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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 28 Losing it (ID 17715) In reviews (is it expecting too much for them to be coherent here? yeesh! i guess so) Page 1 • by Diva (ID 118880): to see anotherh cha thi this am Page 3 • by Jane (ID 134231): I love the wou aou are making • ditto: because a little bitthe the waiting Page 4 • by spiked (ID 147673): lets have an upd yo you’re Page 5 • response by au, Kye (ID 155699): hope I won’t disant ant anyone Page 6 • by lele angel03 (ID 195350): bexause se no no sex its Page 8 • by lele angel03 (ID 220526): love it..alwayvingving it Page 9 • by lele angel03 (hmmm!) (ID 258840): in it like hoere ere relationship Page 10 • by toria (ID 289664): the chaps andops,ops, i was Page 11 • by Diva (ID 289827): OMG I d thd the surprise • by cat (ID 290262): at firstt tht this Page 12 • and once again, sliverblade (who i think couldn’t spell even when he was making up his author name) threatens to kick an author’s ass. i think he lives for that. good grief. In story Ch 1 • my love anymor [para] Ap [para] Apparently Ch 2 • love you sch.”ch.” • eyes anile ile as I Ch 3 • expect her toso fso forward • it is not sith ith a boy Ch 4 • heard Mrssay say that • or”unsafex...tex...to an • to her mom [para] “Mo [para] “Mom, Ch 5 • Come and siffy.ffy. • less than...supive,ive, but • as if rberibering Ch 7 • dream about me [para] .” [para] .” • yet, ngelngely • smile and se bac back • ear and mouldoulder Ch 9 • fall over [para] “A [para] “Ah, nothing • just as ea as as mine • that’s what ikes.kes.” Ch 11 • onto thadstadstone directly • How I k I know you Ch 12 • in AN: while and a I wanna know hoch Ich I’ve lost • do me the honf bef becoming Ch 14 • alright?” [para] let let out • to Red? [para] Bug [para] But I beat Ch 15 • absolutely posipositively ready Ch 17 • know thatwe dwe don’t • feel so goo [para] I [para] I barely • feel it brpastpast the first Ch 18 • my thigh [para] I [para] I look • you’rriourious, aren’t • doin’ the runn” [para] “ • added ano. Fo. Fourteen • th. th. I think • that’s justt a t a soul mate Ch 19 • lovelove you Buffy • fingers into hai hair Ch 20 • her mouthmy nmy neck • problem [para] Wh [para] What the • black contrastigaingainst the • been tlothlothes demon • changes fseduseductive to annoyed • cock throug box boxers • still able rocerocess logical Ch 21 • just slowlfts fts her arm • The breattchetches in my • my breasts anstanstantly • leans over anssessses her . . . a sigh anans ans her • “Wi.” [para] .” • But...iftay tay with Ch 22 • best breat knt known • pleaslievlieve me Timeless faith (ID 36740) In summary (inside story): • where thook ook ended • plus at the end of her WARNING in each chapter she says “Adult themes (someday, I plan on being one too)—possible minor? no real other reason to suspect this other than this warning thing. In story Ch 1 • &qu hav have to do • says, inntlyntly • Look me in thes aes and tell Ch 2 • &q I’v I’ve been • Thinking they won’td hed her back • exactly asell ell you • asks.low low nods • spendit ait all on the • line woul gon gone soon • &n [para] Dawn goes over Ch 3 • she’s just so sw&quo” Faith • time” Wilsayssays • Well, geed. d. You and • Willow staro pro protest • God,etimetimes • Dawn&quoaithaith teases • &quYeahYeah • style?”th gth grins • and rctedcted that • have ad ‘ud ‘un • visibly u, cl, clearly • w caw can you do • < sty style=’font-family:”Century Gothic”’>”Trouble? Dawn? • obvious quen. n. • don’t caruot;uot; Faith —bazillion tons of space after last line of chapter for some reason Ch 4 • looks dot tht the sleeping • &quWellWell • where am I?’ p> (there seem to be a lot of code-type glitches in this one) • probabld a d a good laugh • herself [para] pan> [para] • back for her room. [para] p> [para] • &”’>” I know I’m kinda • thinks to hlf • think I’dspanspan>do something • foreman’s ileriler. • f !sf !supportEmptyParas]> • < sty style=’font-family:”Century Gothic”’>” I mean, she • year or two.p> • pouting, &quout tut that was • asks, uney, &y, “ Why • what is it?t; Wt; Willow • in an &q up& up” • of this f, bf, but some • disappointment singsing her • there, there hoquotquot; Faith • lasslass=MsoNormal> • the speBut But it’s • Whawerewere...you • brought her back!” [para] /p> Ch 5 • say hinghing, just • &qu>” You’re funny • see her f She She turns • t;B?t;B?” She asks • &qu>”N-N-No, B • Nou’reu’re not dead . . . She continuequotquot; • lasslass=MsoBodyText>” Well, we got Ch 6 • attacked by ach och of vampires • expres gui guilty and • leave it like . We. We all • &;Wel;Well, you’re done • ndifndif]> • replies, &q do do we know • lasslass=MsoNormal>” Whuot;uot; She asks • o:p> Ch 7 In summary: • Summer of h&quh In chapter • p clp class=MsoNormal>Tara looks at her • She nearuns uns into . . . /p> • fridge raid?”< < • &q’>” You ok • in the morning&qu Huh? —after this paragraph i think she forgot to end the italics tag because rest of chapter is in italics, mistakenly • &;Gee;Gee, Dawn • if]> • have reasoDawnDawn • happened ted hed her heart • receiver atarttarts dialing • temporary m su superiority • not be c’> breakfast&q Buf Buffy’s Ch 8 In summary: Seasonsfaitfaith • help frara,ara, Xander • she be left e?&qe?” Buffy • lasslass=MsoNormal>” Hey... P-nut • lasslass=MsoNormal>” Of course! • speechl Tot Totally pre prepared • And I’m bloway.way. God • light of it,ot; ot; Swiss-cheese • looks puz. &q. • fhead bacme ame alone • &nbs[end[endif]> • couple of shoulbagsbags • t; It; Isn’t that Ch 9 • An embared ed silence • They’re iddeidden for a • but firm.an> • didn’t know, &; Sh; She stops • Buffy is... flummoxed . What’d I do? God, what’s wrong? —at this point i think she forgot to close her italics tag YET AGAIN as rest of chapter is mistakenly in italics Ch 10 • smiles at F. Sh. She shakes • don’t wha what to do here • feel you’re e hee helpin’ • no, I git&qit” Buffy • fighfights him, but • Buffy is y, wy, waiting • Burummrummages through Ch 11 —after “walks back to her room to dress” there is a line of code that is written out in text • To the hospital. doctdoctor. • Buffy tra off off, not • whae’s e’s doing • for soeasoeason feeling • Yes honey,&nbbut but only • &quure,ure,honey Ch 12 • first line after summary etc.: &n • in frof hef her, but • her vosmalsmall, afraid Ch 13 • isn’t thoughouching • my true aspeOf cOf course • with her huaithaith is overwhelmed • It’e ofe of the very • feels as er ser soul Ch 14 • Herathiathing is slow • It’s nge nge to her • &quoawn awn says • addresses Dawn, &q Who Wh ARE • She will liveow aow and die • even the novicectitctitioners to • didn’t it Rt? Ht? Having • clasclass=MsoNormal> • consume thildiilding • what she’ll do.” [para] &nb> • his et, et, extracts • clasclass=MsoNormal>”Good • Faith!&q Buf Buffy calls • We can help...&; Ch 15 • But she’oppeopped struggling • ndifndif]> • Wils vos voice . . . betrayaluot;uot; But • I w giv give in • saying Willow’s evil?t; Ht; His face • I c bel believe that • can’t accshe’she’s gone • she wasallyally wired • She’s restinw. Sw. She’s • &quanywanyway, she • make any noise. [para] &nb> • then?&quotffy ffy says, • Wi coc cocks her head Ch 16 • be takene ofe of once • They shobe kbe kissing • Coeo:p>o:p> • walks into traitraining room • cla class=MsoNormal>” Ahhh... tired • clasclass=MsoNormal>” Act?” • Dawn to:p> • Fai Faith...i com coming • doesdoesn’t finish • &; Ac; Actually • havne ine it • and abs absorbs it into • out, gng hng her to throw • ground shud aga again • I’t f’t find Buffy • al’>” it would appear • screams at him. [para] if]> Connections (ID 36114) In reviews • by cat (ID 285149): so would hyou you better • by Anon (ID 285187): youta mta make In story • just jumpyou you and Excess baggage (ID 35961) • not that much.” [para] /p> • f !sf !supportEmptyParas]> • you weeadyeady to hear • don’t yoll mll me now • You okot; • Uquott dt did you • YI knI know but Graduation (ID 35962) • I did th reg regretted • they left the . [cuts off, not sure if it’s a glitch or au oversight] • Itn>It’s your • Shn>She turned • You perhperhaps a year • ok now.” /p> • brunette fros shs she found Things discovered while shopping (ID 35689) In reviews • by Haggis (ID 289227): finds out whatdelidelia is doing In story • in summary: Cordelia. Sometduriduring the • Cordelia politel>tol>told her • playin’ dress-uNot Not in • You me wme will go Anything goes (ID 34690) • make it ha for for me to • And esereserves better One: the one where i read your mind (ID 34667) In reviews • by wilcat (ID 273748): this storyr thr that you In story • French babies lear. ID. IDIOT. • Buf#822#8221; he stopped her • feet#822#8221; She • This is andinnding • him.RHe cHe could • Her eyes are ong.&ng.” • passed out in tschoochool cafeteria • had beesaulsaulting her • as burden,th th seemed • not the u sel self-assured • lips at the ima image • one tiist ist in her • afraid tha I c I come too • dew clingto tto the • voiceset aet and • office to er ier it • He frelirelief that • just go stra fro from patrol • Like her, owneowner of the • more than slrealready did • mind wandeand and now • having herlooklook for the • She didnt t;t think that • Mr. Giles221;221; She replied • at the pinzz. zz. • bright, all ligss, ss, inside • past his ime,ime, the sun • coaxing from Faith (followed by a long line of --------------< ?) • Giles stifled ah ofh of frustration • over to hehe She Summers • you two dot hot have a paint • good. RReliRelieved Joyce • Wip>Willow recalled • on Faith’se. Te. The tiny • Faith saw thaxiouxious look • couldn’t beliet. Tt. To be here • alerted themJoycJoyce arrival Forbidden fruit (ID 34407) Ch 2 *Mmmlovelove waking • over buffy e whe whispering • * cho Wil Willows —the last reviewer who says these 2 chapters are reversed is correct, i think. 2 should come first. i suspect she had them both written and posted in the wrong order. Smitten (ID 27192) In reviews Page 1 • by Tab (ID 215626): wdid did not see. . . Im kinda h to to see Page 2 • by EvilDoer (ID 215783): dead...a. [para] g. [para] great • by lemons (ID 216108): angel... oll [para] ll • by Jane (ID 217372): I wie che checking Page 3 • by lemons (ID 218591): hanging on every damrd! rd! please • by Jane (ID 218693): priorities stht, ht, woman • by Dylan (ID 220848): feeling ‘liomeoomeone was Page 5 • by Dylan (ID 269833): before. n’t n’t know what In story Menu 1 • Buffy of beihickhicken, and • and followed Faith [para] Fai [para] Faith was leaning • nerve to anytanything • Aalinaline pumped • at her ngelngely, like they were woing ing about • shrugged, thevilevil-may-care • Shunchunched herself • cleavage-baringk tok top and • sure as helln’tn’t disappointment Menu 2 • of the BronzShe She felt Menu 3 • tongue out, feg thg the heat Menu 4 • of Faith’s motooktook her • where they werarlyarly joined • wink-w nud nudge-nudge Menu 5 • Buffychedched for Faith’s Menu 6 • read Faitconcconcern in the • wouldn’t let her bs des desires • or elf.elf. Please • want Giles to . S. She didn’t Menu 7 • nig night outside • where she’dten ten it • sheets. fy gfy gasped Menu 8 • Buflenclenched her jaw True faith (ID 29500) In reviews Page 2 • by AnnaG (ID 235663): Is tha coa connection Page 3 • by drowned_star (ID 235732): as long as there’s mof itf it • by lycanthrope (ID 236109): before the. his is Page 4 • by feather (ID 236375): feeling the sp bet btween Page 5 • by poet (ID 237137): up as Faith. biantiant. So • by Dylan (ID 237178): Yay fhe whe wonder • by PhOeNiX (ID 237447): waiting for nextnext chappie Page 9 • by feather (ID 267638): just so RIGits its like • by ELR (ID 268633): write a kics sts story and —this review ID 268633 is duplicated as 268634, remove dup In story Ch 1 • her should The The girl • none of her buss. ss. Somehow • Th [para] The girl’s • You’re her brot” “ Then • Tru said [para] “I [para] “It’s kind Ch 2 • could r Har Harri Ch 3 • She looked ely lly like Ch 4 • years ago,” shed. d. Ch 5 • stuttered on the other ef thf the li [para] T [para] Tru glanced Ch 6 • imply wver ver spasm Ch 8 • silently recithe the number • Boy mou made your Ch 11 • out of nre, re, like lightning Ch 12 • and felffyffy’s laughter • returning the prre. re. Buffy Ch 13 • knew why Willod bed believed Ch 14 • cra cracked her • next to Faitskinskin inside • looked upher-her—they • as thevatevator doors Ch 15 • or so Buffy tht, st, she • going downhillr sir since • alive wa lia little • part of the plan, th [cuts off] Ch 16 • Truled led and • shaft of the Scytheuffyuffy could • stupid to stop fing, ng, and • Because Ickedcked you • Shved ved a hef a f a lot more . . . ‘cause s bus busy killing • ogling your doppelgan” [para] “ [para] “What Ch 17 • was gone’d e’d be asking • I know. I g go. go.” • kiss with a gi The The Willow says (34106) • y hey hesitated • endings in cli clitoris • Willow’s pagaiagainst it every • vaguely heaantsants of • and don’tto tto the • never std mod moving I like you (ID 31610) Ch 1 • would she ask a thiike ike that Ch 2 • thought youldould use some • should tal him him about Ch 3 • that’s all I have ty I y I won’t Necessary echoes (ID 33453) In reviews • by Sun-chan (ID 264050): I loved tonceoncept of

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 29 Master tara: revenge of evil puppy (ID 33318) • kind of eatieating • sterster listened very • the first,actuactual male, • Snucknuck a sideways • rather lasciviouspracpractically • some nerve!&; Wi; Willow • 7;Hi7;His medallion • I’veer her heard your • what48; 48; the vampire • she doe148;148; Just because (ID 26125) In reviews —on page 3, reviewer rayne (ID 210829,30,31,32,33,34) just repeated the same review over and over 6 times. au left them all there but i don’t know...is that kind of a false review count? geez! just pounding the same review in there repeatedly. is that legit? —on page 4, by wynter, 2004-07-30 (ID 258862) • ‘chapters’ on way.way In disclaimer • don’t belon me, me, In story Ch 1 • boundary rienriendship • B yel yelled • and bego clo claw herself . . . toward the wa. Th. Then Illumination (ID 32183) In reviews —by Deacon, ID 257661 • Mmmmm’del’deliciously In story • doneHer Her facial • gentle insice oce of her teeth Master tara: master witch of sunnydale (ID 31901) • last line ends abruptly—and story is only a paragraph long? i think something is definitely missing, at least judging by the other “master tara” story on this page. looks like there was a “catastrophic failure” of some kind! Catch me if i fall (ID 30652) • from heuth uth due to The veracity of vamp willow (ID 30659) • site’s chat r Th The girl • a largest fst from the • enjg Tag Tara’s livelive’ scent • Completely diointointed in • I li-li-aluealue you [she stutters, so i think this should be “li-li-value you”] • if Willow fthe the same • Xander prowlingind ind her • in thectaectator stands • s,s,” Willow agreed Slow burn (ID 29971) • olive skinningning with • of the musclesher her arm • trying to move ll. [para] ll. Into exile (ID 29927) • didmattmatter out here • legs pus her her further • greet eartearth again • cavern of blacknesordeordering on What is everything to faith? (ID 27964) Ch 1 • fy lfy laughed • the sho should I tell Ch 2 • Faith lookraigraight ahead • say, youe mee me • slayer slarienriendly love Chasing the girl (ID 28763) Ch 3 • was shorter,eredered, and • grow up, r? i ? I mean Ch 4 • for twoks. [para] ks. Ch 5 • vampires caI waI was Chosen • gonna talk t She She asked Ch 7 • they decideat tat to do • laying ofloafloat in the • didn’t droif tif that’s • just stared.ame ame out Ch 8 • Rose to h. [para] h. • Shit, Sh’ Fa’ Faith • down on thoundound. • Slwithwith Faith Ch 9 • th wth walked into • in.”fy sfy said Ch 11 • didn’te mue much for me Ch 12 • sleep in, iere.ere.” • threw the cloton ton the • “e. Fe. Faith • Buffyd, ld, lying Ch 13 • Buf [para] Buffy rolled over Ch 15 • Buffy saidakinaking her Ch 16 • “Hey, Faithy.” She . [para] . Ch 17 • So ar thominoming? Ch 20 • reach youdidndidn’t want • had her haon Fon Faith’s • would have maou dou do • want to destrou aou and • don’t deservebe hbe hurt Ch 21 • I can’t s. Bu. But I Ch 22 • go back to sle’k?’k?” • she didn’tieveieve me though Ch 24 • Her mindn swn switched • inside ach.ach. Buffy • giving a strthruthrust with Vindicated (ID 28408) Ch 1 • claws Spikfaceface leaving • were raised in a ing ing pack • a step ard.ard • what sad jad just agreed Ch 2 • from Drua’s.a’s. He Ch 3 • that were attemptingstarstart something • wearing polyr anr and tight • eyes but co’t h’t hide her • Befshe she could Ch 4 • would moskelykely take the • smir “Ye “Yeah well • more shokedoked at Faith Ch 5 • My plalwaylways end up . . . he She She flicked • night of her li [cuts off] • casomesome time Surprises (ID 28510) In reviews Page 2 —Carla, 2004-06-09 (ID 229998) • have meereserested In story Ch 1 • sighed for thcondcond, Ch 4 • come onowpoowpoke Ch 8 • h mah made her • and laown.own. Ch 9 • crossed the droomroom and Ch 10 • stretching her le [para] X [para] Xander • “H [para] “Hi,” she said Ch 11 • Buat sat special • girl Faiad sad smiled Ch 12 • Why are you soiousious ,” she • view,”th sth said • at this pointilltilled around • into houghoughly • looking iFaitFaith’s • necfuckfuck me B • Wi?” h?” he said • To beaith ith at her Ch 13 • Willow spat.FaitFaith’s Ch 14 • you just a p a piece too Ch 15 • doesn’t mI woI won’t • holding uppeupper body • was a wackincking the Crawling towards ecstasy (ID 29472) • roamoverover the side All i need (ID 29196) In reviews —Carla, ID 231301 • as soon areadread dorm In story • and into showshower for me

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 30 Would you? (ID 29105) Ch 1 • I’tchitching the way • as sheks iks into • it’s me doing thefy tfy thing • The vixen is awaf thf the tingle • and I’everever be the Getting a little sexy (ID 28692) Ch 1 • shouldernchenched • like, ausanusand! If • Forget thart. rt. I’ll be Be seeing you (ID 28250) In reviews • Carla, 2004-05-28 (ID 223464): Hmm..likelike it In story • before her verguregure, as if The taken series (ID 28181) Ch 3 • technicolor ancoulcould feel Ch 4 • forcinselfself to sober up • t.. t.. what are you . . . the comforteay fay from Ch 5 • dirty blo’s e’s eyes on us Ch 6 • vanilla, woodrth,rth, rain and • adding shinghing to her . . . smeer cer coming • brother had just , an, and already • “You’re mindmakimaking the • anything normald yed yet . . . that that’s prly hly how • doesn’rt srt so much • had nothing lto sto stay What are we gonna do now? (ID 27727) In reviews —Queen Zulu, 2004-05-21 (ID 219181) • the actwas was • flows . T . The deaths • It’diffdifferent In story Menu 1 • Elizabeth? Ms. Srs?”rs?” • Anyway,e ore orderlies • what hed? Yd? Yes, • Seems sheisheishes the • worse thhe whe worst of • of cou he he was • within Speciaoverovert ops • That is a tha that aint • And when Ie bae back • shouldngelngel, Spike Menu 2 • on this. I’lve tve to wait • outstare the ot but but neither • area wd ofd off from • looking forwardthatthat. • Bubble brain, ta yta ya want • than Motheturetue in some • I think’re ‘re letting Menu 3 • what a Fool sh”. N”. Nice • slowly apchesches Faith • on her with the sta [end of para?] • We hasecosecond slayer • “YeRed,Red, it was • you aaithaith should • briefly illoillow about • I go Wil Will. Of Menu 4 • sees thonlionlighth reflecting • but you asfor for this • for a gourpourpose • it’s clathrethree times • picture hap happy man • babbles on abouscurscure arcana • A [para] A dark figure • took the liberf cof contacting • for aw, an, and has been • Buffy and Ww wow would • prof Dof Dawn as • and is moran aan a little • give up anng tng to see • Buffyglesgles. She never • stop, sh, she is out • behind. Sh. She is • her feet, hug heg her. • Dawn’om: [para] om: • n thn the back • Revealed isimenimensional • “ [para] “ It seems • Seems there nothnother • of pleasing gs, gs, until • but norn brn by the • That he haen...ten...taken out • “ Imeanmean it • it’s nK. HK. How • perfect F.” B.” Buffy • B rea realizes the • Far be it fre toe to keep • goe goes on, Menu 5 • F exp explains • What’ru thu thinking • Thentednted to be ordinary • wife and chin, an, attended • I’ll be ribackback” Assignation (ID 27433) In reviews —by Grey Elven-Eyes, 0000-03-10 (ID 80623) • IT’S GRE! SO! SO COOL! —by Dylan, 2004-05-18 (ID 216732) • you had Faiealiealise she —by Diva, 2004-05-22 (ID 219562) • wonderful it.rry rry back In story Ch 1 • spent in hesbansband’s strong • When she pu awa away to Hear no evil (ID 26589) In reviews Page 1 —by Jane Shaeow, 2004-05-05 (ID 207179) • only your frs ars and mouth free so thacan can force In story Menu 1 • its back l Sh She rubbed • her. ‘d s’d seen Menu 2 • could heares ies in the • (in italics) before she c clo closer • to hold hoo hoo hard and Menu 3 • nearly fe B w B was holding • Going towathemthem was like Menu 4 • she’d leftm alm all in the • well, there’silleiller on the • have to writmakemake-up essay • be so mucsiersier if she • a little hmotimotion • truly h jus just once • feltguilguilty • That i ove over? Menu 5 • knocked s. s. Joyce was • sprang to lin Bin B’s mind • cleaning thingat dat didn’t • Buf [para] Buffy nodded • it’s not fair< [para] s [para] she’d been Menu 6 • saw the in in his hands • startnd jnd jerked his • I was going tll mll myself • taken this frou?”u?” she asked • rickety staie the that led • running n ben before . . . finish histenctence. • answer, liost ost puzzles • get anyod ood on yourself • strategies and ics.ics. There Menu 8 • Buffy smilt tht that • would yoow?ow?” • just wanted to sieepeeeper into her • was kissinr inr inner thigh • moannd snd shifted • end up witr fer feet on the Contagion (ID 26826) In reviews —by Queen Zulu, 2004-05-08 (ID 209804) • thisuel uel not only In story Menu 1 • to re to to the West • knocked backa roa row and • undead and re are about • can’t fight iell ell for all • kind of vi Buf Buffy • this was just nortnorth lot alone • I couldr Xar Xander say • “Ie yoe you too Menu 2 • take hold y ary arms, then • enough for hend bnd between Ten months (ID 26824) In summary • Hellmouth clo closed In reviews • care obv obviously been In story Menu 1 • even wheey wey weren’t • another jotervterview that . . . like thevioevious twelve • e the they paying you • “Fucu.” [para] u.” Menu 2 • the idea of g apg apart for • some-wharmalrmal (sorry—if this isn’t wordord, then i have no idea!) • only gettinrse.rse.” Menu 3 • my mom d’t t’t think that • before she d god go to Prom • world of posspossibilities • slayers just yea year into • way it’s osedosed to be • against miI knI know she • pulls awauttiutting me at • been too old tod too British Menu 4 • you think that youin lin love with • and I’yingying here in Ski trip (ID 26095) In reviews Page 1 —by Trixie, 2004-04-29 (ID 202316) • cant wait tod mod more so Page 2 —by gEmInI, 2004-05-03 (ID205741) • for writing it.f yof you choose —by Jane Shadow, 2004-05-04 (ID 206290) • Please? Prepleaplease? —by lemons, 2004-05-05 (ID 207147) • very stiof tof the feedback Page 3 —by Shane, 2004-05-16 (ID 215536) • i too am ng..ng...begging —by [ELR], 2004-05-24 (ID 221100) • i need a se to to this In story Menu 2 • “Finall B B kicked • and wet thh byh by the Menu 3 • brought a muu” [para] “ • wasn’t t abt about that • I’d feel gy bey because Menu 4 • She swwed wed them back Menu 5 • bloody pto tto top the • around to steto tto the hot Menu 6 • she suppsupposed to be • and sat between . . “So, Buffy • smells likeks.ks.” Buffy Menu 8 • to wig you, buting ing how loud Thosehosen two...plus one (ID 21645) In title: think it should be Those Chosen Two In reviews —Dylan, 2004-03-12 (ID 158082) • worried wnew new characters In story Menu 1 • vamps in f of of her • at herself for ing ing her guard • that’s not third ird part Menu 2 • “ up up a sec, did • inhuman reflexesas ras right there Menu 3 • Shs nos now a Slayer Menu 4 • hand and fw hew her into • fy tfy threw her arm Menu 5 • all the whilr far face • her guar ang angel stepped Menu 6 • therther that was slayer • as she rose tds hds her • girl? e whe when do I • only just raineained herself Watchers council (ID 21135) Menu 1 • woue kee keen to learn • keep up withr owr own work Menu 2 • in front hem hem and • read ugh ugh some of the • “Metherther” she shrugged Menu 3 • finally ng tng to decide Menu 4 • I usuabrinbring flowers Menu 5 •He’s right Will”fy lfy laughed • get away a w a week or two Menu 7 • Eventy shy she shrugged • looking as rdly dly handsome • intelligence andrit rit even more • saw tlooklooking confused • that meauffyuffy has to Menu 8 • anything in fac face • Alex at the ort.ort. • Dawn a and and looked • anything wn brn bring • my best friejustjust before • potential”He dHe drew • librarian’s woulwould be a Menu 9 • certain aref hif his • they’ll dostarstart with • Giles has sdiardiaries • of this uhe ihe insisted • sure the gguysguys won out • into oures aes and he • reallyted ted to make • Willow killedeoneeone • opposite direc and and heading • She mendernder’s eyes Menu 10 • came ac the the academics • because’s d’s done this • just true, ge, give me • where is” [para] is” Menu 11 • stop for kfaskfast she • still manag hav have you • would objectthatthat happened • been eninening while • thetor tor wrote • were choosour our own Menu 12 • you’d gettherther shock • only Wil Willow could • next to he [para] “D [para] “Don’t think • I’ve jtoldtold my • her favouriBuffBuffy grinned Menu 13 • you werppospposed to • get me wyou’you’re done • defeat it until ind ind the • theh fool tel team before Menu 14 • larelared back at Menu 15 • neatly cha chair as • You’re an intgentgent woman • switch pai pain off • shrugged anrnedrned to the • towarde tae tall woman • of my nbourbours mentioned Menu 16 • I g you you knew • that ygreegreed with me • the rhe red head • with Willowthe the main • in Giles’ice”ice” he stood • unusual techn” Bu” Buffy Menu 17 • fill in tolidoliday request • suggeugged Willow Menu 18 • hat’hat’s wrong? • near withwithout one of • increasingly theays”ays” Kate • Thingve bve been Menu 19 • down beat abouts. [para] s. • “Buffy”saidsaid quietly • How arey gey getting Menu 21 • nee need to present • Willow askedtheythey all • ow” ow” Willow • to be waitin the the other • to see if hispicipicions were • Faith noddo tho the front • underwea [para] “D [para] “Did I mention • have a web cam ere ere does Menu 22 • mirror. “” sh” she • and he co’t k’t know all • Can do tdo the • if you wanhe she • for his nod be fol following • Spit it oute sue suggested • got sr” sr” she took • Phone shop?llowllow sighed Menu 23 • dropped hend fnd from • for hin amn amusement • disappointed ppropproval thing • smiled asl. [para] l. • the next hd jud just • turned baowarowards the • heded.ded. • got hersendernder control • Buffy hatedated outside • be our litsecrsecret • you whatoughought it • as shoppeopped the keys • pile of brogym gym equipment • use that itatitation while • on the contagilauglaughter • working pace ase assured her Menu 24 • I meif yif you can’t • a bad time?ex aex asked • Kate, wan wanted to know • what’s specspecial • Nothingcialcial • how mucneedneed you • sorry Alpleaplease • following herut Iut I had no Grasping for life (ID 18732) • stronger perhapan aan any • pulled thewn wwn with • she stoppeyingying and To those who wait (ID 17331) In reviews —in goolecap’s rebuttal (ID 114179) • this seems e coe common In story • lyinckwackwards in the • her other le ile in her

Flamer "To those who wait" (story ID 17331) Reviewer #2 “anon”, ID 114104

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 31 Roof of the world (ID 22818) In reviews: • by V, 2004-04-02 (ID 178014): prefer fluff ‘fir’first kiss’ • ditto : cool thoug hop hope you In story: Ch 1 • for some reason there is a MAJOR gap, over a foot long, between the prelims and the start of the story. very off-putting—i thought it was an un-story at first because i kept scrolling and nothing was there. think au did this herself as there is a ton of space in other places too, but this first gap is ridiculous • of the jerkingwd, wd, there • door out ts hts hinge; Dolls & leather (ID 22005) In reviews: • by gEmInI, 2004-03-15 (ID 160858): and heated writtieceiece! liked In story: Ch 1 • Getting kille a f a fight, • the odd womwearwearing a big • reacting te die dismay • is more likely.t; Love on the hellmouth (ID 20866) —Menu 1 is not really a chapter. au put all the ANs in the first menu “chapter”. combine with real chapter 1? and might i just say...OMG...this au doesn’t use para breaks!!!! Menu 2 • cost them thlivelives!” • it’s not corpl. Il. It can’t • then e’se’s the thing • what’s cominEverEveryone • can sleepe, Me, Molly • Anya thng tng the • You loo” Bu” But she • this prely?ely?” “You • don’t thinkingking on • get into t but but for Menu 3 • sun g dow down? • arrived bacme pme preparations • running inte roe room at Menu 4 • Giles, wthatthat thing • Potentials leveneven more • Kennedy and Dawand and their Menu 7 • it wasn’teasyeasy to hide. • They sfounfound that Menu 9 • When shees hes home • own rooWillWillow moves • of your stre. Th. The well • sure if n ben beat Menu 10—oh joy, she has finally figured out how to break paragraphs • W the the Potentials • take this relatiip tip to the Menu 11 • head. slamslams into the Menu 17 • It’s B. Sh. She always Menu 19 • what you are g to to do Building up the tension (ID 20009) Ch 1 • uffyuffy.’ Willow’s • Willow ed aed as Buffy More than flesh and blood (ID 19919) • moistesligslightly but she The circle (ID 19395) In reviews: • by Morningstar Devereaux, 2004-03-21 (ID 166866): allegations of plagiarism in para 2 of review, spurring a heated review from goolecap. not sure if this can be considered a flame (and i can’t stand goolecap so am sympathetic with the flamer) but it’s darn close to one. In story: Menu 1 • “Sttilltill” Dawn took • found her breastsoletolet bit • Violet’ngerngers began • offered ha lia little • Dawn smi ima imagining • was somng ing in her • wanted me ell,ell, at least • person, twe cwe can • precioomenoments we So many tears: cry no more (ID 19363) Ch 1 • ‘Just pusay.’ay.’ She glares . . . in her m. G. Grabbing • wait a littleger,ger, and I Birthday licks (ID 18783) Ch 1 • her pinky fing I p I paid on • keep until r...kir...kinda busy (think this is a glitch but not sure) • for the oion,ion, on her My lover’s voice (ID 18799) Ch 1 • shoulder. ere ere is no way • of a sudI haI have this Visions dancing in her head (ID 18796) Ch 1 • care if iant ant some Resolution (ID 16307) Ch 1 • slightly cond. [para] d. • Faith’s cro Fin Finishing • The petitautyauty carefully • ffy ffy giggled Driving home for Christmas (ID 15755) Ch 1 • Buffy ed ted the

GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 32 Re-educating dawn (ID 15676) —The main pairing is Willow/Dawn but it almost seems outside the story because there’s hardly any W/D action. It’s mostly other people, often 3+ at one time. I’d move it to Threesomes/Moresomes. Menu 1 • *cute* butthavehave to give • her pussowinowing moist Menu 2 • on your poof vof view . . . witch giggledn shn she • beside us smilsmiled when • couldn’t coco Dce Dawn • ntil they’dned ned her • “Mmm tho thought so • quiet sobs ng fng from • last line: out, she a, “, “And Menu3 • *human* lowliout out there • patted the brunettebehibehind. • teenager’s . Sh. She halted • reached Das hys hymen. • touch of Buffytongtongue • Willow, buso cso captured • the ride er ler life • Ww cow cooed • a bit, se sse she could • tweaked a narnk nnk nipple • Willow tappnto nto some • an unexpe sur surprise • a le mae magical • Faith completes hrainraining. • dildospecipecially at the • Theageragerness to Friends forever (ID 15274) Review 1 • that Ier rer read any Slayers together (ID 14852) Review by ambushbug ID 192337 • those alwaalways wanted each othermattmatter how Menu 1 • job atourtour guide • tha that was easy The two exploring the dark side (ID 13271) Menu 2 • then added h Anh Anya • and brouhim him to • Itf tof to Los Changing dawn (ID 9413) Menu 1 • Oh my Go Tar Tara looked • she ked overover the • sorted the gs. gs. Dawn California (ID 7496) Ch 1 • has a foot ge lge leading • r ber being on • me doinge dae dae dance Ch 2 • was sittin thn the • started to wbackback upstairs • walked bacwn twn the • her wh’ve’ve been Ch 3 • I’emoremorized this Ch 4 • what ‘re ‘re thinking • up the b Jac Jack • caughtthe the act Ch 5 • FAITHs shs shoulder • of this ly fly funny • She’s gng fng for air • she covmy fmy face • shudder htlyhtly . . . * erlyerly stroke Ch 8 • (in verse) cheat on her I w I want • on hace.ace.• Ch 9 • on my should [para] I [para] I giggled Ch 10 • up fsleesleeping, and • on Tara. [para] Of [para] Of course Ch 11 • she’s too h [para] W [para] While Fred • back her h a f a few drops • Fr [para] Fred is here • sta starts to giggle Ch 12 • few hours l, wh, when the • move yound, nd, sweetie • look faar. ar. Maybe • What ar yoing?ing? Look • I squeezes cos cosk, feeling • hammer,shinshing it • since I’t ‘t have Ch 13 • slowly, bof uof us in • her ass offra tra tries • hours r byr by what • and i juemememembered it all • sitting in nng bng but • smacsmacking me • now dad, ooksooks like you • killed hiow cow could Ch 14 • of me, eg meg me out • badgering pAnyaAnya. Ch 15 • wearing a!” !” she • So, whoyouryour favorite • tongue slidinto mto my • (in lyrics) So don’t be fooby wby what Where there are no words (ID 7595) Ch 1 Disclaimer glitched • lying siy siy side in my Three small words (ID 4231) • Oh that’s w onw one. The secret slayer (ID 1862) • she’t d’t dead,” said • bandages andngs;ngs; black • (not sure if this is a glitch or au oversight) and lead Dawn out of the r [text cuts off, no wordord or anything] • Now, ho han handle this • evil to us all.s cos couldn’t • over. evi evil force • .”That feels so • theAnd And her • ready. wer were armed • at this t. Dt. Dawn • Dawn wantere. re.

well KWAP. seems to have uploaded nothing. so here it is all spelled out: GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 33 Girls night out series (ID 2104) Reviews • girly s, bu, but this Ch 1 • in the otwomawoman’s • hot wetness.ndfundful of her long Ch 2 • returned to bre breasts, its Dawns’ night out (ID 2015) Ch 1 • in the big houShe She kept • dancing, and And And best of • alone in a vdarkdark alley • She took two ers ers and • pushpushed hr hot • lappingthe the hot • soft sexked ked body Sing a lullaby (ID 1722) Ch 1 • that?” ask asked, angrily • closing. As id, id, she • back into thll. ll. • Dawn. “Pl “Please, I want • quiver pleasly bly before it Far away and not far enough (ID 1670) Ch 1 • Cu up up on the • Missouri. Told.old. Michigan. • she herself ry spy spoke. • to know.ith ith whispered • your .” .” • no real prre. re. Tara Private party (ID 1473) —multiple inches of space between everything, not a glitch but i wouldn’t read it just for that reason, good GRIEF Ch 1 • residence talkind drd drinking • won’t evemememember about • , I’, I’m only • W w dew demanded • brothers orsinssins” • Faith contd usd using her • know if yike ike it, Need to destroy (ID 1233) Ch 1 • her warm n. Sn. So warm. • Mom’s goAnd And Willow’s Baby Blue (ID 1234) Ch 1 • I t bet believe Love hurts (ID 1175) Ch 1 • Jonathon and An. As. As the fog • last pershe ehe epxected • hanghangs Will • know howan man make • ran her tongueng tng the roof • Willow sgledgled to find • knowing instinely ely what • shook her head andnnednned. The end of summer (ID 23) Ch 4 • signaling her agreementndernder put

let's see if this uploads. it seems like it's going to, unlike in the past. glitches from p.33.

TUTNguyen—i just saw someone else asking this question further along in the support forum, and DemonGoddess061 (admin staff for AFFN) told them, "You should be able to edit your description. If not, give me a link to the story and I'll make the edit in the db direct for you." so if you are still unable to edit the warning codes to change from WIP to Completed, you might see if she can do that for you also. but i'm still going to research it, because i KNOW i did this once upon a time! Mamacita

i'm having the same problem—somehow about half of my warning codes disappeared from a story i posted, then edited, today. i know i've done that very thing before, changed from WIP to Completed, but it's been a while. if i get it figured out i'll come back and let you know what i did. (well, let's be optimistic and say WHEN i figure it out!) Mamacita

ah...perhaps the BookLady would care to "pitch in" by helping to MAKE the site a "finished product", and help with the site cleanup? no money involved, just your time—like the rest of us who have helped/are helping with the archive cleanup project. after all, the more people who help, the faster it will approach a state where you'll enjoy browsing in it, you know....

PAGE 35 The Table Has Turned —this story was on p.35 originally, now i can’t find it. but here are the review glitches anyway, whatever page it’s moved to IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=20797 • becky 2035090322, 2035090323 - duplicate review • becky 2035090324, 2035090325 - duplicate review Story “The Roses...” # 38999, ditto, no longer on p.35. sorry, i waited too long Central Perk —move to AU http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38877 Menu 1: • William Giletarttart looking • gradd hid high • you needlacelace to stay • a littRighRight after • hotties oe hoe horizon • silencr a r a couple Menu 3: • tried to k, “k, “Of course • interrupted [cuts off] [para] “Wh [para] “What?” Menu 4: • happened ou lou last • come home’ kinun?”un?” • why rey resolve face Menu 5: • Buffplieplied, her • and Buwe dwe didn’t know • decided to ta sho shower Menu 6: • back iclipclip with • cook like th [cuts off] • do, que up a movie I Only Have Eyes for You http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38648 Menu 1: • his b dus duster • as his h deh descended • captured houthouth with • She cupped hery ery hard • She whisp as as she • Spikeead ead fell • him a slismirsmirk as • Spikeped ped and bit her • moving heldheld each Angelus Pain http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38649 Menu 1: • pulled her up nst nst him Pangs http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38650 Menu 1: • in song lyrics: Not a single w [cuts off] [para] Go [para] Go on and • fingers strokine soe soft • his lipse. He. He kissed • body pressed heeepeeeper into • her moist cenagaiagainst his • confines of heuth.uth. • wasn’t surpriss hes he Alone —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=19267 • Why is the line length so looooooooooooong here? • Cordelia Chase 165854, glitched IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=19267 Menu 2: • grabbing a p tow towel • arms, fre freaked and Menu 3: • Spotting hettintting by Menu 4: • The sho guy guy playing • they werethe the middle • Spike rea really worried Menu 5: —not a chapter, only an AN; delete? Without A Past —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=23279 • Hari 174331, 174341, 174342 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=23279 Menu 3: • side,erinering support Menu 6: • when now his milmoslmost seemed • into otecotective embrace • believe heot oot one in Menu 7: — a lot of the paragraphs in this chapter have DS-ing in the middle of paragraphs, not just between them; seems like every 2 lines there is a DS • peeled thrtairtain back Menu 8: • But whe ohe opened • corner, thenckedcked underneath • in her houecauecause her Menu 10: • officially on d” Bu” Buffy • y smy smile Menu 11: • I n’t n’t fully Menu 12: • Kdy, dy, one of No Good Turn —move to AU http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38567 Menu 1: • Giles ldn’ldn’t deny • ho fee feels • short, ta in in great • where her onlmformfort was What’s Good For Me —move to AU http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38107 Menu 1: • seen Rlatelately? • I lovm som so much Menu 2: • peoplway.way. Spike • Come back.It mIt made • but she fno pno pain • she dited ted herself • feelingout out much • everything Ie ine into Menu 3: • Spikeled led out in • going to d for for her Menu 6: • and me leecauecause I • and maer wer way • SpikSpike turned • took a dbreabreath. She Menu 7: • smiled and k hik his head Welcome to LA Baby —move to AU http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38414 Menu 1: • you’ll be thng mng me. Menu 2: • Bugrumgrumbled • contractd thd they’re The Stable Series —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=36936 • Anon 302105, glitched • lily 302146, glitched IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=36936 Menu 2: • stroke. llE>Buffy swirled Menu 3: • in AN “summary”: one of wea wealthiest • lasslass=MsoNormal>Buffy just moaned • away fromI seI see • way to hoor.oor. He • He’s jumy dmy dad’s Aftermath —move to AU http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37055 Menu 1: • Tarabablbably wanted • was enoto gto get • than whoNot Not to mention • she put thadphadphones on • she cosee see it in • admitted he d had have • had turnedt. At. And • into havingh ofh of a • pleasing hbut but not • come hopleaplease • smiled, ng hng his Menu 2: • needs righw. Iw. It would • ever goin thi think that Menu 3: • out of bh. “h. “I heard • You ha ‘ve ‘ve!! Menu 4: • selling it ry. Iy. It might Escape http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37456 Menu 1: • Not evern abn able to • ahe ghe grabs it • to tell thuth.uth. • wrapping the blt art around • that she mbermbers the • SECONDS TO EXPLAINRSELRSELF • ffy ffy nods, her Departing for my email, where I'll forward you the sorts DI-reckly.

PAGE 36 Five Servings a Day IN STORY SUMMARY (on p36) • a week after Somng Bng Blue IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=20111 • Ladyluck523 143141, glitched line 2 • Anon 237925, blank review IN STORY TEXT: Menu 1: • up and is grd byd by a squeak • wildly oxis.xis. She • everythiney dey did • red flusllinlling Buffy’s Menu 3: • tongue curbehibehind his • Buffy ss ags against Menu 4: • e loe look into Menu 5: • visions of shd Spd Spike in • look noncha. S. She chants • down on toffeoffee table • Huh.ird.ird. Menu 7: • rushing ugh ugh her so fast • in his h it’ it’s the • on her bar - m - makes • Qui [para] Quickly recovering • a quick s.” [para] .” Menu 8: • stop an stu stupid inner • You’re neasieasing me Menu 9: • something quiteangeange. Her • swimming wiequiequila, decides • flourish.A! TA! That’ll • considering if this e ise ise correct • head. e’s e’s scared Menu 10: • Spi [para] Spike’s gaze is • “Aren’t you d?” [para] ?” • arms foldehindhind his neck • much in as possiblHe sHe sits • B gas gasps quietly • Getting thepet.pet.” Pleasure http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37387 Menu 1: • trails dows sis sides Becoming the Slayer http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31704 —move to AU Menu 1: —brace yourself; it’s mostly one giant paragraph • big th, th, they were • get snatchp byp by all • before hed.”ed.” • don’t wo I w I will teach • there ust ust something • Alright ou wou want • I am herveryverything • first.“Are“Are you • gift oristristmas morning • beforealizalizing that • him lookingher her and • Yes, Isuresure Menu 2: —this menu is not a chapter but only an AN (delete?) • Spike ing ing Buffy First Time http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37223 Menu 1: • line after opening AN is some incomplete code or something • &n bsp; Tremble http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=36689 Menu 1: • This wasa moa moment • finally rec; Wi; William • he said e loe lowered • needed ant out out without • y wey were together • not reallntinnting to rehash Surprise Innocence Twisted —move to AU (Dawn written as Buffy’s daughter, not sister) IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=35600 • Jen 287367, 287368 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=35600 Menu 1: • she had fel felt like Menu 3: • Her s..” ..” Willow said Menu 4: • the wi cov coverings were • is fathfather of your • needed to knod Spd Spike • Willow ascuricuriously • child tonk onk of • “Y [para] “Yeah...the last • She triedin. [para] in. Menu 5: • in AN: and the amathmath of him • in AN: was very confusseeiseeing as how • Mrs. Summeon’ton’t ever • as I did? Cra/i> /i> my touch [improperly closed tag] • Spike, re are a • should haven hen him when Menu 6: • her eyesely ely from the • things...anwantwant to talk • him t tht the dream • lips, te upo upon hers • for her n. “n. “Do you • believe yo [cuts off] • is he hol Daw Dawn Menu 7: • blow swunswung her • asked ull ull slayer mode • demon to emerg [cuts off] [para] J [para] Joyce gasped Menu 8: • stompe ben beneath • her eyeshtinhting back • to be oth lth letting • tracing hottoottom lip • Luv, s’noke Ike I can rent • from Dru...t’s I’d I’d allow • cuddled o heo her • “Thi”Think so • all of the .” J.” Joyce glanced In This Together —move to AU http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=36027 Menu 1: • Bulet let out Menu 2: • trying notstarstare at the Menu 3: • might fiut. [para] ut. • they weoth oth a little Pursuit IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=34513 • kiss_me 289734, is it only in the stories themselves that leetspeak is not allowed? if it’s in reviews too, ditch this suckah! IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34513 Menu 1: • froot oot to foot on the • bounced enticinin tin time • S cou couldn’t • He spra acr across • come intermingleainiaining her Menu 2: • to Drla tla the astonishing • head. >”It>”It’s all Summers Dream Winters Nightmare —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=28653 • SL 232475, guess we can’t hang the reviewer for it, it’s deserved even if not very nicely worded...but it just cracked me up that this reviewer is scolding the author for something that she herself can’t do properly! • SL 232987, 232988, 232989 - first 2 are duplicate reviews, i actually think all 3 are although 232989 is glitched. are these enough to call him a flamer, after that other one above? • Nicky 233404, glitched last sentence • Anon 247505, blank review • Nicky 285510, glitched P2L1, P3L2 IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28653 —apparently the new thing is not to put any ending punctuation after sentences. hmmm...wonder if it’ll catch on.... —if there is any way to check this author’s DOB i would because the writing comes across sounding very juvenile —there’s really nothing to justify an adult rating, and considering she last updated in 2004 there probably won’t be Menu 1: • gazinguffy uffy said Menu 3: • someone cra in in there • Well ke ske some Menu 4: • new best nd” nd” She • melt from tmilemile he • Just whenet det drunk • fried b, sa, sausages • this funne sae said • shook herd [para] “d [para] “What did I • blond st hit hitting me • whole clby tby the way Menu 5: • going” Buffid [para] id • Joyceked ked up when • Joyce srunnrunning up • years old and a g a guest ... stairseaseease stop • girl smilsmiled • another nighttle tle bit Menu 6: • before, I’eardeard of it Menu 7: • neither,ffy ffy said Menu 8: • first line: fy afy and Spike • Buffy raoundound her You Mean the World to Me IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=27599 • Kar 223978, glitched P2L1,2 • txjmfan 239226, glitched line 3 IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27599 Menu 2: • vampire--nery ery often Menu 3: • feel himing.ing. Oh • want .tie.tie me up • widened “w!” !” He stood • sprinted to houshouse. Giles • meant it.wantwanted to know • on juakinaking it • is??” [para] ] [para] Spike Menu 4: • Justp, Sp, Spike ... want alk alk about • mind fonighnight? You • and canbloobloody stupid • and carin wan wanted • blames you for ing ing and no • “It”It’s not true! • kill tlayelayer Menu 5: • can’td yod your way • More than aing.ing. • WhatWhat protection • what youe tae taking • auseaused. She was • at herrnlyrnly. “You’re • getting to his fe [cuts off] Menu 6: • to demoremories of how • whatever sheded ded and wanted • desire chercherish, love • utterly misera He He’d missed Menu 8: • shower runn He He • The pcomecomes with Menu 9: • him, arms cro. “. “Maybe you • Stop SpikSpike,” she • Theps fps friends • to tto the ground • just aheadnninnning • “Yo”You’ll be all Menu 10: • real biay. ay. Not the Menu 11: • in a million es, es, you’ve • and all. l, hl, he —MENU 11 AND MENU 12 ARE DUPLICATES Menu 13: • it to suresure you Menu 15: • apart prodproduced a navy • eyes weide.ide. She • she was sy opy opening • blame yo you you don’t • Spik kno know without Menu 16: • right, “ T” The words Menu 17: • to do homew I r I ran myself • to feed i you you.” • ran his frs lrs lightly • whimpered andlapslapsed against • saw arm,arm, she • minute aghe whe was in Menu 18: • to get awayaway from • Drusilla. Il cal came to a Menu 19: • killed tlayelayers. She • I’moughough letting Menu 20: • cradled herse. se. • She was ng ang again Menu 21: • once tretureturned to • pasta dbakebaked ziti • he told h [cuts off] • annoyed whnya nya took off • find out ify’ry’re okay • “Spike,” he promp [cuts off] • perfectly [para] apable of amusing • dutifully ignort, nt, not bringing • yanked the s dow down and • hear you,” she told h [cuts off] • asked him in wr. [para] r. • I canll ill it, • that wasn’t per? [para] ? • and mostmost pleasurable • and let go. go. • grinned,hichhich would • and I’ll r ler leave Menu 22: • “Tel”Tell me Divine Intervention —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=28156 • mari 232225, glitched • Lily Constancy 247855, glitched IN STORY TEXT Menu 1: • better he bhe breakup • She’s sorrte. te. She wants • tell herrythrything would Menu 2: • No LNo Luv, they • too smthatthat’s why ... have Id iere.ere.” She Menu 3: • Oere ere goes • So beful.ful. So • she wassuresure it • tryinglocalocate Menu 4: • you don’t have to” [para] “ • “re lre looking at me • to get hisdenedened Menu 6: • one hel a w a woman • Youallyally are • and deepg thg the kiss • rocking witr. [para] r. • sliding hisds uds under • back htlyhtly looking • Shuld uld feel • lay, touchiit wit was Menu 7: • awoke to fWillWilliam • finger intr cor core he • you soh Elh Elisabeth • evidentweetween her • and cled Eed Elisabeth’s • Barton and Wellry pry prestigious • and askf hef he wanted • Willgrowgrowled ... by the shi [cuts off] • when nishnished med • now auseause they’re • better by assoion.ion. I love • in AN at end of chapter: in e foe for angst

note that some of these should be moved to the AU category (Buffy/Spike as main pairing) but i put them here so the glitches could get fixed. they are marked in the XLS sort for moving to AU—will send that as soon as the pp39-35 chunk is finished, probably by friday 8/1. Mamacita Buffy > Het > 39-35 Buffy/Spike PAGE 37 Come With Me IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=29809 • txjmfan 239093, glitched • Kimber 249174, glitched in line 1 • cynthia 249393, glitched in line 2 IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29809 Menu 1: • S (af (after Buffy • Lend mur eur ears • Itcingeinger • They’re all h ofh of bloody • exteextended a hand • Yeah. s jus just, is there • either,ly Bly Boy • Theganegan prowling • Buffl thl the while Menu 2: • What’s yourry, ry, luv? • in a atioation like this • as he puspastpast Riley Menu 3: • But we gottapet.pet. • Thent’st’s a chance Menu 5: • pack of smo pac pacing as I • uch uch has happened • accidentally brone one of my Menu 8: • at that horrific thou But But then • It’s note I e I meant Menu 9: • supreme oers ers and • operation?lsh lsh said Menu 10: • Yeah, B. Ca. Care to explain Menu 11: • want us to d [cuts off] • It wase hee he was in • What do tdo to deserve • Just ton Ang Angel. • No nee get get • their firime ime together Menu 12: • Angel thing, juell ell him • Still undend knd kicking • Besiwhicwhich, you still Menu 13: • couldnelp elp but wonder Menu 15: —for some reason in the text this is titled Ch19 when it should be Ch15; hard to know why, when most of the other chapter texts don’t name what chapter they are • was really out t. It. I asked Menu 16: • Jona rea reasoned • so to s. I . I asked him • doesn’t matteat yat you do • impendjailjail break Menu 17: • oneyoney, you’re home • chestobabobably near • he sai a l a low whisper • ideyidey ho, then • “Se [para] “See ya in a coupla • “y wiy with my little • blf hlf human and half demon Menu 18: • I’ve addecoupcouple of other • ya see, he ght ght it best Menu 19: • can can never hope • Warm? eyeseyes opened up You Promised IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=33076 • Jen 261220, glitched lines 1,2 • jane 264087, 264088 - duplicate review • Mariana 270368, glitched lines 4, 5 • kendall 275303, glitched • Constasnce 276063 glitched lines 2,4 • Asinine11 2035522193, blank review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33076 Menu 1: • in AN: Or hate it tha that • her,kingking her lips • lookedn atn at her • Silentlyslipslipped down • how it c be. be. I need • It wasighsigh • Ytherthere is • rea reached out Menu 2: • club dusbillbillowing around Menu 3: • Sppullpulled her up • moaned eligelight. They lay • for what ed led like • Thas...” [para] s...” • I w spi spill our little • drawwer and mingming it shut • everyoneows ows you can’t • Yon’t n’t even • face her,browbrow cockily • Spgringrinned Menu 4: • the of of the way • me for r wor women • ust ust can’t believe —after [walk through that door], they forgot to put a closing tag on the italics code; rest of the page is in ital’s • wrapped iep rep red • It doesneel eel like it did Menu 5: • stilutchutched tighly Menu 6: • had made alagelage of pictures • can yoar mar me wherever • sat therrvourvously holding • think I’m craut...iut...is it Menu 7: • really cominom Iom I will • going toy soy so I had • Miss Sum...cou...could you [not sure if this is a glitch?] • Buffy ed. ed. She Menu 8: • When retureturned home • presence k by by clearing • two younghan han Buffy • She dn’tdn’t breathe • didn’t pla bei being gone Menu 9: • looked iner eer eyes • “re tre tired pet • creeping up ski skin even • her towahim him • Something erenerent. Nothing Better Than the Blood of a Slayer IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=12622 • anne 72559, glitched • spikegirl7 80306, glitched line 1 • Jen 128435, 128436 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=12622 Menu 2: • drain the SlayI haI had the ... I hadfangfangs buried • and drank elf elf into • covering hes. s. “Come • calling m wan want • Igonngonna come • She askhylyhyly Menu 4: • him, horwritwritten all over Menu 6: • Was his only though [cuts off] [para] H [para] He • onto ted aed and was Menu 7: • flesh. gro growled against Menu 9: • in AN: We juharehared some Menu 11: • He smirat hat her • Spike was fightoff off fog • Spwherwhere are you • please bpleaplease wake up Menu 12: • Sheked ked over • hint of pacreecreeping in • cool body molto hto hers Menu 13: • Lasremeremember was • into Giles’ ey”I [para] “I [para] haven’t • You justnk tnk that The Senses http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34664 Menu 1: • Spike couldhelphelp but • through his veinis mis muscles • one thas...s...different • what hadbe abe at least • The ??? [line repeats] • as his s sls slid back • The vampgringrinned • Y [para] You want me? • I’m ready [line repeats] He Was Barely a Freshman http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34170 Menu 1: • was bon Fon Febru28, 28, 1988 • minute she tolm shm she was • about ath ath ago my mum Menu 2: • going to be a littlfferfferent Forever IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=31733 • Jane 262697, 262698 - duplicate review • Karen 264560, 264561 - duplicate review • jane 270304, 270305 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31733 Menu 1: • Each aft after her Menu 2: • Tiof sof sitting • determined Spispanspan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> (forgot to close a tag somewhere, a lot of following text is in italics) • get thper per hand • as he drifoff off into • too late nspanspan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> Menu 3: —there are a whole bunch of of untranslated lines a couple of para’s into the page. they are made up so there is no way to tell if there’s glitchiness in them as far as i can see. • whispered.”> His eyes Menu 4: • sc, Sp, Spike’s • was sthatthat Dawn • herpan pan style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> —reviewer notes that a chunk of ch4 seems missing, possibly also ch5. at the very end of ch4 it cuts off in the middle of a sentence so i think they’re right. not a glitch, up to you whether you ask the author to fix it. will check 5 when i get there Menu 5: • whil str stretched • kicked out or owr own home • but seld eld his gaze —in note to Spike from Buffy there appears to be missing text. 2nd para only reads: • an> [misc. tag and no further text?] —okay, other than that i can’t tell for sure whether anything is missing, except the very last para of the chapter doesn’t seem to be resolved; ch6 appears to start in the next menu w/o resolving the end of ch5. so possibly something is missing at the end of 5 also, author would have to look at it. Menu 6: • sitting at titchitchen table • on the “bes” es” with such • covers.s”> He pulled Menu 7: • &n’> • You’t ‘t say • with spanspan style’’mso-spacerun:yes’> In Rome • so am I. Hyou you • each hole. [para] &n’> Menu 8: • tied to two peoplhe whe witch • How are...” [para] pan> • &nThe tunnel-voice Menu 9: • con continued to soothe • Spiattlattled off Angel’s • a real kiss. [para] < < • “Giles-lik cle cleaned • Rome [para] t’> Menu 10: • the edieedients needed Menu 11: • leaving onfronfront the Menu 13: • asked, laughin [cuts off] Menu 14: • released the nip nipple Menu 15 • wisp of beh behind her • Giles blustered [para] “W [para] “We got • ‘cuz hejurijuries weren’t • work ont trt translation • anythingdo wdo with • need me, Ce.” e.” Quietly • of this endlguilguilt off • in its cradl sli slight Menu 16: • fingers skimmlonglong the • of theh propheand and if • I wast stt starting • some type of prtiontion. They • as to whe woe would Menu 19: • this tentativeatioationship with Menu 20: • final reg plg place Menu 21: • Cal, Sl, Spike • get her movinShe She • pulled the tip of hiord ord away Menu 22: • was just *thinthing* about Menu 23: • fault, Ilamilaming the • loked at heestiestioningly • in centered verse: Mixeood ood interwoven • mind, nextnext, she was Menu 24: • going, y fiy figured • her alr sor sore stomach • erratic heeat.eat. • her backtairtairs to her • Maybeittlittle exercise • each o. B. But, their • Aftewhilwhile, emotions • slayers, lthe the house • repair dam damage done Menu 25: • likeoldeolder brother • words stopped coldcold and • watcher witglarglare Menu 26: • he had left hrienriends, choosing • for love willinglyse. se. To give • stairs ann inn into the • guider lir lips to his Menu 27: • Giles haver ver come • that, thankfulwas was still • were l dal dark in • from under a ter ter and started • would have grabbecoupcouple of Menu 28: • mentioned it s I s I showed • Thouldould have spared • Demon. Juaitiating for his • too little too late.< [tag not closed properly, text continues in italics] • and brine exe extra bags Menu 29: • Lifting thek chk chemise • Bee ofe of what • His nostrilaredared. He • demons of Dra Draemuir dimension • resourcesWolfWolfran & Hart • “Wha Swe Sweeping the Menu 30: • pra practically purred Menu 31: • could stor. r. He could • needed ho reo reassure • me, aren’ey?”ey?” She • hour lateforefore they • began toax. ax. When • desk. gra grabbed Menu 32: • one of Ange’s h’s hands Menu 33: • began grabbitacktacks of • Dawn’s ctioction. His • dying... and e... se... so scared • Spincoincoiled from the Menu 34: • and bec the the dining Menu 35: • and quicklrnedrned away • out of onethe the seers • this. ffy ffy answered • im. el gel glanced • have.In tIn the end • bringing Ds pas palm to her • an unnecessargh. [para] gh. • hurting.” [para] .” • Menu 36: • brow quirke tha that and • Awer wer and separate • wink a cra crook of her • as he wad hid his golden • pleable ble feeling • up inprisprise at all • for, sh, she grabbed • she loved hiWoulWould always • tired of hng tng them • were sig neg next to them • to whepikepike sat • William the Bloody< [didn’t close ital tag properly] • G [para] Giles thumbed • care.... fordford!” she • of the peopleolveolved, Lorne To Be Alive Again IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=34336 • Anon 270634, 270637 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT: Menu 1: • wit with come in go time Class —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=21802 • txjmfan 244119, glitched • Kimber 253911, glitched line 1 IN STORY TEXT Menu 1: • every sec second together Menu 2: • anywayan san style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> She • noon and night.”> • and openee doe door Menu 3: • aboutmom mom and Menu 4: • aflictions.< sty style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> Having • ndifndif]> Menu 5: • making out> > Menu 6: • very littlout out England • or invited herehere. I have • bedrooman san style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> She Menu 7: • had told e ine in the car Menu 8: • place.” [para] p> [para] “It’s not to hard • Binceince you’ll • L off offered Menu 9: • handsome, an, and Buffy • Fred blus [cuts off] • ball wemootmoothly, and Menu 10: • stable boy brouDarlDarla and • Acrthe the valley • went to sl wil with their Menu 11: • quickly pulle her her dress • forgive me fakinaking advantage • you and e ie in America • early.> > Menu 12: • Willowpan pan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> She • out the othestudetudents? See • p clp class=MsoNormal> • trying to se upe up with Menu 13: • went greath heh her pink • where you wal/p> /p> • with that guy. [para] &n]> [para] Anya brought • was not tointoint of the Menu 14: • witpan pan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> Casual Menu 15: • “Wl>”What? Who’s • her the stackpapepapers. At • overview of the cl [cuts off] • of it. Thn>The other Menu 16: • was verrge rge and he • Buffy, me mme make • at you.” [para] &s]> [para] “It’s okay • could feel hotuid uid squirting • I...ple I h I have to • from behihem.hem. They Menu 17: • Darla wouldn’t themthem back in • cla class=MsoNormal> • sit the n wit with her • fine. Her>Her grandmother • explained. [para] < < [para] Behind • If the Angelusily ily only Menu 18: • Holland laughed. [para] > [para] “Now really • &nbs[end[endif]> • back toool,ool, stay • ringing. [para] > [para] “Hello Menu 19: • classes.< sty style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> • over. an>San>She was • found aft afterwards • police werennvolnvolved • “Angel, you should be . [something left out] • Buffy d tod to twist • up the stiontion, looked • call the pe?” [s/b “police”] • hospitalan an style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> So I • Everyg’s g’s fine now Menu 20: • p clp class=MsoNormal> Menu 21: • ever was. “> And he’s changed • stall. an>Wan>When Buffy • just fine.” p> • momentp> p> Meant to Be http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31521 —move to AU —OMG, pretty hard to even SEE the glitches in this awful awful writing Menu 2: • dialled tumbeumber of Menu 3: • so there onlyonly one and • trying to caown own Xander ... gettinge ane and more • other bandbersbers even • be thatriblrible if she • welcomeSunnSunnydale Menu 4: —this entire chapter has all the single and double quote marks replaced by garbage text in addition to glitches • Buffy pointo hto her • his face consi of. of. The nice Menu 5: • off of her!’threthreatened in • he was thankfur thr that • All oem nem not quite Menu 6: • no, thereo oto other • at him wier ser sweetest • eyes of he’Daw’Dawn’ he • torturing ts shs she wanted Menu 7: • Spike ed, ed, half • other pe ane and NO • You h’t h’t had any • “Ye [para] “Yeah OLD. You my Menu 11: —in pull-down menu title appears to be glitched • week sinhe lhe last saw Arrivederci, Roma http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29031 Menu 1: • left fieldmingming her fist Menu 2: dreams and realit [cuts off] [para] O [para] Only Spike • he was g veg very serious • guy whopirepired the term • good teet eet down the • she steppedk ink into a • they tou, [para] t, [para] things no other Menu 3: • to see...emotemotion in • to ant ant stiffness • a proud fa. “. “Good • around hisex fex finger • made to laYou You think • not stop [para] u [para] until their • of here. [para] e. Who I Am http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33269 Menu 1: • What’ong ong with • It wants to t, at, and I She Don’t Know —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=31000 • Lilnatanatancy 247692, think reviewer’s name is glitched (should it be Lilnancy?) • Anon 248777, blank review • Anon 249123, 249124 - duplicate review • spikedchick 251506, glitched line 4 • era 262294, think reviewer’s name may be glitched here too, as is first bit of review IN STORY TEXT: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31000 Menu 4: • paper, e hee her mother • wasn’t loc” C” Came • small giuddluddled in the • sweet hum humble Menu 6: • began to c, tr, tripping Menu 7: • watches her every m [cuts off] Menu 11: • wasn’t unusuance nce it was a • suffered sch. ch. The • bring herk. [para] k. • kitchen. [para] She [para] She knew Menu 15: • dragged him outbed,bed, and Menu 16: • out thor wor with a Menu 17: • but they wetilltill narrowed • she lookedpy, py, and • through thi kno kno-“ • Thger ger came • you wonell ell me Menu 18: • her fand rnd ran her Menu 19: • e’se’s tears were soaking Menu 20: • from whe when he • made wantwant to run Menu 23: • and sat her . He. He sat next Menu 24: • That morningisseissed her Menu 25: • tearful kiss.She She • softsoftly pushed into Menu 26: • brief smil [cuts off] [para] “ [para] “Yes, Mrs. • “Wam.am.” Menu 27: • you.”She She cupped • settle on hisuldeulders where Menu 28: • go,dy?dy?” • tummy ng ing it another • they were havanotanother baby • more chin, bn, but • Ls has have a look • Aid hid heartbeat • her a smi smile this time War, Music and Rampant Sex http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33180 —move to AU Menu 1: • stayed sedve, ve, however • not giving her tto vto voice • a grA kiA kisser • have hed hed in their • him a realdd ldd look • slip insiher her release • body,ningning over her Want Me http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33083 —move to AU Menu 1: • simplehirthirt and skirt • faithful companio wao watch • He’s a atorator [not sure if this is a glitch?] • ‘d s’d seen it played ouforefore and • with hertry try it • m rem ready • toward her c [cuts off] • thinkbreabreathe

PAGE 38 Just Love Me http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=24252 Menu 1: [this one’s gonna drive you crazy: JUST ONE BIG PARAGRAPH!] • “Wil”Willow! Menu 2: • and movedardsards him • and starto uto unbutton [wow—between the amateurish attempt at writing porn and the level of angst involved and the frequent insertion of song lyrics into the text, i would almost think this was written by a 13- or 14-year-old; even taking into consid. that they seem to not be a native english speaker; any way to check their age?) Menu 3: • would love anke cke care of you • idea why choochoose you Menu 4: • into theininining room Menu 5: • n’t,n’t, Buffy... • best ce, ce, but it was Menu 6: • you want o doo do, baby • consconsequences could be • grabbing jackjacket off • callingceasefire [don’t know if this is a glitch or just part of her bad typing] • Heart rea reasons that Menu 7: • some teaolleolled over her • said, gng ung up and • Gileclaiclaimed • There’s a wo sao save him • forbidden sp wer were Menu 8: [thank GOD she finally got a beta!] • tingting up the dust motes Menu 10: • wng ong over to her • shked ked him Menu 11: • en sen she hugged Menu 12: [ah...the beta must have given up on her {sigh}] • She said, stg atg at one point Menu 13: • Yeee Gil Giles said • That c be be good Menu 14: • GILES!!ffy ffy and Spike • on the couchthe the living Menu 15: • Tell me what you reme” [para] “ Acting The Part http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=21421 Duplicate of 21420. 21420 has 32 chapters, 21421 only 17 although they are written in the same time period. Must have accidentally dup’d it somehow. I would delete 21421, keep 21420 which is posted in AU as it should be. One Moment More http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31007 Menu 3: • her arm acrBuffBuffy’s back • little love by hide.ide. Menu 4: • it would n hap happen • There is soh I h I want to I’m Sorry William IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=25220 • October 192967, glitched • Camran 195318, glitched in line 2 • Petra 199774, glitched line 2 • Mari 199803, glitched • Jen 229173, glitched • Caroline 239489, glitched IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=25220 Menu 1: • beinak, ak, and selfish Menu 2: • took a stloseloser to her • unopened> bo> bottle [think a tag got left off her code somewhere] • He ed oed out a key • Willy’s.recorecord time • her in elonglonger than that Menu 3: • tightly againis sis shoulder • to her si His His fingertips • arms and legoundound him and • T’s juhagghaggin Menu 4: • were ere watching • I was wor nor needy Menu 5: —appears to contain only one word, should be deleted? Menu 6: • love for swelswelled when • thinking hy sty still be • they arhavehave thirty • I c I can’t Menu 7: • good li kit kitten • latin in ol.”ol.” Menu 8: • broughtand and served • An idea poppedo heo her head • tell me quiteen...Ien...I may • shows up to buowerowers...can • giant governmconsconspiracy • stoppedmoanmoaned Menu 9: • A tiny whr. Ar. All he Menu 10: • would bee...” e...” Giles Menu 11: • “ell ell his chip • feel Ang rel reluctance Life Serial Revisited IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=20777 • Anon 165602, glitched IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=20777 Menu 1: • from my anoonnoon • reactto tto those • Sleg. [para] g. • straflutflutter lower • while I’t t’t talk • the fact that italmoalmost time Menu 2: • reflexesI meI mentally • Not busy. rstyrsty, though Menu 3: • in title — 3mirkmirk, s/b just “Smirk” Menu 5: • Or gooingsings, depending • bleached bloamp.amp. And the Menu 6: • that Ge Get some • etiquette I g I get off • The bike!tingting off the Menu 7: • He is yingying my face Menu 8: • want you to bwarmwarm.” • suresure I should • throat.t fat fair Menu 9: • loss fords.rds. Never Menu 10: —first of all, i think this should be labeled as Ch10, not Ch11 • minSoftSoft at first • can’t get er.er. Muse http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29790 Menu 1: • up in leidleidoscope of • pick a bed alr,. B,. But none • realized handhand had • dumpster toccuoccupied it • for this [para] “T [para] “That Menu 2: • excuse foickeickers • hrushrust his coat • Buffy for thght ght and enjoy • suspsuspected • someplace q whe where we • as shtchetched his • jacket foldfolded it • shuddered against. [para] . • ah. ah. Repeat • then, sned,ned, “you • with We We could Falling Under http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30587 Menu 1: • lush mouthkingking very Menu 3: • makmovemove. He • words wereded ded as • back and ed aed at • eft eft before the sun • 2 fledgling vampires. [para] ] [para] “What cuz • regainheirheir balance • with her arms sm as he • Hen ren remembered Menu 4: • S lov love with Menu 5: • black kneeh boh boots • Cou aro around them Menu 6: • whlep elp,elp,” he Menu 9: • Its htimetime Buffy • at Willow and Xr. [para] r. • sure hthouthought about Menu 10: • looked illoillow when Menu 12: • es Des Dawn?” Menu 15: • open his can [para] “S [para] “Six Menu 16: • was that? *t? * Spike That Thing http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30599 Menu 1: • “Hello?&quofontfont> • means... somethitherther than • “Mm-mm,t; t; she denied • adorable. hap happened • &quoe dee deep stroke • you’re--&quofontfont> • Abthatthat thing... All That Love Went to Waste http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=18707 Menu 1: • on paper had he heartfelt

PAGE 39 Cookie Crumbs and Sippy Cups http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30362 Menu 1: • The love that ilt lt will no longer Menu 8: • Oz said so. . • walked over uffyuffy each Dance for me http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=26923 Menu 3: • and pond. Dd. Did it mean Menu 4: • SpikSpike was leaning Menu 5: • she wentikesikes rampant • puller unr until her • began thrusting sl. Bu. Buffy Menu 6: • tops of youighsighs...” Menu 12: • Shek tok to her knees • about the possibilif itf it not • started tok agk against him Menu 13 Meant To Be IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...=read&no=17 •Anon 10469, flame Again I Go Unnoticed I would class this under AU as they are ALL high school students at Sunnydale High in this story, none of them are vampires, Dru is a beautician...AU, with Buffy/Spike as the main pairing IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=28768 •Anon 2035401363, blank review IN STORY TEXT: Menu 1: • 2nd to last para: an arm ad hed her boyfriend Menu 2: • Xandarriarris and Willow • arm nd hnd him • with a ndlyndly smile and • “d I d I have a word • climbed is fis feet • Univeristy in thuntruntry! A • Hst cst certainly can Menu 3: If you ‘t s’t spent so much Menu 4: • about little ol,” ,” Buffy • On grad nig” sh” she • last line: weird character? Menu 5: • , yo, you haven’t,” he said • so closells?lls? • It’s 8:3e’re’re • He shru. “. “Felt • the one anoonnoon you • The girl ly sny snapped Menu 6: • She looked straugheadhead • Squinting, he titled hiad aad and • starting tond lnd like the • her slip>Tha>Thank • la0 later... [that’s a zero] • taking pla place behind • Wi William ran a hand Menu 7: • smirked, re’sre’s William? • just to reparepared for his • Ca do do this Menu 8: • catch a pse pse of the clock • Don’t tee lie little • Forehead hbeenbeen dating • it was fau fault! • turned on hquotquot; he • P>&qP>”Re-runs • cook me breat.&qt.” Menu 9: • taking a second p&quo” • rest of the s. Is. I’m sure Menu 10: • there is no text in this chapter Menu 11: • Anya hader ser spent time • not name ves’ves’.” • Princess’s edumacationot; ot; Xander’s • Hey, Bu&quo” • And Xr sor sort of • looks son Ton TV, but what Menu 12: • Relax,e dee deep breaths • is neglecting...”< < • ixteixteenth, whichever Menu 13: • at?at?” she yawned • and prly mly more bloody • with fveneveness than most • I wouldnorryorry about • in the sif hef her brand • start ‘er up.ith ith a mumbled • believe yoummermmers...” Menu 14: • Even if twerewere starting • chemistry ein fin five • was busshinshing out Menu 15: • Krisreamream!” • out of moutmouth Menu 16: • desks on eithide ide of Buffy • Unstandtandable.” Menu 17: • around, eyese. “e. “What? It Happened One Night http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28226 Menu 1: • waysways luv” • “,” h,” he said flipping • it wasgirlgirl thing • condom out of” “ • obvious sal.sal. She grinned • you’ven wen wet for • gettin’ down on houchouch.” Menu 2: • to use mean ean example • Buffo hoo hot Menu 3: • deeply. y iny invited • worry guy’s n’s not like • Buffy Wil Willow • of thposiposite sex • the oonesones who • Anya and er ser stared • before wang hng her • bleached wondSpikSpike! • Buffy smi cap capitalism Menu 4: • (which founfound herself • really interng cng conversations • Buffy!” p> p> • Or we ctandtand near • pupils wdiladilated • dragged hiyfriyfriend and Menu 5: • shot him ak ank and A Night to Remember http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29789 • are the ruand and I expect • any of the o p parties • glass, ing ing over the rim • mademade him hard Therapy http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28701 Menu 2: • Key was. s sos so afraid Menu 3: • turned to Spioldiolding one hand Menu 6: • “well...ffy ffy stalled • Buffy sna bac back Menu 7: • can be wver ver you want • forward anfasnfastened his • She begissiissing him Menu 8: • just say ‘Why doeed eed to wait Menu 11: • find out wht ist is between Menu 12: • I want but,he hhe hesitated Menu 13: • and anteanted the pencil about • sniffled, “Ituldnuldn’t have Menu 14: • She walketo tto the • sharp cheekd a d a lush looking • “ as aas a Legend • unled,led, off-balance • to spenme wme with • adulthood, anburiburied my • stop her.” “ I “ I confronted Menu 17: • ever get mad.” d.” • Who do yhinkhink is the Peaches & Herbs http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29420 Menu 1: • Chasing Amy .&quofontfont> • Willow rned.ned. “Loose • special kind of b.&qu.” • “Buffye e was a • did you get?”nt> Menu 2: • don’t think’s q’s quite ready • Spike yd hed her up Menu 3: • check in thrrorrror.” • swept Buffy ihis his arms Sixteen Candles http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28297 Menu 2: • Summers sa her her front • floor, rummaginrougrough the Menu 4: • once, for the . It. It was the • hands, ing ing across the floor • B rep replied • WilRoseRosenberg Body Shots http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28677 Menu 1: • 4th and 3rd lines from end: her code is written out in the text Menu 2: • “Slayer.&quotP> • Buffy-‘t p’t pretend • shook her he&quot”Forget it Menu 3: • quiver wdigudigust • I blame Faituot;uot; Buffy • Spike lookeizziizzically at her Menu 5: • out, &quon’t n’t kill • &qOkayOkay, thanks Menu 6: • Spike in the. &q. “I think • Right thequotquot; Menu 7: • &qP>”What night?” • last line: is in HTML code Menu 8: • spell it? Fi? Fine! • A gan vam vampires • Yeno kno kidding • jeans nd pnd panties Menu 9: • somborgborg Frankenstein • reason.&quoP> • he saiduot;uot;Ass Captivated IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=28679 •Anon 2035507374, blank review IN STORY TEXT: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28679 Menu 1: • learn someg.&qg.” • Shs sts stark Menu 2: • her th &qu “Summers! Wake&quo” • sighsighed, question • still confused> •defend himse&quo”Bloody hell Menu 3: • A A few more • go get the other Sr.&qr.” Menu 4: •ke lke looked as if • > > “I...I had this • Tell me.&quBR> BR> She • away. &quollmollmouth • > > She wasn’t • &;Glo;Gloating • R> R> “Actually • Don’t I?t; St; Spike • enough!” < A few Menu 5: • Trick smiledfidefidently • dyin’ to teomeoomeone the • &;So ;So I’ve heard Happy, Texas http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29148 I would class this as AU (the author states that it is in the AN, even) with Buffy/Spike as the main pairing. Per her AN, story is a dup of #184 posted in AU (2002) under her former author name of Desire. #184 has more chapters, 29148 only has 1; don’t know which to delete. Menu 1: • was the mosnvernversation he’d had SpikePuppet IN STORY SUMMARY http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?...846&page=39 • Spike is turnnto nto a puppet IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=22765 Menu 2: • you can tey thy the hair Menu 3: • to make Buf Buffy was getting Menu 5: • oven and crd upd up the heat • u anu and Cordy • transformed into a pu and and mailing • none of your bess,ess,” Spike • Youe bae back to Los Menu 6: • She war warning Buffy Menu 8: • hovered too e foe for comfort • has Spike writall all over it • this time than nig night Menu 9: • and onto nvennvenient target • Buffy ed hed her mouth • Who’s makihat hat racket • Angel was a vampirest. st. Angel Menu 10: “H “He was all forehead • Spike decide was was best if • are stupid. do ydo you think • And Iw how how! • buffyuffy didn’t have • Sppeekpeeked out from • Then, Accompanby aby a terrible [NOTE FROM SU: you really should read this part. it’s hysterical!] Menu 11: • just tuch uch to ask • When I was a puppet. [para] “ • would hlooklooked like that

sounds good! good timing, too—i don't have a lot of work going on right now, so i'd be happy to take a look at it. if you'd like to send it to me "outside", my email is <mamacita-san@hotmail.com>. i usually work in word, and prefer it especially for long documents, but i can also use NeoOffice if i have to. do either of those work for you? Mamacita (Su)

PAGE 11 no glitches PAGE 10 Me and My May Day Human http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31728 Menu 1: • in AN: obviously realreally R rated • smirkedMindMind ‘f I There are a couple of 2003 stories here, but they seem to have been cleaned up. Maybe the author beat us to it!

PAGE 11 Buffy’s Punishment IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544195514 • rev #6, Anon, id # 2035377904 — flame • rev #11, Anon, id # 2035385703 — flame (same Anon?) • flames against the flamer(s), d.a.m. id # 2035385788, lilywater id # 2035389136

Spike the Maid http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=14793 • the waxiremeremember

Why do we write this? Part 10 (Crocodile Hunter) http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544187925 Menu 2: • not really a chapter as such but a “where are they now” speculation for 20 years down the road of the cast of Buffy. keep? delete?

author Guess — minor prior to March 2008? http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=5410 •author profile says s/he is “finally legal as of March of 2008”. not sure how she is defining legal—18 or 21. if s/he turned18 in 3/08, then anything written before that is illegal and that is EVERYTHING IN HER COLLECTION. and if s/he turned 21 in 3/08, anything written before 3/05 is illegal, which consists of: BOOKS category • Unseen Circumstances BUFFY category • Spike the Maid • I’d Rather Be in Love • Embrace CELEBRITY FICTION category • Rainstorm • Nothing Can Stop Me Now • This Celluloid Dream • All Davey Wants for Christmas Is... • Break Me • Drumsticks Fit in Very Interesting Places MOVIES category • Edward • Mid Morning Realities • Don’t • The Book • Teaching Jack • Crossing Blades with a Pirate Why Do We Write This? Part 10 (Crocodile Hunter) IN REVIEWS: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544187925 • well deserved, but still: rev Bufffan, id # 3000012882 — flamer • and the next “reviewer” after goolecap responds, Anon id # 3000012908 — flamer • and Porl id # 3000013004, flamer • once again, goolecap should be very proud of himself, as what follows in “reviews” is nothing more than yet another flame-fest. and no one thinks this guy is a troll but me? Feedback (goolecap’s UN-STORY) IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=16842 • even though this is an “un-story” and will be deleted, it’s a great example of goolecap’s M.O. of starting a flame-fest and then fanning the flames. is he a good enough contributor that you want to keep him? or is that just my prejudice showing? • big flamefest: flaming him, attacking each other...oh, the fun just never ends with this guy. OMG, i feel a name-calling coming on! Spike the Maid IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=14793 • single rev Tamara, id # 90862 — can a one-word review be a flame? not sure. if it can, i guess it is.

Feedback: why do we write this http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=16842

Choices http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=26940 Menu 1: • SpikeShe She • waspingping for air • Gentl rea reached • were?he didn’t Menu 2: • at the ceg fog for • making the entsents inside • face,kingking for • head oursours? • her,ans ans she Menu 3: • at, co, coldness • he mhe movies • “W [para] “What does • Spimilemiled. She Menu 4: • in chapter title: should read “Chapter 4”, reads “ChapterrA” • with exen. Hn. He was • in the!” !” • slag thg the door • was disrd.”d.” • never trust.’ [para] .’ [para] “--My • him. ?Look • was touctouchy feely Menu 5: • at the cng, ng, at the • best yst yet • didn’t theyme tme to • inspion son struck • her chesd did disappeared • Angel sng ang at it Menu 6: • “ou hou have • pikepike scowled Menu 7: • be soing ing though Menu 8: • from hoom oom and Menu 9: • glared am. m. • “finhatehatever • as hood,hood, gesturing • That fun.fun • and panten hen he Menu 10: • screaming mathe whe was • fact tyou you had • years I a I am an • thhe ohe only Menu 11: • kind ove ave a • say.be nbe not • ite ree really Menu 12: • ffy,ffy, we have • until pos point of • You? Th? That’s • quite a dienceence • Nw she hven ven more Menu 13: • Oh tanglangled web • was clenchishe she was • m jum just going • is concd, wd, we’ll Menu 15: • as sheghedghed • massage wasrelarelax Menu 16: • didn’t loim. im. Menu 18: • were bgettgetting things • lng ang accusingly Menu 19: • she was surprito fto find • and yon tan take • shiverrun run through • awaye loe looked • everything.he khe kissed • like t She She cared Menu 20: • Abort, t! [para] t! • head ahrughrugged • past foursours since • Anwerewere there • welcomy, y, “Wesley.” • away frngelngel • WhatWhat now • whole reawhy why • never therforefore you • on the shor. Tr. The girl • shook her [cuts off] [para] Oh [para] Oh god Menu 21: • explain hetiontions or • about A? How? How • hard to explabut but I Menu 22: • Bufouldouldn’t sleep • smiled. .” [para] .” • what I nto tto tell Menu 23 (called Ch. 22) • on’ton’t you think • for yo fio figure • head is tellingthatthat this • ?I?m glad you?re here.? • Con, tn, there’s • breathing exees tes to • Get Get your Menu 24: • this is a repeat of Menu 23 (but is called ch.23) Menu 25 (called ch. 24) (no glitches) Menu 26: • “I k”I know that Menu 27: • door burs ope open • Oh. Did kno know • Sort Liv Living Menu 28: • had for eacher.her • as if I hall tll the Menu 30: • lig light kisses Menu 31: • Buffy isays ays there • you don’nt tnt to lose Menu 39: • turned?were you?were you ever

Witch’s Vampire http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544210067 Menu 4: • author has reposted chapter 3 (deliberately) along with chapter 4; ch.3 should be deleted from menu 4 as it is also posted in menu 3 Bankhead Academy: Book Two IN REVIEWS (if this is something you want to fix): http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=29250 • Joolz, id # 232133: stht bht back into • MsSpikester, id # 232471: expect Th Thanks • Doug, id # 251552: Ha.ew iew it’d be • Dana, id # 252983: summeAnywAnywhoo • Ali, id # 2656764: i’m steaat tat the • Anon, id # 271446: like wTaraTara asks • same: I haealleally enjoyed • Roasty, id # 273636: great, sto story’s better • Amanda, id # 274367: anhopehope people • Illuxi, id # 274462: like eee mee more • Doug, id # 274667: stepped of myf my hooch • same: Hmho eho else could • towelgirl, id # 277798: were makinstatstatement about • Illuxi, id # 291977: on morod wod work IN STORY TEXT: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29250 Ch 1: • finally scd upd up, huh • just uhm, nevnd...”nd...” • the occasioglanglance to • a month [para] “... [para] “...And • Dawn surreptisly sly slid • appreciate it [para] “O [para] “Oh, okay • Buffy, png sng slightly • back rand and all • onto thepus.pus.” • copy anffy,ffy, who • lot, Oer. er. We’re • knew wre sre safe Ch 2: • across the roo [para] “S [para] “She’s not • in thairhair directly • wasttacttached to • this aftternot 2:t 2:00 • she’s fod byd by Faith • Or perhahat hat doesn’t • Dawuck uck her • hurry up,t but bus driver • with t oth other snts. nts. • sor sorry. This • his t coc cock dancing Ch 3: • in chapter title (in text): A Rooth Ath An Honor • When he cctedcted Travers • was abusivthe the • that thrichrich kids • grin Buf Buffy sidled • sprehighhighs resting • downwardto hto her Ch 4: • wide opnd rnd rolling • Bufointointed toward • waiting in. [para] . • No,l.y. ly. I mean • form a slobbg meg mess • entrance wavingving off • Faith sd frd from Ch 5: • Yeahll, ll, I guess • ink ink they were • weand and now • Joyouldould feel Ch 6: • more nse one one behind • he’s a bidiesdies man • eah,eah, cool • Faith’s drirderrder and • spottee sie signal • to hardespitspite itself • Going soere...ere... • G-getlineline • Warrenyes yes darted • and yd hid his • girls andrendrew as • holding thi this little • b-I haI hate you • whin emn embarrassed Ch 7: • ll, ll, uhm, you know • on thn. Sn. She grabbed • and let tht there • hinghing below • Anotherke. [para] ke. • anymore extensif thf the • perpetrator at thointoint.” Ch 8: • onto an evore ore out • FUbusibusiness law • arounde? Ce? Cause • to if n han half a • mouth giv giving to • Youw, mw, mom • his relentleoundounding • more actelytely, hot Lessons in Control http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544176879 Ch 2: • p>Spike Ch 4: • this is not a chapter. it’s a note advertising that more of the story is posted on another site