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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.33 Nobody loves me 38161 Ch 1 • hife bfe back Ch 2 • headeraigraight Courting my pet 36764 IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE 33) • author has posted beginning of disclaimer in index-page summary. disclaimer is OK inside story, remove from summary? IN STORY Ch 1 • maybee a e a swimmers • was not , by, by a Ch 2 • way hs, Ss, Spike • liking ie wae was Bonfire night 38870 IN REVIEWS • by nokia, 1920271452: read sny, ny, it’s IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE 33) • and Xandndednded up IN STORY • coat uth oth one • it wll oll over • way home alo [para] S [para] Still, • grievfor for Anya • shock.didndidn’t even • some idiThenThen he • face ligh. [para] . • any of this s on on me • pretty gsecrsecret service • barelye toe to think • apanipanied by • XanXander was • concerned eye eyes • Can I you you, sir • imiblyibly • silocksocks • Xan,goodgood • be ana toa to steal • intur rur room • wearsomesomething Lead singer 36835 IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE 33) • author has posted beginning of disclaimer in index-page summary. disclaimer is OK inside story, remove from summary?

Stigmata 544170952 IN REVIEWS • i think i would consider this duplicate reviews; there are 3 and it COULD have been one per chapter (there are 3 chapters) but they’re all posted on the same date, exact same text and sequential id numbers: by Anon, id # 2035092537,8,9

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.34 Future children 31791 Menu 1 • inside his lov [para] “ [para] “Oh • knew hill ill was Menu 2 • hetherther’s • magicalenalents • the aid lod looked • the the Chosen • kne knew she • looat tat their Menu 3 • thech, ch, • twoths ths • drinkilcohlcohol • the wur fur friends • name ivid vid • shot at at her • Mihugghugged • don’t . Wh. What • angrrabbrabbed Menu 4 • exclaimoo loo • Wouldy bey be • untate ate • slim t. Wt. 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Karma can be such a bitch! 36342 • bef before he • thece tce they A day in the life of a pet 36229 • va lia little • of thf the • s was was his • to touce spe spot • Xgonngonna • eacher ter to • agt hit his • teg hig him Submission 34728 • [in AN] for checkio seo see • Even if oes oes make • she wa wit without • glaspolipolishing • my er.”er.” Please • edgeere ere his • andped ped him Metamorphosis 28221 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by nelson, 225025: until Anand and Spike • by aewnaur, 234414: but woing ing if • by Jamie, 264213: up toa gra great IN STORY Ch 1 • seeAnyaAnya Ch 2 • herkenekened • up he whe window Ch 3 • up le ble by Ch 4 • chestP> P> Once • le moe more • together.P> P> When Menu 5 • Angelnd ind in • just g was waste • roomroom to the • knew he he was

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.35 Full Circle 34668 Menu 1 • battebodybody • Spiuck uck • humilon ton that Menu 5 • out of r hor houises • ow Spw Spike Menu 6 • the on pic pick up Menu 7 • out heirheir sockets Menu 8 • moncrencreasingly • whencamecame • vampirercelrcely Menu 9 • was onrrecrrect • onronoronounced • orkporkplace • as he showshown • beenbeen pretty • as hd ned nervously Menu 10 • anere ere was no • for to oto open • watchedn-mon-mouthed • As she hed hed Xander • SpikSpike’s lower • it.eallyealy • *halt* ot* of a • sicsweesweet • Borms rms wrapped • elf elf in close • let otu gh pgh pitched • hard gh tgh to jar • aren’t thss ass any • away thee hae hands • Hf. He had • ‘ersuadeo aco accept • histch tch against • facen asn as • aning ing whine • oood ood vampire • moulasemasement • slighwhenwhen • Xr’s r’s hand • thelet.let. 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Few more Once bitten, twice shy 34671 Ch 1 • even joff off in • soft hearfor for my • be wed aed any Ch 2 • washds ths the • usunighnightcap’ • little br, ir, it’s • evenh all thl this • Don’tnk tnk • Rigver ver where • thartmartment • scream blurderrder • torehorehead Ch 3 • wantwant another • aht?”ht?” • anytherther than • oone one night • please,eed eed you • cop co thi this • ahe bhe blonde • Spi Spike went • for Aga Again • take sng. ng. • at the tht oht of • Fuckingot, ot, Xander • his hanntlyntly • The rumof tof the • witm frm from Ch 4 • nutenute passed • guidthemthem • sma smacking him • up the rs ars as • troceroceries in • again, S wip wiped • himdeepdeep • the wat water • couencuences • nevelessless • himsereperepeating • on his . Xa. Xander • one of disgus hes he • Xander stooiffliffly • thime!ime!” Ch 5 • wish towakiwaking • e the the older • hoys oys or a • for if tif the • fakeickiickie • give him a a proper • Xandad tad tried • rubbed hile sle • meetings,he had Ch 6 • w is is why • over hice. ce. • didthinkhink • as far pikepike was • acly, ly, • likelike Never again 33880 • over col cold stone • as aas always Halfway to mexico 33556 • had built the the boys • EarlEarly • the the room • hotel onl only When the blue moon rises 31370 IN REVIEWS • by Zoelai, 251043: Lot, pt, please IN STORY Ch 1 • her resibisibility • gaspe she she • and unabo hoo hold • fron his his shirt • werewsanksanked • bu lea least Ch 2 • his shd cld clothes Ch 3 • G-man?ndernder • Hesn’tsn’t blame Ch 4 • starting tink ink that • sooo heo her rage • boayinaying • the r anr and table • proteim. im. • kiss q. Pu. Pulling Ch 5 • wohe mhe make • nostrilnd tnd the • birthGileGiles’ • belitheythey Unlikcoupcouple 23519 —WORDORD IN STORY TITLE ON STORY INDEX P.35 —according to one review, Ch 6 is in wrong story—should be ch4 of story “Saved”, story ID 23989 by this author <http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=23989> i think this has been fixed at some point because it flows fine now in the main story line here Menu 1 • didn’tw vaw vampires Menu 3 • downst wea wearing • Ethouthough Menu 4 • and and find • me intot the Menu 5 • slip of thf the • hernd ind if we • worri at at me Menu 6 • to be y iny in • into hisk. Ik. I feel • off the h anh and Menu 7 • Wihe ihe is Menu 8 • every tim tak takes Menu 10 • demon sou soul have • smilevilevilly • enough anout out Menu 11 • withinutenutes • makes st ast and Menu 12 • pick oI vaI • lsprespread • he ers.ers. • ou the the couch • in fron the the • book sa did didn’t Menu 13 • oan oan and then Menu 14 • at thein. Tn. The • screamind snd smile Spike the...cuddly? 24112 IN REVIEWS Page 3 • by Ajay, 254305: for pdatpdate to IN STORY Ch 1 • l asl ask • the the vampire • thbabybaby talk Ch 2 • rightjustjust • was reasreason • reallynk nnk none Ch 3 • overm him his • passions eps. Ch 5 • the vend Gnd Giles Ch 6 • two ly loy locations • Tara uld uld like • the sce ofe of • coudworsworst The xanman & the men who love him 30219 IN SUMMARY on INDEX PAGE, p.35 • man .hey.hey, just IN STORY Ch 1 • Yeaundsunds like Ch 2 • fometometime • achotchother • make up ft.” t.” Ch 3 • “Man,Apikester Ch 5 • heshedshed. Ch 6 • Xr lir lied. • close Iss.*ss.* • don’tw. 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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.36 Memories 29000 Ch 1 • any lonand and • into theidst,dst, the • momenngelngel • the the doctor • Hntednted • tad aad a • it’se bye by • grabb boo book • Xa, ar, are you • Spwas was • within sec, th, the • smilesles les looked • protedt , bu, but • askeriouriously Ch 2 • Spikeliedlied • Xandxclaxclaimed • for gosakesake • questioned.”Yes”Yes, • fivys wys with • sping ing them • Sphardhardened • thp ofp of his • ouat tat the • exped ted that • swithwith him • she hhe head • cjumpjumped when • at husbausband with • theing ing named • boystaistairs New 29364 • eating ice ice cream • Spike a?” B?” Buffy Of tongues and teeth 29220 • gettSpikSpike off • nose pu aga against Random drabbles from RSK! 27232 Menu 5 • were hu, pe, pet Menu 9 – Drabble #13 • waskingking Menu 10 • necrickrickles Menu 12 —Love Song • fhim.him —Knock on Wood • their flat. e tue turns Wolf tracks 29116 • prers. rs. Not • lea learned that • lyinlying or not • rse.rse. Desire 26911 IN REVIEWS • by Ame, 211935: Ts fos for Inside of me 28445 • Xandernatunature to • Xandas aas all • la his his head Concerted effort 28422 • the the guitar • andointointed • weddinanciancing • Iuttiutting • Ozace ace was • Oz hOz hadn’t • out out his • queequeezing • nin-eight-inches Shhh 28380 • near asd wid with • direction frim. [para] im. • was pd frd free Lunchtime lovin 28394 • haitiniting • goo’m t’m taking • to ss mss my • mve. ve. • backn frn from When truth or dare goes bad 28379 • enchenching • twer wer Behind the masks 28261 • [in AN] pleaon’ton’t read • Sae Saturday • aast.ast • He ld brd broken • he bhe boy’s • that hn ton to us • thlks lks she • sualsually • Hell,courcourse he • girlfd. d. He • enow now just • so funny, Whe [cuts off] • I thinThe The one Fifty years 28263 • fthings sad sad seen Destined 28200 IN REVIEWS • by Arisluv, 259490: Maybe a darWillWillow IN STORY • Xandeestiestioned • soe whe who • Spiks. [para] s. • ofke’ske’s • Xandeartearted • immediatcurlcurled • hurtm. Hm. He

blast! missed this one also. i was going back over reading the summaries more carefully and here is one more. from now on will read them better to start...keep forgetting about wordord in the story-index page summaries. from p.37: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?...816&page=37 Job Satisfaction • in summary: he has tork, rk, five

sorry, here's one i missed from p.39, story summary page <http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?list=816&page=39> It’s a Family Affair • in summary: Xander takeffyffy’s

Thanks, SereneLies—there is a group of us working with the site mods to clean up the archives and we're systematically going through every story, in order, looking for these and some other glitches caused by software problems in a few specific time periods. BUT, hey...if you're interested in helping with the archive clean-up, by all means contact DemonGoddess and let her know! We would love to have another pair of hands and eyes!

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.37 Secrets to attend 27876 • isolatihe phe part • becausereere’s • thime,ime, • are w Rip Ripper • atteattempts • aie air to • E’s ‘s body • owhowho’d • extr anr and • ebettbetter • [in final verse at end] s * s * dream Xander's diary 25339 IN REVIEWS • by Randy Sex Kitten, 201738: after thxt hxt happy IN STORY Ch 4 • Idenldenly felt • sdingding my Ch 6 • Wi is is still • a membof tof the Friday 27620 • that is ats at least • to c his his mind • lapthe the hollow • enlyenly and • lick ly uly • Wesspedsped up Reading too much? 27101 • er ser stood • charSpikSpike • Spind Xnd Xander • bookbooks • hearXandXander • ivedived • mr whr what • grd Spd Spike’s • telltelling • frustra She She Rescue me 26905 • somet too too low • somethmething • inhe bhe battle • bre bruised and • ttlettle of • se fse fse fingers • tospersper • thell cll copse • Hsiedsied himself • felt compelto mto move • cctioction • vae’se’s • Xands tos touch • shaeaseease • constricted ong. [para] ng. • Xanderpenipening • Xanwas was • insidehim.him • fallo obo oblivion Xander's turn 26800 • jeansXandXander • tld tld the Shimmy Shimmy cocoa puffs 26713 IN DISCLAIMER • Eventuallyon mon my own IN STORY • mohcohocolate • tahem hem out • Oh, Peache [cuts off] • the and and I • Yea wou would • whatel wel would • r’sr’s mouths After the dance 26711 • Whafoolfool! • fantangelngel • Withoonsconscious • d, yd, you’re • AngeAngel! • Pleasegel.gel. Crystals 26167 • when he he was • We abo about • hardhard-on • pullingt fat far • at the nickn “ “Uhm I can't make you love me 25998 • uickuickly • stin ton top Dancing 25910 • inht bht black • and and look • time’d s’d seen • sweesweet • unabunable to • dn’dn’t take • in his his ear • fafteafter his Dirty talk 4 25718 • [last line] My slave. My min [cuts off] Real 22052 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by snowpuppies, 165859: lohe Fhe Faith • by attirb, 188770: and thedn’dn’t exchanged IN STORY —Menu 8 is labeled Chapter 9 both in the pull-down menu and in the chapter. so i’m wondering if chapter 8 is missing, because it’s not at the end of the ch.7 text. Ch 1 • did makemake eye • et.”et.” Ch 2 • yesty’s y’s • gre-shi-shirt • giggledo. Io. It’s Ch 5 • Headedaded Ch 6 • hre gre going • She ignohim him • you wery Ch 7 • fathwaitwaiting • response> Ch 9 • [in AN] is espely fly for you • “ Just hong ong have Job satisfaction 24711 IN REVIEWS • by Juushika, 190501: * ry eny enjoy • of tcoulcould be • e.e I am Bitch 20874 Ch 1 • I’m tal to to you • He grd; td; there Ch 2 • tauntiim, im, • offensivmbermber • plabuttbuttoning Ch 3 • who to c [cuts off] • gru grunts that • Stalking rds rds the • accatioations • do do it • get get out of • [in AN at end of ch] lessless than a week Ch 5 • mttlettle bitch Ch 6 • soortaortant Ch 7 • was red wid with • Igottgotta meet Ch 8 • and er mer me • until acheache in • sorboutbout that Ch 9 • fisom hom his Menu 11 • this isn’t a chapter, just a long AN. leave as is, or put in previous chapter?

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.38 Welcome home 24564 IN REVIEWS —there is only one review, id # 2035353970, and it’s not a review, just a bunch of ***** and no name. remove? Anything for you 24108 Menu 1 • goingoing • sayat wat would • Ifhes hes were • myou you • you for for me • temonemon • reaod aod • Yoe hee her Menu 2 • who wast bet becoming • wehre men’t n’t cry • [some weird code?] p;&np; • andted ted back • [more code] &;&nb; Menu 3 • wite kit kids • Spike ed ted • &nbspndernder • y’s y’s house • Buffs fis fine • soundse mye my Menu 4 • into sha shadows Menu 5 • [more code] p;&np; • [ditto] &n&nbs Hyper 23995 IN REVIEWS • by Sweet Venom, 181536: love bo Spi Spike IN STORY • BOWLLODELODED Fett for bot 23702 • A [para] Andrew tucked • A man ded ied in • not mg ang any more • manoringoring • adreddred • Yo gon gonna • hard as l, zl, zipper • doorne bne blue • tucsafesafely Swan song 22875 IN REVIEWS • by Aly, 169993: Spike eve eventually • by mistylesca, 199487: simply beaul. ul. IN STORY Ch 1 • ;Lig;Lightning Ch 2 • was tire pou pouncing • U!”U!” • theforefore • agas hes he droown own • ctatctations Ch 3 • he mhe man Ch 4 • 9;&q9:”I-I...Ch 5 • ther,her, • hif tof to • temporarcadecade Ch 6 • feike,ike, his • brea for for the • oclocklocks • opeto hto Ch 7 • from his s’s f’s forehead • he tht aht as • liontoonto • diamparkparkling • tnch nch • down an ak, k. • Yook.ook • up on ird ird • WilliaHe fHe Ch 8 • didn’ out out The party 23634 IN REVIEWS • by babe, 2035498322: end of ats. that IN STORY • mal> [delete paragraph?] Lost boys 22113 Ch 2 • ceitieties • aual.ual. • tottlettle • inson.son Ch 3 • you reer • of a rr lar large • straof tof thick • pr tha that • proed ted to Ch 4 • train of ght ght • soing ing big Ch 5 • neaa mia mile • we nex next to Ch 6 • surgicareadread • smu smudge was • that ate eae easily Ch 7 • tdemodemon • yoouldould • Ie die dim • tries tll all at • most pal ofl of times • dayith ith Ch 8 • their potilltill • l shl shouted • to two two Ch 9 • tell you.””Yo”You • An’s e’s eyes • pla placed • from ri. He. He Freud and the final ending 23493 • waokinoking • survlonglong • ste strikingly • as sos so stupid • shn thn the • of mief.ief. • is nis neck • muchrk erk • almostentmentmindedly Unobore no kanshin 23222 Ch 1 • fa Wi Willing • hallyally Ch 2 • atieatience • lightsideside • physicalntalntal • leshlesh • of the sts. s. Mo peata (my pet) 18314 Ch 1 • crd bad back • willsill Ch 2 • I’nse nse it • Doi>’mi> • hic hic mojo [not sure this is wordord] Ch 3 • he fd rud ruthlessly Ch 4 • Xanhearheard • was was jard Ch 5 • expng eng every • aboutes bes before • Angerollrolled • phraseverever Beauty of the beast 22878 • brokeno ano an • oto tto the • ynew new pet • oundound Rouge et noir 22870 • yyou you • pl her her hands • Hotheother • a smas has he • aorthorth • mon monsters • suddenelt elt as • pacrimcrimson • was it painfu [para cuts off] Salvation 17865 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • by Leviathan, 126486: keep p, ep0, eh? IN STORY Ch 1 • in tiddliddle Ch 2 • be eabut but Ch 3 • Shde sde sure Ch 4 • very loime ime • night bef [para cuts off] Ch 5 • expectinem. em. • Who c wha what • rry.rry.” • bit?”ike ike asked • somethingody,ody, • completelyd atd at Ch 7 • thewer wer to Ch 8 • isubtsubtle • fig thg the Ch 9 • SpikSpike’s Ch 10 • deous ous • shirt,ike ike • uptchitching • Xaleaslease • called B Spi Spike • u wat watch • slipthrothrough Ch 11 • hips ips • ThanThanks • d whd what Ch 12 • png Bng Bran • Top, Xp, Xan • coftabltable Ch 13 • t An Anthony • Soke pke pushed • earignsigns • thght ght • igerigerator • wouave ave Ch 14 • telephongrilgrily • da.pikepike • f Th That • Xan,Xan, you • throwinge spe spaghetti • nets ets of Ch 15 • hrkedrked • you.ve jve just • strtenetened • Okaouldould • you you going • Fornkinnking Ch 16 • “Will!”ike ike • he ihe irony • for bac back the The art of breaking 22633 • Thiftyifty • hin inn in a • theculiculine • glistening,ty lty • sounft wft was • Sy mey meeting [not sure if this is wordord] •eatheathy • th heh her penchaor hor hiding • ily hly he’d • flusflushed • knng tng the • caresshis his • cond hid his • becg mag mates • on echeecheek • ttimetime • Seeiovemovement • cforeforehead • smallent,ent, • werainrained Three sheets 14861 Ch 1 • consg lag large • whichARE!ARE!” • We’rWe’re not • hnd dnd downed • Xander,houghough Ch 2 • Micha n crn croaked • picnervnervously • blue cou course • Michan’t n’t answer • innt ont of • fune gre grabbed Ch 3 • be fulfi. Th. There • permission.you you Ch 4 • wrroomrooms? Ch 5 • lie.one one would Ch 6 • some of tishaisha have • I ays*ays* notice • and tof tof the • couork ork Ch 7 • mah’mah’s [should be Rushmah’s] • eyew.rew.rew. • tahe ghe good • therwayrway • myt cht chance • uot al unc uncomfortably • I kneou* ou* wouldn’t • “Yoid yid you • Kennedroomroom • Xans nis nipples

Salvation, 17865 IN REVIEWS Page 2 • duplicate review by Jessica—136831, 136832

BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.39 To wish upon a star 38258 IN SUMMARY • thbirtbirth of IN STORY • yet eveear ear this • performed thitualtual • at birtbirth of • red sud supreme Purgatory 22483 • ton to the • just a nt tnt to notice • thournourney • sta stars In the closet 22037 • ssed sed to be • sto she shelves • pbly bly just • fake a seizur a h a heart • Youa toa total • he’d alwaysughtught • know w was was • have a beaul mol mouth • somng?ng?” There • Ladidndidn’t • Larryhoulhoulders • running hinguengue in “ks.ks.” Peel me up 21710 IN REVIEWS • from DittoSpikette 166551: Very enjoyab:p D:p IN STORY • going ave ave to • around tlistlistening Lingerie 20875 Ch 2 • Xander haat lat look • figures –fy afy always Ch 3 •Hchoschosen perfectly Ch 4 • Smooth aneamyeamy Crush 10496 Ch 1 • around toom.oom • at sig sight • rustlin his his left • teelieelings coursing Ch 2 —this belongs in this author’s Harry Potter story, Trials and Tribulations Ch 3 —same thing here: this chapter belongs in some other story. i have no idea where it came from, it’s not googling for me...don’t see any likely ones by her on AFFN —no author link showing in Ch 3 in any case He's perfect 20311 IN REVIEWS • from DittoSpikette 166404: againcellcellent IN STORY • tthisthis Do I but dream? 19861 • “werewere hard • Jld Jonathan • overltimitimistic,” All Hallows Eve 18311 —there’s a ton of gaelic interspersed in here. i suppose we just have to hope THAT is all correct, i have no idea but it doesn’t appeared to be wordord-ed in the gaelic bits Ch 1 • wasn bro brooder • nothnother • backBuffBuffy • the nigeforefore • a rdreadream • tro trouble • anrnedrned • Black cas wis with Ch 2 • nightandeander • theeteretery • reassgly.gly • and w As As the Ch 3 —perhaps this is considered beta-ing, but at the head of the chapter it says “part 4” and should be 3, as the rest are numbered the same “part” as the chapter and pull-down menu order they are. • hdon’don’t • “Explain. “ Th” The Ch 4 • Weirdern thn the whold • thightight • mak gre great • his plcladclad Ch 6 • and tof hof his • lingling kisses • the the crime • mentments survive Ch 7 • cackland and • What lovinm wam was • Ethouthough so • Spiroonrooned as • iSpikSpike’s • plistatstate • from ing ing him Ch 8 • probtherthere Ch 9 essiessing • pentm inm into • too fe foe for • and dct tct thee • breathlesssperspers Ch 10 —not sure why this chapter is headed “10b”. there is no 10a. • witger ger at • bondernderneath • tg tog to do I never 19442 • glasglass down • up Fup Friday • wor world • bitg abg about • mbermbering Caleb • light ond snd sat • hanthe the • andd, “d, “I never Reaching out in the darkness 17721 Ch 1 • hersen hin his • hu, hunting • tou touch • iace.ace • w Spi Spike? Ch 2 • he whe watcher’s • simplhan han the • mto hto him • hiroatroat and • Sl [para] Sleep was hard • ilesiles turned • ofk dok done • concon mon made • theemenement’s • pouindinke hke his • lihis,his • oursourse • mis eys eye Ch 3 • asn’asn’t a • cou course • a man’s ? “? “I wrapped • roomroom • in thosee eye eyes • througlayelayer • too f Rup Rupert Ch 4 • in in a deep • ‘imood ood Ch 5 • eagero tho the • and ue sue stroked • Giles le clo closer • ovis. is • youser.ser • gro in in return • shudout.out • holdinm tim tight • shudderend tnd trembled • amg thg thrusts • Archeverevery • at thy hiy his • deebitebite • tips ips of his It's a family affair 16268 IN REVIEWS • by Susan 146099: enjoyed ing ing this IN STORY Ch 1 • acceptee.phe phone • appece ace and • DaBakeBaker? • year?ndernder • antchetched the • “Tha”That’s my • aper!per!” • in the the other • at tht thinker • lifor for once • uppep anp and • ugh ugh new eyes • geu sou some more • lit a cigte. te. • er wer was • Does he still do th [para cuts off] • examfor for the • sm and and went • yearsy any and • AT-AT’s [not sure if this is wordord or not?] • khim him • lickes lis lips

http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=22077 What grief teaches, 22077 • This never got around to being a story; ch.1 is only a summary and breaks off and that’s all there is; remove?

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 1 Decisions, decisions (600031854) In reviews —au appears to have corrected his disclaimer but not removed your review (3000022459) saying that needs to be done. don’t know if you care. Buffy's life after (16563) In reviews Page 1 • by spiked (115664): geteoneeone to read it [this cracked me up because this review is solely to say get someone to check your spelling—and it’s glitched so it’s misspelled! hee hee, i take ‘em where i can find ‘em] • by KAIRO (129832): a win sto story Page 2 • in DestinyRususell (134200): Letting yoow..ow... • in wyvern (134412): and faith’sponsponse was • in wyvern (135166): enjoying ea you your • in mike (138317): would be incrediblsappsappointed if • in wyvern (140574): hfaitfaith can Page 3 • in demonblues (142607): reaction to f’s ‘s confession Page 4 • in Annie1230 (148091): story anhinkhink you —oddly, there are no glitches in the story itself. i’m wondering if at some point it was already read by someone who just didn’t think to look for glitches in the reviews, only the story? it’s certainly of an age where i expected to see some. ah well.

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 2 Campfire tales (600031156) —this is another one where except for the first paragraph in each chapter, there is a + in front of each paragraph. happened in a story a couple of archive pages back, too. don’t know if it’s a glitch, can’t imagine it’s deliberate.

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 3 Arf arf, psycho (600031155) —in both chapters, for some reason there is a + in front of every paragraph except the opening one. do you think this is intentional on the part of the au? weird. Slayers: academy years (600030376) —this is a cross with D.E.B.S. and the characters are a generation beyond buffy, faith, et al. so they are all OFC. this takes place in the world of buffy but with all made-up characters...so i’m not even sure it can really be considered a buffy fic? Thanks for taking care of my body faith (19486) In reviews Page 1 • by fc (136451): Wveryvery hot (think this is a glitch, not positive) • by flowergirl (149564): problem with nau nauseating In story —a goolecap w/o any glitches?! THAT’S a first! there’s no specific main pairing in this fic. everybody is doing it with everybody else, but there aren’t really any 3-somes, just a lot of multiple pairings! i would leave it under femslash/root.

Thanks for taking care of my body faith (19486) In reviews Page 1 • robert l’merd (141677): flame. (deserved, but still.)

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 5 Destini comuni (600030408) Ch 1 • not a chapter, only an AN

Dealing with devils (600030591) http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030591 —NOT A BUFFY STORY. this story really confused me until i realized the summary says “spin-off”. well, it is. there isn’t one single BtVS character in it! the central 2 seem to be Leigh and Jamie, both of whom I THINK are female which must be why the au put it in femslash. but other than mentioning slayers (none in particular, just the concept of slayers) this is NOT buffy at all. i don’t even think it should be in the buffy category but possibly in original fics? i dunno. definitely AU if it stays in buffy.

Faith's in charge (600030653) In reviews Page 1 • dup reviews by Ajrex35 (3000018811, 3000018813)

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 7 gladiatrix (544216567) Ch 1 • looked for her opponent[some weird symbols here, repeated thru the text; supposed to be apostrophes, not sure what happened] —this is only in Ch1; after that the au seems to have figured it out and fixed the problem The courtship of buffy summers (600030174) Ch 45 • not a chapter, just an AN

It all started with a good book (600030467) In reviews —au replies with her own “review” to a LOT of the reviews in here. is that okay? certainly bumps up the [ahem] review count...but if it’s allowed, disregard. What could have been (22490) In reviews Page 2 • dup reviews by drowned_star (228457, 228459)

Help find!!! (600030509) —3 “chapters” of requesting help finding a story that has Mysteriously Disappeared, no story here http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030509

In the kingdom of the blind (600030585) —there is only one chapter which is really just an AN explaining that she’s not ready to post the story yet!!! no story here story link: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030585