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There are 2 stories on this page, 25 and 15 chapters, that I'll submit separately. already have 4 pp here... /GlitchesANGEL.doc TV / ANGEL / General p.15 Cry on my shoulder 31430 • knboutbout • repliedowlyowly The desk 30221 • rubikeike’s chest Tales from the badge series: Under the shield 29211 —entire story, both chapters, all in bold. i don’t know if the author just forgot to close the tags or intended this but gah! maybe the bold tags should be deleted...? ugly ugly. —Menu 1 text is completely in italics. could we take those tags out too? SO hard to read entire chapters in itals! Menu 1 — • under Personal Websites at top, remove the space and the & after .html at the end of URL • allnd ond • offeoffer • thtesttest • recogng a g a superioer • snapatteattention • excess,h evh every • wh anh and • handhand • we lwe looking • p clp class=MsoNormal> • pulf clf clear • for es and England • NYPDNYPD • hetes tes for • working Holiday.”’>.” He says • p> • &nbso:p>o:p> • wellwell • when allsalls • whr orr or not • ottwo two • far sid the the car • startakinaking • ron thn the • them de. de. • sted aed angel • years aast.ast. • nog. &nb> • jerkiim tim tightly • lookingr tor to see • undergroundage.age. • yelloweatweater Menu 2 — • under Personal Websites at top, remove the space and the & after .html at the end of URL • n lan lang=EN-GB style=’color:black’> • line above underlined heading “Back to the present” about 4 pp. in, remove stray dash at L edge • gto grow up • betw, I’m • can’nd and • /p clasclass=MsoNormal>”And our • Sin Sin of • quic rea reassure • e tee teases • clasclass=MsoNormal> • surpriso seo see • inteinternational • lingling • < lan lan=EN-GB styl=’color:black’> • will bethe the • &;Rosenberg • moeforefore • after line ending in “helping him all along?” remove stray @ from L edge • leadleading • heartilyhe rhe realises • ailesiles’ • keeis eis eyes • clasclass=MsoNormal>He • fractio sca scant • es tes the • “ovedoved me • month.”an> • [in ending AN] thosee che characters Gypsy dreams 28856 —SQUISHED Discovering oneself 28881 • [in AN] need bac back! • n mon movie • Shrnedrned • haduallually • samesame • an ong hng here • hie ree remote • all of a sudd [cuts off] • express veryvery • tov to the • Illyrindidndidly • lengtd twd two • the c Las Last Where all things end 28855 • He wHe was • hlf flf for her • food ood or for evil • cigaretteom Som Spike • the the lucky • beenwn twn to • slepth Sth Spike • under his br. “J. • Angeplieplied • Spikeyebeyebrow • allhis his • goned hed he had • his t plt plastered Edges 28830 • “I’m fr”when • he whe was • did Spiker dor do that • drewdrew • beggibut but • slg hg him • heaShe She Birthday surprise 28710 • icatication • al wel welling Immortal bonds 28136 • Angel Spi Spike • use use of the • disappear/p> /p> • [in ending AN] So, hereherehere you Hell is in the details 24443 submitting glitches in part 2 Couch confessionals 20453 Menu 1 — • theendaenda? • H shi shifting • lly lly tired • cto gto grips • waysways • Whator dor do • Childe.ntednted • whereke’ke’s • Lng ang at Menu 2 — • [in AN, Distribution] DistributiooG, oG • zonon yon your • Angs brs brooding • taileailed theory • Fred’sice ice • hd dod done Menu 3 — • “No “No problem • mongelngel Menu 4 — • [in AN, Author’s Notes] Aut [para] Author’s • into thr thr they • becominrelereless • woutudytudy • letelete • eren, an, anticipating • fengelngelus’ • Williamked ked • agand and again Menu 5 — • bei being • cbackback • beeokinoking • thr thrown Menu 6 — • saiI’m I’m Vicarious 27785 • gemon mon slime • fres mor more • tho thought • womplompletely • nevet hit him War over wolfram & hart 19599 submitting glitches in part 2

The desk 30221 IN REVIEWS • FLAME/THREAT: Anya 265555 Tales from the badge series: Under the shield 29211 IN REVIEWS • UN-REVIEW: JINXI 235002, author response • Sarah 235384: yI waI was only • UN-REVIEW: JINXI 235691, author response (i think she responds to every review!0 • UN-REVIEW: JINXI 236356, author response Discovering oneself 28881 IN REVIEWS - oh, now this is just RIDICULOUS!!! • 7 DUPLICATE REVIEWS!!! annonymity: 229446,48,50,51.52,53,54 —as in, delete all but 229446 i guess, since that one has no wordord in it Immortal bonds 28136 IN REVIEWS • Silvi 223354: before (fi (film) • Secret 1920271326: Imda dur during Hell is in the details 24443 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • Sandi 185551: not sellke oke out • pikabuffster 193526: I am ly sly starting War over wolfram & hart 19599 IN REVIEWS • ella 140020: writingst tst that

TV / ANGEL / General p.16 End of days 27442 Ch 2 — • he’s in in • His exsionsion • was lod ged gentle • anssagsaging • twas was beautiful • der,der, Charles • antatioation • sto, wa, warming Something real 27435 • The klinkling • oundounding • something.es mes mues • fingersythmythmically • amusemhinthinting • his hon hen her hand Reprise revised 19053 Ch 1 — • alacklack • mus ins in the • her her back • hot, vit, at, and Ch 2 — • [some stray code here] lasslass=MsoNormal> • intr hor hotel • issow,”ow,” Ch 4 — • [more stray code] himselpan pan style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> Ch 6 — • souldould • best frieit hit had • brokto hto her • painfu be be • alfralfram & Hart • but n’t n’t figure • [sigh...more code] clasclass=MsoNormal> • any doy down • thour our • abo coo count • penthousean an style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> • pi up up the Ch 8 — • meantfighfight • an>Wan>When she • oell ell to • wlearlearly • Don’rry,rry • what we wante hap happen • controen ien it • armsan san style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> • showiis dis demon • soupan pan style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> • changed.n sn style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> • antangtangled • realiza tha that Ch 9 — • floofloor • At thatct mct moment Ch 10 — • [in AN] ita>italics • intctedcted • room. “I.>”I • hardht hht hook • &> • orainrain power • gray ma to to do • herr awr away • tentme.pan> Ch 11 — • [in AN] Note:< sty style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> • mal>”Damn. It • eaor hor him • twn stn stood • mor pea peace • >&nb> • yoneyone • consequences,ke tke • foe gre gry ley leader • forg exg explanations • hern han has Ch 12 — • [in AN, Spoiler Warning] I’ve died aed at • feelingbeinbeing • of tha than her • p> Demon's discovery 26693 • buthapshaps • had repl [cuts off] • wouave.ave Breaking glass 26719 • Wam aam and Hart • in handhand • her otherd, sd, • The [para] They splintered The lovejames limmericks 26532 • when is yos your shoulder The lovejames limmericks 26534 • you’re startio cuo cum Deamon knight 17173 Ch 1 — • rather niceice ice and • wee ale alone A puritan in new york 24292 Ch 1 — • I’m I’m sorry Ch 2 — • momenen ren reappeared • teied.ied. • hisehiselled • *su *suppose* Ch 3 — • he phe paper • iainsainst • made ticktick • He’en ten them • wh Pen Penn • sce scene in • cro bat bathroom • cacompcompletely Ch 5 — • ometomething Illusions 24798 —this story sucks and is the reason i question whether this author is of age, as i mentioned in the Review Board forum. Not that kind 19667 —oh god, ANOTHER one in script format! i hate those. FFN doesn’t allow them... (she said with a hopeful gleam in her eye) Ch 1 — • skill [para] L [para] Lindsey: “Just • thant oft of the • milannoannoyed • get roug [para] L [para] Lindsey: [smirking] • SeriousNot Not • wal eit either • youw Anw Angel • clashingeheaeheads • des nos not to • with yoneyone —suddenly we decide to try something new: let’s make one really giant paragraph! • has has on him • the and and Ch 2 — • the oth ass assuming • sai said what • “rkedrked for • looking is eis erection • Hesn’tsn’t know Ch 3 — • hbeenbeen • anans ans • ing ing up the • demonew uew up • pful.ful.” • er wer with • stagee-upe-up • doen bi before Tonight 24581 • [in AN#1] stylstyle=’mso-bidi-font-weight:normal’> • [after heading “Galway, Ireland” there is a stray] & —note here: they have used some odd character for single apostrophes that comes up as a typo. it prints okay so might not be worth doing a search-and-replace...your call • moutheds ons on where • feeliou sou smile • you you give • clasclass=MsoNormal> • intense plee. Te. The • bng out out one • [in ending AN] bad?pan> Fond 24262 Ch 1 — • It maer fer feel • kin. Sn. She • shrcedrced Ch 3 — • inhaledply,ply, Ch 4 — • and fin to to her

Reprise revised 19053 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • Ben 156358: easily of tof the • Jane Alexander 179315: the ref thf this Page 2 • nath 182126: for Buff lea learn • Mija 184938: to see iuve uve updated Deamon knight 17173 IN REVIEWS • DemnShade 115746: charactermingming Illusions 24798 —possible minor author, although nothing to go on except writing style. extremely slam-blam-thank-you-ma’am and cut to the chase, no finesse at all, checked a couple of his other stories as well and same thing. although maybe it’s just because he’s a guy. >snerk< but might want to check the DOB on his account. IN REVIEWS • Blue Jade 192208: masturbatfantfantasies [i won’t call this a flame because she states why she objects, and she has a very valid point, his stuff is almost as bad as goolecap’s]

TV / ANGEL / General p.17 Fond 24262 • to the ph [drops off] • Angel d ned never • maer fer feel • the kin. Sn. She • shrcedrced Parody on angel getting the girls back 24191 • lesee see • Frere ere the • Willowallyally • Yook lok like • eagonguongue • pu on on • btte.tte. • leatherket.ket. • joinhe bhe beyond • ts whs why The final blow 23713 • ridaridays Sensual consuption 23731 • Angave ave sex • heted.ted. • filhim him The party 23538 —i think there’s a possibility THIS AUTHOR IS A MINOR or was when s/he wrote this story. it sounds very juvenile and like the author has no practical knowledge of sex at all from the childish descriptions of it. author page is http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=14373 if you want to check it out, story is from 4/1/04 • could ct wit with • lookingnkennkenly • endifterfter all Doomed to repeat 23494 • outrageously,tingting • prob has has • contrf thf the • navigatesm awm away • tall,all • througs trs trousers • swallowsediledily • bleedinist ist is Even angels fall 23269 Ch 1 — • ectiecting • who ted ted • ady ady forming • slowly tng ing into • Resistihe uhe urge • helopleople A moments...series 22814 Ch 1 — • shitt ant anyway • two two have • hiswniswnish • b tha that • lic her her • veinShe She Ch 2 — • withoo muo much • can can imagine • haduttouttoned • lips tra aro around • lipacinacing • BuffBuffy smiled • Dthatthat hurt • kd hed her head • agahe whe wouldn’t Ch 3 — • wasthe the phone • trus hom home • muffls his his • ton rol rolled overh oth other • g on on the • tig tightly • withcradcradle Ch 4 — • attaf I f I walked • holly,lly • BuffBuffy stood • against h Wi Willow Ch 5 — SQUISHED • after “mentments • heldnldn’t push • sng ang at • ane oue out • LIY!”Y!” Her • a sec [para] dig [para] digit into • hntrantrance • criilleilled • slly, ly, his • I’t ‘t wait Ch 6 — • nd dnd down • Bufave ave him • proble mys myself • her sch, ch, caressing • thher her men’s • our our every • nosy asy at all • arm arm once more • way way inside • moanedelineling Ch 7 — • thall all fragments • in herst, st, in • rubbrubbed his • kissine sme small • inspe her her for • promotionnt, nt, • peo Th The • looklooked at • fy mfy moaned • gen Th The • smallk, nk, Ch 8 — • knowwas was • smeekmeekly • s be be working • Lindfounfound • hist tot to the • caressinm. m. • pow powerful • attempt at w. . “How much • eveepereper • kiholdholding • weekendsnugsnuggle • nec”Al”Alright Corporate bitch 22326 Ch 1 — • gottee cue cum • inf of of him • v fil filled Lawless 22335 • room.”Rig”Right • docusesuses • in hisd und until • shels els • heada caa caution • “Pe,” e,” she • n’t n’t see him • sted wed when • Buffyectsects • thaties ies their • becaungelngel • Iss hos how • himsel hol holding Beacon 22235 —in story summary page: Post-ep fo “T “The • [2nd quote after AN, Notes] -delidelia • the tand and • Butstilstill • sallealled • of lign hen her • nos nostrils • toiceoice • witrs. rs. • fortingting • Angelt tht them • h.”h.” Wonder series 22122 Ch 1 — • oy toy —Ch 2 has bold turned on; after title the tag needs to be closed —remove stray code p> after title line Ch 3 — • floor.doesdoesn’t • Ie doe does • for e fie first A.M. 21236 —remove stray line of code at end of story /div/div>

The final blow 23713 IN REVIEWS • little one 195593: It was ell ell written Doomed to repeat 23494 reviewer says author posted the wrong summary for this story; this is a Spike/Holden story and doesn’t belong in AtS so must be BtVS i guess. URL is http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=23494 Corporate bitch 22326 IN REVIEWS • Ardent 166628: Nwou would • FLAME: Spartan 166712 • Captain Grammar 177611: Don’t us apo apostrophe —Sweets 193979 notes that the warnings are incorrect, should not be labeled as BDSM but as non-con or rape Lawless 22335 IN REVIEWS • Sonya 165279: he wase a e a mix • angelsgurl 282461: hapying ing A.M. 21236 IN REVIEWS • FLAME (i guess): Anon 177619. shame it’s her only review. but really, whether it’s a “story” is pretty subjective. there are some “stories” out there that are pretty damn short!

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Pride 20395 IN REVIEWS • QueenBoadicea 147349: descriptof tof the ... did loo look ... or tcoulcould • QueenBoadicea 147366: explanon and thetion ... as . I. I’m • FLAME: Alice 148374 • UN-REVIEW: Jo The Librarian 264101, author response Cometh the hour 18798 IN REVIEWS • susan 132062: wit, pl, please Tyger, tyger 17627 IN REVIEWS • Fer 117209: ystorstories Release 17792 IN REVIEWS • YesPlease 124707: a pai tha that To kill a cat 17149 IN REVIEWS • UN-REVIEW: Jo The Librarian 112609 • QueenBoadicea 143665: thas fus fun

ANGEL / General p.19 The mirror of dreams 16996 Ch 1 — • mirrortaintainly • little lau laugh • tou touching • e ale all • erateration • Objecrackrack Ch 2 — • softld smd smiles • thek ark are • me,chinching • b fro from the • Not agai [para] An [para] Angel’s POV • thge bge back • witharmsarms • so dso different • to asem tem to • world?remeremember Ch 3 — • mck ack and • sli his his • fng nng nice • fallinglovelove Favour returned 16841 • glof wof wine • redemptifinefine • Thouldould Where are you christmas 16203 Chs 2,3,4 = squished Ch 1 — • > > [is this some unclosed HTML tag or something, since this person is using code] • woule wae was • hentednted • didn’lebrlebrate Ch 2 — • is ht ast as • when dog dog was • quotquot;Best [apparently they’re using HTML for quotes, even?] • makeley ley feel morke hke he • was was carefully • it?&q Spi Spike Ch 3 — • lo dow down • interestin Wes Wesley • ot;Dot;Damn • anprecpreciation Ch 4 — • <i>really</i&angrangry [unclosed tag, should be <i>really</i> angry] • fterfter him • blue ope opened • theer ter two • He haen aen • hast bst been • Irimerimerican • founfound love Many waters 16285 • ifre hre has • hany any that • set off off • Angeluggeugged • slepsideside • as as he tilted • insolent [para] S [para] Spike threw Coming home 16202 • &qWeslWesley • &nbnbspnbsp; [delete? not sure if this is messed up code for something that’s necessary] • Wes teg hig him • his hstilstill Untitled spike/angel 14576 Ch 2 — • ge car caressing • He plac gen gentle • ned.ned. Ch 3 — • himk ink into Ch 4 — • itght ght • askedhat?hat?” • the hal, he, he • placeundhundhouse • wa sil silently Ch 5 — • [in title] ChapChapter 5 Ch 7 — • still unabl ful fully • to tastein. in. • Alt, tt, then • arohim.him. • on tamb amb and • uookiooking Ch 8 — • s abs above Ch 9 — • forgiou fou for • ss nes neck • holdingbuhose • Godhat’hat’s • glaser Ser Spike’s • rever bac back • singsing his Thanks for nothing 15691 Ch 1 — • s”Vis”Vision • r Cor Cordy • way way to • he che cement Ch 2 — • just c not not get • likeryterything • pretenymorymore —Ch 3 is a duplicate of Ch2, delete Pancakes for three 15530 • moortaortal • at top top of voice • t Sp Spike • s of of Spike • oth other • Now!”criecries • enoureseresence • groans.itheithers • panca” I “ I whisper The betrayal of women 15529 • [in AN, Notes] Sowavewaves • he whe way • hrunkrunkenness • Weslreatreats • hinghing at all • Angel!!”sleysley • in slotiontion • enthusicallcally • tastee hee heat Taken out 14540 • ed hed his • wasgingging • closer eyr eyes • hokedoked Voyeur 14560 • [in AN, Distribution] to ave mve my • Besi the their Hurt 13095 • [in index page summary] Faipikepike —Ch 3 is a duplicate of Ch 2; delete —Ch 2 is a separate story titled “What she said” (although in the AN under the Title line it says “Wait” she said, but that’s a typo judging from text further down. but this is not the story “Hurt”, different title, different pairing = Faith//Lilah/Spike, should be separated out under its own title? WORDORD IN CH 1 “HURT” • Ev’m ‘m not • hat hat have I WORDORD IN CH 2 “WHAT SHE SAID” • [in AN, Chapter] wh’ which can • almostsenssense • shenot not in • know saw saw them • we’d polishef [para] f [para] another 20 Lexy 14034 • od, od, so much Slip into my arms 10037 • end ofs was was • chinching and • awSo ISo I can • of exerc I’ I’m gentle • as as I always

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — Angel/Spike/Xander (p.1 of 1) Xander Sammich (or, Xander in the middle) 18261 Ch 1 — • [in AN] and ow how has • and y, Wy, Willow Ch 2 — • was was doing Ch 3 — • sene Cae Calvary • S joi joined • sharedook ook Ch 5 — • an aableable Ch 6 — • they ry dey deserving Ch 7 — • everyt. An. And no • contracted.was was • imprve, ve, that • speg glg glance

Xander Sammich (or, Xander in the middle) 18261 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • Jessica 124935: akesakes me • Mod 125146: tnnernner dialogue Page 2 • Anon 127508: have r war way • laura 138331: don’t bil! il! Page 3 • A.J 271018: more to thisat fat fic • Doodle_Penguin 304827: haven’tatedated

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — Angel/Spike/Willow (p.1 of 1) Nine months later 5319 Ch 1 — • age oge of coldness • who’s i.” A.” Angel Ch 2 — • but his vo His His words • do by by me Revenge is best served with a side of witch 23391 Ch 1 — • handhands Ch 2 — • wobefobefore • ominoming • Hlt alt awkward • didfindfind Ch 3 — • breatShe She • “Ngel,gel • nothio doo do Ch 4 — • topingping • those sy rsy Flesh into gear 28530 Ch 2 — • thedagedage Ch 3 — • was was betting • laiwn hwn his • aoudeouder • ookeooked • illoillow • she bed bed the • beiolloollowed • tmotimotioned • Wi wra wracked • Shspersperately • shook violentl [para] “I [para] “I’m safe Ch 4 — • Anbackback • Xr sar said • sailkinlking • illoillow • cemees tes they • holdher.her. Ch 5 — • • helms lms • dolammlamming • thend tnd • assu as as she • better.gelugelus • Hsn’tsn’t • lus lus warned • spent tha that • into thairhair • kno known Ch 6 — • Yescauscause • sed ied into • hel held ba She She Ch 7 — • thor dor didn’t • the d or or her Ch 8 — • other ther her • a f a few of • and in in a • she would [drops off] • cd itd it ... sher and • calculationsttentten • W [para] Willow wasn’t sure Ch 9 — • bigurprurprise • in in the back • walkingardsards • on hed nod not • ringring her Ch 10 — • gav gave out • Spikok iok it • wasnticntic • The smwas was • a cigte. te. Ch 11 — • [in AN, Disclaimer] I, unfortuny, oy, own • lievlievable • thig bag back • now now they • of a cd dod door • sficaficant • clo. I. It was • thinglow low • ther.her • howevlinglingered • priva Spi Spike • hnd mnd making • smiling.onnaonna • moed fed for • herselfhen,hen, ... steppingkwrkwards • ar-inr-induced • own own time • intentionot oot only Ch 12 — • [in AN, Feedback] Bu cou course • surprisedfindfind • tlowllowly Ch 13 — • [in AN, Feedback] course.tendtend • Spmotimotioned Geeks can be hot 13990 Ch 1 — • [in Disclaimer] pug thg the • &q [para] “Look at me • trietries • to to have • momend thd throws • ider der her • dra drawn • dead dead • gh ogh only • enoinsiinside Ch 2 — • blusblush • revelat [drops off] • arefareful you guys • thmpirmpire • Wills’ isht wht we • exclaim.&quo”Look Ch 3 — • herses shs she • two two allegedly Ch 4 — • cottcotton • she kne tha that • the the other • smile,uot;uot;Forgot • hemilimiling Ch 5 — • run runs fis fingers • wordd hed her • the the suction • goio heo her • t;Mmt;Mmm • bo bao bag • [in ending AN] uch uch more Ch 6 — • onviouviously • laduot;uot; • bloc [para] He [para] He grinds • c,&qu,” she • hfromfrom • into thet skt skin Ch 7 — • hginsgins • us,&quois bis blunt • wthe the thrusts • thi think Ch 8 — • han hands • aendsends • slamslams • &qu [para] “How can you • to rusf anf and • tand and she • btelltell • baresh esh • at at you • wear itot; ot; • hava tha thing Ch 9 — • couple,n exn • sat sat staring • odd,odd, you Ch 10 — • frotchitching • coolcool fingers • Cang ong on Romancing red 20459 Ch 1 — • mansifterfter • t upt up this • thoes oes off Ch 2 — • h She She • whr whatever Ch 4 — • Willie’ in in the • for ong ong as Ch 6 — • yollowllowed • quioesnoesn’t Ch 7 — • Spiays ays Lights, camera, action 14221 • nophnophobe • lookingolutolutely • beful ful • huld uld see • redirecher her • You mou may • wante fee feel • kon ton the

Flesh into gear 28530 IN REVIEWS • laura 244135: willountiuntil • FLAME: Elim 2035131061 Geeks can be hot 13990 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • msspikester 84654: andove ove the Page 2 • laura 168837: still wag fog for • UN-REVIEW: missmishka 169359, author response

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — Angel/Buffy/Spike pp.1-2 doing this story separately here as it’s from 2003 and 50 chapters so i anticipate a lot of wordord Breaking a slayer 2056 —Ch 8 is missing. reviewers mentioned it and it’s not a case of misnumbered chapters, the continuity between Chs 7 and 9 indicate that it really is missing. Menu 1 — • too smto tto try Menu 2 — • You r” Sh” She • ell ell me • in that area,.” [para] &.” Menu 3 — • bac back • to the ds, fs, feeding • the r wal wall • imed ied in • ligehinehind Menu 4 — • hands,tchetched • Antooktook • be rep repair • fro, th, then • anrnedrned • retreatore ore • andded ded • lust fos pes perfect • off, as . Wi. With • hAngeAngel • ge fro from • to l anl and • savr lir life • s prs pretty • donehis his • cis gis going • barefonto nto • heowsyowsy • seilitilities Menu 5 — • performance.”sp; [para] sp; [para] “You are Menu 6 — • aondeondered • a he he was • strothe the • neck aike ike • what you you yourself Menu 7 — • beauti vib vibrant • voics mus muffled • finges, ss, • faneep eep into • an jum jumped • pul pulling Menu 8 — • to age hge his • not aboo reo reign • sofin gin gently Menu 9 — • weapweapons • asth eth Menu 10 — • sok, ek, even • he hhe • any vam, ke, kept • to ge kie kissed • aeed,eed, Menu 11 — • gt alt all • Onlen, en, • to if if he • likeeoneeone • herd ond on the • thnsionsion Menu 12 — • so skd atd at • ippeipped • hHe tHe Menu 13 — • twoulwould • apparentlyke wke wasn’t • eep eep you • old enoto tto talk • [in ending AN] wiilesiles’s rn...-n Menu 14 — • • heen een • wordword • sirelde lde bond • that l upl upset • her her move • Bukeptkept • Buf eye eyes • spo spoke • have peris [cuts off] Menu 15 — • “You”You’ve • famscenscent • axis. [para] “Th [para] “That’s enough • leave,t sct scooped Menu 17 — • her War. Wr. What • bed bed a • pulon ton thick • the the air • chang a h a Menu 18 — • and alshe she was • respondeakinaking • contentingselfself • ree the the Menu 19 — • thadohadows •nato hto his Menu 20 — • the the consequences • opeon. on. Menu 21 — • askeasked • thatthat was Menu 23 – • ovhe ghe Menu 25 — •coulooseoose • sisedised Menu 26 — • on the f of of the Menu 27 — • heddesddess • standintsidtside • beene toe to • of y’s y’s death Menu 28 — • roglanglancing • Dru wel well • dare he thin...lov...love • oure. re. • nothingffy ffy • his his fury • thspitspital • one his his ... asdelvdelved ... her her sex • and t that she • A wra wrapped • neerneered • Xancontcontinued Menu 29 — • fatic tic lovers Menu 30 — • insanut mut more • againsm, bm, • pressingd end enough • opennd snd she • iesteested Menu 31 — • fehem hem • ate ate • lovffy ffy • time’s t’s too Menu 33 — • eyeseyes • kme ime in • alloit, it, Menu 35 — • inatination • ac the the room • reallve hve her Menu 36 — • whichel bel based • headeptdepths • mao boo bow • ecstasyhe phe • clo closed • ove eat eat her • deste, te, Menu 37 — • swkisskiss • Thacedaced • sad nad no • way, a. Sh. Shbowebowed • eyt tht the • tuHe wHe • AngeAngel • [ending AN] To [para] To be Menu 38 — • A rung gng growl • Shentednted • is Wel Welling • throher her • ofng ang at • Yo,fy, fy, • havinset set • wa dee deeper • youldnuldn’t • very s lif life • ust...ust • teThe The • Spike growlet~o{troking • Cordyliedlied • “YeThe The • Tsat sat Menu 39 — • if it gll cll • the vre wre with • left thom. om. • him.hinkhink Menu 40 — • fis cis cunning • henouenough Menu 41 — • antremtremely • I hI’m I’m • Th Thanks • pikepike • Spiaid.aid. Menu 42 — • atch hch he • andpingping • ow’ow’s curious Menu 43 — • morethe the • the the oil • eyesld fld follow Menu 44 — • wo’t ‘t Att sht she • sinkfangfangs • semiconsciousn Clo Closing Menu 45 — • into the sr, tr, twisting • Markt het he’d • thel oul out • who out out • wordwords • of thmo. mo. • one mi hea heave • arng ing into • ssed sed to • hade ade it • thissantsant • sprintafteafter Menu 46 — • her ing ing cell Menu 48 — • all oose ose things • driShe She Menu 49 — • eyeseyes Menu 50 — very long AN, not a chapter; delete?

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — Angel/Buffy/Spike pp.1-2 Remember me 544171073 —this story is kind of a mess. the author states that she had to re-register under a different name (presumably this one, <Brat8>. each pull-down menu item in this story contains multiple chapters and they are out of order. she must have deleted and then reposted Chs 1-21 as they start halfway down the menu; then she started over again with 20 and went thru the end. in the process seems to have skipped Chs 7-8. Menu 17 is listed as Chs. 7-8 but is really a repeat of menu 16, which really is Chs 5-6. so i don’t know if you want to contact the author to get chapters 7-8 out of her or what but they are missing. this thing with the messed-up and missing chapters is mentioned by multiple reviewers. Choices 26940 —according to reviewers, chapter billed as #23 is really a repeat of #22 although in the second iteration (menu 24) it has a “chapter twenty-three” header on it. also, one reviewer states “seem to be chapters missing in this fic...lots of them” but i don’t see any missing except #23. Menu 1 — • SpikeShe She • waspingping • She ded ded • Gentl rea reached • huch uch Menu 2 — • ceg fog for • abour lor loss • the entsents • face,kingking • head oursours?” • her,ans ans • didndidn’t Menu 3 — • at, co, coldness • he mhe movies • Spmilemiled • And wha ass ass Menu 4 — • with exen. Hn. He • all all over • it was disrd.”d.” • he heer ier in • wiped themy any and • kiss he che cheek • was touctouchy Menu 5 — • the cng, ng, at • best yst yet • theyme tme to • inspion son struck • she she reached • her chesd did disappeared • sng ang at it Menu 6 — • “ou hou have • on here. e. • pikepike scowled Menu 7 — • soing ing Menu 8 — • hoom oom and Menu 9 — • “finhatehatever • as hood,ood, • gre great • That fun.fun • panten hen he Menu 10 — • mathe whe was • tyou you had • years I a I am an • thhe ohe only • showiher her Menu 11 — • thereall all • ove ave a • say,be nbe not • ite ree really Menu 12 — • ffy,ffy, we • up untils pospoint • You? Th? That’s • ovedoved • dienceence • she hven ven more Menu 13 — • tanglangled • clenchishe she was • m jum just • is concd, wd, we’ll Menu 15 — • sheghedghed • wasrelarelax Menu 16 — • loim. im. • hane gen going • wasn’ sur sure Menu 17 — • roomes tes that Menu 18 — • bgettgetting • asked, lng ang Menu 19 — • a Ang Angel • surprito fto find • all all together • shiverrun run • awaye loe looked • aga his his • everything.he khe • like t She She Menu 20 • Abort, t! [para] t! • ahrughrugged • foursours since • Anwerewere • welcomy, y, • frngelngel • WhatWhat now • reawhy why • therforefore • the shor. Tr. The • shook her [para] Oh [para] Oh god, Menu 21 — • hetiontions • menallyllowllow Menu 22 — • Bufouldouldn’t • I nto tto tell Menu 23 — • you fio figure • tellingthatthat • herselady ady • exees tes to Menu 24 — • Godfeelfeel • therthere • Putther her Menu 25 — • [in end AN] mean t evi evil Menu 26 — • “I k”I know Menu 27 — • burs opoe open • Did kno know • Sort Liv Living Menu 28 — • eacher.her. • you you were • as if I hall tll the • out out for Menu 30 — • lig light Menu 31 — • isays ays there • don’nt tnt to The tale to the noir 31327 Ch 1 — • to dea death • looon ton the • whisp her her • tightenee voe volume Ch 2 — • and was was • wefinefinitively • w led led to • gafunnfunny • kly,kly, she didn’t wasntbegibegin • wn’t n’t have Ch 3 — • surellm dlm down • of coudarldarling • blankets,ing ing • thght,ght, • ot tot that • Buffyouthouth • taxioyceoyce • dt tht they • maybe longlong • s the the knife • obs the the • ttoo too tight • thhrouhrough • reone,one • wellm vem very • wh’m t’m • I am. sai said Ch 4 — • Soonl fil fight • Buffarlyarly • yon’t n’t like • You’lrealready • heisteisted • fabriuldeulded • skin.ck sck silk • Shut She She • him,ing ing • Souldouldn’t Ch 5 — • not so . 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You’re • youryour • Ane ise is • he dhe didn’t • friefriend’s • evedeved it • thght.ght. • game-f and and he • up up at that • heetheeth • Angelusrcasrcastic • Dahe mhe must • wrecyouryour • I’l I’ll kill Ch 6 — • Scourg Eur Europe • B cou coulearlearly • loose hYou YTou ... befectfect • wid wide and • Sppullpulled • morosedosed • StaHe eHe • shoeshoes • shuldnuldn’t • mustoy hoy him Ch 7 — • in herroomroom • onleonless • thertbertbeat • et aet away • Relax.l cal call • themes ies in • lonack ack curls • readon’don’t • We lin oin our • his his demon • vam’s; ‘s; Ch 8 — • andt ext expect • lus lus had • who wn hen her • weow aow at • togr, fr, • i’re ‘re • dripppherpheromones • oe foe forehead • sandsandth • cctedcted Ch 9 — • sthed hed his • red, ld, looking • Tcho cho • herthe the • respresponsibility • roar,la pla pushed • skirter, lr, looking • to loo him him • saw saw her Ch 10 — • the Sla [drops off] R [para] Regarding • wisach ach • someonu’veu’ve • leruisruises • probablyfer..fer...and Ch 11 — • takinr str stake Getting his rocks back 35306 Ch 1 — • What H I w I wasn’t • I’m t of of this • Buu’reu’re Ch 2 — • aorciorcing • It wIt was if Ch 3 — • moxcruxcruciating • Iieveieved it • afternwalkwalk • chathatthat • comewlinwling The games people play 29169 Ch 1 — • leely ely Late 23774 • hig heg her • He He told The boarder 22552 Ch 1 — • to pla plate Ch 4 — • with the e. He. He Ch 8 — • to to William’s Lovers 12376 Ch 1 — • wronwrong • wics res really Ch 2 — • hadn trn trying Ch 3 — • th he he was • themSleeSleep Mute 10734 • if if marking • I’m I’m not done Body shots 7316 • Siuck.uck Taming the beasts 3873 Ch 2 — • hang be him him • “My”My god Ch 4 — • toge in in a Ch 5 — • Bus hes head Ch 6 — • tears he wel welling • flowedy. y. Ch 7 — • nearnearly • her imi imitation • as his his mouth • thais sis • ouldould Breaking a slayer 2056 doing this story separately as it’s 2003 and 50 chapters so i anticipate a lot of wordord

Hi Honey I'm Home 544183081 IN REVIEWS Page 4 • DUP REVIEWS: greyangel 2035273273, 2035273274 Choices 26940 IN REVIEWS Page 6 — • nevernever 224282: heelinelings Page 7 — • pikabuffster 224920: sta starts Page 8 — • Shelly 225881: kee keep the Page 9 — • Kimber 226539: week wobe gbe good • Mandylynn 226790: glitched signature at end of review Page 10 — • dee 228078: W [para] I [para] I have been • nevernever 229351: so glou uou updated • Ianis 229364: never go AU sAU stuff Page 11 — • nevernever 230693: can’t waor wor what’s Page 12 — • TRIPLICATE REVIEW: laura 232683, 232684, 232685 Page 13 — • Pie 233433: end of lastlast • NO REVIEW TEXT: Anon 233435 • Kimber 234425: she cses ses Page 15 — • DUP REVIEWS: Kimber 252982, 252984 • Caroline 258170: ben thn the three The tale to the noir 31327 IN REVIEWS Page 1 — • novella 250236: I find iffiifficult • becky 254199: spihoulhould • Faith C. 256838: writtMostMost • Angela 271043: thairiairing Page 2 — • UN-REVIEW: rogiari 2035122961, author response • UN-REVIEW: rogiari 2035244911, ditto Page 3 — • UN-REVIEW: rogiari 2035276761, ditto Roses for lucifer 27326 IN REVIEWS Page 1 — • UN-REVIEW: Charlie 216139, author response Page 2 — • Spikedchick 230925: I lohis his story • UN-REVIEW: Charlie 259600, author response • lilyoko 261844: OMcantcant Page 3 — • UN-REVIEW: Charlie 2035138923, author response The boarder 22552 IN REVIEWS Page 1 — • Sarah Aless 167412: see mor it. it. • Sara Aless 168295: Can’t wait for . [para] S. • talent ma the the Page 2 — • Kyuuketsuki Spike 171691: of n ofn of • too eas mak make Page 4 — • continue w/ a el. el. Mute 10734 IN REVIEWS • jewls13 56453: this stas aas an Breaking a slayer 2056 IN REVIEWS Page 1 — • crunchberry 1906: shippe but but Page 2 — • scrub1966 12024: breaking a sl and and

The daughter swap club 600031923 IN REVIEWS • FLAME: JoeHundredaire 3000022798 Queen C 600031897 IN REVIEWS • FLAME: JoeHundredaire 3000022698 To the power born: a tale of the slayers 600031078 IN REVIEWS • UN-REVIEW: Kit Rook 3000020973 Buffy the streetwalking hooker 600031116 IN REVIEWS Page 2 • UN-REVIEW: goolecap 3000021341, author response not a review • UN-REVIEW: goolecap 3000021664, ditto

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — p.2 Irreparable, irreplaceable me 544199092 —Chs 3 and 4 are author notes, not chapters; delete?

Irreparable, irreplaceable me 544199092 IN REVIEWS • Crye 4 Me 2035451492, author response not a revew

currently on p.2 of story index, buffy threesomes root: Xander's big surprise 600031134 —suggesting move to Het (under AU) because although X is in bed with apparently several women they are all asleep and in this story he only does anything with one of them

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — p.3 Working 9-to-5 600005330 —Ch 4 is only an AN and response to reviewers, not a chapter; delete?

Thanks for lending me your body, B 544207410 IN REVIEWS Page 3 • FLAME, Toxic-Tears 3000011813

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — p.4 Lessons in control 544176879 —Ch 4 is an author note, not a chapter; delete? A want, a need, a craving 35352 Ch 1 — [in AN, Summary] mgrougroups • hadbe cbe • it outw haw hard • peoppeople • onontaontained • bedsiableable • todayometomething • remainingls. ls. • and and buried • was wr Ins Instead • or shr shoulder Ch 2 — she t to to sort • rea ready for bed • thatshe she • cosatisation • a sk, wh, white Ch 3 — • thougconcconcerning • persistenrce.rce Ch 4 — • sparsparse • fhem hem • hhoulhoulders • rea reached • ded tod to • witughtughter Ch 5 —

Without a home 544203541 IN REVIEWS • FLAME, Drew 2035506030 A want, a need, a craving 35352 IN REVIEWS Page 1 • mel, 281973: that’d ot! ot!

BUFFY / THREESOMES / ROOT — p.5 Demonic natures 31215 Ch 1 — • wastractrace Ch 2 — • tighteneto fto fists Love, trust and monsters 16702 • [in AN, Feedback] whicu cau can • in old old garage • wihe jhe juices • Bu’s b’s brain