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  1. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 9 Unused (600030082) Menu 21 • okay, this is odd. this chapter apparently got lost and is supposed to be posted between menu 9 and menu 10 (in the menu she calls it chapter 9.5) Menu 22 • just an AN announcing the cancellation of further chapters, not a chapter Inside (18052) Ch 5 • with all thosmonsmons you Ch 6 • me not elebelebrate? Change of season (544211639) In reviews Page 2 • by Sandra (3000012598): Fantastic ChapherFantastic chapter!
  2. Not supposed to exist with each other (600030488) —ORPHAN STORY: there is no AU link shown in archive-page summary or in story. archive page link: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?...=746&page=9 story link: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030488
  3. New paths (600030741) In reviews Page 2 • dup reviews by Invisabell (3000018588,89) Two fronts (544175322) In reviews Page 1 • by omnikool (2035133647): flame • apologized for on page 6 (2035643203), good grief, these people make me tired Page 2 • by Dylan (2035134932): fired-up reaction to omnikool’s flame
  4. from buffy / femslash /root p. 10 FEIOD (600030346) —shouldn’t she write out the title so it will display on archive page, instead of abbreviating it, which means nothing to anyone? RR (600030351) —again, she needs to write out the title instead of abbreviating. this seems to be her M.O.
  5. Living on the edge (544173591) In reviews Page 3 • 3 dup reviews by Ally (2035131122,25,26)
  6. What if (544207057) In reviews —one reviewer made mention of a chapter that had been posted twice, but i didn’t find any sign of it Page 2 • by Anon (2035612015): s/he posts a URL, not a review. can’t find anything in the URL that is germane—they are reviews of something else apparently
  7. Happy oh happy (26850) In reviews Page 1 • by Anon (212026): flame • by Joe Hundredaire (266456): flame • by Joe Mama (267065): flame good grief!
  8. from Buffy / femslash /root - page 12 Their vampire (600030175) —duplicate story, is also posted as 544195967 by shadowed1figure (was on a previous page i did of B/FS/root)
  9. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 13 Her destiny's will (544207129) Ch 1 • not a chapter, just an AN
  10. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 14 Buffy's bitch (8653) In reviews Page 1 • in Warrick (40731): what ens ens next . . . thdy sdy switching In story Ch 7 • on the brink of an orgas the then • found to be somewunseunsettling • any pas, ss, suddenly • blonde a beseechinok. ok. • told the watche [para] Wi [para] Willow nodded • threthree males looked • the safe si. Th. Though • enjoyed Buf Buffy • which wouou pou prefer • your othandhand to • occupied spa spanking your • instrument fquasquashing flies • five more,Co” B” Buffy • m rem really loving • occasionalringringing her • humans anllmollmouth Ch 8 • claws slodescdescending • sigh of relturnturned into • with ver-ver-increasing • days.rdelrdelia became • Creative-withkes kes Summers • many prts, ts, Xander • run out.ce mce most of • silent for ale ble before • Michael Fay –ay • his personal s aga again • whhe bhe blonde • your assongsongs to • bitch. [para] Cor [para] Cordelia’s moans • blonde. ep fep finger-fucking • the bl tho thoughtfully Ch 9 • blonde Slayerrtedrted • pretty youomenomen were • watchinglittlittle girl • his braor aor any kind • librarian thin [para] “ [para] “I know it’s • then thmon mon is • from its h! [para] h! • daddy’s g hav have to pay • the blondemedemed to
  11. Broken (544173412) Ch 8 • an AN, not a chapter i'm not really sure if this is allowed—posting a "chapter" that is really only an AN, nothing else. if not, this is one and you can delete it or whatever you do with them. i've been listing these as there seem to be a lot of them....
  12. Kragdon (544198572) In reviews Page 3 • dup reviews by Wicked1 (2035589606,7)
  13. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 16 The third slayer (544215658) • not a chapter, just an AN and plug for another story of hers Do what you have to do (544215245) —for some reason, entire story is centered. and in boldface. Can never reach her (544215247) —again, entire story centered and in boldface Just a little bit of fun (23537) Ch 1 • orgasm caippiipping through • of the redd. [para] d. Ch 4 —centered and in boldface (sigh)
  14. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 17 Butch (544212999) • ##Ever heard (and no glitches/wordord at all in page 18! will wonders never cease?!)
  15. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 19 Their vampire (544195967) Ch 5 • a lot of ¡¥ and ¡§, punctuation mis-cues of some sort? Ch 6 • AN, not a chapter It's not a sister thing (544173774) Ch 21 • not a chapter but an AN posing a story challenge. Unspoken emotion (1884) In reviews • by corey (2051): holy fucat wat was awesome In story • have a good ti Aft After I • Hey, dyouryour sister • before, In, Bn, Buffy • wearing Rans. [para] ns. • And,courcourse the • better than pil pillow or • as she gd hed herself
  16. Challange (544216071) —story challenge (un-story) located on Buffy/Femslash/root p.16
  17. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 20 Make me forget (544186531) In reviews Page 9 • dup reviews by Anon (2035467857,8) Just because you can't see me (21053) In reviews Page 1 • by demonblues (152463): was wwritwritten • by charmed1 (153165) in p.s.: the word sd bed be Page 4 • in charmed1 (188253): on fX anythlikelike that can Page 5 • in Sarah (213976): I’m sorrnevenever reviewed before Page 7 • in Cristina (272975): your d (yd (your fic • in Eos (276820): great thingu’veu’ve come up with In story Ch 4 • Joyce is sittit tht the counter Ch 5 • You’ve nineninety seconds Ch 8 • “I’me.” e.” Ch 9 • looks houghough what • need a fav” [para] “ • Dimmitt I can Buffy’s Ch 10 • How iing ing killed • would be fferfferent story Ch 11 • it’s myth.””You”Your the Ch 13 • Were in tasemasement Ch 14 • cut inte bae bars Ch 15 • “And the sd?” [para] d?” • wring the sck. ck. ck. Ch 16 • I grab onis his hair • I can’t h thh them • planed isn’t pr. Do. Don’t try Ch 20 • I’vntednted to make • not lookat aat anything • bottom li I o I open Ch 22 • get back ir per pervious Ch 23 • Shes los losing her • my voice booking no argu. [cuts off] Ch 24 • on his lis pri priorities • I’m alregonegone Ch 25 • know that one [para] “Be [para] “Because if you Ch 27 • Heds mds me a piece • happen.”hrowhrow my own Ch 30 • I kilikelike it • I cuI cut him Ch 31 • back against the . “B. “Better than • Rng tng the lapses Ch 32 • She says casually as she pas [cuts off] Ch 34 • with your s bes behind Ch 36 • one andh ith it deep • andklinkling me to • weapon inshoushoulder just Ch 37 • The otis pis pushed Ch 38 • want me tI neI need to • slaty terunnrunning along Ch 40 • heart beat. Not g [cuts off] Ch 42 • Which ged Ied I don’t Ch 43 • of “Fa “Faith.” She says Ch 44 • one of her ands on my s [cuts off] Familial games (544184740) Twin of a slayer (16322) In reviews Page 1 • in Anon (162498): much more of a ew. ew. • dup reviews by syou (166647, 166648) • in FC (203091): leaving ed oed out reviews • I’ve sta starting In story Ch 1 • the mouth piec [para] “N [para] “Not up • for yousomesomething • onto thedle.dle. Ch 2 • told her ahen hen dumped Ch 5 • be theWe nWe need Ch 7 • I knI know she • brushiast ast it over Ch 9
  18. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 21 Rest stop (544200787) In reviews Page 4 • dup reviews by s (2035463040, 2035463041) That post-apocalyptic tension (28292) Ch 1 • in AN: Yourrediredible stories • younger brue [para] e [para] “Yeah, I dont • to do othern sln slaying • rested on thotchotch of • yea,you lthatthat Ch 2 • is only a one-sentence AN, not a chapter She walks the night (544188378) —au is a minor (see post in Review Board forum) i don’t know that there’s any point in looking for glitches since you’re probably going to wipe either her stories (both stories by her were written in 2005 when she was 16) and/or account as. ‘zat okay? Although i did notice in the reviews: Page 2 • dup reviews by cristina (2035314706, 2035314707) Unexpected redemption (544191251) In reviews Page 1 • by me (2035324464): is gsettingfreally good She was curious (27021) In reviews Page 1 • 6 dup reviews by Anon (307445,6,7,8,9,50) Page 2 • and another dup for a total of 7 by Anon (307451) In story Ch 3 • touch, hece ice is flustered Ch 4 • an AN, not a chapter Lost without her (33417) • just going ake ake these • You were stig a g a bit so • in her life,th eth easily • h reh returned from the • Buffy moaneudlyudly and • to go averyverything will • She pointed rd trd the door • Growing impat, sh, she began • F [para] Faith reached the • guess thatkay.kay.” • the older sl’s m’s mouth • forehead on tlondlonde’s Waking up beside you (31463) In reviews • by ChO (251521): Dssinssing fics are • pantAs IAs I did • those wordsore ore and Slayer and shadow: interlude (17201) Ch 2 • Don’ase ase me, please • that were pl aro around
  19. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 22 The glitch (21518) —In reviews Page 2 • by lele angel03 (237510): i like thst cst chap Page 3 • by toria (291333): to reaffy’ffy’s reaction —In story Menu 1 —is an expanded AN • story is formetitltitled . . . Queagonagon —per her AN, sounds like she may have a 2nd account with this story also posted under that name...although i can’t quite tell due to the glitch what name that Q-word IS... 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Willow’s • sleep on gro ground • their elestlest they • with a gigglblusblush Menu 17 • are so revng ang and slutty Trials and restorations (30994) In reviews Page 3 • by cristina (296612): Or rathfeelfeels lost • by Kecky (296628): some soe soon In story Ch 1 • going , ki, kid Ch 2 • with you or not at a” [para] “ [para] “I’m not • in the oppositeectiection • the youngstressressed on • them werone,one, the • as the be spe sped up Ch 4 • door tr ner newly Ch 5 • LitJoycJoycey Summers • loving Newk. Ik. Is he • moves you goere,ere,” • prompted,w yow you’re Ch 6 • Joyce std, bd, before • obvious. Joy Joyce • Stamazamazed Ch 7 • J rel relented • she onedoned the bartender • way to hearre, re, the • the psychiatristhis his shirt Ch 8 • let me go Ido ado anything • done anythto yto you • Faialkealked away Ch 9 • No,” Faitplieplied • at iat is it • Three srs?”rs?” Giles • Buffy toim. im. • Kennedy chimed in. re sre should Ch 10 • for the sittinoundoundh thh the • sheepishe the turned Genesis (19494) In reviews Page 1 • by lycanthrope (142329): And the ‘Date,Date is • by lycanthrope (142580): just left mndinnding Page 2 • by Ami (166473): You ly dly developed Page 3 • by AcidBurn (184260): this prs probably been Page 7 • by Eos (233413): forward eveeek eek to read Page 8 • by lajolie (244088): Aneaseease don’t let • by Eos (249879): next updatCanCan’t wait Page 11 • by michelle (292614): U havallyally . . . fic q an an epic • by maximum (300341): ‘trulykingking wonderful In story Ch 1 • and rem remembered • all for itybe ybe it will • past anf thf the bus • would nitenitely be a war • Buffy t fot for Ch 2 • awoke as the mng sng sun Ch 3 • time hame fme for everyone Ch 4 • as then arn around • Yeah a scr screwed • rapped hers ars around • was tht thinking Ch 5 • se bse baby • Willowtterttered Ch 6 • on her upprm. rm. • orniorning Faith • werepineping me warm • Once agtheythey were • X-men totall r” Sh” She • eyes,on’ton’t do puppy • as if a er oer of fact • enough e cae can train • log atg at the • h leh leaned • what, ow aow and Ch 7 • Sorry G Giles • spas grs groundrrurrounding the • school lry bry back • third rs, rs, they • all signeHe oHe offered Ch 8 • were y toy to start • stated in htalitalian accent • at what tlderlder slayer • Cajoinjoin you Ch 9 • to anyon pon presence • the variousght ght lifting • another peac sle sleep Ch 10 • come on .” W.” Willow • eah eah G-man • ere,ere, only you • yours aga Buf Buffy • on one couc Buf Buffy Ch 11 • Faith’s lipshershers. • of hng Ang Avril’s voice • on the r cor corner • Yeah, um betget get in then • had aat tat time Ch 12 • Sherehere’d you go • “I [para] “I know but • all thoks oks that • come iFaitFaith offered Ch 15 • their nellmellmouth • demons non none of • sweath andked ked extremely Ch 17 • kiss foromenoment • stood watcwatched waiting • ‘s m’s mine, na B • Shilediled. Ch 18 • drop to floofloor Ch 19 • much er.”er.” Faith • as goosmps mps appeared • and seedeeeded it now • Iu c u c cumming • her tongnto nto the • thlastlast memeting • replieding ing to Ch 20 • locating tew sew slayers Ch 21 • Buffhe she saw Kendra . . . shathatthat had to Ch 24 • and bega sta stand • eye con she she bowed he head • grinned ananedaned in lacelace a chaste • looked deepo heo her • fingers aroune wae waist • taking pan pants down Ch 26 • Illyrian er [para] “ [para] “Good • He [para] He could hear • “wontwont get nothing • were broughtut, ut, well Ch 27 • began a gruellinsaulsault there • do you ksomesomething Ch 28 • The w loo looked a Ch 29 • maybe, but sti still the Ch 30 • snugly with e ree ree replied • Buffe’s e’s not really • they coAndrAndrew and • readingdon’don’t mind • little wenougnough to . . . lunc [para] Bu [para] Buffy left • darver.ver. • spoppropproaching • bad wayaithaith winked Ch 31 • lives wouhey hey not be • Buffy toolot lot on herself • other’cks cks Ch 32 • currently nuzzlat tat the • the lighgan gan to fade • blood ted ted the grain • kiss and sut het her exposed • in her ets ets for her • way dohe hhe hall to get • Looking aroanxianxiously he Ch 33 • heat sing ing to radiate • couldn’rk ork out how • So mauestuestions running • it to her m she she • there png rng rabbits Bittersweet goodbye: faith's return (36795) • but Gilet a t a hand on • you’ll havecomecome to LA • it’s drivie cre crazy • she spots me,rin rin forms Bittersweet goodbye (36375) • sayssays as she I'd go anywhere with you (36045) In reviews • by cat (285146): slayers ery ery well In story Ch 1 • Sougreagreat • “H “How are we • Srummrummed her fingers • once wer were in the Ch 2 • do it whsittsitting up and • sobbsobbed • Iled led her • hadn’t been t int in at all • finally makinogreogress Ch 3 • I’mry ary about your • thought hadnhadn’t seen • awhilet I t I had to • No, you di,” F,” Faith • I waokinoking for • I really orryorry Ch 4 • Shehed hed again • her as possibburyburying her Ch 5 • gonna fuck u. I. I always Ch 6 • water, I can tell you’re “ Bu” Buffy • loweFaitFaith gently Ch 7 • “I [para] “I didn’t think I was • crook offy’ffy’s neck
  20. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 23 Only time (544193661) —there are about 5 sentences in this; not sure why she bothered posting it. says she’s busy now, doesn’t have time, blah blah blah. written in 2005 so probably safe to assume it’s not going to be added to. do you leave stuff like that or delete it? Running (544185914) —thought this looked familiar! it’s also posted as story ID 39011 (femslash p.25) by au a “LottieluvsSpuffy”, posted here by au as Lottie. ID 39011 only has 7 chapters and was first posted in 11/04, 544185914 has 10 and first posted in 5/05. will go ahead looking for glitches in this version anyway. [none] Starting over again (38699) In reviews Page 1 • ‘nuaidhaid (1920270527): is this reviewer’s name glitched? starts with a ‘ so not sure Page 4 • 3 dup reviews by allie (2035170554, 2035170555, 2035170557) In story Menu 2 • I just wyou you to know Menu 11 • is an AN excusing lateness, errors, whatnot—is not a chapter Silent voices (38123) In reviews Page 1 • by rma (300849): looks bot both ariliniling Ch 1 • br> A myriad Ch 2 • p clp class=MsoNormal> • from Faith. [para] p> [para] Guess that proves • to the bar toce, ce, drink, • if it wust ust a dream Love is blind (544188468) —i would delete the rest of the crap from the title display on the archive page, but maybe that’s just me Don't go! (17694) —ditto, i would remove the little AN from the title display on the archive page? • guiding it wi her her • shggedgged • gasped uncinlyinly, having
  21. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 24 Something wicked (544186274) In reviews Page 1 • dup reviews by Janell (2035260582, 2035260583) • dup reviews by Evi (2035263735, 2035263745) Death do us join (544187105) —there is some weird coding in here. close to the beginning, para 2 of a flashback has some weird symbols (¡ followed by something i can’t duplicate) in place of an apostrophe, this goes throughout the chapter. —in para after flashback there are more ¡ symbols this time followed by K, i have no idea what that’s supposed to be. —in para beginning “Then, some flashbacks” there is ¡§ as a symbol, no idea what that is either! —there is only 1 short chapter in this story. if you want to (?) do a search-and-replace of these weirdies fine, there are no other glitches that i can see, just the odd symbols. Obsidian moonlight (544180158) In reviews Page 6 • by Nikki (2035200051 and 2035200055): accuses au of plagiarism • and Ms Ice (2035200823, 2035200825) puts out a duplicate denial/apology Faith has my bed (544181963) In reviews Page 3 • dup review by chantel (2035256962, 2035256963) In story Ch 4 —for some reason the entire chapter is centered Rebellion (35950) In reviews Page 1 • in Anon (1920271631): incredible,anding ing ing it In story Ch 1 • in AN: ARY:ARY: • until she comes baspanspan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> But I doubt • I casit sit still • an invasion. s”> I fell to • and std std struggling • I l>I put the kid • damage blet’let’s face it Ch 2 • Dawn qui dra dragged • It’s not enoI kI know but • to defehat hat darkness Ch 3 • more than you k.&qk.” I add • in the last feekseeks • you this t&quo” • Ft’>Faith closed • clasclass=MsoNormal>&nbspendiendif]> • Wit knt knowing thveryveryone else • whateverpenepened to you • &q’>”It wasn’t enough • I’ll help.&qu.” • clasclass=MsoNormal> • into hiss, ps, pressing • p clp class=MsoNormal>”I think • purred be pu pushing the Ch 4 • To Live Forever?”< < • He ple pleasantly while Ch 5 • night of Tdancdance, her • and Spike. pan>pan>They all • < sty style=’font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt; font-familiy:”Times New Roman”’>The preparations Ch 6 • lasslass=MsoNormal>”Oh hey • living. pan>pan> • s’> She turned Life's what you make it (38511) In reviews Page 1 • well, this is odd. both Anon (304117) and Tor (304118) are basically the same review, except there’s wordord in the Tor one. duplicate reviews? different author accounts? In story Menu 1 • in AN: i nehe ehe encouragement wel well • raindrops e doe down • trusting i person ema email • place is chi children • don’t knowim rim ready —hard to tell the glitches from the crappy spelling! e-x-e-c-r-a-b-l-e, OMG! (fer shur) Menu 2 • weird—page won’t collapse, so after the first little bit she puts in hard line endings to make it all very narrow. easier to read, but hmmmm • What whats wrong Buffy • in that ure ure i almost Menu 3 • not a chapter but a winding, wandering AN. delete? Menu 6 • sadly, even reading this piece of crap word for word i’m having a hard time telling what might be glitches and what is just crap. i truly think it’s all crap writing. Menu 7 • not a chapter, another AN begging for reviews Menu 9 • Oh. My. GOD. it’s ANOTHER non-chapter AN!!! we can cut out half her story if we delete the “chapters” that are just ANs!!!
  22. Life's what you make it (38511) —i think i mentioned this author before as a possible minor (Tallerthanastump) and this story makes me think so even more. the writing is so immature and just has the feel of a youngish teenager writing it. yeah, i’m pretty convinced it’s a kid. and a review whore at that. 3 ANs disguised as chapters, asking for reviews and offering apologies for why she hasn’t posted lately. GAH!!!
  23. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 25 Wanting what you can't have (544180020) Ch 5 • is not a chapter, just a very long AN Bad girls win faith dominates buffy's family (544176937) In reviews • by Thanos6 (2035202309): link doesn’t work • by b (3000011399): not a review, blank (one letter) In story Ch 1 • you..you..ohm doing Electricity flows (38997) In reviews Page 1 • by LJ13 (1920271912): i hope datedate soon Honour thy father (544177641) Menu 1 • is not a chapter, just the summary and background info Menu 4 • as sh shifted gears Menu 12 • is not a chapter, just an extended disclaimer Menu 13 Je me souviens (35281) In reviews Page 2 • in mint (302379): so good. pe tpe to see more Page 3 • in mint (305567): is definy wey welcome In story Ch 1 • Author’sond ond Note • Fa [para] Faith gave her a • The weiof tof the • She tried tcidecide on a Ch 2 • Buffy she’dhe’d get here • boiled in hermachmach Ch 3 • to be a cncinncing actress • start to k, bk, but in the The spell unspoken (19462) —this whole story has very weird line endings. Ch 1 • okay” y try tried • \” B” Buffy Ch 2 • you finis” W” Willow • Willow sed bed back • He’s da Any Anya Ch 4 • y shy she’s not • patrolled thmetrmetry with her • So whxactxactly does • at the memorHe wHe would Ch 5 • Bufrasprasped Willow’s • an impressio Buf Buffy that —i think the au finally noticed because in Ch 6 the lines are all manually ended! Ch 6 • . So. So are you • Willow waarinaring Ch 7 • Nouffyuffy said gaining • at!at! A tall lithe
  24. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 26 The brink of your mind (ID 29416) In reviews Page 1 • response by ELR (233934): i hahe che characters . . . of mworkwork popping Page 2 • response by ELR (236494): so basicall’m ‘m filtering • dup reviews by EvilDoer (237141, 237143): of the pre. Th. This Page 4 • by Calamity (294634): Gotta knhat hat happens • by Cat (302948): Ie yoe you continue In story Ch 3 • was just a litbit.bit. Because • do you eveplaiplain that Ch 4 • always abowasnwasn’t it? • even as ste stepped • whate a e a slayer so • might be fae family Ch 5 • causing her ind ind the eyes Ch 9 • Sheecomecome slightly 1.01 life’s short (ID 544174253) Menu 6 • this is just an AN, not a chapter Why do you exploit me? (ID 38786) In reviews • by kai (306946): an update felcoelcome to In story • I mastmasturbating last
  25. GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 27 My love (ID 29841) In reviews Page 1 • by blugrashopr (249970): really likes fis fic Page 3 • by Anon (271955): was at fullengtength • by omnikool (272144): Keeptingting and maybe • by omnikool (276182): torture him somev more in Page 6 • by blu (279849): how faith onnaonna take it • duplicate review by lycanthrope (279954, 279958) Page 8 • by Ashley (280963): He’s m’s me again • by cat (281283): And oh one mohinghing Page 10 • by maximum (287125): fuckingd std story • by michelle (287244): I am very interestn sen seing Page 11 • by M Kennedy (287323): keep up the incrediblb. Mb. • by rma (287574): dealing wa Sla Slayer’s Page 13 • by michelle (289536): He sucks I t I think . . . writing e & e & I can’t Page 14 • by rma (292119): Faith will fintointo her • by rma (292227): very same day thet ent engaged • by Deacon (292243): seeing her ex l’s c’s cold Page 15 • by firecracker (292348): I just rehis his whole . . . long to updaI woI would Page 16 • by alllie (3 L’s) (298118): the warning of y. iy. i liked • by michelle (298161): theirdingding & all Page 17 • by M Kennedy (298219): The s wis with Angel • by Cat (298581): terms of futuraps,aps, there • another dup review by lycanthrope (303747, 303749) Page 18 • by allie (303803): were wihe hhe honeymoon • by Celestria (1920270783): wedding jittjitters • by Cat (1920270932): faith inglanglasses Page 22 • by Blackie (2035311938): just 3-1/2 lines of ?????? (leave in? remove?) In story Menu 1 • “Sl” Sp” Spike finished. Menu 3 • ke ske stopped beside Menu 6 • ter ter the dance • someone walk thenthen she smiled • B* Buffy and Faith • got the rigrinkrink baby • my super strengthghlyghly protective • loudlyFaitFaith moved • Sh gon gonna pay • couple of tes tes later • watchers councild fod for in Menu 7 • tho though Riley • on for afereferent reason . . . theds ‘ds ‘I’m sorry • She’ll b, sh, she’s • who was sig dog down • looked ae doe door Menu 10 • to massage heeasteast • sat up aookeooked at her Menu 11 • out of here [para] e [para] “No” Menu 12 • kissed him on theek [para] eek Menu 13 • on her chest asth pth played • do I sue” Se” She said • Buffy anssedssed the top Menu 14 • Bufookeooked who’s • in AN: think onnaonna happen Menu 15 • Angel was th [para] “ [para] “Yeah, • Faitd Spd Spike turned • SpikSpike see tears Menu 17 • ands obs obviously • poured a large s ofs of Jack Menu 18 • looked up affy ffy for the Menu 19 • down at the fl [para] F [para] Faith saw • happiness of yengaengagement • for a li cha chat Menu 20 • bestest frie’ve ‘ve ever • their SpikSpike, Faigh and I • so are yonnaonna paint • e toe took off • giggling anumblumbling again Menu 21 • hangover glasseBuffBuffy asked • I love yBuffBuffy • She ssimpsimply Menu 23 • not a chapter, just an AN, really a plug for other stories she’s writing – remove? Menu 24 • Se said nipping at his ear nipping at his ear Ginger snap (ID 33882) In reviews Page 2 • by meri (287671): i loveadieading the • by memet (300878): i’m so very verypy! py! Page 3 • by Cat (302927): Faith in the mhis his time Page 4 • by Faith (1920271959): pleasetinutinue In story Ch 1 • Faith, doe doesn’t even Ch 4 • seemed perfectormaormal to Ch 5 • carry in bundlessignsigns and Ch 6 • au has mistakenly typed “Chapter Seven” at top of story text, should be 6 (previous was 5, pull-down menu says 6, text says 7) Ch 7 • Faith’sglesgles subsided Ch 9 • “Ozit!”it!” Buffy • sign leg agg against Ch 10 • again text shows “Chapter Nine” when it should be 10, per the pull-down menu plus prev. ch. was 9 Fleeting (ID 28107) In reviews Page 3 • by Cat (294637): I wouealleally like that In story Ch 1 • I’ve had thportportunity to • I felt about hehe’dhe’d had the • through thekingkingn ringer • wasn’t aoraborable day Ch 2 • as one. /> /> Ch 3 • stomach againstmachmach. Heat Ch 4 • not supposedbe hbe here Ch 5 • into hea head, as it • to the aga again Ch 7 • wallets be dus dusting • reaching ss tss the table • that wnato bto bark Ch 8 • exista As As if my • head, I r I realised Ch 9 • reality on tanvaanvas of • and cont tht throbbing • crude blood splrs ors on the Ch 10 • shovshoved him back • contempt dropprom rom his Ch 11 • looking outit. it. it was Ch 12 • word,fy nfy nodded • to pop ity ouy out of • wondered idelythe the red head Ch 16 • almoithoithout touching • Hen eyn eyes ignored Wicked (ID 38781) • her crazy witst ast and I • covein Bin Buffy • howh thh this little • off my ces. es. The bet (ID 38779) In reviews • by AMY (307083): read it befon yon your In story Ch 1 • youdy, dy, mind Ch 3 • with anotwomawoman, but • My lif Bos Boston was • almost violy. Iy. I was also Ch 4 • to my humabodeabode • jacket thaneedneeded to feel Ch 5 • hookhook my head Ch 6 • give . Sh. She seemed • toue?!”e?!” Buffy’s • my pusspussy was as wet • wanna ravyou.you... • head fsideside to side • on it, mng ang as her • I r [para] I released it Mile high club (ID 38782) In reviews • by LJ13 (307468): story considepecipecially cause In story • Then Ie hee her taste • ind ind up against her • ow row raises an eyebrow Hot (ID 38785) • with aal. al. They’d • Hey Wills, whatp?” [para] p?” Enrage (ID 38784) • ng mng my neck • yes. I th” He” He looks • can make sone cne come Just a little (ID 38783) In reviews • by DushkusBitch (306874): *ent ent sigh* In story • she’s wwarmwarm and Lost without you (ID 29291) In reviews Page 1 • by ELR (233977): you ca lea leave them Page 2 • by slayer (239969) a pit tht thats In story Menu 1 • move atay tay quiet Menu 2 • forming on my fees. es. Menu 5 • many differwaysways. • streaming dmy fmy face • “Tha”Thank you,” I whisper Menu 6 • gonna go finme -me -man?-?” Menu 7 • this should be chapter 7, otherwise 7 gets skipped. she has it as 8 both in the text and the pull-down menu • at meDamnDamn • face wshe she came Menu 8 • this should be chapter 8—7 was skipped in numbering She's mine (ID 36944) In reviews Page 1 • by Dylan (292224): you say yere ere writing • by Electra126 (292780): Faith doesn’cidecide to Page 2 • by Cat (302428): and Faith’snineniness. In story Ch 1 • inhaled mof hef her Ch 2 • to me,ningning heavily Ch 3 • shut upuffyuffy threw Ch 4 • but acce my my answer • it pays t thi this hot • Thys, ys, well they Ch 5 • Faith was gogo. go. Shed rush • She wrettretty sure • I jlikelike her Ch 6 • down to herts. ts. I Never was kissed (ID 33207) In reviews Page 4 • by Order of the Otter (281593); Keritiriting, anad Page 6 • by greens (305649): but pe noe no end or In story Menu 3 • loved theses. Ts. They were Menu 5 • tutor, maGracGrace could • the rionsionship between Menu 6 • Thanks.ileyiley shut the Menu 7 • should be titled chapter 7, not 6 again! Menu 8 • incredible breathtakkisskiss that • searched thourgh pap the then Crimson regret (ID 30494) In reviews Page 2 • by QueerDragon (249917): your locatisn’sn’t given Page 3 • in lajolie (251853): losin! Ho! Hope I can • in becky (255015): would be kinachy chy to her Page 4 • in cristina (257625): it is YOtorytory • duplicate reviews by ChO (260097, 260098) Page 6 • in Electra126 (286017): starting tolectlect my own . . . an emicemic • in cat (290078): things arekingking up Page 7 • in kultamuna (305378): faith who is wrg thg this story In story Ch 13 • Shened ned one eye Last night by the lake (ID 19317)
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