay’m j’m just • coulde ite it to • floofloor and • widt tht the • ndernder found • ove over a year Ch 11 • aser wer went • my de Bde Buffy • hurt T I I don’t Ch 12 • Werewolit, it, [Werewolf spit, eew!] • Angelld hld hear • “Wha”What? • supposemademade Ch 13 • from hurihe ghe girl • thave sve souls • ncemncement • with ees les like • agent of taw law • bstarstarted Ch 14 • offgs wgs would • as if soing ing was • get jumpjump on • olieflief as

Lycanthrope, vampirism, and magick 29314 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Spikechick78, 3 duplicate reviews, id # 236469,70,71

it's barely even worth reporting for this page! BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.30 Redefining unlife 544181550 Ch 3 • “Shit Sp.Leigh

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.31 One and only show 544180405 IN REVIEWS • by Mu-chan, 2035361758: nothing but *******s. does this count as a review?? Love's bitches 36832 Ch 1 • SlaySlayer • sght ght • kno knowing • do it ag But But I’d • br thr through • cae spe spikey Ch 2 • whau’reu’re doing • minfor for a Ch 4 • ght ght then. Ch 5 • teabut but a smirk • days oing ing a • Taking car a n a newly- Ch 9 • breakrougrough Ch 10 • in in a partner • not lihe she silence Heat 37869 Ch 1 • “W Gi Giles • hlf, lf, biting • alons’ ns’ neck • tryingconvconvince • accomh hih his • groaneyes yes Ch 2 • the othen’s n’s gaze White knight, black knight 28828 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Little Tenshi, 232918: Aer mer marvelous • by attirb, 248106: ke ike it Page 2 • by Chibi, 250251: Except th wou would • by Tracei, 256748: why woulnormnormal • by chibifae, 301325: if you postr str stories IN STORY Ch 1 • tal talking about • mais wis way Ch 2 • at thele ale as well • wipikepike! • anyg hag happen • underneat. H. He • happenedthe the Ch 4 • vesdvesdropped • if it was use use of Ch 5 • rat.aws aws curved • likponcponce • ribce hce had Ch 6 • cheesRighRight • spectacuof wof ways • feele hee he • going thin hin his • nigsharsharing • r mir mind • Theyuredured • was with g rel relief • a chancter ter the Ch 7 • us mis mind • fallas pas pretty • aning ing a • hningning • dependin ifn if he • She’tchetched • goingoing to be Ch 8 • spread e wie wings [should be: spread these wings] • (sd thd these [same as above] • walkedk thk the • deadll atl at Ch 9 • othharaharacters • yodn’tdn’t • a noteboightight • aeat eat me to death • mumbmumbling • birthdaym sum such • a re dre darted Ch 10 • gotbe abe any more • throwselfself on • becg alg all that • out foe yoe young • his toelt elt was • busves.ves. • in cheschest and • heruys,uys, • yu you can worry • liome ome • threalreally • only onetwo two days • it obv obvious • as hs. Hs. He • but’ve ‘ve got Ch 11 • daysdays later • shuld uld do • regiregister • she’s t tht that • we gon gone • Tara ed ted to • but but he • friends approv [drops off] • zomb but but one • S [para] Spike looked up • visiGlenGlenda • tmeanmeant • Bice ice and [should be Beatrice and] Ch 12 • woulve tve thought • boy was n gang along • could veell ell • Sp Not Not Ch 13 • telu anu • didn’ve tve the • wae moe more • eyes im. im. • cherwithwith • help? Glin [drops off] • se?”se?” • tha’d a’d affected • protest.l” he’d • chd thd them • strange?l” • as thruthrusts Ch 14 • back tot tht there • fac fact to face Ch 15 • and shs hus human • headachetelytely • litat tat the • I wassesssessed twice Ch 16 • he She Slayer • le dro drop • the bot the them • Spiet tet • tearsher her • andmal.mal • gettind. d. • concrend snd ... litte the the place • it it might • had t to to • Ribeinbeing • olatolate Fisi Mtima 34727 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by JJ, 274995: quicklogulogue Page 2 • by Argo_801, 288622: Xander’s rs –rs – IN STORY Ch 1 • a to to the zoo • handsnywanyway • rightis tis thing ... cheateeater • lon long swords • collapsedo tho the • repl a t a torn • Noat tat the • libegabegan • thaSpikSpike • pointoss.oss. • pulleck ack and • tdevedevelopment • tffy,ffy, who Ch 2 • S [para] Spike growled • Thr war was • witsighsigh • foughck ack a Ch 3 • ofe kie kind • lng cng • let ougirlgirlish • where’e mue mutt Ch 4 • stolife.ife. • alleywad bed began • e gre growled • in Iin I ask • y.” y.” Willow • a haa has taken • Willowaredared • wiowerowers • stoppedr eyr eyes • pointo tto the • wihe rhe ritual Ch 5 • ed ted the • wasnure ure if he • had withwith Spike Ch 6 • Whave ave you • is rec recovery • Thawondwonderful • Then tent of Ch 7 • Thwas was a • in ideptdepths • mscrescreamed • lallyally felt